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THE HORROR AT RED HOOK (The Lovecraft 5, story 7)02 Nov 202400:58:03

Returning to the misty 1920s of the works of H.P. Lovecraft, the five fine fellows - Edward the author, Charles the dilettante, Howard the scientist, Richard the painter, and Warren the professor -come together for Edward's second chance to regale the group.

Edward has a manuscript that he says was entrusted to him by an aspiring author who encountered an indescribable evil in his days as a New York City police detective.

Warnings:  This is considered one of Lovecraft's more racist stories, and I have explored some aspects of this, rather than downplayed or removed it. 

For a first episode after many years, this ran a bit long.  Oops.

[Oops, I almost forgot to mention this:  
The book about the Yezidis is a real book on Project Gutenberg!!!
https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/60468/pg60468-images.html ]

BINGO THE BIRTHDAY CLOWN, episode 15 (19 Nocturne reissue of the day)03 May 202300:11:19

Episode 15 - The Mash

Things move apace.  Penny tries to mash herself into the boom chute, Gina talks mashed potatoes, something else ends up sort of mashed, and Tunis put the mash on Linda....

And a black leather catsuit.

BINGO THE BIRTHDAY CLOWN, episode 621 Apr 202300:08:45

(19 Nocturne reissue of the day)

Linda returns from the Red Zone.... but things have not gone well.

Atomic Julie - Puppet Government by George Revelle11 Jan 202200:28:28

A man is pestered to take a government job....

19 Nocturne Boulevard - THE PICTURE IN THE HOUSE (The Lovecraft 5, #1) - Reissue06 Jan 202200:40:20

(A loose adaptation of "The Picture in the House" by H.P. Lovecraft)

Five friends get together to spook each other with stories, and Charles tells a tale of a weird encounter with a strange old man.  

Cast List
Charles - Michael Coleman (Tales of the Extraordinary)
Warren - Glen Hallstrom
Richard - Philemon Vanderbeck
Herbert - Carl Cubbedge
Edward - Bryan Hendrickson
Creepy Old Guy - J. Hoverson
Martha - Risa Torres

Music by Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Design:  Brett Coulstock

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's a brownstone dinner party, can't you tell?"

***************************************************

THE PICTURE IN THE HOUSE (Lovecraft 5, #1)

Cast:

  • Charles, a dilettante
  • Herbert, a scientist
  • Richard, a painter
  • Warren, a professor
  • Edward, the missing member, a writer
  • Scary old man
  • Martha, the cook

OLIVIA     [opening credits] Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a brownstone dinner party, can't you tell? 

MUSIC

1_after dinnerish

SOUND     RAIN.  RECORD PLAYER CLICKS AND MUSIC STARTS

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS

HERBERT    What's the tune?

SOUND    MATCH STRIKES

CHARLES    It's--

RICHARD    That's one of Eric's isn’t it? 

CHARLES    No-o-o.  You know he never records.

WARREN    I must say that veal cutlet was excellent.  Positively delicious.  Compliments to your cook, Charles.

CHARLES    Excellent woman.  Don't know what I would do without her.  Been with the family for years.

HERBERT    That's the only way to get good help these days - I wish I was fortunate enough to inherit hereditary retainers.

WARREN    Any chance I can get the recipe for the cooking staff at the faculty dining hall?  We don't get veal very often, but--

CHARLES    I'll ask, but I doubt it - she's very secretive about her seasonings.  Now, Herbert, see that everyone has a good stiff drink, for--

RICHARD    Aren't we waiting on Edward?

CHARLES    [darkly]  He isn't able to join us tonight.  Don't worry - I'm quite sure he won't hold it against us.

HERBERT    Here you go.

WARREN    Cheers.  [drinks]  So, what is this story you've brought us here for, Charles?

HERBERT    Anyone for a cigar?

WARREN    Ah, certainly.

RICHARD    I won't say no.

WARREN    You promised us a tale to - I believe the phrase you used was "to make the gorge rise and the hair stand on end", wasn't it?

CHARLES    Yes.  And I know you all consider me the weakest of us all for telling a coherent tale, just because I have a tendency to let myself get distracted and lose my place, but I have a real corker for tonight.

HERBERT    Well, we're all uncorked ... now, so lets see what you can do to us.

CHARLES    All right, I won't keep you in suspense any longer.  You recall that I was away for most of last summer, traveling around the back country roads of New England, looking up genealogical records, tracing my family?

WARREN    Of course - and we all envy you, being a man of enough leisure to be able to wander off at will, instead of having to stay around for your job.

RICHARD    What do you know about jobs?  You're an academic.  That's hardly a real job.

HERBERT    Hah!  This from the artist.  Now, science - science is an all-consuming master.

CHARLES    All right.  All right.  Come on - it's my party and my story.  Don't really matter what your jobs are - you're all idiot enough to be my friends, and that's all that matters.

EVERYONE    [general laughter]

CHARLES    I don't know whether you'll believe me or not - probably not, but it's all true.

HERBERT    It won't be that easy - you're talking to a couple of hardened skeptics here.  I won't believe anything without empirical proof and Warren won't believe you 'til it's written in a book at least a hundred years old, with footnotes and cross-references.

WARREN    [snort]

RICHARD    And me?

HERBERT    Oh, you artists - who knows what you'll believe.

CHARLES    [chuckles] We'll see what you all think by the time I'm finshed.

RICHARD    Edward'll regret having missed a good story.

2_story starts

CHARLES    [darkly] We'll worry about Edward later.  [beat]  If I don't start, we'll be here til dawn, so let's have a bit of hush.  [beat]  Damn-- [forgot]

WARREN    You were cycling around the countryside.

CHARLES    Right.  And I was pedaling like mad, trying to keep in front of this wicked great thundershower, when I spotted a crumbling pile - an ancient cottage built right up into the side of a hill.  It had reached that stage of decrepitude where you're not sure whether it was built there, or just sprang up like a mushroom.

RICHARD    Very evocative.  Rounded corners, slanting walls, you can almost smell the mildew.

CHARLES    May I continue?

WARREN    You didn't happen to have a camera with you on your sojourn, did you?

CHARLES    I wasn't sightseeing.  Never been any good with one of them contraptions anyway.  [sigh] 

RICHARD    [prompting] The house.

CHARLES    Right, so since it was the only structure - and I use the term very lightly - that I'd seen in hours and hours, I decided that forbidding as it looked, the clouds rolling in were worse.  I was already feeling the rain, and the lightning kept striking closer and closer.

SOUND    THUNDER

EVERYONE    [gasps]

WARREN    Well!  That was timely.

HERBERT    Now how did you manage that?

CHARLES    Sheer luck.  Although the weather report did--

RICHARD    Ah, so you haven't been looking through any of those old grimoires Warren has charge of?

WARREN    Oh, stop.

CHARLES    Where was I?

WARREN    Perhaps you should keep some notes - I find note cards work quite adequately for me when I'm called upon to give a lecture.

CHARLES    [sigh] I went into the house.  I knocked first - I certainly didn't want to meet an angry homeowner with a shotgun in my face.  But since there was no answer, I figured it might be abandoned.  And the rain was starting to come down like rods.

SOUND    THUNDER

EVERYONE    [mild chuckles]

CHARLES    [full-on storytelling mode] Inside was a little vestibule with walls from which the plaster was falling, and through the doorway came a faint but peculiarly hateful odor.  I entered, leaned my cycle against the wall, and crossed into a small, dim chamber, furnished in the barest and most primitive possible way.  It appeared to be a kind of sitting-room, for it had a table and several chairs - and an immense fireplace above which ticked an antique clock on a mantel. Books and papers were very few, and in the prevailing gloom I could not readily discern the titles.  Now, in all the room I could not discover a single article of definitely post-revolutionary date!  Had the furnishings been less humble, the place would have been a collector's paradise.

3_music changes

SOUND    THE RECORD STOPS. CLICK AS THE NEXT RECORD GOES ON

WARREN    You didn't look at the books at all?  Pity.

CHARLES    You enthusiasts - always gallivanting ahead.  [dry chuckle] The first object of my curiosity was a book.  It lay open upon the table, presenting such an antediluvian aspect that I marveled at beholding it outside a museum or libary.  Bound in leather with metal fittings, it was in an excellent state of preservation - altogether an unusual sort of volume to encounter in an abode so lowly.

WARREN    [eager] And the title?

CHARLES    Hold your damn hosses.  When I opened it to the title page my wonder grew even greater, for it proved to be nothing less rare than... [beat, dragging out the suspense]

WARREN    Ye-e-e-es?

CHARLES    Pigafetta's account of the Congo region, written in Latin from the notes of the sailor Lopex and printed at Frankfurt in 1598.

WARREN    [awed!] There's only 12 known copies extant.

RICHARD    And you know that off the top of your head?  Oh, Warren.  You need a wife... or at the very least a bad habit.

WARREN    Ssh.  The book?

CHARLES    The engravings were indeed interesting, drawn wholly from imagination and careless descriptions - it even represented natives with Caucasian features.  Nor would I soon have closed the book had not an exceedingly trivial circumstance upset my tired nerves and revived my sensation of disquiet.

SOUND    RATTLE OF HARD RAIN AGAINST THE WINDOW

HERBERT    I think I need another drink.  Anyone? 

SOUND     DRINKS POUR

CHARLES     Go on ahead. 

WARREN    [jumping in] The book?

CHARLES    [exasperated sigh] What annoyed me was merely the persistent way in which the volume tended to fall open of itself at Plate twelve, which represented in gruesome detail a butcher's shop of the cannibal Anziques.

WARREN    Anziques?  They were wiped off the face of the Congo in the seventeenth century, I believe?

HERBERT    Were you aware that cannibalism was nowhere near as widespread as so-called history tells us?

WARREN    That is a debatable point--

HERBERT    No, no, really - One of the easiest rallying cries to convince your followers to annihilate or enslave another culture was to accuse them of anthropophagy.

CHARLES    Fascinating as this is, save it for your own dinner party, Herbert.  What you find so very engaging, I found exceedingly grotesque - to my own shame.  The drawing disturbed me, especially in connection with some adjacent passages descriptive of Anzique gastronomy.

HERBERT    What did it say?

CHARLES    [annoyed] It's hardly important.  I've worked hard to forget it.  [calm] Anyway, I was examining the rest of the meagre libary - an eighteenth century Bible, a "Pilgrim's Progress" of like period, the rotting bulk of Cotton Mather's "Magnalia Christi Americana," and a few other books of evidently equal age - when my attention was aroused by the unmistakable sound of walking in the room overhead.

4_cook

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

EVERYONE    [gasps]

MARTHA    I'm so sorry sir, I thought you'd all be done by now - I was gonna clean up.  I'll just - I'll just get to it in the morning.

CHARLES    Yes, yes of course Martha.  Have a good night.

SOUND    DOOR CLOSES

RICHARD    You set her up to do that.

CHARLES    [not quite convincing]  Of course not.  Heaven forbid.  [a bit smug] That'd be such an entirely transparent ruse. 

RICHARD    Perhaps you should be writing these sorts of thrillers, rather than Edward.

WARREN    Did he say why he missed coming out tonight?

CHARLES    [exasperated sigh]  He dropped by earlier for a moment, but he didn't have much to say.  If I may continue?

WARREN    I, at least, am interested.

CHARLES    Thank you very much.  I concluded that the occupant had just awakened from a sound sleep, and listened with less surprise as the footsteps sounded on the creaking stairs.  Then, after a moment of silence during which the walker may have been inspecting my bicycle, I heard a fumbling at the door latch and saw the paneled portal swing open again.

SOUND    PAUSE, SOME GASPS AS THEY AWAIT SOME SOUND WHICH DOESN'T COME.

EVERYONE    [chuckles]

CHARLES    In the doorway stood a person of such singular appearance that I might have exclaimed aloud - but for the restraints of good breeding.  Old, white-bearded, and ragged, his height could not have been less than six feet, and despite a general air of age and poverty he was stout and powerful in proportion.  His face, almost hidden by a long beard which grew high on the cheeks, seemed abnormally ruddy and less wrinkled than one might expect; while over a high forehead fell a shock of white hair little thinned by the years.  His blue eyes, though a trifle bloodshot, seemed inexplicably keen and burning.  But for his horrible unkemptness the man would have been as distinguished-looking as he was impressive.

WARREN    Unkemptness?

HERBERT    I expect the word he should be using - but for the restraints of good breeding - is odoriferous?

RICHARD    A-yuh. - the elderly...

CHARLES    Yes, yes.  

WARREN    Well, Charles, you're halfway to your goal - that alone very nearly brought up my dinner. 

CHARLES     It wasn't just the house that suffered from... damp and mildew.  Shall we leave it at that? 

 

5_old man speaks

SOUND    RECORD PLAYER CHANGES AGAIN - TO MUSIC FOR FLASHBACK

SOUND    CLOCK GETS LOUDER

CHARLES    [fading into flashback] The appearance of this man, and the instinctive fear he inspired, prepared me for something like enmity; so that I almost shuddered through surprise and a sense of uncanny incongruity when he motioned me to a chair and addressed me in a thin, weak voice full of fawning respect and ingratiating hospitality.

OLD GUY    Catched in the rain, be ye?  Glad ye was nigh the house an' had the sense t' come right in.  I calculate I was asleep, else I'd a heard ye - I ain't as young as I used to be, an' I need a powerful sight o' naps nowadays.

WARREN    [breaking] He truly sounded like that?  That's quite an extreme form of archaic Yankee dialect.  I'd thought anything like that dead and gone long years back.

HERBERT    There are strange holdouts in little pocket communities all over the back woods.

CHARLES    I apologized for my rude entry into his domicile, and--

OLD GUY    Travelling far?  I hain't seen many folks 'long this road since they took off the Arkham stage.

CHARLES    I replied that I was going to Arkham, whereupon he continued.

OLD GUY    Glad t' see ye, young Sir - new faces is scarce around here, an' I hain't got much t' cheer me up these days. Guess you hail from Boston, don't ye? I never been there, but I can tell a town man when I see 'im - we had one for district schoolmaster in 'eighty-four, but he quit sudden an' no one never heared on 'im since -

CHARLES    Here the old man lapsed into a kind of chuckle, and made no explanation when I questioned him.  For some time he rambled on, when it struck me to ask him how he came by so rare a book as Pigafetta's "Regnum Congo."

OLD GUY    Oh, that Afriky book? Cap'n Ebenezer Holt traded me that in 'sixty-eight - him as was killed in the war.

CHARLES    Now, Ebenezer Holt was a name I had encountered in my genealogical work, but not in any record since the Revolution. I speculated that my host could help me in the task at which I was laboring.

OLD GUY    Ebenezer was on a Salem merchantman for years, an' picked up a sight o' queer stuff in every port. He got this in London, I guess - he used to like to buy things at the shops. I was up t' his house once, on the hill, trading horses, when I see this book. I relished the pictures, so he give it in on a swap. 'Tis a queer book - here, leave me get on my spectacles-

HERBERT    Spectacles.  Quite terrifying.  A smelly old man in cheaters.  Funny I somehow recall you promising a tale that would set all our hair on end.

WARREN    I, for one, am fascinated.  Your recall of his accent is quite impressive.  Is he, do you know - despite being as old as you describe - is he still among the living?

CHARLES    I am quite certain of the contrary.

WARREN    Pity. 

6_more drinks

RICHARD    More drinks?

CHARLES    Perhaps one more round.  And yes, I am about to get to the meat of the matter, so to speak, if you can hold on for a bit longer, Herbert.

HERBERT    Very well.  Patience is a virtue more useful to scientists than many.  I'm putting on my listening face.

CHARLES    Good.  The old man donned his glasses, then reached for the volume on the table and turned the pages lovingly.

OLD GUY    Ebenezer could read a little o' this - 'tis Latin - but I can't.  I had two or three schoolmasters read me a bit, and Parson Clark, him they say got drownded in the pond - can you make anything out on it?

CHARLES     I told him that I could, and translated for his benefit a paragraph near the beginning. If I erred, he was not scholar enough to correct me; for he seemed childishly pleased at my English version. His proximity was becoming rather obnoxious--

HERBERT    Simple hygiene was one of the most important scientific and medical discoveries of the--

CHARLES    [overriding] --yet I saw no way to escape without offending him. I was amused at the childish fondness of this ignorant old man for the pictures in a book he could not read, and wondered how much better he could read the few books in English which adorned the room. This revelation of simplicity removed much of the ill-defined apprehension I had felt, and I smiled as my host rambled on:

OLD GUY    Queer how pictures kin set a body thinkin'. Take this one here near the front.  Have you ever seen trees like that, with big leaves a floppin' over an' down?  Some o' these here critters looks like monkeys, or half monkeys an' half men, but I never heared o' nothin' like this un.

CHARLES    Here he pointed to a fabulous creature of the artist, which one might describe as a sort of dragon with the head of an alligator.

RICHARD    I've seen things like that myself in mediaeval and renaissance art.  To my recollection Bosch painted some, and there's at least one or two in the woodcuts of Breughel.

OLD GUY    But now I'll show ye the best un - over here nigh the middle - [getting excited]  What d'ye think o' this - ain't never seen the like hereabouts, eh? When I see this I telled Eb Holt, 'That's somethin' to stir ye up an' make your blood tickle.'

