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First Chapter Deep Dive: Outlander by Diana Gabaldon (with Savannah Gilbo)14 Feb 202501:00:27

 

Do you love historical romance? Do you want to learn what makes a first chapter capture a reader's (and literary agent's!) attention?

Then you need today's episode. 

In today's episode, book coach and developmental editor Savannah Gilbo returns for a deep dive into the uber-popular, time-traveling romance, OUTLANDER by Diana Gabaldon. This conversation is jam-packed with insightful tips on how to pull readers into your story with world-building, set ups, and memorable, interesting characters without slowing the pace. 

Some other topics Savannah and I explore include:

  • How to write an intriguing opening (and scenes) with what can sometimes feel like less intense stakes 
  • How many scenes are in this first chapter, and why each models a well-structured scene
  • How to plant set ups and share meaningful backstory without dragging down the pace
  • Plus, more! 

By the time you finish this episode, you'll know how to identify and answer some important questions that first chapters need in order to set up reader expectations. You'll also take away a handful of tools that you can use to tighten and polish well-structured scenes. So pick up a notebook and get ready to learn!

P.S. Happy Valentine's Day! 

 

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Books mentioned in this episode:

  • Outlander by Diana Gabaldon
  • The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier
  • Story Grid by Shawn Clyne

 

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! 

 

Diagon Alley Deep Dive: Scene Analysis of Chapter 5 in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone21 Jan 202500:50:06

If you're unsure how to write or analyze well-structured scenes in your novel, you need today's episode. 

Today, book coach and developmental editor Savannah Gilbo returns for a deep dive and scene analysis...only this time, it's extra special because it not only features a chapter from one of our favorite books, it is also the book Savannah analyzes in her Writer's Guide: The Writer's Study Guide: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone (Story Grid Publishing). 

When writers reach out to Savannah about this writer's guide, they often as her, "How many scenes are in the Diagon Alley chapter of Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone?” Well, today Savannah and I take a deep dive into this very chapter, which was quite a challenge to break down!

Listen to our conversation to hear us discuss the ins-and-outs of the major events and details that happen in Diagon Alley, which includes topics like how many scenes are in the chapter, exceptional world building details, and conflicts that come close to causing Crisis questions, but only one actually does this.  

Some other topics we explore are teaching points like:

  • How to analyze your scenes from three different perspectives—the reader’s perspective, the character’s perspective, and the author’s perspective
  • A quick trick for determining if your scenes work (and how to identify which areas of your scenes need work once you’ve written them)
  • *Spoiler alert!* Why we chose to analyze this chapter as one 6,500-word-long scene versus a bunch of smaller scenes (and how the structure of this scene works)
  • The purpose of the smaller moments within the scene that are arguably significant (and move the scene) forward but aren’t technically “scenes”
  • Our final thoughts on writing a scene like Diagon Alley

By the time you finish this episode, you'll go from scrambling to put a scene together (or understand how your favorite scene in a bestselling book works) to feeling confident about how you write scenes in your story or analyze them in masterworks. Plus, if you like this episode, you’ll probably LOVE Savannah's book, The Writer's Study Guide: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone (Story Grid Publishing). Click here to order a copy for your bookshelf >>

 

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"I love the Lit Match podcast!" ← If that sounds like you, I'd greatly appreciate if you took a minute or two to rate and review the show. Your rating and review will help other writers find this podcast, and they're super insightful to me. Thanks in advance! 

 

Links mentioned in this episode:

 

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! 

 

Jen Craven ON: Her Shift from Self-Publishing to Traditional Publishing26 Mar 202401:03:00

Abigail sits down with domestic suspense author, Jen Craven—her first *returning!* guest. In Jen's previous episode, Abigail and Jen discussed her writing career as a self-published author. In this episode, Jen talks about her latest books and what it's been like to shift from self-publishing to traditional publishing. Some of the big discussion topics Abigail and Jen explore include:

  • Why Jen decided to switch from self-publishing to traditional publishing 
  • What she likes about traditional publishing and what she needed to let go of
  • What it's like to work with multiple editors at Bookouture
  • How to structure a domestic thriller with high conscience-based stakes vs. life or death stales 
  • How to pitch to a publisher vs. write the back cover copy for Amazon 
  • How to come up with a great hook for your story (and test it)
  • What to consider when choosing a title for a commercial vs. literary book
  • Plus, more! 

Regardless of whether or not you want to self-publish or traditionally publish your manuscript, Jen's insights can help you weigh this decision. What key takeaways did you get from this episode?  

 Read Jen's Books >>

 

Find Abigail and Jen:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.jencraven.com/

IG: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor

First Chapters: Remarkably Bright Creatures (with Savannah Gilbo)27 Feb 202400:55:52

Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the bestselling and award-winning novel REMARKABLY BRIGHt CREATURES by Shelby Van Pelt. This was one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2023, and there are great reasons it received (and continues to receive) such hype!

Together, Abigail and Savannah discuss why these opening pages hook readers and set up big picture expectations for the story. Some key elements they take deep dives on include:

  • 7 Key questions to analyze that set up big picture expectations
  • Voice and "attitude" in POV and narratives 
  • Character development and relationships
  • Small details that work as great set ups for big pay offs
  • Plus, more!

Come study this popular book club fiction novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers. 

P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >>  

  

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

@abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

P.S. Don't miss Savannah's podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY! 

 

Resources mentioned in this episode:
• Remarkably Bright Creatures by Shelby Van Pelt
 The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Kate McKean ON: Demystifying Book Publishing Contracts06 Feb 202401:17:10

Take out your notepads!

Abigail sits down with literary agent Kate McKean for a very special conversation about book publishing contracts. This is a topic that intimidated Abigail early in her career—as it does many writers who are interested in traditional publishing. It's also extremely important for writers to understand what makes a good deal, and who better to learn from than an expert agent with over 17 years experience. 

Kate has worked as a literary agent at Howard Morhaim Literary Agency since 2006, where she's built a diverse client list from New York Times best selling internet sensations like I Can Has Cheezburger to beloved humorist and short story writer Daniel M. Lavery to New York Times best selling YA horror writer Madeleine Roux. 

Kate is also an adjunct professor at New York University in the School of Professional Studies and a writer herself (rep. by Michael Bourret of Dystel, Goderich, and Bourret).

Her ability to talk about complicated topics like publishing contracts in layman's terms is a testament to her teaching abilities and strong communication skills. Some of the key topics in this discussion include: 

  • Contract misconceptions and what to really expect
  • What makes a good deal and what are red flags in contracts
  • Money, rights, and what happens if something goes wrong
  • Payout structures (how writers get paid)
  • General thought process about negotiations
  • Why you should always ask for more
  • Plus, more! 

Does Kate sound like the ideal literary agent for you? Send her your query! 

Sign up for Kate's informative email list! >> Enroll here

  

Follow Abigail and Kate:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.katemckean.com/  

IG: @abigailkperry | @kate_mckean

X: @abigailkperry | @kate_mckean

First Chapters: Fourth Wing (with Savannah Gilbo) 19 Dec 202301:11:56

Abigail is back with book coach and editor Savannah Gilbo!

Today, Abigail and Savannah analyze the first chapter of the bestselling fantasy novel FOURTH WING by Rebecca Yarros. Together, they discuss why these opening pages hook readers and set up big picture expectations for the story. Some key elements they take deep dives on include:

  • How to raise the stakes (and why they're so important)
  • Structuring multiple scenes in a single chapter
  • Romantasy as a genre and New Adult as a category
  • Character development and relationships
  • Plus, more!

Come study this popular fantasy novel with Savannah and Abigail and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers. 

P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. Sign up for their next meeting or purchase a recording of a past meeting >>  

  

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

@abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

 

Resources mentioned in this episode:
Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros
The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings: How to Craft Story Openings That Sell by Paula Munier

Megan Tady ON: Resiliency and How She Turned Rejections into a Published Debut05 Dec 202300:56:58

Abigail sits down with Megan Tady (Super Bloom, May 2023) to discuss her debut and path to publishing. Humble and resilient, Megan shares her experience and knowledge about a wide range of writing tips from the importance of accountability partners and writing strategies to game-changing mindset tips and what to expect as a published author. Some of Abigail's favorite takeaways include:  

  •  How Megan became a story of resiliency 
  •  Ways to turn fear and a scarcity mindset into confidence
  •  Why querying is a humbling experience and how to crack a query letter
  •  The publishing gauntlet and what to expect after you publish
  •  Zibby Books and their creative and supportive approach to publishing 
  • Super Boom! (And Megan's next book)
  • More! 

