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Art, Automation, and AI — Part 102 oct. 202600:49:45

Tim opens with a broad question: a few years after ChatGPT hit the public consciousness, where does Shawn stand on what AI is, how it's useful, how it isn't, and what it means for writing and editing?

Shawn's answer comes from the three years he spent on Mentoring the Machines with John Vervaeke, author of Awakening from the Meaning Crisis. Rather than start with AI, he starts with technology itself and builds up from there. The episode is less a list of tips than a map, and by the end it lands on a clear claim: AI is an algorithmic system that simulates the heuristics, principles, and stories of its programmers, and it has zero understanding of myth.

Topics covered:

  • Three kinds of technology: external (the shovel), shared or "nomo" technology (the idea of the shovel passed between people), and psychotechnology (the capacity to think up the shovel in the first place)
  • Algorithms, heuristics, and principles, and why each one maps to a human capacity we use every day without noticing
  • Why a theory is really a limitation, and how innovation (Newton to Einstein) pushes the limit outward
  • Story as the integration of algorithms, heuristics, and principles, and myth as the larger cycle that story sits inside
  • What myth actually means, why Tim got corrected for misusing it in an email, and why "it's just a myth" is a sign the language has been degraded
  • Artifact versus artifice: the recorded thing versus the capacity that made it, and how the two combine into art
  • The Odyssey, Scylla and Charybdis, and why a story whose circumstances never happened can still be a higher form of truth than a record
  • Why the "AI will destroy us" story and the "AI will let us drink pina coladas forever" story are both agendas, and what to look for when a story is all chaos or all order
  • Tim's internet-in-the-'90s comparison, and whether AI is fundamentally different from past technologies
  • Computational versus conscious systems: why speed and scale may never cross the threshold to consciousness, and why the only real test would be an original artifact
  • Shawn's definitions of consciousness (attention, awakening, awareness, affordance, attunement, agreement, alignment, at-onement), and why the machines don't care
  • Faith as a practical problem rather than a religious claim, and why you need the artifice of falsity to reach the artifact of truth

Books referenced

  • Mentoring the Machines by Shawn Coyne and John Vervaeke
  • Awakening from the Meaning Crisis by John Vervaeke
  • The Odyssey

Links

How do you write a book you're proud to publish?25 sept. 202600:52:57

Tim opens with a stat that frames the whole conversation: the average unpublished writer he surveyed has been at it for nearly 15 years. He puts the question to Shawn directly. What is Story Grid trying to do about that?

Shawn's answer starts with the mythic patterns that make stories like The Odyssey, The Lord of the Rings, and Pride and Prejudice last, and lands somewhere most writing advice doesn't: the sentence. His argument is that the same beginning, middle, and end that shapes a novel also shapes a scene and a sentence, and that the sentence is the smallest unit capable of carrying a transformation. Get that right and the larger structures follow.

Along the way, Tim and Shawn cover:

  • Why reading Save the Cat, McKee, and MasterClass doesn't translate into being able to write a mythic story, and what Aristotle's subject-and-predicate has to do with it
  • The chicken sexing model of learning: repetition plus feedback from someone who knows, instead of theory first
  • What Shawn actually meant when he told Tim, after two full manuscripts, that he couldn't write a sentence
  • The five commandments (inciting incident, turning point, crisis, climax, resolution) as five "criticalities" of everyday experience, and how each one can be written as one sentence
  • Antagonism and protagonism as forces, not roles, and why antagonism isn't the bad guy
  • Why Story Grid students are limited to one sentence per commandment
  • Tim's guitar and jiu-jitsu comparisons, and why writing is harder to self-correct than either
  • Flow state, Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi's Flow, and why feeling like you're taking dictation from the muse doesn't mean the writing works
  • Journaling versus writing: the difference between monologue and a dialogue with a reader
  • The Aunt Louise test for whether your five sentences are actually working

Also mentioned: Brent Spalding, a Story Grid student whose novel was published by Story Grid Publishing.

Books referenced

  • Flow by Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi
  • On Writing by Stephen King
  • Story by Robert McKee
  • Save the Cat by Blake Snyder
The Final Episode25 mai 202300:35:26

This will be the final episode of the Story Grid Podcast for the foreseeable future. Tim gives some background on why this decision was made along with an update on his current writing project and other happenings around Story Grid.