RICHARD    Was this still the cut of the lizard man thing?

CHARLES    No, [heavy import] he'd just let the book fall open where it would--

OLD GUY    When I read in Scripture about slayin' - like them Midianites was slew - I kinder think things, but I ain't got no picture of it.  Here a body can see all they is to it - I s'pose 'tis sinful, but ain't we all born an' livin' in sin?

WARREN    Ahhh - the same picture that put the chills up you?

CHARLES    Well, he obviously didn't feel the same way about it--

OLD GUY    That feller bein' chopped up gives me a tickle every time I look at 'im - I have to keep lookin' at 'im - see where the butcher cut off his feet?  There's his head on that bench, with one arm side of it, an' t' other arm's on the other side o' the meat block.

CHARLES    As the man mumbled on in his shocking ecstasy the expression on his hairy, spectacled face became indescribable, but his voice sank rather than mounted.  He was almost whispering now, with a huskiness more terrible than a scream.

OLD GUY    As I says, 'tis queer how pictures sets ye thinkin'. Do ye know, young Sir, I'm right sot on this one here. After I got the book off Eb I used to look at it a lot, especial when I'd heared Parson Clark rant o' Sundays in his big wig.

WARREN    [realizing what the word is] Oh, "Parson"!

RICHARD    Oh!  I thought that was his name!

WARREN    No, it was the reference to the wig that--

CHARLES    Tell him later. 

WARREN    I'll never remember--

CHARLES    Perhaps you should keep some note cards.

OLD GUY    Once I tried somethin' funny - here, young Sir, don't get skeert [scared] - all I done was to look at the picture afore I killed the sheep for market - killin' sheep was kind of more fun after lookin' at it -

CHARLES    The tone of the old man now sank very low, sometimes becoming so faint that his words were hardly audible.

7_killing sheep

SOUND    THE RECORD CHANGES, BECOMES MORE SINISTER SOUNDING

CHARLES    I listened to the rain, and to the rattling of the bleared, small-paned windows, and marked a rumbling of approaching thunder quite unusual for the season.

OLD MAN    Killin' sheep was kind of more fun - but d'ye know, 't wasn't quite satisfyin'. Queer how a cravin' gets a hold of ye - As ye love the Almighty, young man, don't tell nobody, but I swear to God that picture begun to make me hungry for victuals I couldn't raise nor buy - here, set still, what's ailin' ye? - I didn't do nothin', only I wondered how 't would be if I did - They say meat makes blood an' flesh, an' gives ye new life, so I wondered if 't wouldn't make a man live longer an' longer if 't was more o' the same -

CHARLES    But the whisperer never continued. The interruption was not produced by my fright, nor by the rapidly increasing storm. It was produced by a very simple, though somewhat unusual, happening.

CHARLES    The open book lay flat between us, with the picture staring repulsively upward. As the old man whispered the words--

OLD GUY    more o' the same

CHARLES     --a tiny splattering impact was heard, and something showed on the yellowed paper of the upturned volume.

SOUND    THUNDER SHAKES THE HOUSE

CHARLES    Oh, heavens!

RICHARD    That's why Edward is absent, is it?  I know he's quite the fellow for phobias and superstitions - maybe he has to stay in to avoid the lightning?

HERBERT    No - storms have never been on his list - not that he's ever told me.  Anything underground, foreigners, the fair sex, getting lost, and cold drafts - those he will go on and on about avoiding, but never storms. 

WARREN    Not that I've heard, either.  But I can add illness, the clear night sky, and heredity to things which make him uneasy.

CHARLES    [heavy sigh] I'm almost finished, then you three can gossip on like old biddies all you want.  [storytelling] The drip.  I thought of the rain and of a leaky roof, but rain is not red.  On the butcher's shop of the Anzique cannibals, a small red spattering glistened picturesquely, lending vividness to the horror of the engraving.  

SOUND    SQUEAK OF LEATHER CHAIR, AS HE SITS FORWARD

CHARLES    The old man saw it, and stopped whispering even before my expression of horror made it necessary; saw it and glanced quickly toward the floor of the room he had left an hour before. I followed his glance, and beheld just above us on the loose plaster of the ancient ceiling a large irregular spot of wet crimson which seemed to spread even as I viewed it. For a moment I couldn't even move, Then a thunderclap broke me out of my hypnotic stare and I realized just what a fix I was in.

RICHARD    How did you manage to get away?

CHARLES    Oh, so now I have your attention.  Well, it was simple really - I told the authorities later that lightning had struck the house, and I barely escaped with my life, but really--

HERBERT    Lightning?  Ridiculous.  Not that it wouldn't strike a house, but--

CHARLES    BUT - What happened was, I tipped over his lamp, sending burning oil everywhere.  Then I dashed past and out the building, while the old man screamed and wailed behind me.

WARREN    Angry at you, was he?

CHARLES    [very dry] Well he was on fire. 

RICHARD    And the blood?

CHARLES    For all that, I wasn't curious enough to go back and look.  Even left my bicycle behind, and had to go shanks mare [on foot] - and through the tail end of the storm, mind you.

WARREN    Well, that was an interesting--

8_windigo

CHARLES     Hold on, now.  That's mostly the end of the story, but that crazy old man set me t'thinking ... [trails off]

RICHARD    [mildly curious] Yes?

CHARLES    Well, I recalled pretty clearly the names he'd mentioned as people he knew back in the day, and when I looked them up in historical records - a couple of them being rather famous, at least locally - and they'd all been dead for at least 50 years.

WARREN    He must have been telling you something told him by his father or grandfather - older folks, particularly those in isolated country settings, are often a bit delusional.

RICHARD    How old do you think he was?

CHARLES    He looked to be about 70, allowing for wind and weather and poverty--

RICHARD    And unkemptness--

WARREN    Yes, yes...

CHARLES    --but he was also hale and hearty and strong and .... plump.

RICHARD    But you can't think that--

CHARLES    So I started to look into the whole theory.  It was really those last words--

OLD GUY    [echoey] More o'the same...

CHARLES     --that made me wonder.  So I find out there's an old Indian myth from a ways up north--

WARREN    The Wendigo?  But that's strictly a cautionary tale.  Ethnologists agree on that.

HERBERT    The windy-what?

WARREN    May I?

CHARLES    [sigh] Certainly.

WARREN    [lecturing] The Wendigo, also known as the Windeego, the windikkuk, or the whittikow, is a myth from the various Ojibwa-speaking Indian nations of Canada.  We assume it is a cautionary myth about the evils and perils of resorting to cannibalism during times of famine, particularly during the frozen winter months, which is why the wendigo is inextricably linked with cold and snow.

HERBERT    Lovely.  But like scholars everywhere, you left out the best part - what precisely is the myth?

WARREN    Oh!  [chuckles]  True, the background is often closer to the academic's heart--

RICHARD    I know the story.  And I won't bore Herbert with the ethnological derivations.

WARREN    Go on, then.

RICHARD    [spooky]  It is said that the windigo is the spirit of winter, howling always just outside the camps of the people, calling to them to break the taboos and let it in.  For when a man eats the flesh of another man, the spirit of the wendigo can enter him, and turn him into a ravening monster - never satisfied with lesser flesh ever again.  For the wendigo is hunger, endless hunger, and the more it eats, the greater its hunger grows.  So if you're ever in a snowstorm and see a man-like shape, thin and gaunt, and missing the tips of its fingers and its lips - for if it can't find other prey, it will devour its own extremities - you'd best run.  Fast.

SOUND    [silent moment, then] LIGHT GOLF CLAP

CHARLES     Nicely told. 

RICHARD    I really could have used a thunderclap there somewhere.  How do you get so lucky?

HERBERT    But your old man, who seems to have indulged himself in cannibalism - or at least, that appeared to be the point of your tale, was ruddy and healthy and stout.  Hmm.  Sounds more like Stoker's description of Count Dracula after a good biting.

CHARLES    Interesting point.  I must admit I hadn't made that connection.  I suppose it's not that far a leap from drinking someone's blood to eating their flesh.

HERBERT    Wine and wafers.

WARREN    No!  I am not going to waste time indulging you in another anti-religious diatribe, Herbert.  We all know where you stand on that.

CHARLES    Let's get back to my yarn.

RICHARD    There's more?  I thought you'd quite finished?

CHARLES    Just a bit to go yet.  There is another myth of the windigo, by the by, though it may be merely a literary creation of Algernon Blackwood.  He wrote of a windigo unrelated to the eating of human flesh--

HERBERT    Anthropophagy.

CHARLES    Eh?

HERBERT    Sorry.  Anthropophagy is the eating of human flesh.  Cannibalism is the eating of human flesh by a fellow human.  There's quite a difference.

9_blackwood

CHARLES    [sigh] Blackwood wrote of the windigo as a huge lonely entity living in the north woods, which calls the names of hunters in the night to lure them away from their campfires.  And one sight of it could drive a man mad.

WARREN    Blackwood probably did a bit of bowdlerizing on the original myth - he heard a good story and felt that the cannibalism angle would make it less worthy of publication. 

HERBERT    Yes.  Edward has often spoken of his difficulties in getting some of his more gruesome tales into print.  Surprising how old-maid-ish some of these vaunted editors can be.

RICHARD    He's not the only one.  Why some of my paintings have been shunned and I've had to remove them from view for fear of having them burned!

HERBERT    It makes you wonder what people fear more, the mere act of being shown the horrible, or the person who shows it to them.

CHARLES    Enough digression.  As I said, the old man made me wonder.  Made me curious what other tales there were of cannibalism.  After what I discovered, about various religious and cultural activities from around the world, I felt certain the windigo tale wasn't to be taken literally, but as a cautionary tale, created to warn people off from antisocial behavior--

RICHARD    Like Struwwelpeter?  You know, the children's book that warns good little children not to suck their thumbs or the scissor man will come and lop them off?

CHARLES    Essentially.  In fact that's a very good example - teaching through use of extreme grotesquerie.  You can't say to a child "leave off sucking that thumb or you'll have pruney thumb in the morning", they just won't take it very seriously, so we invent extremes.  Go off the path and grandma will get eaten by a wolf.  Eat another person and you will turn into a ravening monster.

HERBERT    I seem to remember struwwelpeter - it had some horrific illustrations, didn't it?  Particularly for children.

CHARLES    I realize I can't possibly hold your interest much longer, but there is a bit more, if you will pay me the courtesy--  [beat] Right.  Well I found that in most cultures - disregarding the various incidents of cannibalism for survival, such as during wars and famines--

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WARREN    Like the sinking of the Medusa?

CHARLES    What?

WARREN    Sorry.  Nothing.  Pray continue.

CHARLES    Disregarding eating for survival, there was a pervasive belief that eating parts of one's conquered enemies - human or otherwise - would grant the eater some of the strength of the fallen one.  Many hunters ate the hearts of their prey for this very reason.  Hearts being the seat of bravery in many ancient cultures.

RICHARD    The seat of bravery or romantic attachment - how sad it is now relegated to merely the centerpiece for the circulatory system.

CHARLES    So they would devour other humans for their strength. Now putting this together with the old man's tale, and his necessary age, if indeed he'd met half the people he mentioned in passing--

HERBERT    And devoured them.

CHARLES    Eh?

HERBERT    I was thinking back on your tale - if you repeated his words and intonations correctly, and always assuming your cannibalism slant is the true one - then he probably et most of the people he referred to - like "him as they say drowned in the pond".

CHARLES    Hmm... [unconvincing] Never really thought much on it.

WARREN    Of course you did.  Now you have me interested again.

CHARLES    Well, assuming he must have been a couple decades past a hundred when we spoke - at least - then the eating of human flesh had to have had the restorative properties he claimed it did.  Gaining strength from the fallen.  O'course there was always still the threat of the windigo, but I had ruled that out after all the extensive tales of cannibalism due to need in other quarters of the globe, and none of those folks gone crazy, running around eating their own lips.

WARREN    [Muttered] The crew of the Medusa went mad.

CHARLES    You're not going to let it go, are you?  Fine.  Tell us about the Medusa, but be quick, would you?

WARREN    The medusa was a sailing ship heading for the cape of good hope which through poor management was run aground on a sand bar.  Everyone abandoned ship, and the sailors were lost on a raft for weeks.  By the time they were found, they'd resorted to cannibalism and gone mad, not necessarily in that order.

RICHARD    I recall the painting in the Louvre - it's massive.  The pathos.  It seemed to imply they were within sight of land the entire time.

WARREN    Well, paintings.  They're really more interested in the tragic story than the facts.

CHARLES    And they went mad, eh?

WARREN    Yes.  You see how it is more universal than you think?

CHARLES    They went mad after eating each other.

WARREN    Yes.

CHARLES    --and being out on the open ocean, possibly within sight of land, for weeks, with no fresh water, in the blistering heat somewhere near the cape of good hope had nothing to do with it.

HERBERT    And they started out French.

WARREN    Well, when you put it that way--

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CHARLES    [snort] Well, as a final touch to my collection of cannibalistic stories, I did find one rather interesting description of human flesh - the taste and texture of it - written by a connoisseur who had tried some, that said it was much like a good veal - not so tough as beef, nor stringy.

RICHARD    I expect that if your cook got ahold of some, it would taste just as good as the veal tonight.

CHARLES    Yes.  [with import]  Very likely.

HERBERT    Did the description say there was any way to tell the difference?

CHARLES    Not if it was cut and prepared right.  Oh, if you found a finger in your stew, you would probably suspect something, but a chop is a chop.  And a roast is a roast.

WARREN    [gulp] Where did Edward say he was tonight?

CHARLES    He didn't.  You going mad yet? 

HERBERT    [interested, not freaked]  You mean, you tricked us into--?

WARREN    [trying not to vomit]  Edward!  But he was -- your-- our friend!

CHARLES    Still is.  He'll be with us always.

RICHARD    [horrified and fascinated]  How did you - do it?

CHARLES    Well, I wouldn't let him suffer, would I?  After all, he was a friend.

WARREN    I can't --

SOUND    GETTING UP FROM CHAIR, RAPID FOOTSTEPS

SOUND    DOOR OPENS. FEET STOP SHORT.

EDWARD    [laughing] The look on your face! 

WARREN    [long painful gasp] Edward!

EDWARD    I never knew you cared.

WARREN    [faints] ahh!

SOUND    BODY DROP

HERBERT    These academics.  Not enough exercise, too much theory.

RICHARD    So the cutlet?

CHARLES    Veal, o'course, you ninnies.  I only promised you a story to make your gorge rise and your hair stand on end.  Besides.  Martha'd'a never put up with me pulling a stunt like that in her kitchen.

END

 

Atomic Julie - Spoken For by William Morrison04 Jan 202200:19:32

A lot of things in space take a lot of time.

19 Nocturne Boulevard - LONELY AT THE TOP - Reissue30 Dec 202100:40:53

Trigger Warnings below the script, below.

Two girls in very different times and places both make their way to the top - One finds exaltation, the other merely death.


Cast List
Tess - Beverly Poole
Teza - Lyndsey Thomas
Mom - Kris Keppeler
Markie/Malque - Julie Hoverson
Doctor/Trainer/Priest - Mathias Rebne Morgan

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
        Josh Woodward (JoshWoodward.com)
        Philippe Mangold
[Music of Woodward and Mangold used under a Creative Commons license and available through Jamendo.com]
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photos: Chris Gilbert
    (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

 

"What kind of a place is it? 
Why, it's a mother's heart.  Can't you tell?"

****************************************************************

LONELY AT THE TOP

Cast:

  • Tess (F/16)
  • Teza (F/16)
  • Markie/Marquay (F/16)
  • Mom (F/40)
  • Priest/Trainer/Doctor (M/40)

 

NOTE:  the roles are deliberately doubled to present the same “people” in both girls’ lives.  The “mom” speeches apply to both at the same time.

 

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a Mother's heart, can't you tell?  

MUSIC

  1. MOM's MUSIC

MOM    Darling, this is wonderful.  You can't imagine how proud I am of you!  I've always known you were special, but it means so much to have someone like that see what I have always seen!

MUSIC OUT

  1. AMB MODERN

MARKIE    I totally can't believe it!  You made the cut?

TESS    It's not set in stone yet - It's just the semi-finals, but mom's about to wet herself, she's so excited.

MARKIE    But Miss Modern Teen Model 2009!  I mean, even if you wash out on the semi-finals, that's still soooo cool!  I wish I was pretty.

TESS    Puh-lease.  You're cute.  Cute lasts.  Beauty fades.

MARKIE    Cute.  Yeah, that's my curse.  Not tall enough to be a model, not short enough to walk under turnstiles... [laughs a bit bitterly]

TESS    Cute lasts.  I have to make the most of this while I can.  Besides, you have plans for your future - the scholarships are lining up. 

MARKIE    Yeah yeah yeah, but brains don't get you dates.

TESS    Brains last too.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    The idea that my daughter - my lovely child - could go all the way to the top.  That you could have the perseverance and willpower to do what has to be done to make it.  It will reflect so well on all of us!

MUSIC OUT

  1. AMB AZTEC

MARQUE    You are one of the chosen?