What are your favorite takeaways from Megan's interview

P.S. Buy SUPER BLOOM here >>

 

Follow Abigail and Megan:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.megantady.com/ 

IG: @abigailkperry | @megtady

Meghan Stevenson ON: Her Literary Agent Matchmaking Strategy, the Pitfalls of Traditional Publishing, and Publishing Myths that Need to be Busted28 Nov 202301:03:33

Abigail sits down with Meghan Stevenson (Meghan Stevenson Books) to talk about all things traditional publishing. After an editing career at a traditional publisher, Meghan left her job and started Meghan Stevenson Books (2012). Meghan and her team have helped their clients earn over $5,000,000 in advances from top publishers. In total, their books have sold millions of copies and helped thousands of people. 

Packed with experience and knowledge, Abigail discusses big topics with Meghan that can help a multitude of writers interested in traditional publishing, especially nonfiction writers. Some of these include:  

  • 3 “P” factors Meghan considers when looking at a literary agent
  • Her agent matchmaking strategy
  • The “Barcelona Rule” and thoughts on the agent-author power dynamic
  • Why Meghan left her role at a traditional publisher but still believes in traditional publishing
  • Main pitfalls of publishing (and what authors can do about them)
  • Traditional publishing myths that need to be busted

Does Meghan sound like someone you want to work with? Reach out to her! 

 

Follow Abigail and Meghan:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.meghanstevenson.com/ 

IG: @abigailkperry | @megstevenson

Twitter: @abigailkperry | 

First Chapters: The Magicians (with Savannah Gilbo)09 Nov 202301:23:01

 Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of Lev Grossman's THE MAGICIANS (and it's a doozy of a first chapter!).

Both fantasy lovers, Savannah and Abigail come to this first chapter with a unique approach: Savannah is a super fan of this book and Abigail has only read it once—and several years ago. With these different perspectives, Savannah and Abigail compare their notes to see how this impacts their first chapter analysis and how the opening pages sets up big picture expectations and structures scenes. To do this, they use the 7 key first chapter questions (Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS) and Story Grid's five commandments. Plus, Savannah and Abigail dig into other valuable topics like new adult fiction (is it still a thing?), genre, and how/when to break up multiple scenes in a chapter. 

Why do you think the first chapter in THE MAGICIANS hooks readers? We'd love to hear your perspective!

P.S. If you enjoyed these first chapter episodes, you might love Abigail and Savannah's virtual book club, Book Notes. Come join us for our next meeting on November 16, 2023. We are studying the mega-popular fantasy book, THE FOURTH WING by Rebecca Yarros. Learn all about it (and join us!) here

Connect with us:

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo

Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

First Chapters: A Discovery of Witches (with Savannah Gilbo) 13 Jul 202300:57:51

Abigail is back with book coach and editor Savannah Gilbo!

Today, Abigail and Savannah sit down to analyze the first chapter of the bestselling fantasy novel A DISCOVERY OF WITCHES by Deborah Harkness. Together, they discuss why these opening pages hook readers—and model other outstanding elements of fiction, some including:

  • A micro-analysis of a well-structured scene (while planting set ups that pay off later in the book)
  • How this chapter sets up expectations for the main stakes in the novel, the genre of the story, and other important details that impact the characters and plot
  • A debate about the Crisis in the scene (and why a Crisis is so important!)
  • Plus, more!

Come study this popular fantasy novel with Savannah and Abigail, and let us know why you think the opening pages hook readers, and encourage them to read more. 

 

P.S. Do you enjoy analyzing stories and the writing craft? Learn more about Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes—and sign up for their next meeting 

  

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

@abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

 

First Chapters: Untamed (with Suzette Mullen)27 Jun 202301:14:25

Abigail sits down with book coach and memoir writer Suzette Mullen to analyze the prologue and first chapter of Glennon Doyle's bestselling and groundbreaking memoir, UNTAMED. Together, they discuss the differences between memoir and fiction writing—and also why writers can benefit greatly from reading and analyzing both genres. 

In addition to their analysis (using the 7 Key First Chapter Questions from Paula Munier's book THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS and the 5 Commandments of Storytelling from Story Grid/Robert McKee), Suzette shares various insights on how to structure memoirs and the vulnerability and courage it takes to write a memoir like Glennon's. Abigail was especially inspired by UNTAMED, and shares many of the unique elements that captured her attention within these opening pages.  

Come study a an unforgettable memoir with Suzette and Abigail, and let us know why you think the opening pages hook and move readers—and your analysis of the opening pages. 

 

P.S. Order Suzette's Memoir, THE ONLY WAY THROUGH IS OUT

 

Follow Abigail and Suzette:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com |  https://www.yourstoryfinder.com/ 

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @suzette_mullen

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @urstoryfinder

Ariele Fredman ON: The Difference Between a Book Publicist and a Literary Agent, Her Mission to Expand Commercial Fiction, and How to Understand Where a Book Fits in the Market13 Jun 202301:00:05

Abigail sits down with Ariele Fredman, a book publicist turned literary agent at United Talent Agency (UTA). Ariele is actively seeking commercial fiction in: General fiction, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/thriller, Feel-Good Fiction, Women's Fiction, and YA.  

Ariele joined UTA after working 12 years at Atria Books, where she worked across genres and launched bestselling campaigns from Colleen Hoover and Fredrik Backman to Zakiya Dalila Harris and Lisa Jewell (among others!). She has an exceptional knack at understanding people and instilling confidence in authors, and she is actively growing her MSWL!  

In addition to learning about Ariele's shift from publicist to agent, Ariele sheds light on various writing and publishing topics, some including: 

  •  How to empower writers by asking the right questions  
  •  How to help writers understand where they best fit in the market 
  •  Her perspective on commercial fiction and her mission to expand the genre at UTA
  •  Why voice matters, examples of exemplary voice, and even how to improve your voice in an email
  •  Ways to discover and pitch a story’s hook 
  •  How to define and pitch a story’s stakes 
  • And more! 

Does Ariele sound like the ideal literary agent for you? Send her your query! 

  

Follow Abigail and Ariele:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com 

IG: @abigailkperry | @arielestewart

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @arielestewart

Zoe Norvell ON: Everything You Need to Know About Book Covers (and How to Find the Perfect Designer for Your Story) 19 Nov 202401:00:50

If you've written a book and are in need a book cover, this is a super important episode for you to hear. 

In this conversation, I talk to the brilliant book cover designer, Zoe Novell, who is also the founder of the one-of-kind book designer directory, available on her website, I Need a Book Cover. In this special conversation, Zoe and I cover a range of invaluable and interesting information about book covers, including hot topics like what makes a book cover stand out, book cover trends based on their genre, key factors to consider when choosing imagery, color, and typography for a cover—and, how to find (and hire!) the best designer for your book.  

And these are only some of the huge takeaways you’ll get from listening to Zoe. 

By the time you finish this episode, you'll have a better grasp on why book covers are so important, what to consider when designing a book cover or hiring the ideal designer for your book, and how to use Zoe’s premier directory filled with hundreds of dedicated, full-time, and freelance book cover designers who are consistently adding extraordinary work to adult, trade book genres.

What are you waiting for? Listen to our chat now!

 

 

Connect with Abigail and Zoe: 

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @zoenorvell

Abigail's website

Zoe's websites: Zoe Norvell, I Need a Book Cover, I Need a Book Interior

 

Wondering what you should you listen to next? Learn all about book contracts from literary agent Kate McKean on this episode — Kate McKean ON: Demystifying Book Publishing Contracts 

 

First Chapters: Legendborn (with Savannah Gilbo)30 May 202300:23:17

A special episode that shares a piece of Abigail and Savannah's May Book Notes meeting! 

In this episode, Abigail and book coach companion Savannah Gilbo share a piece of their May virtual book club meeting; they take a deep dive into the first chapter (and prologue) of Tracy Deonn's YA fantasy bestseller LEGENDBORN. Here's a preview of what they discuss:

  • First chapter summary
  • How they split the chapter into two scenes (and why these scenes follow the 5 Commandments of Storytelling from Story Grid/Robert McKee)
  • Legendborn's prologue (and prologues in general)
  • Final thoughts and episode recap 

Links mentioned in this episode:

  • Want to join our book club? Click here to learn more! (Our July book club pick is Bonnie Garmus's major hit, LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY!) 
  • Listen to the Fiction Writing Made Easy Podcast with Savannah Gilbo! 