Crazy Rich Asians: Part 4 - What Writers Can Learn11 mai 202301:11:30

Access the full Story Grid analysis of Crazy Rich Asians at https://storygrid.com/crazy.

What can writers learn from studying this 2018 film?

This is the final in a four part series analyzing Crazy Rich Asians. The screenplay was written by Peter Chiarelli and Adele Lim and the movie was based on a 2013 book of the same title written by Kevin Kwan.

This episode is hosted by Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl, writer and CEO of Story Grid.

Crazy Rich Asians: Part 3 - Genre Conventions and Story Theme04 mai 202301:00:04

Access the full Story Grid analysis of Crazy Rich Asians at https://storygrid.com/crazy.

What can writers learn from studying this 2018 film?

This is the second in a four part series analyzing Crazy Rich Asians. The screenplay was written by Peter Chiarelli and Adele Lim and the movie was based on a 2013 book of the same title written by Kevin Kwan.

This episode is hosted by Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl, writer and CEO of Story Grid.

Crazy Rich Asians: Part 2 - 5 Commandments of Storytelling20 avr. 202300:37:50

Access the full Story Grid analysis of Crazy Rich Asians at https://storygrid.com/crazy.

What can writers learn from studying this 2018 film?

This is the first in a four part series analyzing Crazy Rich Asians. The screenplay was written by Peter Chiarelli and Adele Lim and the movie was based on a 2013 book of the same title written by Kevin Kwan.

This episode is hosted by Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl, writer and CEO of Story Grid.

Crazy Rich Asians: Part 1 - Is this a RomCom?13 avr. 202300:45:45

Access the full Story Grid analysis of Crazy Rich Asians at https://storygrid.com/crazy.

What can writers learn from studying this 2018 film?

This is the first in a four part series analyzing Crazy Rich Asians. The screenplay was written by Peter Chiarelli and Adele Lim and the movie was based on a 2013 book of the same title written by Kevin Kwan.

This episode is hosted by Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl, writer and CEO of Story Grid.

John Wick Analysis: Part 4 - What Writers Can Learn and Obligatory Moments06 avr. 202300:56:01

Access the full Story Grid analysis of John Wick at https://storygrid.com/wick.

This is the final in a four part series analyzing the movie John Wick using the Story Grid methodology. This 2014 movie, written by Derek Kolstad, is a genre leading action movie.

Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl start by looking at the Story Grid Five Leaf Genre Clover before diving into the quadrants and controlling idea.

John Wick Analysis: Part 3 - Genre Conventions and Five Commandments30 mars 202300:39:05

Access the full Story Grid analysis of John Wick at https://storygrid.com/wick.

This is the third in a four part series analyzing the movie John Wick using the Story Grid methodology. This 2014 movie, written by Derek Kolstad, is a genre leading action movie.

Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl start by looking at the Story Grid Five Leaf Genre Clover before diving into the quadrants and controlling idea.

John Wick Analysis: Part 2 - Acts and Structure23 mars 202300:41:25

Access the full Story Grid analysis of John Wick at https://storygrid.com/wick.

This is the second in a four part series analyzing the movie John Wick using the Story Grid methodology. This 2014 movie, written by Derek Kolstad, is a genre leading action movie.

Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl start by looking at the Story Grid Five Leaf Genre Clover before diving into the quadrants and controlling idea.

John Wick Analysis: Part 1 - Genre and Controlling Idea16 mars 202300:38:01

Access the full Story Grid analysis of John Wick at https://storygrid.com/wick.

This is the first in a four part series analyzing the movie John Wick using the Story Grid methodology. This 2014 movie, written by Derek Kolstad, is a genre leading action movie.

Story Grid Certified Editor Rachel Arsenault (https://www.rachel-arsenault.com) and Tim Grahl start by looking at the Story Grid Five Leaf Genre Clover before diving into the quadrants and controlling idea.

Line Edits: Putting the Final Touches on Eye Witness03 nov. 202201:01:39

We're down to line edits on Tim's iteration of the masterwork Eye Witness by Ed McBain.