TEZA    [laughs delightedly] Yes!  There is still a long path ahead of me, but I feel - it feels right!

MARQUE    You are so fortunate!  I wish I was graced with beauty pleasing to the gods. 

TEZA    Everyone's fate is different, my dearest friend.  I hear your parents have found you a husband!

MARQUE    He is ... kind.  Not unappealing.  Not too old.  Yes, it is a promising match.  I could certainly do worse.

TEZA    So you have as much to look forward to as I do!

MARQUE    Could you ... do something for me?

TEZA    Anything - you are my dearest friend and I love you!

MARQUE    When you ... get there, could you petition the great mother Chalchihuitlicue [chal-chee-weet-lee-cue] to smile upon my first pregnancy?  That say that should you survive the first, the others are not so hard.

TEZA    Not even a bride yet, and you worry about bearing?  Silly.  Let your time come when it may. 

MARQUE    But--

TEZA    But!  But I will.  I will speak with every goddess in the heavens if it will help ease your burden.

MARQUE    I love you!

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Don't be afraid honey, I won't let you fail.  I know you can reach any goal you set your mind on.  You simply must keep your focus.  Can you do that?  Eyes on the prize, sweetheart.  And you know what that means - giving up the things that don't matter to clear the way for the things that do.

  1. AMB MODERN

MOM    What are you eating?

TESS    What?  Ice cream.

MOM    No, no, no!  You know what Mr. Dupree said - these last few days before the pageant, you need to stick to simple foods.  No sugar!  Nothing bloaty.  

TESS    Chill mom.  I made it this far--

MOM    It just gets harder, honey.  Every inch of the way is like another huge step up the side of a mountain.  None of these steps are easy, but they're worth the effort, if only because of the view once you get up there.

TESS    You're really stoked on this, aren’t you?

MOM    Yes honey, I'm stoked.  For you.  I want you to be able to get everything you can out of life - a model's life isn't easy, but there are plenty of rewards.

TESS    [heard it a million times] and you have to get it while you can, because models are over the hill before they can legally drink.

MOM    It's not funny, honey.  It's very serious.  Can't you give it just one year?  How hard is that - to push yourself, for just one year?

TESS    I guess.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    When I heard that you had been chosen, that you were smiled upon out of all the girls, I nearly wept.  I was so pleased.  I've watched your sisters put themselves at the service of husband and children, and I wanted so much more for you.  You are my special, beautiful, darling.

  1. AMB AZTEC

MARQUE    I'm sorry you will miss my wedding. 

TEZA    It is set, then?

MARQUE    Not the day, no, but it will be summer next, right after the sowing. 

TEZA    A good time.  And I will be with you in spirit. 

MARQUE    The midwife thinks I will be old enough, then.  [breaking a little] Oh, I will miss you!  Once you enter the grand temple, we can never speak again!

TEZA    You will always be in my heart, as I know I will always be in yours.  I will watch over you and always hear you when you speak to me.

MARQUE    It will be in the spring?  For you?

TEZA    If I am selected to represent Chicomecoatl [chih-coe-me-coe-ah-tul].  It would be a great honor. 

MARQUE    Your mother has been bragging everywhere.  She cannot be quieted. 

TEZA    It's as if she was the one being considered.

MARQUE    Never mind.  Regardless, we will be together through the winter, while you learn all you must know for the big day. 

TEZA    And you learn all you must know for your big day.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    My dearest child, you don't know how my heart swells with pride when I think about you, up there in front of everyone, beautiful and serene, like a shining star, and knowing, deep inside myself, that I made you perfect.

  1. AMB DUAL

[Both are speechifying]

TESS    I am so pleased to be considered --

TEZA    --to represent our lady of corn on this most sacred of days.  I have always wanted--

TESS    --to be able to find a way to show the world what I have inside, what I have to offer.  And if I could do one thing--

TEZA    --I would like to make my mother, my family, and my people proud of me, for community is everything.  Without the people around us, we--

TESS    --would never have made it this far, this close to becoming the next to represent--

TEZA    --Lady of the corn--

TESS    --Miss Modern Teen Model 2019.

  1. AMB MODERN

TESS    [crying]

MOM    What the hell did you think you were doing in there?  They were laughing at you!

TESS    [teary] What?

MOM    That judge said you walk like a trucker with hemorrhoids!

TESS    I don't know how I walk!  I don't watch me!

MOM    [softening] Honey!  Sweetie!  Oh, come here.  It's not over - I promise you.  You were doing so well, I'm sure this one thing won't put you out entirely, as long as you don't give up. 

TESS    I want to--

MOM    Shh. Shh.  We'll just find someone to do something about that walk.  No big deal.

  1. AMB AZTEC

TEZA    [tears] It's all over! I know it!

MARQUE    Why?

TEZA    The rich merchant from Tenochtitlan - he has requested I marry him!

MARQUE    But doesn't he know you are destined for the temple?

TEZA    [scornful] Apparently he likes the idea of marrying someone perfect enough for the gods.

MARQUE    That is - he is asking for something terrible to happen!

TEZA    Well, I haven't been chosen yet - if I tried to step away then, that would be blasphemy.  But to drop out now... what a blow it would be to everyone.  And yet - my mother may consider his offer, since he is very prosperous.  It is not fair!

MARQUE    No.   Do not worry.  I think this means as much to your mother - more even - than it does to you.  She wishes you to secure her a place in the high tables of the night.  And there is money from the temple as well - the position is a very prestigious one. 

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Your dreams are all that matters, my dearest child.  I will never try and stop you from getting everything you deserve.  You know you can count on my support every step of the way.  I will always be behind you to help you face forward, and will push you up every step, if that's what it takes. 

  1. AMB MODERN

SOUND    VOMITING MUFFLED BY DOOR

MOM    Honey?  You doing all right?

TESS    [recovering] Just a minute.

MOM    Quick rinse, dear - there's someone here to see you!

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS, FOOTSTEPS

MOM    She'll be out in a minute - fixing her face, you know.

TRAINER    Of course.  Why don't work out my fees while we wait--

SOUND     DOOR OPENS

TESS    [subdued] Hi.

MOM    Oh, come on, show a little enthusiasm!  She's really much more excited than that.

TRAINER    Don't worry - I understand.  So this is Tess.  [hmming noises]

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS CIRCLE TESS

TRAINER    Has she had any formal modeling training?

MOM    She's been taking classes since she was nine.

TRAINER    [disapproving]  Hmm.

MOM    But she also studied ballet, tap, jazz, deportment, and has kept up a 3.7 G-P-A.

TRAINER    [dismissive noise]

TESS    And I-

TRAINER    Shh!  How old is she?

MOM    Fourteen. 

TRAINER    We're starting it a bit late, but I see potential here.  Show me this walk...

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Think on this.  Think of the great ones - the ones we all idolize and hold in great regard.  Now picture your face there, among them, gracing the rest of us below.  Can't you see yourself?  Your perfect self?

  1. AMB AZTEC

MOM    [whispered]  Don't they look grand in their feathers?  They hold our future - your future in their very hands.

TEZA    Mother.  You will make me tongue-tied.  They are wise and all-knowing.  They will know if I am the one--

MOM    That you are the one--

TEZA    --the minute they lay eyes upon me.

MOM    [gasp] Was that your name?  Did they call your name?

TEZA    Yes, mother it was my name.  Pray for me.

SOUND    ECHOING FOOTSTEPS

PRIEST    You, child.  You aspire to represent the great lady of the corn?

TEZA    [awed and respectful]  Yes, if it please the gods.

PRIEST    You are lovely, but are you pure?

TEZA    Yes, sire.  My mother can swear to it.

PRIEST    Remove your shawl, show us your body.  Do not hesitate, child - nothing untoward will happen.  Your mother is right there watching.

SOUND    HEAVY FABRIC FALLS TO THE FLOOR

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    It's just skin, honey.  You have nothing to be embarrassed about.  You're lovely.  Think of yourself as a work of art, and they are objective observers.  They wouldn't be interested in you that way, anyway - you know that.  And I'm right here.  Tell me if you get nervous, and I'll make them stop.  All right?  You know every girl who has gone  before has been through this same thing.

  1. AMB MODERN

TESS    [nervous, jittery]  Well, they haven't said no, yet.

MARKIE    That's good.

TESS    I guess.  I mean, I'm starting to wonder whether it's all really worth it.  I'm supposed to get good sleep, be rested, so I can look my best, but half the time I'm too damn nervous, or hungry, or...something.  I'm always trying not to think of things, like food, or having time to myself - I mean, what is it all for?

MARKIE    Wow.  Maybe you should just tell your mom you want to stop.

TESS    Tell my mom?  [laughs almost hysterically] Tell my mom?  Are you high?  She would toss me out on my ear.  She's got so into this - and besides, she's spent all this money - mucho dinero, you know - to get me this far.  How can I let her down - make her waste all that?

MARKIE    But you have to think of yourself, right?

TESS    I promised her I would do this for one year.  Just a year - I can do it.  [affirmations] I have the willpower to maintain, and the serenity to--[breaks into a sob]

MARKIE    Have you eaten anything today?

TESS    I can't!  The pre-judging is tomorrow.

MARKIE    I have some tic-tacs--

TESS    No!  Don't tempt me!  Shit, Markie, you're supposed to be helping me!

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    It will all be worth it, you know it will.  The purging, the special oils.  You will always be the most lovely one in the place - caught in that one special moment, when you shine above all others.  No one will ever forget you after that!

  1. AMB AZTEC

TEZA    great and reverent master, what if I have doubts?

PRIEST    Doubts?  What doubts, child?

TEZA    I fear that I will not be worthy.  That I will falter in my steps and dishonor the crown of corn.

PRIEST    I can look into your heart, child, and I see that you have the strength within you to bear this burden - to rise to the heights, and carry the name of Chicomecoatl with dignity and grace.

TEZA    Do you?

PRIEST    It is always the way of men and women to doubt themselves.  To worry that they will lose themselves in fear, or to ponder what life would be like had they not stepped out upon the path to greatness.  Ever and always.

TEZA    But what can I do?

PRIEST    Fast and pray, child.  I know you will see the correctness of your choice.  And when your day of glory comes, you will never know fear or doubt again.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    A boy?  What do you mean a boy?  You don't have time for - you're too young for boys.  All the boys you could possibly want will be at your feet, when the time comes, but right now - [hissed] it will ruin you. 

  1. AMB MODERN

TESS    But Corey's on TV!  He could help my--

MOM    He could get you on the covers of a bunch of sleazy tabloids--

TESS    But you said publicity is good--

MOM    Not that kind - that will make sure everyone knows your name, but you will never be high class again!  Save that kind of exploitation for when your looks start to fade.

TESS    Yeah, like when I'm 17.

MOM    You knew going in this was a short hard run, missy.  There is no free ride.  You wanted this as much as I did!

TESS    Well I don't want it any more!  I want to have a normal life!

MOM    Fine.  We can go back to living a normal life.  You and me and your dad - oh, wait.  Where should we live, hun?  We sold the house when we came on the road with you - to finance your headshots and your spa treatments.  I suppose if you quit school--

TESS    [muttered] I can't concentrate anyway.

MOM    --and get a job in fast food, we three between us could make enough to [ramping up, each statement a dagger] live in a crappy little apartment and eat junk food all the time and get enormously fat and covered in  acne, and then as soon as you're old enough, you can run off with some high school drop out who wants to start a band-- [sliding down, into her own misery] but of course you love each other and he ends up driving Greyhound and you lose the last vestige of your waist when you have the first three children, but the fourth child - your fourth child, she might just be perfect enough to live the good life - the beautiful life - at least until she ruins it!

TEZA    You gave me the choice mother, and I accept my fate.

MOM    I always knew you were just too good to live.  You are an angel, honey, a perfect angel.

TESS    Yes, mother.

MOM    Sweetie.  [all business] Now here's your pills from Dr. Gustavson - he said don't take them on an empty stomach, so go grab a cracker and some diet soda.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    There is nothing wrong with wanting more for your child than you had.  Wanting to guide her and make sure she gets the advantages instead of making the same stupid mistakes you made.  Is there?  Isn’t all of life - at least the lives of parents - the effort to make a better life for your children?

  1. AMB AZTEC

MARQUE     And is he very handsome, the chosen vessel of Tezcatlipoca?

TEZA    Don't be silly - he is perfect.  They wouldn't have chosen him otherwise.  [sigh] but of course, we are set upon different paths.

MARQUE    Perhaps you will meet later.  Beyond the sun.

TEZA    Perhaps.  But he has been given four wives who are all perfect as well.  

MARQUE    And you are the Lady of Corn - none can shine brighter than a candle in the sunlight when you are in the room.  I swear you get more beautiful every day.  This suits you.

TEZA    Thank you - my mother says so also.  [beat]  We are to meet at another function - what if he talks to me again?

MARQUE    Talk is all well and good, but do not be alone.  It is so humiliating to prove that you have not fallen into temptation.

TEZA    ugh [shudder]  I could go my whole life without ever feeling that again.  [bucks up] And I shall.  I may talk to him, but I will never step out of the sight of the priests.  We will both remain perfect.

MARQUE    Very good.

TEZA    I wish you could have come with me...but the temple handmaidens are devoted even earlier than we.

MARQUE    Well, I have news for you as well.  My husband to be, [pleased] who has meals with my family more often than custom requires -hmm? - is really quite an amusing man.  And very fond of me.  I may not have my moment in the center of the universe, but I will have a good life.

TEZA    I am so pleased.  And I will remember to   petition for you.

SOUND    [hug noise]

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Unhappy?  How can you be unhappy?  You have everything you could possibly want - your face in front of everyone, men at your beck and call, and attending all the best celebrations!  What could you possibly be missing?  [wheedling] you know I'm only doing this for you!  You want this as much as I do!  You've finally made it, honey, what more could any girl want?  Every girl out there looks at you and cries herself to sleep wishing she could trade lives with you.  That is enough to make anyone happy, isn’t it?  To be envied?  How could you possibly be unhappy enough to do this?

  1. AMB MODERN

DOCTOR    Now take two of these every eight hours, to prevent infection, and change the dressings every 4 hours or so. 

MOM    I'll keep her on schedule, don't you worry.  And...this won't get out?

DOCTOR    It's hardly likely that people won't notice the change, even with the recuperation period, but I certainly don't keep in business by revealing personal info about my clientele.

TESS    Mom?

MOM    Don't worry, dear.  Momma's right here.

TESS    You said I wouldn't feel it.

MOM    Does it hurt, honey?  Here, doctor, can she have something for the pain?

DOCTOR    That's in the bag too, but do go light on them - you don't want to become dependent. 

MOM    And when the scars heal, and everyone sees  how lovely you are, with your new curves, you will be the envy of even more of the world.

TESS    [dully] Of course, mother.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Even perfection can be improved on.  Beauty is pain.  That which is prized most is always hardest to come by.  If it was easy to be beautiful, everyone would want to be ugly instead.  You cannot be special if everyone can easily achieve what you have.  You must stand out.  You must shine.  Look into that mirror, dearest child, and tell me you don't love yourself even more each day as you come closer and closer to perfection.

  1. MUSIC - BOTH

TEZA    Life is pain

TESS    Beauty sucks.

TEZA    I am being remade in the image of the goddess. 

TESS    Who decides what I should fucking look like?

TEZA    Painted and pierced.  Smoothed and scented.  I am treated like a queen.

TESS    If I have to have one more operation, I'll pee stitches.

TEZA    I bite the stick and let the pain carry me away as they mold my flesh.

TESS    I cry all night, silently, so my mother won't come and comfort me.

  1. AMB AZTEC

TEZA    See my new ear plugs?  They made them larger again, and heavy.  They almost touch my shoulders now.

MARQUE    Don't they hurt?

TEZA    Of course, but pain won't last forever.  I rather coveted a nose piercing as well, but that is not suited to the lady.  I am being remade in her image.

MARQUE    I really admire your hair.  Such elegantly styled coils and plaits!

TEZA    Smell!  Only the finest oils must touch me.  Everything is moving so quickly - such a short time left before the day I ascend to the top of the sky.

MARQUE    Too bad it is not sooner - my sister will start her labor soon, and she could use a blessing from the lady of rivers. 

TEZA    I can still burn offerings, like anyone else.

MARQUE    True, but I can't help but feel the word of the corn lady will be heard so much louder than mere mortals such as we.

TEZA    [laughs ruefully] I can ask any one of a legion of priests to guide me in my prayers, and they will gladly help - for it is goodly for the lady of the corn to look after those with child. 

MARQUE    Would you?

TEZA    Yes.  And the priests - well their voices will carry as far as they need to go.

[they laugh]

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    The day is set, my child.  You have reached the height.  This can never be undone and leave you a nobody ever again.  Everyone will see your face, and know - they will know - that you are the center of the universe.

  1. AMB MODERN

TESS    Who the hell am I?

MOM    What?  Sweetie, you're--

TESS    I used to know!  I used to be Tess, a pretty and I dunno - slightly talented, maybe - high school student, and now--[sob catches]

MOM    Now, you're the most beautiful woman in the world - the magazine said so.  It showed your absolute perfection--

TESS    Not my perfection, mother - that's complete crap.  I'm like - I'm like Mr. potato head, and you stuck hair and makeup and a pair of boobs on me - None of this is me!  Who the hell am I?  Did you ever ask?  Did you ever care?