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

@abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

First Chapters: The Lion, The Witch, and the Wardrobe (with Sara Gentry)23 May 202300:56:32

In this episode, Abigail takes a first chapter deep dive with kidlit book coach and author, Sara Gentry. Together, they discuss the first chapter of C.S. Lewis’s beloved masterwork, THE LION, THE WITCH, AND THE WARDROBE (book two in The Chronicles of Narnia series).

In addition to their analysis of how the first chapter (and part of chapter two) sets up big picture expectations and creates a well-structured scene, Sara explains why burgeoning MG fantasy writers can use this book as a masterwork example—but not as a model for MG fantasy stories published in today’s market. To support this, she explains what readers expect (and what publishers want) in recent MG fantasy stories, and how the beginning might read if it were published today.  

Come study a portal fantasy and learn how C.S. Lewis’s classic world and adventure, relatable characters, and unique narrative—among other strengths—make this story one that stands the test of time.  

 

Follow Abigail and Sara: 

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://solutionsforwriters.com

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @writewithsara 

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @writewithsara

 

First Chapters: The House Across the Lake (with Samantha Skal) 16 May 202301:19:49

In this episode, Abigail takes a first chapter deep dive with Mystery, Thriller, and Suspense book coach expert and author, Samantha Skal. Together, they discuss the first chapter of Riley Sager's THE HOUSE ACROSS THE LAKE and why its prologue and first chapter hook readers and set up big picture expectations. Plus, Abigail picks Samatha's brain about several elements that make MTS novels special, like how Riley Sager masters misdirection with this bestseller, how to write exceptional plot twists, the difference between mysteries, thrillers, and suspense books—and more! 

Even if you don't write MTS, you'll benefit from this episode and all the insights you can learn about conflict, suspense, tension, and entertaining your reader until the end.  

P.S. Samantha is hosting a Twists/Reveals how-to class this summer that you don't want to miss! It's called Twists and Reveals in Thrillers - A How To Course and you can learn all about it here

 

Follow Abigail and Samantha: 

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.samanthaskal.com/ 

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @samanthaskal

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @authorsamanthaskal

Mikki Brammer ON: The Collected Regrets of Clover and Her Writing, Querying, and Publishing Experience02 May 202301:07:35

Abigail sits down with author Mikki Brammer to discuss her (amazing!) contemporary fiction/upmarket debut, THE COLLECTED REGRETS OF CLOVER. This story features a socially stunted death doula whose obsession with documenting her clients’ final words sends her on the adventure of her life. This is one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2023—and releases May 9th, 2023!

Together, Mikki and Abigail explore Mikki's inspiration for the novel, what it's about, and the many lessons she learned as a burgeoning writer-turned-published author.

In addition to an insightful discussion about her book, Mikki sheds light on her querying and publishing experience. Writers in traditional publishing can learn a lot from Mikki as she elaborates on some important topics that pertain to traditional publishing, like:

  • How she researched literary agents 
  • Her querying experience 
  • How she advocates for herself 
  • Why she loves her literary agent and agency
  • What writers should keep in mind when considering who (and where) they query 
  • Her experience working with (three!) editors
  • How to handle feedback 
  • And more! 

Whether or not you're writing a book, querying one, navigating the traditional publishing industry, or just love fiction, Mikki has experience—and a debut—that can inspire, comfort, and positively influence you.

Buy THE COLLECTED REGRETS OF CLOVER>>

 

Find Abigail and Mikki:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.mikkibrammer.com/ 

IG: @abigailkperry | @mikkibrammer

Twitter: @abigailkperry 

Victoria Marini ON: Atmospheric Writing, Balancing External Events and Interiority, and the Dos and Don'ts of Tropes11 Apr 202300:56:16

Abigail sits down with Victoria Marini, a literary agent at Irene Goodman Literary Agency (IGLA). Victoria is actively seeking page-turning fiction for all audiences from middle grade through adult, and is expanding her Upmarket Book Club lists. She enjoys novels with high-concepts and distinctive voices in a variety of genres including: fabulism and fantasy, psychological and domestic suspense, thriller, procedurals, historical (particularly lesser known cultures, peoples, and histories), mystery, literary speculative, magical realism, and horror. 

An agent of many genres, Victoria offers a wealth of great advice on various fiction elements. Listen to this episode for great insights on: 

  • Balancing external events with interiority
  • Crafting unforgettable characters
  • When it benefits a writer to temporarily put down their manuscript 
  • The dos and don'ts of tropes 
  • Stories with a rich setting
  • Atmospheric writing and how it creates tone (and even impacts a back cover)
  • Budding questions about the query process 
  • And more!

Does Victoria sound like the dream literary agent for you? Review her MSWL and send her your query! 

 

Victoria's Full MSWL: Download the file at the bottom of this page

Submit to Victoria: Review the submission guidelines here and then submit to Victoria.queries@irenegoodman.com

  

Follow Abigail and Victoria:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | www.victoriamarini.com 

IG: @abigailkperry | @litagentmarini

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @LitAgentMarini

 

P.S. Want to learn more about writing query letters and the query process? Abigail is hosting a workshop on Zoom on April 20, 2023! Learn more or sign up at www.abigailkperry.com/query 

Jen Craven ON: Self-Publishing vs. Traditional Publishing and How to Decide What's Best For Your Book and Career28 Mar 202301:12:59

Abigail sits down with indie author Jen Craven (BEST YEARS OF YOUR LIFE) to discuss why she decided to self-publish her book—even though she was getting requests on her manuscript while querying it.

Jen makes it very clear that she has nothing against traditional publishing, and that for many authors, this is the best publishing path. (She remains open to publishing differently in the future, but not because she disliked indie). Jen also shares why she decided that her first contemporary book (women's fiction) would do better as an indie book—and then, with explicit details, educates listeners on what she did to "go wide" with her book.

Additionally, Jen gives tips on marketing, including how to choose and build a social media platform authentically.

Even if your publishing goal is traditional, there are tons of tips on how to balance writing with marketing in this episode, all from an awesome literary citizen and author who does this on a daily basis.   

 

Buy BEST YEARS OF YOUR LIFE>>

 

Find Abigail and Jen:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.jencraven.com/

IG: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @jencravenauthor

First Chapters: Atomic Habits (with Barbara Boyd) 16 Mar 202301:13:24

Abigail is joined by nonfiction book coach expert, Barbara Boyd, to analyze James Clear's nonfiction book (a personal growth book) phenomenon, ATOMIC HABITS. What makes this deep dive particularly interesting is that Barbara and Abigail decide to analyze not the first chapter, but the introduction—something Barbara explains is crucial for a nonfiction book and book proposal that hooks a literary agent (and target readers). 

They use the 7 Key First Chapter Questions that set up big picture expectations to analyze the introduction. Then, instead of the traditional scene analysis breakdown Abigail uses to analyze the first chapters of fiction books, Barbara teaches what is needed in a nonfiction introduction—and together, they analyze how ATOMIC HABITS exemplifies this. 

  

ATOMIC HABITS by James Clear (pulled from Amazon)

The number one New York Times best seller. Over one million copies sold!

Tiny Changes, Remarkable Results

No matter your goals, Atomic Habits offers a proven framework for improving - every day. James Clear, one of the world's leading experts on habit formation, reveals practical strategies that will teach you exactly how to form good habits, break bad ones, and master the tiny behaviors that lead to remarkable results.

If you're having trouble changing your habits, the problem isn't you. The problem is your system. Bad habits repeat themselves again and again not because you don't want to change, but because you have the wrong system for change. You do not rise to the level of your goals. You fall to the level of your systems. Here, you'll get a proven system that can take you to new heights.

Clear is known for his ability to distill complex topics into simple behaviors that can be easily applied to daily life and work. Here, he draws on the most proven ideas from biology, psychology, and neuroscience to create an easy-to-understand guide for making good habits inevitable and bad habits impossible. Along the way, listeners will be inspired and entertained with true stories from Olympic gold medalists, award-winning artists, business leaders, life-saving physicians, and star comedians who have used the science of small habits to master their craft and vault to the top of their field.

Learn how to:

  • Make time for new habits (even when life gets crazy)
  • Overcome a lack of motivation and willpower
  • Design your environment to make success easier
  • Get back on track when you fall off course
  • And much more

Atomic Habits will reshape the way you think about progress and success, and give you the tools and strategies you need to transform your habits - whether you are a team looking to win a championship, an organization hoping to redefine an industry, or simply an individual who wishes to quit smoking, lose weight, reduce stress, or achieve any other goal.

Buy ATOMIC HABITS>>

 

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First Chapters: The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue (with Savannah Gilbo)08 Mar 202300:39:15

A special episode that shares a part of Abigail and Savannah's latest Book Notes conversation! 