Shawn, Danielle, and Leslie provide final feedback on how to clean up the last few error messages still coming through.

 

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Yma-xAE77UnQMNAjTyOUPxF21P_DaFxuNXyQin-0gHo/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-283

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 283 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Final Edits of a Short Story: Beat Construction and 624 Analysis27 oct. 202201:04:58

Now that Tim has had a breakthrough on his iteration of EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain, we're getting down to fixing individual Beats and checking to make sure he's adhered to the Story Grid 624 Analysis.

You really see the Story Grid Tools shine in this episode as Leslie and Danielle apply them to Tim's writing to find places still left to fix.

 

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b-RzszE7YzLEn5fSlWAqVQ_OkXhuJg3cxfZImXzIkYI/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-282

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 282 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Does Tim Actually Get It Right? How to Nail the Narrative Device20 oct. 202200:54:31

Does Tim Actually Get It Right? How to Nail the Narrative Device

On Tim's 10th draft, he finally makes a breakthrough on his iteration of EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain!

And it ended up being a simple practice that got him over the hump.

Listen in as Shawn, Danielle, Leslie, and Tim discuss how to nail the narrative device.

 

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RRmqjv90vYpi20B7kbxgdHQwdhFRvB3pESZD6Y52XEg/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-281

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 281 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

How to Connect with Characters: Finding the Motivation and Shadow in Yourself06 oct. 202200:37:38

In this impromptu episode, Tim and Danielle discuss the ongoing problems with the work on the Ed McBain EYE WITNESS scene and why Tim can't connect with his characters.

 

Writing or Just Pretending? When there is Zero Flow and Everything is $h*t29 sept. 202201:05:10

Shawn takes a crack at rewriting Tim's scene to help him understand what he's missing on the Narrative Device.

Then we hear Leslie and Danielle's edits and feedback on what he got right and wrong.

When they ask Tim what he thinks of all this, lots of emotions start coming out including his feeling that he's not writing anymore... he's pretending to write.

 

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QZGyUNetvNGfKAjwyfF3m4r9RPoMQN4g3Q18oWXoLOw/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-279

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 279 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Conflict and Emotional Connection: Every Beat, Trope, and Scene Must Have These24 sept. 202201:02:27

There are lots of insights in this week's episode of the podcast.

We look at the emotional connection between the hero and victim, ensuring there is conflict at every level of the story, and how better to lock in to the narrative device.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V6ja3HN4uKuS0J4x6pvWBUwkZUiE5uJov5jM3Gj-Yvw/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-278

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 278 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Who's the Most Guilty Person in Your Story? Hero, Victim, and Villain - Part 215 sept. 202201:09:22

Nobody is innocent in your story. Everyone is hiding something.

You must adjust these levels correctly in order for your reader to connect with the right characters.

This is the focus Danielle, Leslie, and Shawn take on Tim's scene this week.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M_rP2ARaDQbSlGBmNRESszzYuNN-nrxa0pdJjt0qQRU/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-277

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 277 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Hero, Victim and Perpetrator: The Must-Have Relationships in Your Story08 sept. 202200:56:55

Who is the Hero, Victim, and Perpetrator in your story?

What are the relationships between each of them?

The more vague or ungrounded each of these relationships are, the more the story will not read as believable.

This is the focus Danielle, Leslie, and Shawn take on Tim's scene this week.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OQd5NxTcn2JLwrphueCX91A4wXN9BEQFBYwbyN7NJ1M/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-275

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 275 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

The Impact of a Story Theme: An Interview with Scott Mann and Randle Surles about the book Operation Pineapple Express06 sept. 202201:03:00

Figuring out your Story Theme is the key to unlocking the entire roadmap of your story.

Scott Mann is the author of the new book → Operation Pineapple Express: The Incredible Story of a Group of Americans Who Undertook One Last Mission and Honored a Promise in Afghanistan.

Randall Surles is a Story Grid Certified Editor and worked with Scott to develop and produce the book under an extremely tight deadline.

In this interview, they discuss what went into writing the book, how they worked together, and what it meant to write a book like this.

Truth in Fiction: How to Write and Develop Believable Characters01 sept. 202201:12:55

How do you ground your characters in a reality that your reader will believe even though you are making the whole thing up?