MOM    Honey!  It's just icing on a wonderful  cake.  You like cake, don't you?  [ingratiating] And isn’t it better with frosting?

TESS    [through gritted teeth] I don't GET cake, mother, not unless I want to taste it both ways [eating and throwing up].  I don’t even know if I could hold it down if I tried.

MOM    What the hell has got into you? 

TESS    You couldn’t even leave me my own name, could you?  "Tess" just isn't supermodel material.  And you didn’t even choose it - you let a marketing firm do a survey and took their suggestions.

MOM    You got to pick one of the three they came up with--

TESS    There isn’t any me left under all this, mother!  Nothing.  I'm hollow.  Empty.

MOM    Where are you going?

TESS    To find something to fill me.

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Purpose.  Purpose is enough, isn’t it?  You are moving forward, ever forward.  The search for perfection is a road, not a destination.  There is nothing wrong with embellishing the beauty you were born with.

  1. AMB AZTEC

MARQUE    [crying]  It was horrible.

TEZA    I'm so sorry.  I did what I could.

MARQUE    I know.  She is with the gods, now, but it was so awful.  I - I'm so scared.

TEZA    Why?

MARQUE    Watching her - watching the blood and the pain, hours and hours of it - and the baby died too!  How can I ever choose to go through that?

TEZA    It is what women do.

MARQUE    You won't ever have to.

TEZA    [teasing a bit] I have to give life to the whole world.  [serious] But I feel for you.  And for your sister, and her baby.  It is a tragedy.

MARQUE    Is there anything in life that doesn’t hurt?

TEZA    Flowers.  Chocolate.  Love.

MARQUE    You know what I mean - important things.

TEZA    What is more important than Love?

MARQUE    [sniff, then a tiny sad uh-huh]

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    Only a few more days.  Nothing must go wrong.  You must be so very careful not to harm yourself, even a scratch or a nick will show.  Only the most skilled may come to do your hair, massage, and dress you in the most beautiful garments.  Nothing is left to chance.  Nothing.  Do you hear me?  Nothing will go wrong, even if I have to hurt someone.

  1. MODERN AMB

MOM    I see you're feeling a little better?

TESS    [dull] Yes I took my medicine.

MOM    Good.  Nothing like seeing a smile on my little girl's face again.  And there's nothing wrong with using science to combat unhappiness.

TESS    Yes mother.

MOM    Unhappiness isn't natural.  Especially for beautiful people.

TESS    Beautiful.

MOM    Dear.  Don't frown.  You don't want to get wrinkles!

TESS    Why don't I just lie here like a blob?  That way I can't break a nail.

MOM    Are you sure you took your pills?

TESS    [sigh]

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    It is always darkest right before the dawn.  And it is always tensest the night before the main event.  You hold your breath and pray for dawn, the watch the shadows crawl across the ground, feeling like the final moment will never come.  And once it arrives?  Pfft.  It is over. 

  1. AZTEC AMB

TEZA    I'm happy you could sit vigil this night with me, mother.

MOM    How could I do otherwise, my darling chosen one?

TEZA    [teasing] You must relinquish your claim to me, since I am now the Corn lady.

MOM    [fondly, almost in tears]  My lady of corn.  I will never forget that I was able to contribute to the glory you represent.

TEZA    Without you I would not be here - would not be able to bring life to the crops for another year.

MOM    And yet it is a melancholy time as well.   Knowing that the great lady will ascend to heaven tomorrow.

TEZA    I told Marque I will watch over her.  I can watch you both.  I have two eyes.

MOM    Can Teza give her mother a final kiss before the Corn lady must take her walk?

TEZA    Of course.  [kiss noise]

  1. MOM MUSIC

MOM    And this is it.  The end.  What we have worked so hard for.  I know it is a sad time.  I feel sad too, but the triumph, the glory, the joy will outweigh the sorrow. 

  1. MODERN AMB

MOM    What the hell do you mean, she's gone? 

TRAINER    She was here for the opening - the talent portion is about to start, and she's not in the dressing room. 

MOM    Have you checked the bathroom?

TRAINER    I asked every girl in there, and between yarks they said they hadn't seen her.

MOM    How could she do this to me?

TRAINER    Worse - her opening number gown is gone too, and it was a rental.

  1. AMB - MIXED

[Tess is down, Teza is filled with joy]

TEZA    I gaze up the endless stairs

TESS    Knowing this will be my last trip

BOTH    I feel my sandals shift beneath my feet as I take the first step.

TEZA    With each step, the roaring grows louder

TESS    The voices in my head just won't shut up!

TEZA    I must go slowly, for while I cannot falter, neither can I look down.

TESS    My head is so heavy

TEZA    My crown is so weighty.

BOTH    I feel all those eyes upon me.

TESS    [shriek] They won't leave me alone!

TEZA    [ecstatic] They love me!

TESS    They hate me!

TEZA    Each step takes me higher.  Closer to the heavens.

TESS    I haul myself up, one step at a time.

TEZA    My ears still ache - the pain reminds me of what I leave behind.

TESS    The pain of what I have become will never leave me.

TEZA    The scent of a thousand flowers, thrown by the crowd, surrounds me.

TESS    The hallway smells of puke.

BOTH    Only a few more steps. 

TEZA    I thrill with fear and longing, yearning for the gods.

TESS    Please god don't let me fuck this up.

TEZA    The priests await me, stern and welcoming.

TESS    I see a face and don't recognize myself until I realize it's a mirror.

TEZA    The name me Chicomecoatl, and I know I have become the Lady of the corn.

TESS    I stare into the eyes in the mirror and have no clue who she is.

BOTH    I take up the cup.

TEZA    The drink warms me, and I love everyone.

TESS    I drink slowly, timing the pills - too fast and I'll barf it all up before it can work.

TEZA    My mind floats.

BOTH    I can't feel anything anymore.

TEZA    They gently lay me on the altar.

TESS    The bathroom tile is cool under my cheek.

TEZA    The knife above me catches light from Huitztipotchli's glory.

TESS    Everything is getting dark

TEZA    The knife falls and I transcend.

TESS    Everything goes black.

OMINOUS SILENCE

CLOSING MUSIC SLOWLY CREEPS IN

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Atomic Julie - Patch by William Shedenhelm28 Dec 202100:18:41

The old boys who fly by the seat of their pants can solve problems that make the more modern space jockeys completely panic.

19 Nocturne Boulevard - A TRILOGY FOR XMAS - Reissue23 Dec 202100:46:22

Nothing is ever normal at 19 Nocturne Boulevard.  So when Olivia, our sultry announcer, decides to read the listeners a few of her favorite Xmas tales, things get a bit out of hand.

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from stories by Arnold Bennett, Rudyard Kipling, and Joseph Conrad, appearing in A Christmas Garland edited by Max Beerbohm, published in 1912

Cast List
Olivia - Julie Hoverson
Emily Wrackgarth - Beverly Poole
Jos Wrackgarth - Russell Gold
Albert Grapp - Gareth Bowley
Kipling/narrator - Rick Lewis
Judlip - Cole Hornaday
Mr. Williams - Michael Coleman [from Tales of the Extradordinary]
Mahamo - Pat McNally

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photo:  Sanja Gjenero (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

 

"Puh-leeze!  Do I sound like the type to offend with yet another
rendition of A Christmas Carol?"

 

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A TRILOGY FOR CHRISTMAS

Cast:

  • Olivia

SCRUTS

  • Emily Wrackgarth
  • Jos Wrackgarth
  • Albert Grapp

 

PC X36

  • Kipling
  • Judlip
  • Father Christmas

 

THE FEAST

  • Williams
  • Mahamo

ANNOUNCER    The stories for tonight's show have been abridged and dramatized by Julie Hoverson

 

 

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  Well sit right down.  I want to read you my favorite Christmas stories.  No, don't go!  [disgusted] Oh, puh-lease!  Do I seem the type to offend with yet another rendition of A Christmas Carol, or The night Before Christmas?  Even the Velveteen Rabbit, which is a truly disturbing tale to any small child, is far too common for this house. 

MUSIC CREEPS IN

OLIVIA    Indulge me, won't you?  I promise I won't disappoint.  I have selected three of my most favorite Christmas tales to share with you, and even if one is a bit romantic and sentimental, well, you have to let me be girly sometimes, right?  So - I'll get sentiment out of the way and move right into the more... meaty stories.  The first story, then, is Scruts by Arnold Bennett

MUSIC CHANGES

OLIVIA     Emily Wrackgarth stirred the Christmas pudding till her right arm began to ache. But she did not cease for that.

SOUND    KITCHEN, STIRRING

OLIVIA    She stirred on till her right arm grew so numb that it might have been the right arm of some girl at the other end of Bursley. And yet something deep down in her whispered

EMILY    [muttered] It is your right arm! And you can do what you like with it!

OLIVIA    She did what she liked with it. Relentlessly she kept it moving till it reasserted itself as the arm of Emily Wrackgarth, prickling and tingling as with red-hot needles in every tendon from wrist to elbow. And still Emily Wrackgarth hardened her heart.

EMILY    Mine.  You are mine.

OLIVIA    Presently she saw the spoon no longer revolving, but wavering aimlessly in the midst of the basin.

EMILY    Ridiculous! This must be seen to!

OLIVIA    In the down of dark hairs that connected her eyebrows there was a marked deepening of that vertical cleft which, visible at all times, warned you that here was a young woman not to be trifled with. Her brain despatched to her hand a peremptory message—which miscarried. The spoon wabbled as though held by a baby.

EMILY    [exasperated noise]

OLIVIA    Emily knew that she herself as a baby had been carried into this very kitchen to stir the Christmas pudding. Year after year, as she grew up, she had been allowed to stir it "for luck." And those, she reflected, were the only cookery lessons she ever got.

EMILY    How like Mother!

OLIVIA    Mrs. Wrackgarth had died in the past year, of a complication of ailments.  Emily still wore on her left shoulder that small tag of crape which is as far as the Five Towns go in the way of mourning. Her father had died in the year previous to that, of a still more curious and enthralling complication of ailments.  Jos, his son, carried on the Wrackgarth Works,

EMILY    [interrupting] and I kept house for Jos. I with my own hand made this pudding. But for me, this pudding would not have been. Fantastic! Utterly incredible!

OLIVIA    [slightly miffed] And yet so it was. She was grown-up. She was mistress of the house. She could make or unmake puddings at will. And yet she was Emily Wrackgarth. Which was absurd.

EMILY    It is doubtful whether the people of southern England have even yet realised how much introspection there is going on all the time in the Five Towns.

OLIVIA    [ahem!]  Emily was now stirring the pudding with her left hand. The ingredients had already been mingled indistinguishably in that rich, undulating mass of tawniness which proclaims perfection. But Emily was determined to give her left hand, not less than her right, what she called

EMILY    "a doing."

OLIVIA    Emily was like that.  At mid-day, when her brother came home from the Works, she was still at it.

EMILY    Brought those scruts with you?

JOS    That's a fact.

OLIVIA    And he dipped his hand into the sagging pocket of his coat.  It is perhaps necessary to explain what scruts are. In the daily output of every potbank there are a certain proportion of flawed vessels. These are cast aside by the foreman,

EMILY    with a lordly gesture,

OLIVIA    and in due course are hammered into fragments. These fragments, which are put to various uses, are called scruts; and one of the uses they are put to is a sentimental one.

EMILY    The dainty and luxurious Southerner looks to find in his Christmas pudding a wedding-ring, a gold thimble, a threepenny-bit, or the like. To such fal-lals the Five Towns would say fie.

OLIVIA     A Christmas pudding in the Five Towns contains nothing but suet, flour, lemon-peel, cinnamon, brandy, almonds, raisins—and two or three scruts. There is a world of poetry, beauty, romance, in scruts—though you have to have been brought up on them to appreciate it. Scruts have passed into the proverbial philosophy of the district.

EMILY    "Him's a pudden with more scruts than raisins to 'm"

OLIVIA    is a criticism not infrequently heard. It implies respect, even admiration. Of Emily Wrackgarth herself people often said, in reference to her likeness to her father,

JOS    "Her's a scrut o' th' owd basin."  [realizing he cut in] Oh, Hmm.  Pardon.

OLIVIA    Jos had emptied out from his pocket on to the table a good three dozen of scruts.

EMILY     I laid aside my spoon, rubbed the palms of my hands on the bib of my apron, and proceeded to finger these scruts with the air of a connoisseur, rejecting one after another.

OLIVIA    The pudding was a small one, designed merely for herself and Jos, with remainder to "the girl"; so that it could hardly accommodate more than two or three scruts.

EMILY     I knew well that one scrut is as good as another. Yet I did not want my brother to feel that anything selected by him would necessarily pass muster.

OLIVIA     For his benefit she ostentatiously wrinkled her nose.

JOS    By the by, you remember Albert Grapp? I've asked him to step over from Hanbridge and help eat our snack on Christmas Day.

EMILY    [incensed] You've asked that Mr. Grapp?

JOS    No objection, I hope? He's not a bad sort. And he's considered a bit of a ladies' man, you know.

EMILY    [incensed noise]

SOUND    CLATTER OF SCRUTS INTO BOWL

OLIVIA    Emily gathered up all the scruts and let them fall in a rattling shower on the exiguous pudding. Two or three fell wide of the basin.

EMILY    [vengefully]  I made sure they all fit, too.

JOS    [alarmed] Steady on!  What's that for?

EMILY    That's for your guest.  And if you think you're going to palm me off on to him, or on to any other young fellow, you're a fool, Jos Wrackgarth!

JOS    I - I would never--

EMILY    Don't think I don't know what you've been after, just of late. Cracking up one young sawny and then another on the chance of me marrying him! I never heard of such goings on. But here I am, and here I'll stay, as sure as my name's Emily Wrackgarth, Jos Wrackgarth!

OLIVIA    It is difficult to write calmly about Emily at this point. For her, in another age, ships would have been launched and cities besieged. But brothers are a race apart, and blind. It is a fact that Jos would have been glad to see his sister "settled"

JOS    [muttered] —preferably in one of the other four Towns.

OLIVIA    [chuckle] She took up the spoon and stirred vigorously. The scruts grated and squeaked together around the basin, while the pudding feebly wormed its way up among them.

MUSIC CHANGES

ALBERT    [whispered] Is it me?  Oh!  [up]  Albert Grapp, ladies' man though he was, was humble of heart. Nobody knew this but himself.

OLIVIA    Not one of his fellow clerks in Clither's Bank knew it. The general theory in Hanbridge was "Him's got a stiff opinion o' hisself."

ALBERT    But this arose from what was really a sign of humility in him. He made the most of himself.

OLIVIA    He had, for instance, a way of his own in the matter of dressing. He always wore a voluminous frock-coat, with a pair of neatly-striped vicuna trousers--

ALBERT    --which he placed every night under his mattress, thus preserving in perfection the crease down the centre of each.

OLIVIA     He had two caps, one of blue serge, the other of shepherd's plaid. These he wore on alternate days. He wore them in a way of his own—well back from his forehead, so as not to hide his hair. 

OLIVIA    On wet days he wore a mackintosh. This, as he did not yet possess a great-coat, he wore also, but with less glory, on cold days.

ALBERT    He had hoped there might be rain on Christmas morning. But there was no rain. [sigh, resigned] Like my luck.

OLIVIA    [whispered, urgent] Stop referring to yourself in the third person, no one else does.  [back up] Since Jos Wrackgarth had introduced Albert to his sister at the Hanbridge Oddfellows' Biennial Hop,

ALBERT    when he -I- danced two quadrilles with her,

OLIVIA    --he had seen her but once. He had nodded to her, Five Towns fashion, and she had nodded back at him, but with a look that seemed to say--

EMILY    You needn't nod next time you see me. I can get along well enough without your nods.

ALBERT    A frightening girl! And yet her brother had since told ...me... she seemed "a bit gone, like" on me!  Impossible! He, Albert Grapp, make an impression on the brilliant Miss Wrackgarth! Yet she had sent him a verbal invite to spend Christmas in her own home.

OLIVIA    You're doing it again.

ALBERT    [oblivious, enchanted] And the time had come. He was on his way. Incredible that he should arrive! The tram must surely overturn, or be struck by lightning. And yet no! He arrived safely.

OLIVIA    [sigh] The small servant who opened the door gave him another verbal message from Miss Wrackgarth. [disapproving] Wipe your feet well on the mat.  [narrating again] In obeying this order he experienced a thrill of satisfaction he could not account for. He must have stood shuffling his boots vigorously for a full minute.

ALBERT    This, he told himself, was life. He, Albert Grapp, was alive. And the world was full of other men, all alive; and yet, because they were not doing Miss Wrackgarth's bidding, none of them really lived.

OLIVIA    In the parlour he found Jos awaiting him. The table was laid for three.

JOS    So you're here, are you?

OLIVIA    Said the host, using the Five Towns formula.

JOS    Emily's in the kitchen.  Happen she'll be here directly.

ALBERT    I hope she's tol-lol-ish?

JOS    She is.  But don't you go saying that to her. She doesn't care about society airs and graces. You'll make no headway if you aren't blunt.