In this episode, Abigail and book coach companion Savannah Gilbo share a piece of their latest Book Notes Book Club meeting. Abigail and Savannah started Book Notes, their virtual book club, to teach fiction writers how to read like a writer by (a) reading and analyzing a bestselling book and (b) engaging in a craft-based discussion that spotlights specific elements in fiction that likely made it a popular read. 

Here, Abigail and Savannah discuss the first chapter of what they argue is V.E. Schwab's novel masterpiece, THE INVISIBLE LIFE OF ADDIE LARUE. Although their full Book Notes discussion covers the entirety of the book—Abigail and Savannah do not think it would be fair to book club attendees if they shared the whole discussion—this episode features the part of that discussion that is their first chapter analysis.

Listen to hear what Abigail and Savannah thought about the first chapter's scene structure and how important details set up expectations for the big picture. If you want to learn how to read like a writer (and simultaneously improve your writing craft), you'll enjoy this episode! 

P.S. If you'd like to learn more about Book Notes, and/or join their next book club meeting, you can do so here.

The next Book Notes meeting is on: 

  • March 16, 2023 4pm PT / 7pm ET
  • We will study THE GUEST LIST by Lucy Foley

 

Other Resources to Check Out:

  • The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V.E. Schwab 
  • The Writer's Guide to Beginnings by Paula Munier
  • Story Grid by Shawn Coyne 
  • Story by Robert McKee
  • The Guest List by Lucy Foley 

 

Follow Abigail and Savannah: 

www.abigailkperry.com | www.savannahgilbo.com 

@abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo 

And don't miss Savannah's amazing podcast, FICTION WRITING MADE EASY 

 

Howard Yoon ON: The Core Components of a Book Proposal, Reveals and Results of the DOJ-PRH Antitrust Trial, and How Publishing Merges Art and Commerce 23 Feb 202300:59:01

Abigail sits down with Howard Yoon, a literary agent and principal of the Ross Yoon Agency. Howard specializes in narrative nonfiction, history, memoir, science, current events, politics, and popular culture.

In this conversation, Howard shares his wealth of expertise in publishing as a nonfiction literary agent and what makes a great nonfiction book. He enlightens Abigail about various topics from important business insights on news like the Penguin Random House trial to craft-focused conversations like what determines an idea that works better as a podcast or blog vs. a nonfiction book. 

And that’s only the beginning. Listen to this episode to hear everything Howard teaches and discusses, with some big topics like: 

  • The difference between a nonfiction literary agent and a fiction literary agent 
  • Idea, Market, Writing, and Profile—and how nonfiction literary agents (and authors) assess these four elements to determine if they have a good product 
  • The formula Howard uses to shape a strong nonfiction book proposal 
  • Howard’s MSWL and the layers of needs/desire he considers before signing a client 
  • Publishing and how it merges art and commerce—plus, why agents might be weary of writers who veer too much on one side or the other  
  • The alchemy of publishing and why publishers don’t have a strong relationship with consumers (but are getting better at it) 
  • The DOJ-PRH Antitrust Trial, big reveals that came out of it, results, and what to expect now
  • The pros and cons of publishing with a Big 5 Publisher 
  • The core components of a book proposal 

 

Does Howard sound like the dream literary agent for you? Don't be afraid to query him! 

 

Howard Yoon on Jane Friedman's Roundtable: DOJ-PRH Antitrust Trial

*826 nonprofit mentioned >> Donate here to support children with writing, tutoring, and publishing 

 

Some of Howard's Clients and Books:

 

Follow Abigail and Howard:

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IG: @abigailkperry | Ross Yoon Agency (@rossyoon_)

Twitter: @abigailkperry | Ross Yoon Agency (@RossYoon)

Dani Abernathy ON: The Enneagram Personality Test and Why it Might Be a Writer's Next Favorite Tool15 Feb 202300:58:52

Abigail sits down with book coach and fantasy writer, Dani Abernathy, to discuss a unique tool that Dani uses with her clients: the Enneagram Personality Test.

Many writers love personality tests (Abigail included), but in this episode, Dani shares how to use the Enneagram test effectively—and with this knowledge, it won’t become a resource that sends writers down a research rabbit hole.

How does this work? Dani explains how, by deeply understanding the Enneagram test, writers can develop a more diverse cast of personalities in their books. Additionally, writers who better understand their personalities can use this knowledge to their advantage, resulting in a happier, and more efficient writing and publishing process. 

Plus, when writers understand the Enneagram of their main characters, they can use it as a tool to develop a character’s wants, fears, and ultimately, decision making abilities—all of which are paramount to a story’s character arc, plot, and ultimate change.  

Do you use a personality test to write your books? The Enneagram test might be your next favorite writing tool! 

 

Bonus!

Take Dani's Enneagram Personality Test for Writers

 

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Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone: A Complete Breakdown of the Main Plot Line05 Nov 202400:57:18

If you're planning your novel or have a finished draft and don't know where to begin with revisions, you need to hear this episode. 

This is a special two-part discussion with the brilliant book coach, developmental editor, and author Savannah Gilbo as she breaks down the main plot line—or the big picture—in J.K. Rowling's debut and phenomenon, HARRY POTTER AND THE SORCERER'S STONE (HPSS). 

In today's high-level discussion, Savannah and I chat about some foundational knowledge that can greatly benefit you when outlining, writing, and revising your book, such as understanding your content genre, the 5 Commandments of Story Telling (Story Grid), and how to identify the main scenes that govern your story. This pieces pulled from this episode come from an interview Savannah and I did with Story Grid for their YouTube channel, which you can watch here

To do this, Savannah and I first explore the 5 main scenes that make up the global story in HPSS. After, we zoom-in and dissect what we call the skeletal structure of HPSS; in other words, the 20 key scenes that make up the story's main plot line, split into the beginning, middle, and end (also known as Act I, Act II Part I, Act II Part II, and Act III).

By the time you finish this episode, you'll have a better grasp on how to use plot and structure to test the strength of a story, all of which is modeled in a masterwork that changed history. The key points made in this discussion also pull from Savannah's recent book, THE WRITER'S STUDY GUIDE: HARRY POTTER AND THE SORCERER'S STONE, which you can purchase by clicking this link.

What should you listen to next? Check out Savannah and my analysis of the first chapter in HPSS: First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. 

 

Connect with Abigail and Savannah:

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Maria Vicente ON: WTF is a Literary Agent, How She Supports Her Clients, and First Chapters that Hook08 Feb 202300:55:54

Abigail sits down for an insightful conversation about agenting and craft with Senior Literary Agent, Maria Vicente, of P.S. Literary Agency. 

While Maria has a love for and strong list of children’s books and graphic novels, she’s also looking to expand her list with adult fiction and nonfiction. Learn about Maria’s MSWL and her agenting style, along with other solid pieces of writing and business advice, in this episode. 

Some key takeaways from this conversation include:

  • How Maria got into agenting and some of her favorite responsibilities (like meticulously reviewing contracts)  
  • How involved Maria is in a client’s writing and editing process after becoming a client, and how Maria like to communicate with her clients  
  • Maria’s love for literary fiction and how she differentiates literary fiction from commercial and upmarket 
  • WTF is a literary agent, and why it’s equally important for agents to address basic questions like this one as seasoned questions
  • How writers can decide between traditional publishing and self-publishing—and when one route is better for the individual over the other
  • How to hook readers with first chapters
  • Sentence variation and why this easily enhances narrative voice 
  • Why a writer should consider the literary agent and the agency
  • What to include in a graphic novel script 
  • And more!   

Maria Vicente is actively seeking new client. In addition to this episode, visit her website for her full MSWL and more insights. Is she the perfect business partner and advocate for your writing and publishing career? Listen to find out! 

 

Some of Maria's Clients and Books:

 

Follow Abigail and Maria:

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IG: @abigailkperry | @agentvicente

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @agentvicente

Gail (Gigla) Hayes ON: How Words and Music Inspire Change (a Tribute to Her Joy and Life)03 Feb 202300:48:09

This week's episode deviates from the normal Lit Match episode structure in order to honor the life of Abigail's aunt, Gail Hayes, who was a talented writer, devoted mother and wife, and active fundraiser—some of her many roles in life. Gail (who Abigail called Gigla or Gig) passed away on January 24, 2023 from Glioblastoma (brain tumor) after courageously fighting this disease for 21-months. 