This week Tim makes the mistake of sterilizing his protagonist to the point where he is no longer interesting or believable. Shawn, Danielle, and Leslie walk him through the steps of using character development and a strong narrative device to fix these problems.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10bdr_tF4ASohz0cHoNjlbNmsLOVXiDpFw54ugHYLZI8/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-274

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 274 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Narrative Device: This Affects Every Single Word You Write25 août 202200:59:15

Who is telling your story? Who are they telling it to? Why are they telling it?

This is the Narrative Device!

The Narrative Device consists of three main components:

  • Author: The Author is someone who is capable of telling the POP premise as a story to shed light on the problem another person has.
  • SAM: The Single Audience Member is a person with a problem related to the one the protagonist faces in the POP premise.
  • Problem: A specific problem that the POP premise can shed light on.

What Shawn, Danielle, and Leslie are trying to teach Tim this week is how this affects every single word of his writing.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ugNstol1I3DGyIcOQ13pdkkgyKKGddFvAE7LH_-OLng/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-273

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 273 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

Telling the Truth About Writing: Is this Podcast Worth Doing?18 août 202201:18:19

Shawn, Leslie, Danielle and Tim face a hard question...

Is the Story Grid Podcast still worth doing?

You might be surprised by what they have to say.

Writing Emotional Pain: How to Care About Your Protagonist11 août 202201:07:53

What happens when you can't connect to your protagonist?

This week Tim makes some progress on his scene,  but it's still missing something. The soul in the writing isn't there.

Shawn, Leslie, and Danielle talk through how to use emotional pain to connect into the story.

 

 

Getting the Protagonist Right: When and How to Switch the Main Character04 août 202201:24:08

There are times in your story when you need to switch out the protagonist. This can even happen in the middle of a scene or short story.

But how do you do it the right way?

This week Shawn, Danielle, and Leslie look at Tim's draft to see how you can hand off the protagonist to a different character without confusion.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T9K3Reuspp3oXJdBm_Aj8QLuUXv0Lcj7wPTG9SZKKGI/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-270

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Two Factor Problems: The Must-Have for Writing Captivating Stories21 juil. 202201:10:29

Great stories always answer two-factor problems.

In this episode we see how Tim's mistake of choosing the wrong protagonist messes up the two factor problem. Shawn, Danielle, and Leslie help him sort out how to fix this problem.

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yNGyDX5dkbchjT6UcrixUNv_2PI_WT7GrZn04H0nIh0/edit

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-269

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

This is Episode 269 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

624 Break Down: The Surprising Mistake in Tim's First Draft14 juil. 202201:04:58

In this episode we start comparing the Story Grid 624 Analysis of the first draft of Tim's scene to EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain. Pretty quickly we see that Tim made one small mistake that ends up having a huge impact on the rest of the scene.

In EYE WITNESS, the author switches the protagonist near the beginning of the scene. Tim doesn't do this and, as you'll see, this causes a lot of problems!

Click here to read Tim's scene: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yNGyDX5dkbchjT6UcrixUNv_2PI_WT7GrZn04H0nIh0/edit?usp=sharing

To see the transcript of this episode, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-268

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First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 207 juil. 202201:00:21

Tim has written a first draft of his scene based on the in-depth analysis of Ed McBain's EYE WITNESS.

Listen in as Shawn, Danielle and Leslie give their feedback and start diving into the analysis of the first draft.  

For the transcript and downloads for this episode, visit https://storygrid.com/267

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First Draft Feedback: 3 Editors Give Honest Writing Analysis - Part 130 juin 202201:01:58

Tim has written a first draft of his scene based on the in-depth analysis of Ed McBain's EYE WITNESS.

 

Listen in as Shawn, Danielle and Leslie give their initial feedback and start diving into the analysis of the first draft.  

 

For the transcript and downloads for this episode, visit https://storygrid.com/266

 

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Get a free copy of our book Story Grid 101: The First Five Principles of the Story Grid Methodology: https://storygrid101.com

 

This is Episode 266 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

How to Plan a Short Story Based on a Masterwork23 juin 202201:12:31

How do we use all of this masterwork analysis to actually iterate our own short story?