ALBERT    Oh, right you are.

OLIVIA    A moment later Emily joined them, still wearing her kitchen apron.

EMILY    So you're here, are you?

OLIVIA    She said, but did not shake hands. The servant had followed her in with the tray, and the next few seconds were occupied in the disposal of the beef and trimmings.  The meal began, Emily carving.

JOS    [sigh] The main thought of a man less infatuated than Albert Grapp would have been "This girl can't cook. And she'll never learn to." The beef, instead of being red and brown, was pink and white. Uneatable beef!

ALBERT    [rapturizing] And yet he relished it more than anything he had ever tasted. This beef was her own handiwork. Thus it was because she had made it so....  [up]  Happen I could do with a bit more, like.

OLIVIA    Emily hacked off the bit more and jerked it on to the plate he had held out to her.

ALBERT    Thanks!

OLIVIA    Only when the second course came on did he suspect that the meal was a calculated protest. This a Christmas pudding? The litter of fractured earthenware was hardly held together by the suet and raisins.

ALBERT    All his pride of manhood—and there was plenty of pride mixed up with Albert Grapp's humility—dictated a refusal to touch that pudding. Yet he soon found himself touching it, though gingerly, with spoon and fork.

OLIVIA    In the matter of dealing with scruts there are two schools—the old and the new. The old school pushes its head well over its plate and drops the scrut straight from its mouth. The new school emits the scrut into the fingers of its left hand and therewith deposits it on the rim of the plate.

ALBERT    Albert noticed that Emily was of the new school.

OLIVIA    Oh, I give up.

ALBERT    But might she not despise as affectation in him what came natural to herself? On the other hand, if he showed himself as a prop of the old school, might she not set her face the more stringently against him?

OLIVIA    The chances were that whichever course he took would be the wrong one.

ALBERT    It was then that he had an inspiration—an idea of the sort that comes to a man once in his life and finds him, likely as not, unable to put it into practice.

OLIVIA    Albert was not sure he could consummate this idea of his. He had indisputably fine teeth—

JOS    "a proper mouthful of grinders"

OLIVIA    in local phrase. But would they stand the strain he was going to impose on them? He could but try them.

OLIVIA    [con't] Without a sign of nervousness he raised his spoon, with one scrut in it, to his mouth. This scrut he put between two of his left-side molars, bit hard on it, and—eternity of that moment!—felt it and heard it snap in two.

SOUND    GRINDING, CRUNCHING

ALBERT    He was conscious that at sound of the percussion Emily started forward and stared at him. But he did not look at her.

EMILY    [amazed] That was none so dusty. [similar to "not too shabby"]

OLIVIA    Calmly, systematically, with gradually diminishing crackles, he reduced that scrut to powder, and washed the powder down with a sip of beer.

SOUND    DRINK

OLIVIA    While he dealt with the second scrut, he talked to Jos about the Borough Council's proposal to erect an electric power-station on the site of the old gas-works down Hillport way.

ALBERT    He was aware of a slight abrasion inside his left cheek. No matter. He must be more careful.

OLIVIA    There were six scruts still to be negotiated.

ALBERT    He knew that what he was doing was a thing grandiose, unique, epical; a history-making thing; a thing that would outlive marble and the gilded monuments of princes. Yet he kept his head.

OLIVIA    He did not hurry, nor did he dawdle. Scrut by scrut, he ground slowly but he ground exceeding small.

ALBERT    And while he did so he talked wisely and well.

OLIVIA    He passed from the power-station to a first edition he had picked up for sixpence in Liverpool, and thence to the Midland's proposal to drive a tunnel under the Knype Canal so as to link up the main-line with the Critchworth and Suddleford loop-line.

JOS    I was too amazed to put in a word, but sat merely gaping—a gape that merged by imperceptible degrees into a grin. Presently I ceased to watch our guest. I sat watching my sister.

OLIVIA    Not once did Albert himself glance in her direction. She was just a dim silhouette on the outskirts of his vision.

ALBERT    But there she was, unmoving, and he could feel the fixture of her unseen eyes. The time was at hand when he would have to meet those eyes. Would he flinch? Was he master of himself?

GRINDING STOPS

OLIVIA    The last scrut was powder. No temporising! He jerked his glass to his mouth.

ALBERT    A moment later, holding out his plate to her, he looked Emily full in the eyes. They were Emily's eyes, but not hers alone. They were collective eyes—that was it! They were the eyes of stark, staring womanhood.

OLIVIA    Her face had been dead white, but now suddenly up from her throat, over her cheeks, through the down between her eyebrows, went a rush of colour, up over her temples, through the very parting of her hair.

ALBERT    [casual] Happen, I'll have a bit more, like.

OLIVIA    Emily flung her arms forward on the table and buried her face in them.

EMILY    [breaking into sobs]

OLIVIA    It was a gesture wild and meek. It was the gesture foreseen and yet incredible. It was recondite, inexplicable, and yet obvious.

EMILY    [aside, not teary] It was the only thing to be done—and yet, by gum, I had done it. [back to sobbing]

OLIVIA    Her brother had risen from his seat and was now at the door.

JOS    [pleased with himself] Think I'll step round to the Works, and see if they banked up that furnace aright.

OLIVIA    NOTE.—The author has in preparation a series of volumes dealing with the life of Albert and Emily Grapp.

MUSIC BACK TO NEUTRAL

OLIVIA    Sweet romance, eh?  Well, I've indulged my sentimental side, now how about some gritty policework? 

EMILY    Hold up.  You really think I'll get hitched over some fellow who sups pottery?

OLIVIA    That's how the story ends.  And he's a good looking chap.

EMILY    And your accent is wretched.

OLIVIA    Go back to your story.

EMILY    Won't.

OLIVIA    Your story is over.  Shut up. 

EMILY    Can't make me - you're no better'n me - have ten toes and ten fingers just the same.

OLIVIA    I'll close the book, and then you'll be gone until someone else reads you - and you're far enough out of print, THAT won't happen any time soon.

EMILY    [annoyed, seething]  Right.  I'll sit here, then shall I?

OLIVIA    Don't care.  Just keep quiet.  [deep breath] My next tale is PC X-36, by Rudyard Kipling.

JUDLIP    Then it's collar 'im tight,
In the name o' the Lawd!
'Ustle 'im, shake 'im till 'e's sick!
Wot, 'e would, would 'e? Well,
Then yer've got ter give 'im 'Ell,
An' it's trunch, trunch, truncheon does the trick

OLIVIA    From police station ditties.

EMILY    Sounds like a donkey.

OLIVIA    Shh!

KIPLING    I had spent Christmas Eve at the Club, listening to a grand pow-wow between certain of the choicer sons of Adam.

OLIVIA    Hold on!  I'm the one reading this story!

KIPLING    But I'm the narrator.

EMILY    Hear Hear.

OLIVIA    I'm the reader.  You need to keep quiet.

KIPLING    You might have thought first before taking on a first person narrative, mightn't you?

OLIVIA    Well, I'll endeavor to sound like you.  Now!  Wait for your cue.  [clears throat] Then Slushby had cut in. Slushby is one who writes to newspapers and is theirs obediently "HUMANITARIAN." When Slushby cuts in, men remember they have to be up early next morning. 

KIPLING    Sharp round a corner on the way home, I collided with something firmer than the regulation pillar-box.

OLIVIA    [gritted teeth] I righted myself after the recoil and saw some stars that were very pretty indeed. Then I perceived the nature of the obstruction.

KIPLING    "Evening, Judlip," [quickly spitting out his descriptives] I said sweetly, when I had collected my hat from the gutter. "Have I broken the law, Judlip? If so, I'll go quiet."

JUDLIP    [Gruff] Time yer was in bed.  Yer Ma'll be lookin' out for yer.

KIPLING    This from the friend --

OLIVIA    Ahem!  --of my bosom! It hurt. Many were the night-beats I had been privileged to walk with Judlip, imbibing curious lore that made glad the civilian heart of me. Seven whole 8x5 inch note-books had I pitmanised to the brim with Judlip.

EMILY    And now to be repulsed as one of the uninitiated! It hurt horrid. 

OLIVIA    Don't you start in again!

EMILY    Hah!

OLIVIA    Don't!  [back to the story] There is a thing called Dignity. Small boys sometimes stand on it. Then they have to be kicked. Then they get down, weeping. I don't stand on Dignity.

KIPLING     "What's wrong, Judlip?" I asked, more sweetly than ever. "Drawn a blank to-night?"

JUDLIP     Yuss. Drawn a blank blank blank. 'Avent 'ad so much as a kick at a lorst dorg. Christmas Eve ain't wot it was.

KIPLING    I felt for my note-book.

JUDLIP    Lawd! I remembers the time when the drunks and disorderlies down this street was as thick as flies on a fly-paper. One just picked 'em orf with one's finger and thumb. A bloomin' buffet, that's wot it wos.

KIPLING    "The night's yet young, Judlip," [quickly] I insinuated, with a jerk of my thumb at the flaring windows of the "Rat and Blood Hound." At that moment--

OLIVIA    [Catching up] --the saloon-door swung open, emitting a man and woman who walked with linked arms and exceeding great care.

EMILY    [sarcastic]  How sweet.

OLIVIA    Judlip eyed them longingly as they tacked up the street. Then he sighed. Now, when Judlip sighs the sound is like unto that which issues from the vent of a Crosby boiler when the cog-gauges are at 260 degrees.

KIPLING    "Come, Judlip!" I said. "Possess your soul in patience. You'll soon find someone to make an example of. Meanwhile"—I threw back my head and smacked my lips [he does] —"the usual, Judlip?"

OLIVIA    In another minute I emerged through the swing-door, bearing a furtive glass of that same "usual," and nipped down the mews where my friend was wont to await these little tokens of esteem.

KIPLING    "To the Majesty of the Law, Judlip!"

OLIVIA    When he had honoured the toast, I scooted back with the glass, leaving him wiping the beads off his beard-bristles. He was in his philosophic mood when I rejoined him at the corner.

JUDLIP    "Wot am I?  [pronouncing] A bloomin' cypher. Wot's the sarjint? 'E's got the Inspector over 'im. Over above the Inspector there's the Sooprintendent. Over above 'im's the old red-tape-masticatin' Yard. Over above that there's the 'Ome Sec. Wot's 'e? A cypher, like me. Why?

KIPLING    Judlip looked up at the stars.

JUDLIP    Over above 'im's We Dunno Wot. Somethin' wot issues its horders an' regulations an' divisional injunctions, inscrootable like, but p'remptory; an' we 'as ter see as 'ow they're carried out, not arskin' no questions, but each man goin' about 'is dooty.'

KIPLING    "''Is dooty,'" said I, looking up from my note-book. "Yes, I've got that."

JUDLIP    Life ain't a bean-feast. It's a 'arsh reality. An' them as makes it a bean-feast 'as got to be 'arshly dealt with accordin'. That's wot the Force is put 'ere for from Above. Not as 'ow we ain't fallible. We makes our mistakes. An' when we makes 'em we sticks to 'em. For the honour o' the Force. Which same is the jool Britannia wears on 'er bosom as a charm against hanarchy. That's wot the brarsted old Beaks don't understand. Yer remember Smithers of our Div?

KIPLING    [takes breath, but is interupted]

OLIVIA    I remembered Smithers - well. As fine, upstanding, square-toed-- [hand over mouth]

EMILY    [Picking up quickly, but struggling slightly] bullet-headed, clean-living - go on! - son of a gun--

KIPLING    Ta! --as ever perjured himself in the box. There was nothing of the softy about Smithers. I took off my billicock to Smithers' memory.

JUDLIP    Sacrificed to public opinion? Yuss,

KIPLING    Judlip paused at a front door, flashing his light down the slot of a two-grade Yale.

JUDLIP    Sacrificed to a parcel of screamin' old women wot ort ter 'ave gorn down on their knees an' thanked Gawd for such a protector. 'E'll be out in another 'alf year.

JUDLIP     Wot'll 'e do then, pore devil? Go a bust on 'is conduc' money an' throw in 'is lot with them same hexperts wot 'ad a 'oly terror of 'im.

EMILY    Then Judlip swore gently.

KIPLING     What should you do, O Great One, if ever it were your duty to apprehend him?

JUDLIP    Do? Why, yer blessed innocent, yer don't think I'd shirk a fair clean cop? Same time, I don't say as 'ow I wouldn't 'andle 'im tender like, for sake o' wot 'e wos. Likewise cos 'e'd be a stiff customer to tackle. Likewise 'cos—

OLIVIA    [muffled struggle]

KIPLING    He had broken off, and was peering fixedly upwards across the moonlit street.

JUDLIP    [drawn-out, hoarse whisper] Ullo!

SOUND    STRUGGLE

OLIVIA    [muffled, then deep breath]  Back off!

EMILY    Hmph.  [shrug] I made a good go.

OLIVIA    Striking an average between the direction of his eyes—for Judlip, when on the job, has a soul-stirring squint—I perceived someone in the act of emerging from a chimney-pot.  Judlip's voice clove the silence.

JUDLIP    Wot are yer doin' hup there?

OLIVIA    The person addressed came to the edge of the parapet.

KIPLING    I saw then that he had a hoary white beard, a red ulster with the hood up, and what looked like a sack over his shoulder.

OLIVIA    He said something or other in a voice like a concertina that has been left out in the rain.

EMILY    [muttered] Not so very hard to pass it round, is it?

JUDLIP    I dessay.  Just you come down, an' we'll see about that.

OLIVIA    The old man nodded and smiled. Then—as I hope to be saved—he came floating gently down through the moonlight, with the sack over his shoulder and a young fir-tree clasped to his chest. He alighted in a friendly manner on the curb beside us.

EMILY    Come along - let us have a go!

KIPLING    Judlip was the first to recover himself. Out went his right arm--

EMILY    --and the airman was slung round by the scruff of the neck, spilling his sack in the road.

KIPLING    I made a bee-line for his shoulder-blades. Burglar or no burglar, he was the best airman out, and I was muchly desirous to know the precise nature of the apparatus under his ulster.

OLIVIA    Fine.  Let's just keep it moving - A back-hander from Judlip's left caused me to hop quickly aside. The prisoner was squealing and whimpering. He didn't like the feel of Judlip's knuckles at his cervical vertebræ.

JUDLIP    Wot wos yer doin' hup there?

EMILY    asked Judlip, tightening the grip.

SANTA CLAUS     I'm S-Santa Claus, Sir. P-please, Sir, let me g-go..

KIPLING    "Hold him," I shouted. "He's a German."

JUDLIP    It's my dooty ter caution yer that wotever yer say now may be used in hevidence against yer, yer old sinner. Pick up that there sack, an' come along o' me.

EMILY    The captive snivelled something about peace on earth, good will toward men.

JUDLIP    Yuss.  That's in the Noo Testament, ain't it? The Noo Testament contains some uncommon nice readin' for old gents an' young ladies. But it ain't included in the librery o' the Force. We confine ourselves to the Old Testament — O-T, 'ot. An' 'ot you'll get it. Hup with that sack, an' quick march!

OLIVIA    I have seen worse attempts at a neck-wrench, but it was just not slippery enough for Judlip.

EMILY    And the kick that Judlip then let fly was a thing of beauty and a joy for ever.

KIPLING    "Frog's-march him!" I shrieked, dancing. "For the love of heaven, frog's-march him!"

OLIVIA    Trotting by Judlip's side to the Station, I reckoned it out that if Slushby had not been at the Club I should not have been here to see.

ALL    Which shows that even Slushbys are put into this world for a purpose.

MUSIC CHANGES

OLIVIA    Oh, this is just getting silly.

EMILY    Only just?  I should have said it's been a laugh for several miles.

KIPLING    D'you have some problem with a bit of a laugh?

OLIVIA    The third story I want to read is very serious.  If this goes on, I won't be able to do it justice.

EMILY    What is it then?

OLIVIA    The Feast.  By Joseph Conrad.

KIPLING    Conrad?  He wrote a Christmas story?

EMILY    Who is this Conrad fellow?

KIPLING    Wrote something called heart of Darkness.

OLIVIA    Yes, yes, yes!  Look, it's ruined now.  I'm just going to give up and read The Night before Christmas.

EMILY    [disgusted noise]

KIPLING    That sentimental pap?

OLIVIA    [huffy] The mood is gone.

EMILY AND KIPLING    [whisper in the background]

EMILY    We might--

KIPLING    Let me!

EMILY    I don't think so!  [annoyed grunt] Look you! - um - I think we've not been introduced?

OLIVIA    [sulky] Olivia.

EMILY    Right.  Olivia.  Why not let us help read the story.  We can do that well enough, can't we?

KIPLING    Certainly.

OLIVIA    And keep the comments to a minimum?

KIPLING    Well...

EMILY    I'll box his ears for you if he steps across the line.

OLIVIA    It's worth a try.

MUSIC TURNS TROPICAL

OLIVIA    The hut in which slept the white man was on a clearing between the forest and the river.

EMILY    Silence, the silence murmurous and unquiet of a tropical night, brooded over the hut that, baked through by the sun, sweated a vapour beneath the cynical light of the stars.