In this episode, Abigail pulls her interview with Gail from her first podcast, Story Effect. She interviews Gail about four dominant story-influences on her life, which include THE CRICKET IN TIMES SQUARE, her favorite book, and three of Gail's favorite songs. All of these explore Gail's love for music and how it has an innate ability to connect, inspire, and educate people—even transcend language, although Gail focuses on the words and messages in the book and songs to discuss why they influenced her.

Following the interview, Abigail pulls 5 big takeaways and explains why they can teach and inspire writers. With each takeaway, Abigail provides a writing exercise or writing tip(s) that writers can immediately apply to their craft and WIP (work-in-progress). 

So, writing friends, take out your notebooks! This episode offers both life and writing lessons you won't want to miss—and all from a kindred spirit who possessed a magical ability to simplify words in powerful and meaningful ways. 

Read the full obituary of Gail Hayes 

Make a donation in Gail's name to Dana-Farber Cancer Institute

Read Gail's Creative Writing Articles on Cooking, "How Do I Love Thee? Let Me Cook the Ways"

 

Books and Songs Covered in this Episode:

 

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First Chapters: Ugly Love by Colleen Hoover (with Savannah Gilbo) 25 Jan 202300:59:40

This week, book coach and developmental editor Savannah Gilbo joins Abigail for a first chapter deep dive analysis of a Colleen Hoover mega-hit, UGLY LOVE. This is also a particularly special episode because it pulls a small clip from the first meeting of Savannah and Abigail's virtual book club, Book Notes. 

In this episode, you'll learn how the first chapter of UGLY LOVE gives readers insight into what the Big Picture is all about, and how it works as a well-structured scene that hooks readers. Some key details you'll hear include: 

  • What is this story really about and how does the first chapter hint at this?
  • How many scenes exist in this first chapter?
  • What does the structure of the scene look like?
  • How does each scene advance both plot and character?
  • Plus, more...

These first chapter deep dive analysis episodes are designed to help you, the burgeoning writer, learn how to improve and master your craft—especially if you want to polish your first pages before querying your dream agent.

 

Not sure what UGLY LOVE is about? Read this blurb from the book's back cover on Amazon:

When Tate Collins meets airline pilot Miles Archer, she doesn't think it's love at first sight. They wouldn’t even go so far as to consider themselves friends. The only thing Tate and Miles have in common is an undeniable mutual attraction. Once their desires are out in the open, they realize they have the perfect set-up. He doesn’t want love, she doesn’t have time for love, so that just leaves the sex. Their arrangement could be surprisingly seamless, as long as Tate can stick to the only two rules Miles has for her.

Never ask about the past.
Don’t expect a future.

They think they can handle it, but realize almost immediately they can’t handle it at all.

Hearts get infiltrated.
Promises get broken.
Rules get shattered.
Love gets ugly.

 

Connect with us:

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo

Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY 

First Chapters: Lessons in Chemistry (with Sarah Dickinson)10 Jan 202301:14:48

Today, Abigail brings on a guest who is an avid reader and professional book reviewer—and popular podcast host!—Sarah Dickinson. Together, they take a first chapter deep dive analysis of one of 2022’s most popular books (what NYT called the Best Book of the Year!), and one of their favorite reads in 2022: LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY by Bonnie Garmus.

This episode is particularly fun since Sarah, as a reader, shares her analysis based on her reaction as a reader, paired with Abigail's editorial viewpoint. 

Come listen to their analysis as they breakdown big first and second chapter hooks like:

  • How the prologue in disguise might not quite work as a scene with a value change—but absolutely hooks readers and works as an engaging, rich opening 

  •  Elizabeth Zott, the logical, confident, and depressed chemist/celebrity chef who exemplifies a well-developed character and has inspired countless readers 

  •  How the first two chapters encapsulate so much of what readers need to know in order to embrace the big picture 

  • The smart execution of POV and how sharing multiple perspectives about Elizabeth Zott electrified her character (and the story)

  • A breakdown of the scene structure for chapter two (what we called the official chapter one)

  • What Bonnie Garmus hopes women readers take away from LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY, and what she hopes men take away from it 

Plus, more! 

Email Abigail with your thoughts or share on social media and tag her. Let's continue the conversation!

 

LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY by Bonnie Garmus (pulled from Amazon)

Chemist Elizabeth Zott is not your average woman. In fact, Elizabeth Zott would be the first to point out that there is no such thing as an average woman. But it’s the early 1960s and her all-male team at Hastings Research Institute takes a very unscientific view of equality. Except for one: Calvin Evans; the lonely, brilliant, Nobel–prize nominated grudge-holder who falls in love with—of all things—her mind. True chemistry results. 

But like science, life is unpredictable. Which is why a few years later Elizabeth Zott finds herself not only a single mother, but the reluctant star of America’s most beloved cooking show Supper at Six. Elizabeth’s unusual approach to cooking (“combine one tablespoon acetic acid with a pinch of sodium chloride”) proves revolutionary. But as her following grows, not everyone is happy. Because as it turns out, Elizabeth Zott isn’t just teaching women to cook. She’s daring them to change the status quo.  

Laugh-out-loud funny, shrewdly observant, and studded with a dazzling cast of supporting characters, Lessons in Chemistry is as original and vibrant as its protagonist.

Buy LESSONS IN CHEMISTRY>>

 

Listen to Sarah's Podcast (and episode with Bonnie Grams):

 

Find Abigail and Sarah:

Website: www.abigailkperry.comhttps://www.sarahsbookshelves.com/sample-page/

IG: @abigailkperry | @SarahsShelves

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @sarahsbookshelves

Andrea DeWerd ON: The Writing Community's Mass Departure from Twitter and Book Marketing Strategies that Work for Authors03 Jan 202300:59:48

Abigail sits down with book marketing expert (with 13 years Big 5 publishing experience), Andrea DeWerd, to discuss the writing community's mass departure from Twitter.  

In this conversation, Andrea explains what's really happening on Twitter, why eight percent of the writing and publishing community have left this platform, and what this means for writers who want to find information about the publishing business, discover agents (among other professionals in the book industry), and sell books. 

Andrea also shares insights from her book marketing expertise with specific tools and strategies authors can use to market their books—and make a splash! 

Listen to this conversation to learn a wealth of book business-related news and book marketing tips that you won't want to miss, some including:

  • How to use various tools imbedded in technology to market your book
  • What really is happening on Twitter and why the writing and publishing community has left the platform at a higher rate than the US average (8%)
  • Changes in the blue check mark on Twitter and why this might hinder an account's credibility 
  • Twitter alternatives for publishing professionals and why none of them have stuck yet 
  • How to pick the one social media platform that is best for marketing your book
  • What to do if you want a video-based platform but don’t like to be on video 
  • Where writers should turn for information on the book business if the publishing industry leaves Twitter altogether 
  • The difference in social media algorithms and why it is easier to gather a following on Twitter compared to other social media platforms, like Instagram 
  • The amount of time you need to market your book before you launch it if you want to make a splash  

 

What are your biggest takeaways from Andrea's insights? Abigail would love to know! 

P.S. Abigail’s email list is up and running! If you’d like to be the first to hear about new podcast episodes, insight on the publishing industry, and writing tips, be sure to sign up at www.abigailkperry.com 

 

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Twitter: @abigailkperry | @ajdewerd

 

First Chapters: The Wedding Date by Jasmine Guillory (with Book Coach Rona Gofstein)22 Dec 202201:07:53

Come join Abigail and certified book coach, Rona Gofstein, as they analyze the first chapter of bestselling author Jasmine Guillory’s USA Today bestselling novel, THE WEDDING DATE.  

Abigail and Rona explore many of the important elements of contemporary romance, as well as what makes this first chapter so engaging. Read the first chapter, listen to this conversation, and join Abigail and Rona as they share their craft knowledge and observations.

In today’s episode, you’ll learn:

  •  How the first chapter of TWD sets up expectations for the big picture, using the 7 Key First Chapter Questions from Paula Munier’s book THE WRITER’S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS 
  •  What makes contemporary romance a popular genre 
  •  The difference between the hero's journey and the heroine's journey  
  •  How an interesting POV shift, but not a scene change, works in these first pages 
  •  What makes this a well-structured first scene
  •  And, more! 

Email Abigail with your thoughts or share on social media and tag her. Let's continue the conversation!  

 

THE WEDDING DATE by Jasmine Guillory (pulled from Amazon)

Agreeing to go to a wedding with a guy she gets stuck with in an elevator is something Alexa Monroe wouldn't normally do. But there's something about Drew Nichols that's too hard to resist.

On the eve of his ex's wedding festivities, Drew is minus a plus one. Until a power outage strands him with the perfect candidate for a fake girlfriend....