In this week's episode, we look at the 624, Beat, and Trope analysis for the short story EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain (https://amzn.to/3Q2UpqV) and start discussing what kind of short story I might write based on all of the analysis.

This is where things start to go off the rails.

As you'll see, Shawn and Tim aren't always on the same page and struggle to communicate with each other.

We decided to leave this episode in so you can see what it looks like when an editor and author don's see eye-to-eye.

For the transcript and downloads for this episode, visit https://storygrid.com/265

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Story Tropes: Building Blocks of Scenes16 juin 202200:56:05

What are Tropes and how can they actually help your writing?

Tropes are a toolbox of common components to build a certain kind of story. You can put these building blocks together to create a story that meets the reader expectations for your particular GENRE.

Most lists of tropes are a grab bag of story types and/or their components and aspects. They don’t fit together, so they don’t provide a process for consistently crafting scenes and stories that satisfy readers.

In the Story Grid Universe, we provide this process by limiting the definition of a trope to a particular level of Story. Story Grid tropes are small story units that are the building blocks writers need to create the arc of change within scenes.

In this episode, we start working through the Tropes for the short story EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain (https://amzn.to/3Q2UpqV).

To download the Trope Breakdown, visit: https://storygrid.com/episode-264

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Beat Breakdown: Analyzing Writing Line-by-Line - Part 309 juin 202201:02:05

Learn how your line-by-line writing can be improved by the Story Grid Beat methodology.

In this episode, we show you the final line graph generated by our beat-by-beat analysis and how this can help you write better scenes.

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For episode transcript and downloads: https://storygrid.com/episode-263

This is Episode 263 of the Story Grid Podcast: https://storygrid.com/podcast

This is our in-depth analysis of the short story EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain: https://amzn.to/3Q2UpqV

Beat Breakdown: Analyzing Writing Line-by-Line - Part 202 juin 202201:00:33

In this episode, Danielle continues walking Tim through every single line of Ed McBain's EYE WITNESS to help him identify the beats and what they are doing.

 

This is a perfect episode for the story nerds!

Beat Breakdown: Analyzing Writing Line-by-Line - Part 126 mai 202201:03:15

Now that we have finished up the Story Grid 624 Analysis of Ed McBain's EYE WITNESS (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1WLiCyxIsCk), it's time to dive all the way down to the line-by-line writing. 

In this episode, Danielle begins walking Tim through every single line of the short story to help him identify the beats and what they are doing. 

This is a perfect episode for the story nerds!

624 Review + Trope and Beat Introduction19 mai 202201:10:21

We have wrapped up our 624 analysis of Ed McBain's short story EYE WITNESS. In this episode, Leslie does a review of the 624 then Danielle does an introduction for Tropes and Shawn follows up with introducing Beats.

Five Commandments of Storytelling - Part 312 mai 202201:01:42

Continuing our 624 analysis of Ed McBain's short story EYE WITNESS, we are talking through the Five Commandments of Storytelling.

This is the third in a three part episode as we deep dive through each commandment. In this episode, we go through the Climax and Resolution.

Five Commandments of Storytelling - Part 205 mai 202200:44:58

Continuing our 624 analysis of Ed McBain's short story EYE WITNESS, we are talking through the Five Commandments of Storytelling.

This is the second in a three part episode as we deep dive through each commandment. In this episode, we go through the Crisis and Crisis Matrix.

Five Commandments of Storytelling - Part 128 avr. 202200:45:33

Continuing our 624 analysis of Ed McBain's short story EYE WITNESS, we are talking through the Five Commandments of Storytelling.

This is a three part episode as we deep dive through each commandment. In this episode, we go through the Inciting Incident and the Turning Point Progressive Complication.

What is happening in your story? (Part 2)21 avr. 202200:48:32

There are four story analysis questions you must answer for every scene in your story:

 

1. What are the Avatars literally doing?

2. What are the essential tactics of the Avatars?

3. What universal human value has changed for one or more Avatars in the scene?

4. What Story Event sums up the scene’s global value change?

 

In this episode we make it to the final one! Last week we covered the first three.