KIPLING    Mahamo lay rigid and watchful at the hut's mouth. In his upturned eyes, and along the polished surface of his lean body black and immobile, the stars were reflected, creating an illusion of themselves who are illusions.

OLIVIA    The roofs of the congested trees, writhing in some kind of agony private and eternal, made tenebrous and shifty silhouettes against the sky, like shapes cut out of black paper by a maniac who pushes them with his thumb this way and that, irritably, on a concave surface of blue steel.

EMILY    Resin oozed unseen from the upper branches to the trunks swathed in creepers that clutched and interlocked with tendrils venomous, frantic and faint.

KIPLING     Down below, by force of habit, the lush herbage went through the farce of growth—that farce old and screaming, whose trite end is decomposition.  [aside] Optimist, eh?  Ouch!

OLIVIA    Ssh.  Within the hut the form of the white man, corpulent and pale, was covered with a mosquito-net that was itself illusory like everything else, only more so. Flying squadrons of mosquitoes inside its meshes flickered and darted over him, working hard, but keeping silence so as not to excite him from sleep.

EMILY    [with distaste] Cohorts of yellow ants disputed him against cohorts of purple ants, the two kinds slaying one another in thousands.

KIPLING    [avid] The battle was undecided when suddenly, with no such warning as it gives in some parts of the world, the sun blazed up over the horizon, turning night into day, and the insects vanished back into their camps.

OLIVIA    The white man ground his knuckles into the corners of his eyes, emitting that snore final and querulous of a middle-aged man awakened rudely. With a gesture brusque but flaccid he plucked aside the net and peered around.

EMILY    The bales of cotton cloth, the beads, the brass wire, the bottles of rum, had not been spirited away in the night. So far so good.

KIPLING    The faithful servant of his employers was now at liberty to care for his own interests. He regarded himself, passing his hands over his skin.

WILLIAMS    [shouted] Hi! Mahamo! I've been eaten up.

OLIVIA    The islander, with one sinuous motion, sprang from the ground, through the mouth of the hut. Then, after a glance, he threw high his hands in thanks to such good and evil spirits as had charge of his concerns. In a tone half of reproach, half of apology, he murmured—

MAHAMO    You white men sometimes say strange things that deceive the heart.

WILLIAMS    Reach me that ammonia bottle, d'you hear?  This is a pretty place you've brought me to!  Christmas Day, too! Of all the —— But I suppose it seems all right to you, you heathen, to be here on Christmas Day?

MAHAMO    We are here on the day appointed, Mr. Williams. It is a feast-day of your people?

OLIVIA    Mr. Williams had lain back, with closed eyes, on his mat. Nostalgia was doing duty to him for imagination.

EMILY    He was wafted to a bedroom in Marylebone, where in honour of the Day he lay late dozing, with great contentment; outside, a slush of snow in the street, the sound of church-bells; from below a savour of especial cookery. [chuckles a bit]

WILLIAMS    Yes, it's a feast-day of my people.

MAHAMO    Of mine also.

WILLIAMS    [disinterested] Is it though? But they'll do business first?

MAHAMO    They must first do that.

WILLIAMS    And they'll bring their ivory with them?

MAHAMO    Every man will bring ivory.

OLIVIA    The islander answered with a smile gleaming and wide.

WILLIAMS    How soon'll they be here?

MAHAMO    Has not the sun risen? They are on their way.

WILLIAMS    Well, I hope they'll hurry. The sooner we're off this cursed island of yours the better. Take all those things out--

OLIVIA    Mr. Williams added, pointing to the merchandise.

WILLIAMS    --and arrange them.  Neatly, mind you!

KIPLING    In certain circumstances it is right that a man be humoured in trifles. Mahamo, having borne out the merchandise, arranged it very neatly.

OLIVIA    While Mr. Williams made his toilette, the sun and the forest, careless of the doings of white and black men alike, waged their warfare implacable and daily. The forest from its inmost depths sent forth perpetually its legions of shadows that fell dead in the instant of exposure to the enemy whose rays heroic and absurd its outposts annihilated.

EMILY    What's all this to do with Christmas?

KIPLING    Want me to cuff her one?

OLIVIA    It takes place on Christmas day - they already said that.

EMILY    But this is all jungle creepers and spooky shadows - and vermins.  If there's one thing that doesn't come to my mind when I think of Christmas, it's ants and mosquitoes and such. 

KIPLING    You should see some of the places I've been.

OLIVIA    Why don't we just finish the story?

KIPLING    There came from those inilluminable depths the equable rumour of myriads of winged things and crawling things newly roused to the task of killing and being killed. Thence detached itself, little by little, an insidious sound of a drum beaten. This sound drew more near.  [aside]  A-ha, I see where this is going.  Drums in the distance are never a good sign.

EMILY    [huffy] Maybe I haven't traveled all over the great wide world, fellow, but even I can probably guess at that.

DRUMS SNEAK IN

OLIVIA    Mr. Williams, issuing from the hut, heard it, and stood gaping towards it.

WILLIAMS    Is that them?

MAHAMO    That is they.

OLIVIA    The islander murmured, moving away towards the edge of the forest. 

EMILY    Does he not notice?  What sort of a dullard is he?  [calling to williams] Do you have a gun?

OLIVIA    [exasperated sigh]

KIPLING    Calm down, it's just a story.

EMILY    Don't go telling me when to calm down!  I just hate stories where stupid people do very stupid things - what possessed this fool to sail half round the world anyway?

OLIVIA    [resigned, trying to get it back on track] Sounds of chanting were a now audible accompaniment to the drum.

WILLIAMS    What's that they're singing?

MAHAMO    [off a bit] They sing of their business.

WILLIAMS    [shocked] Oh!  I'd have thought they'd be singing of their feast.

MAHAMO    It is of their feast they sing.

OLIVIA    It has been stated that Mr. Williams was not imaginative.

WILLIAMS    Oh, I say--!

OLIVIA    Oh, no!  You stay put!

KIPLING    [very knowingly] But a few years of life in climates alien and intemperate had disordered his nerves. There was that in the rhythms of the hymn which made bristle his flesh. 

EMILY    Suddenly, when they were very near, the voices ceased, leaving a legacy of silence more sinister than themselves. And now the black spaces between the trees were relieved by bits of white that were the eyeballs and teeth of Mahamo's brethren.

MAHAMO    It was of their feast, it was of you, they sang.

EMILY    I knew it!

KIPLING    It was obvious.

WILLIAMS    Look here--!

OLIVIA    Cried Mr. Williams in his voice of a man not to be trifled with.

WILLIAMS    --Look here, if you've—

SOUND    JAVELIN HIT

OLIVIA    He was silenced by sight of what seemed to be a young sapling sprung up from the ground within a yard of him—a young sapling tremulous, with a root of steel.

KIPLING    Then a thread-like shadow skimmed the air, and another spear came impinging the ground within an inch of his feet.

EMILY    As he turned in his flight he saw the goods so neatly arranged at his orders, and there flashed through him, even in the thick of the spears, the thought that he would be a grave loss to his employers.

OLIVIA     This—for Mr. Williams was, not less than the goods, of a kind easily replaced—was an illusion. It was the last of Mr. Williams illusions.

MOMENT OF SILENCE

EMILY    So what shall we do now?

SOUND    LARGE BOOK SHUTS DECISIVELY, CUTTING HER OFF

OLIVIA    Happy Holidays, all - wherever and whatever they may be.

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

The stories dramatized in tonight's episode appeared in a collection titled "A Christmas Garland", first published in October of 1912, collected by Max Beerbohm.  Scruts was written by Arnold Bennett, PC X-36 was written by Rudyard Kipling, and The Feast was written by Joseph Conrad.  These stories have been edited slightly to fit the program.

 

 

 

 

 

Atomic Julie - The Birds and the Bees by Dave E. Fisher21 Dec 202100:27:42

A story of a future without genders.... sort of.

MANY COMMENTS from Julie,  LOLOLOL

19 Nocturne Boulevard - CRUMPING THE DEVIL - Reissue16 Dec 202100:41:43

[warning - mature situations, foul language and violence]

An ornery old woman takes on all comers in defense of her family and her freedom - even the Devil and Death! 

Cast List
Maggie - Julie Hoverson
Nursey - Robyn Keyes 
Bertha - Rhys TM
Barry - Mr. Synyster
Kev - Michael Coleman (Tales of the Extraordinary)
Jemma - Gwendolyn-Jensen Woodard (Gypsy Audio)
Morte - Russell Gold
Devil -Jack Kincaid (Edict Zero)
Ted - Russell Gold
Spike - Paul Mannering (Brokensea Audio)
Other Bikers -  Brandon O'Brien; Bill Hollweg

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photo:  Elizabeth Flores
      (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it? 
Why it's a recovery ward, can't you tell?"

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CRUMPING THE DEVIL

Cast:

  • [Opening credits - Olivia]
  • Maggie
  • Kev/"the Maniac", grandson
  • Bertha, the manipulative daughter
  • Barry, Bertha's bastard husband
  • Nursey
  • Morte
  • Satan
  • Jemma, the pregnant wimp daughter
  • Ted, Jemma's abusive bastard husband
  • Spike, violent biker

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a recovery ward, can't you tell? 

MUSIC

AMBIANCE    Hospital, beeps etc.

MAGGIE    [talking on phone]  I don't give a flying rat's flaming anus how good a job he does! Shall I roll past your garage and post photos of what he did to his wife?  Perhaps I should leave a nice big bloodstain on your doorstep with the words wifebeater scrawled on the pavemment - don't think I won't!

PATIENT    [groan]

MAGGIE    [up] Stuff it! [back on phone] Oh, yes!  [evil laugh] You come down here and say that to my face - I'll call the press.  [delighted laugh] I can just see the rags with you beating up a helpless gran in a wheelchair.  Tough guy! 

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, FEET COME IN

NURSEY    Now, now - phone time's over.  Time to say goodbye to all your friends.

MAGGIE    Bugger off, stay-puft.

NURSEY    [tsks] 

SOUND    PHONE GRABBED AND HUNG UP FORCEFULLY

NURSEY    Dear, dear - no need to drive up your blood pressure.  You need to stay calm, ducks, and get your rest.

SOUND    CURTAIN PULLED AROUND BED

MAGGIE    I'm ordering prunes!  Lots of prunes!  Just so you have to clean up the mess when they come out the other end!

NURSEY    My, my - but I'm not here all the time.

MAGGIE    [snarled] I have your schedule memorized.

MUSIC

BERTHA    Mother, you need to be rational about this.  This is your fourth hospitalization this year - you've reached a point where you need someone to look after you. 

MAGGIE    Visiting nurse comes by twice a week. 

BERTHA     [prompting] Barry!

BARRY    What if you... fall?

MAGGIE    I have this very special invention.  It allows me to magically contact help when I need it. 

BARRY    Oh, what?

MAGGIE    It's called a cellphone, you scrofulous prick.  I'll wear it on a lanyard if it'll make you piss off.  Now get your sorry arses out of my sickroom.

PATIENT    Go away.

MAGGIE    See?  Even that bastard hates you.

BERTHA    No mother, we're not leaving until we get this settled.

MAGGIE    Nurse!

BARRY    There is a button--

MAGGIE    Fuck off - this annoys her more.  Nurse!

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, FEET COME IN SLOWLY

KEV    H'lo Gran.  [reluctant] Mum.  [distasteful] Barry.   

MAGGIE    Who the bloody buggery hell are you supposed to be?

BERTHA    Oh, heavens, her memory is going!

MAGGIE    Don't get your hopes up, arse-face.  Are you trying to tell me the fruit of your sweaty loins--

BERTHA    [gasp]

MAGGIE    --has taken to running about dressed as sir poncy de leon?

KEV    I'm Hamlet.

MAGGIE    [laughing wickedly] Go on!  You?  You can't memorize the balance of your overdraft!  Come on then, soliloquize us!

KEV    [chuckles] It's a sales promotion for a mattress shop.  To sleep or not to sleep, all that bollocks.

BERTHA    [muttered] I just don't know where he gets this language from.

MAGGIE    Oh, god - if you're truly that fucking dense, I wish I was your father so at least I'd have some slight glimmer of hope that you weren't mine!

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, NURSEY FEET ENTER

NURSEY    Come, come - let's keep it all nice and civil, there are other people in this hospital, you know.

MAGGIE    Well, there must be people somewhere, but there's a couple of wankers in here.  Bugger off, knot-knickers. 

BERTHA    [gasp, then affronted noises as she leaves]

SOUND    FEET STORM OUT

NURSEY    Dear, dear.  Poor old Maggie's being deserted.

MAGGIE    Your turn, then isn't it, blancmange?  Shuffle off and fetch something, would you?  ...Like a stick?

NURSEY    Tsk Tsk.  You really need to--

MAGGIE    You, hey you in the tights.  You stay.  [beat]  Gotta catflap in those bonbon knickers?

KEV    No, gran.

NURSEY    [psst, then confidential] Young man, you haven’t brought her any alcohol have you?

KEV    No - no!  What sort of grandson would that make me?  No bottle on me anywhere, [leering] want to pat me down?

NURSEY    [oblivious] No, no!  Five minutes, then visiting hours are over.

SOUND    HER FEET LEAVE, DOOR SHUTS

MAGGIE    [hushed] You did bring me something, didn't you?  You are aware I think you're the least worthless of all my pathetic offspring?

SOUND    PLASTIC BAG OUT OF POCKET

KEV    Love you too, gran.  I remember how much you complained last time of not being able to find a place to light one up, so I baked you some brownies.

MAGGIE    You?  Baked? 

KEV    I'm a sensitive new age type of bloke.  I can make a mix. 

SOUND    OPENING PLASTIC BAG

MAGGIE    [sniffs] Nice.  You didn't skimp on the "spices."

SOUND    TAP ON THE DOOR

NURSEY    Time's up!

KEV    Stuff em somewhere.  Size of that cow, she probably snaps up everyone's sweeties.  

MAGGIE    I think she just eats patients--

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

MAGGIE    [louder] --mostly the males.

KEV    [wincey noise] Ooh...

MUSIC

MAGGIE    [into phone, trying to be quiet] --the Maniac left me a mobile. Have you tracked down Python yet, then?  [beat, then getting loud]  Sod it!  I thought you bastards had better legal these days!

SOUND     QUIETLY DOOR OPENS, SLOW FOOTSTEPS ENTER

MAGGIE    There must be someone there whose tattooes run more than knickers deep!  [beat]  Fine, I'll call the--

SOUND    CURTAIN SWEPT ASIDE SUDDENLY

MAGGIE    [gasp] Bugger me!

SOUND    MUFFLED VOICE AS SHE HIDES THE PHONE, BEEPING, TRYING TO TURN IT OFF

MORTE    Madame?  I believe you are expecting me.

MAGGIE    Riiight.  Middle of the night, hospital room.  Must be the stripper.  Where's your music?

MORTE    [startled] Um, no, I--

MAGGIE    Well, you can't be a doctor - they've all gone home.  We're in the hands of the sadists and the diapers.

MORTE    The what?

MAGGIE    Nurses and interns.  Look, It's late and I'm a bit too knackered to abuse you properly, so tell me who you bleeding think you are so you can sod off!

MORTE    [trying to get his spooky back on] I'm... death.

MAGGIE    Pull the other one - it spits.

MORTE    No, really.  I'm... death.

MAGGIE    Always thought you'd be Welsh.  So what are you doing swotting around here?  I'm not dead.  The infernal pinging thing says so.

MORTE    But you are old [spooky] ...and dying.

MAGGIE    [getting mad] So they keep fucking telling me, but I've never been one for following orders.  If you're really the angel of death, why are you wearing such a for-fucks-sake ugly suit?  And where's your bleeding scythe?  Can't be death without a jolly great scythe, can you, now?

MORTE    Oh, please - this is the 21st century.

MAGGIE    First piece of sense to come out of your festering gob, you git.  Now bugger off - I'm knackered, but I'm not ready for the tip yet.

MORTE    You will see me again tomorrow.

MAGGIE    Tell you what - you come back during visiting hours and I'll get my bastard son-in-law to drop in.  All I have to do is wave money anywhere within ten kilometers of my Jemma and that bastard appears like bleeding magic.

MORTE    But I--

MAGGIE    Him you can take, with all my heartfelts.  If you're not going to make yourself useful, though, you can piss off and stay there.

SOUND    FISHES OUT THE PHONE AND DIALS

MORTE     [affronted, huffy] You're not supposed to have a mobile in the hospital.

MAGGIE    Fuck off. [into phone]  Spike?

MORTE    You have a friend named Spike?

MAGGIE    [into phone] No, that's not a cop - just some prat trying to sell me life insurance.  Are you Spike?

MORTE    You're really going to just ignore me?

MAGGIE    Hold on. [hand over phone] Sorry, didn't mean to leave you hanging like that.  You're right, I should finish with you before making my calls.  So if you would kindly FUCK OFF?  Good.  [back to phone]  God, these bleeding salesmen.  They're like some damn pet pekingese - no balls but still won't stop humping once they get a grip on your leg.

MORTE    Well, I- I-I- never!

MAGGIE     Spike?  Great - what would it take to get some help with a problem?

SOUND    MORTE'S FEET STORM OUT, DOOR OPENS AND SHUTS.