After Alexa and Drew have more fun than they ever thought possible, Drew has to fly back to Los Angeles and his job as a pediatric surgeon, and Alexa heads home to Berkeley, where she's the mayor's chief of staff. Too bad they can't stop thinking about the other....

They're just two high-powered professionals on a collision course toward the long distance dating disaster of the century--or closing the gap between what they think they need and what they truly want....

Buy THE WEDDING DATE>>

 

Find Abigail and Rona:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://ronagofstein.com

IG: @abigailkperry | @write.with.rona

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @ronathewriter 

CeCe Lyra ON: Layered Stories that Exemplify Good Writing, Why Publishing is so Competitive, and the Importance of Persistence over Insistence 15 Dec 202201:09:47

Join Abigail as she interviews CeCe Lyra, Associate Literary Agent at P.S. Literary Agency and the brilliant co-host of the popular writing podcast, The Shit No One Tells You About Writing. Abigail’s said it in more places than one: This conversation will be one that Abigail thinks about (and refers back to) for many, many years. 

Here are some of the multitude of important, insightful topics CeCe covers—like the writing process, the realities of the publishing industry, and even questions that will make you reflect about yourself and your story beyond writing and publishing a book:   

  • CeCe’s path to publishing (and why she LOVES her job)
  • CeCe’s MSWL, her eclectic taste in adult fiction and nonfiction (from really, really dark and gritty to fun and uplifting…and any book that makes you feel empowered) 
  • Why publishing is such at competitive industry, and at the same time, why comparing yourself to other writers and authors will only hold you back 
  • Examples of good writing and why books need to reach a certain caliber before catching an agent’s or editor’s attention 
  • How CeCe brainstorms story ideas with her clients, offers notes, and supports them in every step
  • Layered stories: What this means and the how’s and why’s of mastering this skill 
  • Why you shouldn’t obsess about writing a book fast
  • Finding hard statistics and why an awareness of how the industry works is crucial for published authors
  • Discovering your greatest privilege as a writer (and why you should reflect on this)  

What was your biggest takeaway from CeCe’s interview?  Email Abigail, she'd love to hear from you! 

P.S. Abigail’s email list is up and running! If you’d like to be the first to hear about new podcast episodes, insight on the publishing industry, and writing tips, be sure to sign up at www.abigailkperry.com 

 

CeCe’s Wishlist: https://cecilialyra.com/query-wishlist/

Query CeCe: https://www.psliterary.com/submissions/

More Articles with CeCe:

 

Follow Abigail and CeCe:

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IG: @abigailkperry | @cece_lyra_agent

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @ceciliaclyra



First Chapters: Little Fires Everywhere by Celeste Ng (with Bestselling Author Jennifer Klepper)07 Dec 202201:08:03

Come join Abigail and USA Today bestselling author, Jennifer Klepper, as they perform a first chapter deep dive analysis of Celeste Ng’s bestselling masterpiece, LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE.

Abigail and Jennifer agree, Celeste Ng is an exceptional author and LFE is a book that every writer can learn from. And the first pages prove why.

Abigail admits that she found this scene particularly challenging to analyze, and she’s curious what YOU think. Read the first chapter, listen to this conversation, and let her know! 

In today’s episode, you’ll learn:

  • How the first chapter of LFE sets up expectations for the big picture, using the 7 Key First Chapter Questions from Paula Munier’s book THE WRITER’S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS 
  • Why Shaker Heights provides the perfect setting for an inciting incident that blows up this small-town world 
  • How Celeste Ng masters multi-POV without distracting the reader (even with changing perspectives within the same paragraph) 
  • How a Crisis can work—and not necessarily “belong” to the central protagonist in the scene 
  • Options for how five commandments play out in engaging scene structure that advances the plot and develops character and conflict 
  • Plus, more! 

Come study the first pages of Ng’s award-winning and bestselling work of literary fiction/domestic suspense. And then let us know, how do you think the 7 Key First Chapter Questions and Scene Structure work in the first chapter?

Email Abigail with your thoughts or share on social media and tag her. Let's continue the conversation!  

 

LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE BLURB (pulled from Goodreads)

Everyone in Shaker Heights was talking about it that summer: How Isabelle, the last of the Richardson children, had finally gone around the bend and burned the house down.

In Shaker Heights, a placid, progressive suburb of Cleveland, everything is meticulously planned—from the layout of the winding roads, to the colors of the houses, to the successful lives its residents will go on to lead. And no one embodies this spirit more than Elena Richardson, whose guiding principle is playing by the rules.

Enter Mia Warren—an enigmatic artist and single mother—who arrives in this idyllic bubble with her teenage daughter Pearl, and rents a house from the Richardsons. Soon Mia and Pearl become more than just tenants: All four Richardson children are drawn to the mother-daughter pair. But Mia carries with her a mysterious past, and a disregard for the rules that threatens to upend this carefully ordered community.

When old family friends attempt to adopt a Chinese-American baby, a custody battle erupts that dramatically divides the town—and puts Mia and Elena on opposing sides. Suspicious of Mia and her motives, Elena is determined to uncover the secrets in Mia's past. But her obsession will come at an unexpected and devastating cost… 

Buy LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE >>

 

Find Abigail and Jennifer:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com | https://www.jenniferklepper.com/

IG: @abigailkperry | @jennifer_klepper

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @jenklepper

First Chapters: The Midnight Library (with Book Coach Sharon Skinner)01 Dec 202201:23:04

"Between life and death there is a library, and within that library, the shelves go on forever. Every book provides a chance to try another life you could have lived. To see how things would be if you had made other choices . . . Would you have done anything different, if you had the chance to undo your regrets?" — Blurb for Matt Haig's bestselling novel, THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY 

Abigail sits down with certified book coach Sharon Skinner to analyze the first chapter of THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY. This is one of Abigail's favorite reads in 2022 (it published in 2020), and it's also in Abigail's top reads. Sharon also loved THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY, and is an excellent coach to talk to about this book since Sharon specializes in TML's genre, (curio) speculative fiction. 

Join Abigail and Sharon for a first chapter deep dive analysis of Matt Haig's bestselling, award-winning novel! Following the traditional format for these deep dive episodes, Abigail and Sharon discuss how the *prologue in disguise* and first chapter set up expectations for the big picture (using Paula Munier's 7 Key First Chapter Questions from her book THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS), and then they zero-in to examine each scene's structure (using Story Grid's scene analysis tools, some of these also used by Robert McKee). 

In addition to the macro and micro analysis, Abigail and Sharon discuss:

  • Curio fiction, what this is and why it's a valuable sub-category in speculative fiction
  • What THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY is really about 
  • Why the POV works well in this novel, and why it wouldn't work if we were too close to Nora's POV
  • Why there is no one way to write (but how to use tips that can help) 
  • Plus, more actionable advice and tips that you can apply to your writing!  

 Did you read THE MIDNIGHT LIBRARY? What did you think of its first chapter?

  

Don't forget to read Diane Callahan's article on Tor: What Is “Curio Fiction”? Finding a Name for a Fantastical Subgenre

 

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Inside Interview: Jeff Kinney, Diary of a Wimpy Kid, and 5 Big Writing Takeaways and Assignments to Apply to Your WIP09 Nov 202201:13:02

The first episode in a new Author Interview + Writing Tips and Assignments series on LIT MATCH!

In today’s episode, Abigail pulls one of her favorite interviews from her  her old podcast (pub. 2020) and revamps it for the Lit Match listeners. 

Abigail sits down with the bestselling author of the DIARY OF A WIMPY KID series, Jeff Kinney. Listen to this episode to get an inside look at the makings of Diary of a Wimpy Kid, writing comics, and other valuable writing tips. 

Then, join Abigail for Part II of this episode, where Abigail explores five big takeaways from Jeff’s advice. Abigail follows each takeaway with a writing assignment that she encourages every writer to apply to their WIP, or at the very least, to their writing practice.

 

The 5 Big Writing Takeaways Include:

  1. Find inspiration from real events and then fictionalize them for fiction stories
  2. Develop characters who are human and relatable for a general audience
  3. Show how a character changes from beginning to end without  altering the rules of their universe
  4. Apply the 3-Act Structure to every story 
  5. Create a cast of various personalities  

 

Find Jeff: www.wimpykid.com

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Karyn Fischer ON: Writing a Memorable Narrative Voice for Middle Grade and Young Adult Fiction24 Sep 202400:47:42

Abigail sits down with Karyn Fischer, a book coach and past literary agent of Bookstop Literary Agency, to discuss narrative voice and how to differentiate a character’s voice in middle grade and young adult novels. 