What is happening in your story? (Part 1)14 avr. 202200:57:55

There are four story analysis questions you must answer for every scene in your story:

 

1. What are the Avatars literally doing?

2. What are the essential tactics of the Avatars?

3. What universal human value has changed for one or more Avatars in the scene?

4. What Story Event sums up the scene’s global value change?

 

In this episode we make it through the first three! Next week is a whole episode on the fourth question.

Point of View: It's WAY more than 1st, 2nd, and 3rd07 avr. 202201:05:42

Is it first or third person? Past or present tense?

As you'll see in this week's podcast episode, Point of View is about way more than this.

See more here:
https://storygrid.com/point-of-view/

A story’s global Point of View includes the technical choices writers make to deliver the story to the reader. The POP premise and Narrative Device suggest Point of View combinations that create the effect of the story told by the Author to the single Audience member.

Person refers to the vantage point from which the written story is presented the reader.

  • First Person: I (or we) wrote a story.
  • Second Person: You wrote a story.
  • Third Person: Alex (or she or he or they) wrote a story.

Tense distinguishes the timeframe of the story.

  • Past: I wrote a scene.
  • Present: You write (or are writing) a scene.
  • Future: Alex will write a scene.

Mode: The final technical choice focuses on how the information is presented. This is the storytelling Mode.

Showing is an objective and immediate mode that creates the effect of being present and observing the events of the story. Here are some examples.

  • First Person: The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins
  • Second Person: Bright Lights, Big City by Jay McInerney
  • Third Person: A Game of Thrones by George R.R. Martin, Brooklyn by Colm Tóibín, or “Hills Like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemingway

Telling is a subjective mode that readers experience as if someone or something is collecting, collating, and sharing the events and circumstances of the story.

  • First Person: Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson, To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee, or Bridget Jones’s Diary by Helen Fielding
  • Second Person: “How to Be an Other Woman” by Lorrie Moore.
  • Third Person: The Book Thief by Markus Zusak, A Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula K. Le Guin, Animal Farm by George Orwell, or Death Comes for the Archbishop by Willa Cather

Listen as Shawn Coyne, Tim Grahl, Leslie Watts, and Danielle Kiowski work through the Point of View for the the short story EYE WITNESS by Ed McBain: https://www.amazon.com/McBain-Brief-Ed-ebook/dp/B01KFBQEY4/

This is a Episode 254 of the Story Grid Podcast - https://storygrid.com/podcast

Narrative Device: 3 Questions to Nail the Point of View for Your Story31 mars 202201:15:57

Figuring out the Narrative Device for your story will unlock your writing in ways you never thought possible. 

There are three questions you must answer: 

- Who is the Author of the story? (Hint... it's not you, the writer) 

- Who is the Single Audience Member? 

- What is the Problem? 

See more here: https://storygrid.com/point-of-view/

The "What If" for Your Story24 mars 202201:04:11

How do you boil your story down into one "What If" statement? There are four parts to building out the answer to this question and Shawn, Leslie, Danielle, and Tim walk through it together in this week's episode.

The Genre Five Leaf Clover: The In-depth Process for Understanding Genre in Your Story16 mars 202201:10:39

The genre of your story is way more than one thing. In this episode of the Story Grid Podcast, learn the five important pieces of understanding your genre — Time, Style, Structure, Reality, and Content.

Two Sides to Every Story10 févr. 202200:27:01

Shawn discusses the two sides  to every story.

The History of the Story Grid Universe03 févr. 202200:24:00

Shawn and Kim go back to the beginning and discuss the origins of Story Grid. 

The Artist's Wants, Needs, and Desires27 janv. 202200:23:19

Shawn Coyne walks through the role you, as the Artist, plays in getting your own wants, needs and desires into your story.

Backstory and an Avatar's Wants, Needs, and Desires20 janv. 202200:19:25

Shawn Coyne discusses the role backstory plays in your character's wants, needs, and desires.

Crafting Story with Wants, Needs, and Desires13 janv. 202200:21:20

Shawn Coyne walks through character wants, needs, and desires and how they impact your storytelling.

What are Objects of Desire?06 janv. 202200:25:41

Shawn and Kim discuss Objects of Desire and how they work with your characters and storytelling.

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