MAGGIE    Nice!  Hold that thought, and I'll ring you back tomorrow - that twat's just gone to grass on me to the warden.

MUSIC

AMB     HOSPITAL ROOM - NOT SO URGENT.  NO PINGING THING.

SOUND    TAP ON DOOR, THEN DOOR OPENS WITHOUT WAITING

SOUND    WHEELCHAIR BEING PUSHED IN

JEMMA    [weak, hopeful] Hello?  [down] Mum.

MAGGIE    [trying to be calm and quiet] Jemma. 

NURSEY    Here we all are then.

SOUND    DOOR SWINGS SHUT

NURSEY    Ready for a nice litle family chat.

MAGGIE    Just ignore her.  [deep breath] They say you're going home soon.

JEMMA    I'm all right. [she's not]

MAGGIE    I'll see to it, someone drops around and keeps an eye on you.

JEMMA    I'll be careful.  [not very convincing] Won't walk into any more... doors.

MAGGIE    [getting a bit annoyed] Won't walk into any more fists, more like.

JEMMA    [upset, "not in front of the nurse"] Mum!      

MAGGIE    She's heard worse.  Haven't you, snowball?

NURSEY    [affirming, acerbic] From you alone.

MAGGIE    [snort of laughter, then serious]  So, when can I kill him?

JEMMA    What?

MAGGIE    That cocksucker husband of yours.

JEMMA    Mother!

MAGGIE    You can't say you don't want him dead.  Bertha keeps pissing on and on about my hospital record - you're leagues ahead of me.  Between the times he's knocked you up and the times he's knocked you down, it's amazing they don't just name a suite for you and give you your own key.

JEMMA    [crying]  He doesn't mean to--

MAGGIE    [losing it]  Doesn't mean to!  What, he was cleaning his swotting great fist and it went off!?  Or the other part - dearie, you get preggers every time that arsehole even wanks in your direction.  You'd be much better off without him.

JEMMA    He loves me.

MAGGIE    Oh, god - we are not having this discussion again. 

JEMMA    And we have eight children to look after - nine, soon.

MAGGIE    [softer again]  It's all right then?

JEMMA    [barely able to talk] Yes. 

MAGGIE    Jems, that son of a syphilitic whore punched you - punched a pregnant woman, let alone a pregnant woman he claims to care for - in the bloody stomach. 

JEMMA    [breaks into tears]

NURSEY    Oh, look at the time.  Come along Maggie, musn't be late on your pills!

MAGGIE    [yelling as they leave] Get it through your sodding thick skull - He DID MEAN IT! 

MUSIC

SOUND    NIGHT, PINGING, ETC.

SOUND     MAGGIE MUNCHING ON SOMETHING

SOUND     DOOR OPENS, SLOW FOOSTEPS (two sets)

SOUND    PLASTIC BAG RATTLES AS IT'S HIDDEN

MAGGIE    [sucking stuff out of her teeth]  Who's there?

SOUND    CURTAIN PULLED ASIDE

MAGGIE    [disgusted noise] Oh, it's just you.  Piss off.

MORTE    I told you I would return.

MAGGIE    And take my soul blah blah blah.  I have you sussed, you wanker.

MORTE    Sussed?  I already told you - I'm death.

MAGGIE    Right.  And I have a daughter who would like nothing more than to have her dear old mum babbling on about meeting death in the flesh - all so she can have me declared non compos and shoved away in some shithole of a home while she sends all my odds and sods to auction "on my behalf".  Piss off, and tell her she can piss off too.

SATAN    [explosive laugh]

MORTE    See?  I told you.

MAGGIE    Told me what?  You're not making sense, the curtain is laughing like a drain, and I'm not that stoned.

SOUND    CURTAIN OPENS FURTHER WITH A DRAMATIC SWEEP

MORTE    She surely is the most frightful woman I've seen in years.

SATAN    I like it.

MAGGIE    And who are you supposed to be?  Revival of the Rocky Horror show?

SATAN    [laughs harder]

MORTE    He's the devil.

MAGGIE    Well I knew he wasn't a doctor - not dressed like that.  [sigh]

SATAN    [laughing subsides]

MAGGIE    Are you done?  I wouldn’t want to waste a good insult on you when you can't hear it properly.

SATAN    [chuckles, but stops himself]  Go on.

MAGGIE    Dressed like that, you look like Sir Elton John vomited all over you.

SATAN    [chuckles]

MAGGIE    And I suspect that'd be rare, since he's probably got a strong gag reflex.

SATAN    [a moment, then a gasp as he gets it, then uproarious laughter]

MAGGIE    Told you it was a good one. [joins in]

MORTE    I don't get it.

MAGGIE    Oh, god.  You need to loosen the fuck up.  [evil chuckle]  Here.  Have a brownie.

MORTE    A brownie?  Ooh.  Chocolate is my weakness.

SOUND    RATTLE OF PLASTIC

MAGGIE    Death and chocolate - imagine that.  How about you, Gary Glitter?

SATAN    Well, if you're offering.

[They munch for a minute]

MORTE    Interesting [licks his lips, speculatively] ...aftertaste.

MAGGIE    Old family recipe.  The maniac bakes them for me.  Don't tell the nurse - she's already thirteen stone.

MORTE    [snorts]  Oh goodness!

SATAN    [giggles uncontrollably]

SOUND    CELL PHONE RINGS

MAGGIE    Scuse me for a minute, will you?

[they murmur assent]

SOUND    PHONE ACTIVATED

MAGGIE    Yeah?  Is this Spike?  Then who the bloody hell--  [pleased] Really?

MORTE    [confiding, but loopy] Shouldn't have  mobile in hospital.  

SATAN    Might call for help?

[they both laugh]

MAGGIE    You up for it, then?  More the merrier, I always say.  [beat]  Oh, dead may be overkill, but I wouldn't shed any tears.  Mostly I'd prefer him unable to fuck, or walk for at least a year - no, never again on the first - can you manage that?

SATAN    [awed] What?  Did I hear you--?

MAGGIE    Shut it.  [on phone]  Candy striper.  You know, one of those new homosexual ones.  [back on topic] So, you can handle it?

SATAN    I'll have you know--

MAGGIE    [covers phone] Everyone knows you swing both ways - the devil can fuck with anyone.

SATAN    Well [trying not to laugh], if you put it that way [bursts into hilarity again]

MAGGIE    Great - when?  [upset] Weekend?  Not sooner?  They'll be sending her home tomorrow!

MORTE    I thought you were talking about a man?  Who you don't want to be able to--

MAGGIE    Fine.  [annoyed] I'll try and get out of here too, then shall I?  No I bloody well can't talk them into letting her stay--

MORTE    --to [uncomfortable] "do it"--

SATAN    Just say "fuck."

MORTE    [affronted] No.

SATAN    Come on, I dare you.

MAGGIE    Shut up or piss off.  I'm almost finished.  [into phone]  Saturday night, then?  Call me Thursday, same time, and I'll say where.  Brilliant. 

SOUND    PHONE OFF

MORTE    So is it?

MAGGIE    Is it what, arse-face?

MORTE    Is it a man or a woman?

SATAN    He means who are you talking on the phone about?

MAGGIE    I've got some friends of a--

MORTE    --questionable moral character?

MAGGIE    Well, they do call themselves the Bastards of Carnage, so that might be a clue - Anyway, I've arranged will ... have a chat with ... my daughter's oozing sore of a so-called husband.

MORTE    And you don't want him to be able to--

MAGGIE    And they won't be as kind as a vetrinarian.

SATAN    Well!  [lip smacking noises]  Have you any more of those brownies?

MUSIC

AMB    MAGGIE'S ROOM

KEV    I hear they're letting you go?

MAGGIE    They have to get sick of me eventually.

KEV    Are you doing all right?  Really?

MAGGIE    Healthy as a horse.  [sighs] One of those swayback cartoon nags with glue factory stamped on them.  You know what your evil bitch of a mother is trying to do to me?

KEV    Would it be so bad?

MAGGIE    Et tu, wanker?

KEV    No!  I'm really just curious. 

MAGGIE    Well, quite apart from the horrors of loss of control over your life, the fact that they will likely frown on my extensive collection of filthy artwork, and having to obey people whose nappies I might have changed, it's the piss.

KEV    Piss?

MAGGIE    At your age, piss is still romantic.  Getting yourself well and truly pissed, pissing in the snow, nasty piss-scented alleys where you buy happy little packages - piss hasn't lost its shine.

KEV    Oh?

MAGGIE    By the time you get old, piss is the thing you fear the most.  Your own, someone else's - fuck death, fuck the devil, if there was a sodding god of piss we'd all be sacrificing virgin sheep to him just to make him stay the fuck away.  That's what those places are, Kev.  [solemn] They are where piss goes to die.  The smell, the damp, the feel in the air.  As long as I can still hold my water and get myself in and out of the bogatory, it's my bleeding right to look after myself. 

KEV    [serious] All right.

MAGGIE    [fierce again] Next time you feel yourself getting curious, darling beast, just swot on down to the crystal lights retirement complex - you don't even have to go inside, just stand downwind and have a good long whiff. 

MUSIC

AMB    NIGHTTIME AGAIN

MAGGIE    [anxious sigh, then fretting] What is the bloody holdup?  I said--

SOUND    PHONE BUZZES, TURNED ON

MAGGIE    Finally!  Took your goddamn time, didn't you?  [beat]  So Jemma phoned you - God, how I spewed forth such a spineless cow, I've no idea.  [beat, then disgusted]  Oh, right, the bloody money - that's the only thing you give a shit about, isn't it?

MAGGIE    Don't bother, you mealy mouthed two faced prick!  I know just how much you care for your wife - I've seen the sodding medical charts.  [beat]  Blah Blah Blah.  Blah Blah Blah.  Course you have a problem - you're still fucking breathing.  I am planning on fixing that, you know.  [beat]  [chuckles nastily]  Wouldn’t you like to know?  I'll tell you when, though - give you something to stew about, you arsehole - Saturday night.  You'd best watch your step, cause you may not realize it, but I have friends in low, low places, and they just love an excuse to beat some bastard to holy fuck and back!  [beat]  What do you mean, how are they going to find you?  They're probably already watching you.  Run if you want, but unless you find some way to get me first, they will get you. 

SOUND    PHONE SHUT OFF

SATAN    Was that really a good idea?

SOUND    QUIET FOOTSTEPS APPROACH

MAGGIE    What, impressed?

SATAN    Yes and no.  I like your intensity, but you shouldn't have warned him.

MAGGIE    Betcha I know what I'm doing.

SATAN     [seriously] Let me think about it.

MAGGIE    So, what's the pitch tonight?  And where's the undertaker?

SATAN    He's a very busy entity.  He's already wasted rather a lot of time trying to impress you.

MAGGIE    Why impress me - isn't he fucking all-powerful death?  Doesn't he just whisk people off and bobs your uncle, you're hip deep in the bleeding river styx?

SATAN    Styx?  Well, I'm impressed--

MAGGIE    [dismissively] Beer mat trivia.  So it's just you and me tonight, is it?  Pity - I haven't had a really good threesome since 1968.

SATAN    [chortle]

MAGGIE    Right, laughing boy.  Either you dropped in for more of the maniac's brownies, or you want something from me, and I don't fancy myself so fucking entertaining that I'd drag you away from the torture telly.

SATAN    Torture?

MAGGIE    Bleeding heart chat shows and those so-called game shows where people swallow foul things that haven't even taken them to dinner and a picture first.

SATAN    [sigh] Bloody hell - it's getting so hard to frighten people these days.  You say you'll stick a red-hot poker up the bum and half say "been there, done that".

MAGGIE    Well, I've been and done around in my time.  Are you planning to try and scare the crap out of me?

SATAN    Really, I just follow Morty around, since once he lets on he's coming for someone, it's usually a piece of piss to get them to agree to sell their soul...

MAGGIE    [bark of laughter] A bit like when a bloody great hurricane hits and all the bastard insurance salesmen clean up selling storm coverage?

SATAN    A bit.  So.  You selling?

MAGGIE    Blunt, aren't you?

SATAN    I feel we've gone a bit beyond a sales pitch here.

MAGGIE    So?  I sell my soul and you - what?  Give me my greatest wish?  I assume immortality is only on the high shelf - the one you can't ever knock down enough sodding bottles to win.

SATAN    What do you want?

MAGGIE    [thinks, then]  No.  Two reasons.  First, I still believe you're some starving artist Bertha paid to come round and chat me up.  Second, I might have a mouth like a public urinal, but I still read my classics.  Monkey's Paw?  Nothing good ever comes from a bad deal. 

SATAN    It's not my fault if people don't take time to read the small print.  

MAGGIE    You ponder enough, there's always a way to bugger the customer.  If nothing else - just send the damn thing round unassembled, with instructions in fucking Parsi.

SATAN    [laughing again] I do like you.

MAGGIE    Can’t say you're the worst bastard I've had to deal with in my whole sodding life.

SATAN    Tell you what - just to prove that I am what I claim to be, how about a freebie?

MAGGIE    I draw the line at giving up my favors for anything less than a fiver.

SATAN    [chuckling] No, I mean I'll do something for you.  No strings.  Cross my heart.

MAGGIE    You're not planning to bugger me on this?

SATAN    What would it get me, until I get a signature on the dotted line?  It can't be anything huge - I'll not cure cancer or feed the world's hungry--

MAGGIE    Sod the hungry.  Too many bloody people clogging up the sewer we call the world anyway.

SATAN    --or make you healthy.

MAGGIE    [grim] Yeah, right.

SATAN    Something short term and simple.

MAGGIE    I got it.  And if you do it, I promise to take under consideration that you might actually be the bleeding king of the underworld.  Right?

SATAN    Ask and it shall be done.

MAGGIE    Right.  Now you have to wait until I say "done" before you go swotting off and do this - I want every bloody condition met. 

SATAN    [very serious] Very well.

MAGGIE    With no harm to either of them, in the immediate or long term, I want something to happen that will keep Jemma in hospital until Sunday.  Can you do me that?  Suspicious skin condition, something - and this is the part that if you fuck me I will find a way to rip your bollocks off - it has to be something that won't hurt the baby.  Right, uh... [thinking, then] Fuck.  Done.

SATAN    [dead serious]  I see.  Agreed.  [beat, then a bit hesitant]  You wouldn't happen to have any of those brownies, would you?

MUSIC

SOUND    WHEELING DOWN A HOSPITAL HALL

NURSEY    Doctor says you're just about well enough to leave. 

MAGGIE    [snarl] Lovely. 

NURSEY    Probably tomorrow - just in time for the weekend.

MAGGIE    [snarl] Can't think of anything that would brighten my day more.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

BERTHA    Oh!  Here she is.

MAGGIE    Oh, bollocks, who decided to shit all over my parade?

BERTHA    Mother!

MAGGIE    Technically.  Can you at least keep your festering gob shut until this pelican gets me settled?  It's humiliating enough to be jumbled around like someone's sodding laundry, but to have an audience is just the bloody capper.

BERTHA     Mother, this is too important to wait.

MAGGIE    Fine.  Talk.

BERTHA    I brought you the brochures--

MAGGIE    [somewhat muffled] Talk over.  Fuck off.

BERTHA    Mother!  You must admit you need care.  You can't--

MAGGIE    I can!  You'll never get an agreement from me to being stuck in your fucking P-O-W camp, and if you even think about trying to  prove me incompetent, I will change my will and put Jemma in charge.

BERTHA    [indignant] Jemma!  She doesn’t --- She has too many... children... to look after!

MAGGIE    [smug] And a bastard husband who will go through the bulk of my money in a week or two, slick as snot. 

BERTHA    Besides, Jemma's going to be a bit longer here herself.  Some weird rash has cropped up that they want to keep for observation.

MAGGIE    [at a loss]  Really?  [swallows, then her beligerance returns]  Devil only knows how that happened.  Right.  Now, I'm tired and you need to PISS OFF.

BERTHA    This is not over!

SOUND    FEET STORM OUT, DOOR SLAMS

NURSEY    And what's wrong with a little care?

MAGGIE    You.

MUSIC

SOUND    NIGHTTIME

MAGGIE    All right, you pouffy bastard - come out.

SATAN    [tsks]  Names?

MAGGIE    Endearments, darling beast.  So what did you do to my idiot daughter?

SATAN    You asked for a skin disease - I gave you one.  Shouldn’t even be much scarring.

MAGGIE    Scars she's used to.  I'll send her a bloody great tub of aloe vera.  Or will it to her.  I meant to ask, when can I expect another visit from lord stick up his bum?

SATAN    Death?  About a week.  Maybe less. 

MAGGIE    And then--?

SATAN    [final, agreeing] And then.  You ready to sign on?

MAGGIE    I'll read the bloody fine print first.

SATAN    [chuckling, evilly] You may not have time - there's a helluva lot of fine print.

MAGGIE    [chukles evilly back]  Hand it over.

SOUND    HUGE SHEAF OF PAPER HITS THE TABLE WITH A THUD

MAGGIE    Bugger me!

SATAN    There may be an easier way.

MAGGIE    Than buggering me?  What's that, then?

SATAN    A bet. 

MAGGIE    A bet?