If you’re writing a middle grade or young adult novel—or you get consistent feedback that something is just “off” with your voice—this episode is for you. 

Karyn shares specific (and practical) tips that can help you improve your narrative voice, and she even takes a deep-dive into two examples that emphasize when a voice really works, and why it needs to change in order to reflect the age of the protagonist.    

As a certified Author Accelerator book coach, and a past literary agent with additional experience as a bookseller and book buyer for an indie bookstore (among various other roles in the industry), Karyn knows how to teach writers how to improve their character’s voice and prose. I don’t want you to miss out!

P.S. After you listen to this episode, share it with a writing companion who could use this advice, and don’t forget to subscribe to the show and rate/review it so that Abigail can reach more writers like you who want to blend their passion of writing with business.   

Connect with Abigail and Karyn:

Website: www.abigailkperry.com |https://www.storyandprose.com/

IG: @abigailkperry |@storyandprose

P.S. Check out Karyn’s latest workshop: Revision Confidence!

Comparable Titles: What They Are, Why Writers Need Them, and How to Find (and Pitch!) Ones that are Irresistible02 Nov 202200:37:33

After writing a book comes publishing it, and to do so (or if you want to do it well), you need to know your target readers and the market. One of the most important tools a writer, literary agent, editor, and publisher uses to give a quick, clear, and catchy idea of what a story is about—and what everyone can predict for sales—is comparable titles (or comps). That’s what Abigail covers in this episode. She pulls from her first-hand experience as an editorial intern and various insightful articles (linked below) to teach: 

  • 📖 What are comparable titles (comps)? 
  • 📖 Why do you need them if you want to publish your book?
  • 📖 4 easy ways to find noteworthy comps 
  • 📖 4 essential requirements to verify if you have strong comps
  • 📖 More!  

 

Resources reference in this episode:

 

Want to sign up for Book Notes (a virtual book club with Savannah Gilbo and Abigail)?

First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows26 Oct 202201:14:15

We're back with the final episode! 

Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS.

This is a particularly special episode in the series being the final Harry Potter book and first chapter episode, as well as Abigail's favorite book in the series.  

In this conversation, Abigail and Savannah discuss how the first chapter sets up expectations for the big picture and delivers a well-structured scene on the micro level (or small picture). To do this, they use tools like the seven key questions to ask about first chapters (Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS) and Story Grid's five commandments. Plus, Savannah and Abigail dig into other valuable topics like how this chapter is the most omniscient perspective in the series (and why this is important), the chilling and high stakes set up in this opening scene, and more.  

 Why do you think the first chapter in Deathly Hallows is great? We'd love to hear your perspective!

 

P.S. If you enjoyed these first chapter episodes, you might love Abigail and Savannah's virtual book club, Book Notes! Learn all about it (and join us!) here

 

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10 Unforgettable Writing (and Life!) Tips from My Favorite Author Presentation19 Oct 202200:35:46

Taking a different direction for this week’s episode, Abigail speaks directly to listeners about ten pieces of writing (and life!) tips she absorbed from what she considers her favorite in-person author presentation. 

Last month, Abigail was lucky enough to attend bestselling author Fredrik Backman’s book tour for the third book in his Beartown series trilogy, THE WINNERS. 

Abigail had been wanting to read Backman’s books for years but constantly failed to prioritize them on her reading list—until she saw Fredrik Backman was coming to town. 

Now, Abigail easily and enthusiastically calls Fredrik Backman one of her favorite authors —of all time. She’s obsessed with his writing and ability to create characters—and even more so with his raw, sincere ability to answer thought-provoking questions. 

In this episode, listen to the ten invaluable pieces of writing and life advice that Abigail learned from Fredrik Backman’s presentation. These lessons have sat with Abigail ever since she listened to him, and they offer advice and writing tips Abigail purposefully carries with her as she moves forward with her own writing and editing. 

 

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Read THE WINNERS by Fredrik Backman

Purchase here



First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince05 Oct 202201:01:44

We're back with book six!

Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE HALF-BLOOD PRINCE.

This is an extra special episode since HBP is Savannah's favorite book in the series—plus, both Abigail and Savannah agreed that this first chapter was the most difficult to analyze, at least so far in the series—which makes for a fun challenge and discussion.  

In this analysis, Abigail and Savannah discuss how the first chapter sets up expectations for the big picture and delivers a well-structured scene in the small picture. They use tools like the seven key questions to ask about first chapters, taken from Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS, and Story Grid's five commandments of storytelling—along with other thoughts and opinions. 

 What do you think makes up the first chapter of HBP? We'd love to hear your perspective. 

 

P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

 

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First Chapters: Counterfeit (with Special Guests, Bestselling Author Kirstin Chen and Executive Editor Jessica Williams28 Sep 202200:55:23

Abigail sits down for a first chapter analysis of the bestselling and Reese Witherspoon Book Club pick, COUNTERFEIT. She takes a deep dive into the first chapter analysis—and she enthusiastically welcomes the author and editor of the book to join her in this dissection and discussion. 

KIRSTIN CHEN is the New York Times best-selling author of three novels. Counterfeit, her latest and the book discussed in this episode, has sold the translation rights in seven languages and television rights have been optioned by Sony Pictures. Kirstin holds an MFA from Emerson College and a BA from Stanford University. 

JESSICA WILLIAMS is an editor at William Morrow, an imprint of HarperCollins Publishers. She edits a range of fiction and nonfiction projects and is most interested in upmarket/literary fiction and narrative nonfiction/memoir with cultural underpinnings. Jessica completed a master’s in comparative literature at Georgetown University and worked at a literary and scouting agency in New York.

Together, these women discuss how COUNTERFEIT’s first pages set up expectations for the story’s big picture. They use the seven key questions to ask about a first chapter in order to determine its strengths. (These questions are pulled from Paula Munier’s book, THE WRITER’S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS.)

Afterwards, Abigail, Kirstin, and Jessica discuss how the first chapter, (seen as one scene) works on a scene (or small picture) level. 

Full of wisdom, this episode includes additional discussion on invaluable writing and editing advice, like:

  • Why to connect theme and plot twists in a story 
  • How to use your POV to create tension in the narrative and plot 
  • Why you shouldn’t get down on yourself if your manuscript needs multiple drafts

Plus, more!  

 

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Kirstin Chen: kirstinchen.com | Twitter: @kirstin_chen | IG: kirstin.chen

Jessica Williams: @JWillsNYC

First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix 14 Sep 202201:04:55

We're back with book five!

Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE ORDER OF THE PHOENIX.

Abigail and Savannah return with a discussion on how the first chapter in the OOTP sets up expectations for the big picture and creates, to the reader's discretion, the most exciting first chapter in the Harry Potters series yet. 

Once again, Abigail and Savannah use tools like the seven key questions to ask about first chapters (to analyze the big picture), taken from Paula Munier's THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS, and Story Grid's five commandments of storytelling (to analyze the scene's "workability"). 

Along the way, Savannah and Abigail share perspectives and insights on important topics like:

  • What is the inciting incident in the scene?  
  • How various progressive complications (or conflicts) raise the stakes throughout the scene (and set up expectations for high stakes in the big picture) 
  • Why readers need to care about the character in order for life or death stakes to work 
  • How Harry's character is changing in big ways (and why this works better in YA vs. MG) 
  • How Harry and Sirius' relationship evolves, even from chapter one
  • Plus more! 

What do you think makes up the first chapter of OOTP? We'd love to hear your thoughts. 

 

P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

 

Connect with us:

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Allison Hunter ON: What Makes a Great Beach Read, How to Use Comps, and Why Secrets are Imperative in Fiction08 Sep 202200:55:05

In today’s episode, Abigail sits down with another amazing Trellis Literary Management co-founder, Allison Hunter. 

Allison is an expert in commercial fiction and shares exactly what she’s looking for in a manuscript wishlist, as well as other invaluable writing and publishing tips like:

  • How to use comparable titles to pitch and market your book (with examples!)
  • What makes a page-turning beach read
  • Why secrets are imperative in engaging fiction 
  • How publishing is moving away from the term “women's fiction”
  • And more! 

 

Do you want to send a query letter to Allison? 

 

Find Us

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @AllisonSHunter

Instagram: @abigailkperry | 

Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.trellisliterary.com/allisonhunter

First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire18 Aug 202201:00:55

We're back with book four!

Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE GOBLET OF FIRE.

Abigail and Savannah return with a discussion on how the first chapter in GOF sets up expectations for the big picture story using Paula Munier's seven key first chapter questions (THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS). They also nerd out about whether or not GOF is a thriller or an action story, why Frank models a sympathetic character, and much more!

Abigail and Savannah then zero-in on the small picture and break down the first chapter of GOF with the five commandments (Story Grid). 

What do you think makes up the first scene in GOF? If you don't remember it, feel free to read the first chapter of GOF—and then join us for this lively conversation. 

 

P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

 

Connect with us:

Twitter: @abigailkperry | @savannahgilbo

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo

Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

How to Write a Query Letter (Part 3): Paragraph Three, the Author Bio (and Final Tips)10 Aug 202200:21:21

This is the third episode in a three-part series of episodes on how to write a query letter. Abigail teaches writers how to write the third (and final!) paragraph of the query letter, or the author bio. 

Sometimes writers overthink the author bio, putting undue stress on themselves and this paragraph. This episode covers some tips on how to write this paragraph, som including:

Plus, Abigail shares one of her favorite tricks from Kelly Simmons’ article: Why a P.S. can create one final, special connection to the queried agent! 

 

If you enjoyed this episode, don’t miss out on the other two episodes in the three-part series:

 

And don’t forget to check out Kelly Simmons’ article on Career Authors:

How to Write a Query Letter (Part 2): Paragraph Two, the Blurb (or Back Cover Copy)03 Aug 202200:39:55

This is the second episode in a three-part series of episodes on how to write a query letter. In it, Abigail teaches writers how to write the second paragraph of the query letter, otherwise known as the blurb or back cover copy. 

The back cover copy is the most important section in a query letter. Abigail shares important details writers need to make it stand out, some including:

 

3 Key Details Needed in Every Back Cover Copy:

  1. Character: Who is the main character? What do they want? What makes them ironic or the least likely hero for the story?
  2. Central/Main Plot: What is the main plotline? How does the character’s choices impact the plot and vice versa? How can you whittle this down so it’s concise and catchy?
  3. Hook: What makes your story different from others in the same genre? 

***Jessica Faust and James McGowan list and describe these in their awesome Bookends Youtube video. Check out their channel for more amazing writing tips and advice on all things publishing***

 

James Scott Bell’s 3-Sentence Method to Write a Back Cover:

  1. Name the main character, their vocation, and their situation when the story opens (also include what they want).
  2. But + “when this happens”: Think of the inciting incident of your story, what throws your character’s norm off course.
  3. Now + “death stakes”: What are the main stakes in your novel—physical, psychological, or professional? How are they spotlighted in your back cover, and why will they be raised as the story moves towards its climax?    

 

The Secret: Great to include in your back cover!

 

Example: Abigail analyzes some back cover copy examples to model how a strong back cover includes the details and strategies discussed in this episode. 

 

Additional Resources:

BONUS Part 2: How Rowling Created A Cast of Compelling Characters (An Interview With Savannah Gilbo & Abigail K. Perry)30 Jul 202400:34:34

Join Savannah Gilbo and Abigail for the second part of an inside interview with Tim Grahl, CEO of Story Grid, on our latest book, a masterwork analysis guide to Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone (now available for purchase!).

In this interview, we discuss how Rowling created an unforgettable cast of quirky and relatable characters in the Harry Potter series. You’ll learn insights and tips like:

  • How to think about the number of characters you include in your story (and what we can learn from the characters Rowling highlighted in book one).
  • How to write a dynamic cast of characters that can help your protagonist grow and change (and, in Harry’s case, harm or aid his ability to survive).
  • How Rowling layered the forces of antagonism Harry faces in this first book (and why this was necessary based on his age and skill level).
  • How point of view choice affects our interpretation of the events in the story—and influences whether we classify certain characters as “good” or “evil.”
  • And so much more…

If you like this episode, you’ll LOVE our book, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone: A Story Grid Masterwork Analysis Guide. Follow the link to order a copy and learn how to improve your writing craft today.

How to Write a Query Letter (Part 1): Paragraph One, the Hook 20 Jul 202200:20:29

In the first episode of a three-part series of episodes on how to write a query letter, Abigail teaches writers how to write the first paragraph of their query letter. To do this, she covers important elements like:

  • What a query letter is and why a writer who wants to traditionally publish needs one
  • 4 essential details in every first paragraph 
  • 4-5 factors that determine a strong comp (comparable title)
  • More!

Plus! Abigail offers a free critique of the first paragraph to the first 10 writers only. Details on how to submit to Abigail and other examples and resources in this episode below:

 

I WANT A CHANCE AT ABIGAIL’S FREE CRITIQUE! Here’s what to do:

  • Email Abigail at: abigailkperry@gmail.com 
  • Subject Title: Quick Query Tips Paragraph One
  • Embed the first paragraph ONLY in the email
  • Not required, but if you want to follow Abigail or share the show, go for it! 

***If you are not one of the first ten writers to email Abigail in the requested format, you may not get a response.*** 

 

FIRST PARAGRAPH EXAMPLE

Dear AGENT’S NAME,

I saw on Twitter that you love [SOMETHING THEY’VE SHARED PUBLICLY] and think you’d enjoy my book [YOUR BOOK IN ALL CAPS]. It is a [WORD COUNT and GENRE] that [SHORT LOGLINE] [OR] would entertain readers of [TWO COMPS THAT SHOW YOU UNDERSTAND YOUR GENRE AND ARE SOMETHING THE AGENT WOULD REPRESENT + BE ABLE TO SELL]. 

 

Additional Resources:

First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban13 Jul 202200:53:10

We're back with book three!

Abigail sits down with certified editor and book coach Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE PRISONER OF AZKABAN.

Following the normal first chapter analysis format, Abigail and Savannah discuss how the first chapter in POA sets up expectations for the big picture story using Paula Munier's seven key first chapter questions (THE WRITER'S GUIDE TO BEGINNINGS). They take a special look at how Harry's balance of internal feelings and how he interacts with his surroundings excite readers despite the lack of action. 

Abigail and Savannah then zero-in on the small picture and break down the first chapter of POA with the five commandments (Story Grid). They also nerd out about their love for JKR's mastery of red herrings and set ups that continually awe and surprise the reader, even if it's their umpteenth time reading it.

What do you think makes up the first scene in POA? If you don't remember it, feel free to read the first chapter of POA—and then join us for this lively conversation. 

 P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

 

Connect with us:

Twitter: @abigailkperry @savannahgilbo

Instagram: @abigailkperry | @savannah.gilbo

Website: www.abigailkperry.com  | https://www.savannahgilbo.com/

Quick Query Tips: 3 Strategic Ways to Research Literary Agents06 Jul 202200:31:13

Welcome to the first Quick Query Tips episode!

While Abigail books more literary agents and editors for the show, she turns the focus from interviews with literary agents to the research and submission process. 

In this episode, Abigail shares three of her favorite and strategic ways to research literary agents. This is a very hands-on episode as Abigail shares how she researches literary agents, editors, and authors for the show.

Although the spreadsheet she uses is slightly different than what she recommends a writer use (see her episode with Tee Moore for more details on the ideal spreadsheet for the research process), the strategies are the same. To demonstrate, Abigail uses the three strategies to find literary agents she wants to email *live*—and pushes writers to question why a literary agent would be a good fit for their querying book and writing and publishing career. 

You can find the links for some off the three recommended strategies here:

  1. Publisher's Marketplace
  2. Acknowledgments section in the back of a book
  3. Three Great Websites

 

First Chapters: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets22 Jun 202200:55:08

We're back! 

Abigail sits down with Savannah Gilbo to discuss and analyze the first chapter of HARRY POTTER AND THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS.

This is an especially interesting conversation on first chapters since the first chapter of HPCOS is also the first chapter in the sequel to middle grade fantasy phenomenon, HARRY POTTER AND THE SORCERER'S STONE.

In it, they discuss the big picture for HPCOS using Paula Munier's seven key questions to analyze a first chapter—shortly followed by a debate: Does the the story event in the first chapter of COS work as a scene or a beat? And if it's a beat, does it take two chapters to cover the first scene in HPCOS?

This episode is a testament to why discussions about how a story (and a first chapter!) works are so important—by sharing our different perspectives, we continue to grow as writers, editors, publishers, literary agents, and storytellers. 

What do you think makes up the first scene in HPCOS? If you don't remember, feel free to read the first two chapters of HPCOS, and then join us in this lively conversation.  

 

P.S. Don't miss out on Savannah's amazing podcast for writers: FICTION WRITING MADE EASY

Savannah provides a wealth of knowledge and practical tips on writing every week. 

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