SATAN    You suggested it yourself last night.  I asked if you know what you're doing, and you--

MAGGIE    [considering, then quietly] I spoke very loosely.

SATAN    The devil is in the details.  [laughs]

MAGGIE    How do I prove I won, and what do I get?

SATAN    What you get - hmm - I'll get Morty off your back, for, say, ten years?   

MAGGIE    Is that all?

SATAN    Who do you think I am, bloody Oprah?

MAGGIE    That has to come with two things--

SATAN    I said--

MAGGIE    I have to be in at least as good health as I am now the entire time - no fucking coma for ten years - and abso-fucking-lutely no bloody nursing home.  I'll live on the kerb before I'll--

SATAN    Done.

MAGGIE    And if I lose?

SATAN    I get your soul - immediately.

MAGGIE    So the bet is I know what I'm doing - how do I prove I won? 

SATAN    What are you trying to accomplish?

MAGGIE    Oh, no - I'm not giving you any chance to play silly beggars with my plans.  Suffice to say that after Saturday night I will still be the one smiling?

SATAN    Hmm - give me a few more of those brownies and you have a deal.

MUSIC

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, WHEELCHAIR ENTERS

MAGGIE    Jems?

JEMMA    [weak, but better than before] Yes? 

MAGGIE    They say you're to stay here a few more days.

JEMMA    It's this bloody rash.  [itching noise]

NURSEY    Now now, you know you're not supposed to--

MAGGIE    [weary] Bugger off Moby Dick.  Jems, I'm going home now, they say, and - uh - this weekend should be bloody interesting.

JEMMA    [dull] Of course, mum.  You have someone to look in on you?  Bertha?

MAGGIE    Only if I want to sign my away my soul.  [laughs uncomfortably]  Nah, I've talked Kev into roughing it with me for the weekend.

JEMMA    [a bit disbelieving] Oh.  Yeah.  Good.

MUSIC

KEV    [muffled, nervous, on the phone]  Of course this is her bloody mobile!  She's asleep.  [beat]  Fuck no, I won't!  You can haul your own bleeding carcass in here and do your own dirty work.  [beat, sarcastic]  Ri-i-ight.  No, you don't understand - I'm rather fond of the old bag-- [beat]  Well, yeah, there is a toady element to it, but we get on, gran and me.  I'd just as soon have her around a while longer.  [beat]  Ain't impossible, innit?  She is meeting her solicitor next-- [beat] Oh, you didn't know that yet, did you?  [beat, then cowed]  Y‑yeah, I know--  No!  No, don't go to the cops.  I'll--  [beaten] I'll leave latch up, then, shall I?

MUSIC [very ominous]

SOUND     DOOR OPENS VERY CAREFULLY.  SOUND OF GENTLE WHEEZY BREATHING.  SLOW CREAKING FOOTFALLS. 

TED    [muttering]  Stupid bloody old cow.  Have my guts for garters will she?  Hah! 

SOUND     CREEPING GETS CLOSER TO THE BREATHING.

TED    Once we've got your fucking money, you old bitch, Jemma'n me'll be just bloody fine.  

SOUND    LIGHT SWITCH TURNED ON

MAGGIE    [casual, off in a corner] Oh, right.  Tickety-bloody-boo.

TED    [whirling]  You insane bitch!  [unsure] Wait!  If you're over there in the shadows, then who's in the sodding bed?

SOUND     BEDCLOTHES FLUNG BACK

KEV    [flamey] 'elo, luv!

TED    What kind of bloody game are you playing?

MAGGIE     Hmm.  Red Rover.  Red Rover, red rover, send the donkey's scrotum over.

TED     Two to one?  The mummy and the weasel.  I can take the both of you!  [yells and runs at her]

SOUND     RUNNING FEET, BROUGHT TO A SUDDEN HALT

TED    [urk]

SOUND     BODY DROP

SPIKE    [chuckles nastily] No, me old son, I think you've got that ass-backwards.  Hasn't he, lads?

SOUND     DOORS OPEN, SEVERAL SETS OF HEAVY FEET ENTER

BIKERS     [agreeing noises, laughs.]

SOUND    SLAP OF FIST INTO HAND, CHAIN RATTLES

KEV    You mind, gran?  Not my thing.

MAGGIE    [kindly] Nah, go ahead, you ponce.  I'll be right here.  Better than a jolly great football riot.

KEV    [off] Yeah, but guess who gets to hose out your kip?

SOUND     FEET SCUTTLE OUT OF ROOM

TED    [panicking] Someone'll hear!

MAGGIE    Not bloody likely.  I made dead cert of that.  Amazing what free dinner coupons will do to get people to vacate for the night.  Course, police'll chalk them up to the same burglars who broke in here - luckily Kev and I stopped in for dinner with Bertha.

KEV    [yelling from off] We had a sodding flat on the way.

MAGGIE    [threatening] Doesn't that just take the biscuit?  Now Ted.  If you take this like a good little mountain of elephant dung, quietly and repentant-like, they might leave you alive. 

SOUND    PUNCHING COMMENCES, associated noises from the bikers

TED    [grunts]  Hey!  Why--?

MAGGIE    [incensed]  Why?  Hold up.  [starting low, and mounting] Three broken wrists - that's why.  A cracked fucking pelvis - that's why.  A broken collarbone - that's why!  Thirty-bloody-seven sodding black eyes, and that's only the ones I counted myself - that's why!  Punching your fucking pregnant wife in her stomach [ragged breath, then almost a whisper]  That.  Is why.

SOUND    PUNCHING COMMENCES AGAIN, associated noises from the bikers

MUSIC

SOUND    HOSPITAL HALLWAY, ANNOUNCEMENTS, WHEELCHAIR APPROACHES

NURSEY    [distasteful, but trying to hide it] Oh, goodness, are you back?

MAGGIE    No fear, yeti.  We're just visiting, aren't we? 

KEV    Right.  We're family.

NURSEY    That's lovely.  Well, just a minute then.  He's not really up to much.  Poor fellow.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, PINGING MACHINES INSIDE

MAGGIE    I know.  [pouring on the melodrama]  Apparently he was coming by to bring some flowers - since I'd just got out of hospital - and surprised some burglars or something.  [sounding almost teary]  But for the grace of the almighty, that could have been us - couldn't it, Kev?

KEV    Worth every bite of mum's pork au poivre.

MAGGIE    [sharp] Shh.  [teary] Tragic.

NURSEY    [softening] See, I knew you had it in you.

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS

MAGGIE    If only she had it in her more often, she wouldn't be such a tight-ass knicker-twisting sodding git.

TED    [muffled by tubes and such]  uh?

MAGGIE    Good night.  What a mess.

TED    [alarmed] uh!

MAGGIE    Don't call reinforcemants just yet - we're merely here to deliver a message.

TED    [shuddering] um?

MAGGIE    It boils down to this, my evil bastard sonofabitch in law.  Quite apart from being ready to kill you should anything untoward happen to either of us here, my friends plan to visit anything you do to Jemma upon you.  And I do mean anything.  If you get anywhere near her, even with a freindly weapon, you better be ready to take every single bleeding stroke you give. 

SOUND    WHEELCHAIR ROLLS AWAY

MAGGIE    I'll send round some vaseline.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

MUSIC

SOUND    TELLY ON LOW, MAGGIE TAPPING FURIOUSLY AWAY ON COMPUTER

MAGGIE    Bastards!  Fucking evil empire bastards!  They just wait until I'm in hospital, and change the rates on me again!

SATAN    [clears throat]

MAGGIE    One minute - I have to update my sodding bid structure.  Again.

SATAN    What?

MAGGIE    Business.  And... there.  Good for now.

SATAN    Well, um.  [a bit cowed]  The bet.

MAGGIE    You have to admit, I got my bloody way.

SATAN    Yes.  Very well too. 

MAGGIE    So I win, do I?

SATAN    Oh... yes.  You're very impressive.  I'd almost offer you a job myself.

MAGGIE    Come back in ten years, [fondly] you ponce.  So what, do we shake on it or somesuch?

SATAN    Frankly, I'm rather fond of my fingers.

MAGGIE    [laughs]  You have my oath I won't bite...  This time.

SATAN    Right, then.

SOUND    HESITATE, THEN A HANDSHAKE

MAGGIE    Go on then.  I'm far too bloody busy to be swotting around all day with the likes of you. 

SOUND    TAPS A FEW KEYS

MAGGIE    [to computer]  What does that wanker bloody mean he forgot to pay me?  [aside]  There's some brownies there.  Drop round any time.  [back to computer, then fading out] Dammit!  Dammit it all to bloody buggery arse-face fucking donkey scrotum hell!!!

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

Atomic Julie - Green Grew The Lasses by Ruth Laura Wainwright14 Dec 202100:28:05

Newsflash!  Women turn green in small community!  Strange growths everywhere!  What could be behind it?

19 Nocturne Boulevard - QUAIL SEED - Reissue09 Dec 202100:26:48

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from a story by Saki (H.H. Munro)

When the Christmas rush takes shoppers off to the big city, how do you get them to stick to the local shops?

A lovely tale of viral marketing!

[Saki was often way ahead of his time!]

Announcer - Jennifer Dixon
Mr. Scarrick - John Lingard
Jimmy - Will Watt
Lucy - Tanja Milojevic [Lightning Bolt Theater]
Boy - Reynaud LeBoeuf
Man - Anthony D.P. Mann [Horror Etc.]
Miss Fritten - Robyn Keyes
Mrs. Greyes - Jennifer Dixon
Mrs. Gordon - Judith Moore
Gloria - Beverly Poole
Other women - Julie Hoverson

Sound and mastering by Julie Hoverson

Music by Kevin McLeod (Incompetech.com)
Picture by lucias_clay, found with help from Bill Jones.

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Quail Seed

Cast:

  • Announcer
  • Scarrick, shopkeeper (M50s)
  • Jimmy, Assistant (M20s)
  • Lucy, Jimmy's girl (F20s)
  • Boy (M20s)
  • Man/Beard (M30s)
  • Miss Fritten (F30s)
  • Greyes (F30s)
  • Gordon (F30s)
  • Miss Jones (F30s)
  • Miss Smith (F30s)
  • Gloria (F20s)
  • Lipping (F30s)

 

SAKI OPENING

MUSIC

 

SCENE 1.    SCARRICK'S SUNDRIES (SHOP)

SOUND     SHOP DOOR, BELL, FOOTSTEPS

LUCY    Hello?  Helloooo?

JIMMY    [close]  Morning, Lucy!

LUCY    [startled gasp]  Jimmy! There you are.  Bit... empty in here, isn’t it?

JIMMY    [heavy sigh] A bit.

LUCY    But where are all the Christmas shoppers?

JIMMY    Shh!  Whatever you do, don't ask that in front of Mr. Scarrick.  You'll quite set him off. 

LUCY    Oh!

JIMMY    It's all right, he's out at the moment.

LUCY    [impressed] He left you in charge?

JIMMY    [heavy sigh, morose]  Only in the certainty that there won't be a stampede on our services.

LUCY    That bad, eh?

JIMMY    Yeah.  Quite.

SOUND    DOOR, BELL, FOOTSTEPS

MISS SMITH    Hello?

SOUND    QUICK STEPS

JIMMY    Yes?  How may I assist you?

MISS SMITH    [nervous] Oh, I was -um- just looking for a railway timetable?  I'm going up to the city-- [breaks off]

JIMMY    Sorry.  Clean out.  Perhaps next week.

MISS SMITH    Ah.  Thank you.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS, BELL DOOR

LUCY    You might have made a sale!

JIMMY    She just wanted to look.

LUCY    You don't know that.

JIMMY    [bitter admission] She's the fourth today.  Everyone would rather take the train to town and shop in a big department store than [quoting] bother to take advantage of the convenience--

SOUND    DOOR BELL

MISS JONES    Hello?

JIMMY    ...and that's five.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.    PUB

SCARRICK    The outlook is not encouraging for us smaller businesses.

SOUND    POURING DRINK

SCARRICK    These big concerns are offering all sorts of attractions to the shopping public which we couldn't afford to imitate, even on a small scale-- reading-rooms and play-rooms and gramophones and Heaven knows what.

BOY    [normal, commiserating] People like shiny objects.

SCARRICK    And they don't care to buy half a pound of sugar nowadays unless they can listen to Harry Lauder and have the latest Australian cricket scores ticked off before their eyes.

MAN    Seems like quite a trip for sugar.

SCARRICK    With the big Christmas stock we've got in, we ought to keep half a dozen assistants hard at work.  But as it is my nephew Jimmy and myself can pretty well attend to it ourselves.  In fact, I've left him in charge.  I've never done that before.

BOY    I'm sure he'll be fine.

SCARRICK    [drinks] It's a nice stock of goods, too.  I could run it all off in a few weeks time, but there's no chance of that--not unless the London line was to get snowed up for a fortnight before Christmas.

MAN    [musing] How you gonna keep them home on the farm?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.    SCARRICK'S

SOUND    SHOP DOOR, BELL

MRS. GREYES    --so tedious, but there it is, and what else is one to do?

MISS FRITTEN    We shall simply wait for the next-- 

SCARRICK    May I help you ladies?

MRS. GREYES    Oh!  [evasive] Really, we just stopped in to see about --- um, about--

MISS FRITTEN    Bootlaces. 

MRS. GREYES    Bootlaces!  Yes!  I've been in dire need of some--

SCARRICK    [hearty] Of course.  Over on the left wall, near the back.

MRS. GREYES    Oh, yes, of course.  [whispering]  You knew he'd try and sell us something if we came in here!  Bootlaces indeed.  I already have more laces than boots!

MISS FRITTEN    At least if we do make a purchase, they're small enough to carry when we go to--

MRS. GREYES    Shh!

SCARRICK    Finding everything?

MRS. GREYES    Oh, yes.  This is the best ... um... anchovy paste.  Just what I was looking for.

MISS FRITTEN    Just lovely!

SCARRICK    Perhaps you ladies could help me.  I was thinking of adding a little entertainment to the shop.

MRS. GREYES    Oh?

SCARRICK    I did have a sort of idea of engaging Miss Luffcombe to give recitations during afternoons; she made a great hit at the Post Office entertainment with her rendering of 'Little Beatrice's Resolve'.

MISS FRITTEN    [very uncertain] Oh, that would be ...just ... lovely.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, BELL RINGS ODDLY

SCARRICK    What?

SOUND    ODD FOOTSTEPS ENTER

SCARRICK    [excusing himself] Your pardon.

SOUND    SCARRICK GOES TO THE COUNTER

MRS. GREYES    [whispered] Perhaps we should just do our shopping here.

MISS FRITTEN    But I'm in my best hat!

MRS. GREYES    Shh! Shh!  Look at that!

MISS FRITTEN    What an odd looking boy.  Brown as a nut, but we've not had sun in weeks!

MRS. GREYES    And those clothes.  Like something out of the Arabian nights!

SOUND    CLANG

BOY    [accented now] Six pomegranates, please, and a packet of quail seed.

MISS FRITTEN    What's the bowl for?

MRS. GREYES    To carry the pomegranates?

MISS FRITTEN    Why not a string bag?

MRS. GREYES    Allergies?  Shh!

SCARRICK    [business as usual]  Here you are.  We have some lovely pomegranates.

MISS FRITTEN    He doesn't even look surprised!

MRS. GREYES    The boy must have been here before.

SOUND    COIN SKITTERING, CAUGHT

BOY    The wine and figs were not paid for yesterday.  Keep what is over of the money for our future purchases.

SCARRICK    [formal and serious] As you wish. 

SOUND    BOY LEAVES, DOOR SHUTS

SOUND    SKITTERING OF LADIES FEET

MISS FRITTEN    [to Scarrick, hinting] A very strange-looking boy?

SCARRICK    [final]  A foreigner, I believe.

MRS. GREYES    Does he shop here often?  Surely there can't be much call for ...quail seed... at this time of year.

SCARRICK    It takes all sorts.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

SOUND    HEAVY OMINOUS FOOTSTEPS

MISS FRITTEN    [gasp]

MRS. GREYES    Oh!  [covering her consternation]  Oh, I forgot those bootlaces!  [hissed] Come on!

SOUND    THEY SKITTER AWAY

MAN    [accented] I wish for a pound and a half of the best coffee you have.

SCARRICK    [wary] Certainly sir.

MRS. GREYES    Look at that beard!

MISS FRITTEN    Like a comedy Russian.

MRS. GREYES    No, more like an ancient Assyrian.

MAN    [suspicious] Has a dark-faced boy been here buying pomegranates?

SCARRICK    Can't say that I've seen anyone like that.

MRS. GREYES    Oh!  [muffles self]

MISS FRITTEN    [whispered]  How could he!

SCARRICK    [offhanded] We have a few pomegranates in stock, but there has been no real demand for them.

MAN    My servant will fetch the coffee, as usual.

SOUND    COIN SKITTERS, HEAVY FEET START TO WALK AWAY, THEN STOP

MAN    [very importantly] Have you, perhaps, any quail seed?

SCARRICK    [unhesitating] No.  we don't stock it.

GREYES AND FRITTEN [gasp]

SOUND    FEET WALK AWAY

MRS. GREYES    [whispered] What will he deny next?

MISS FRITTEN    And I always believed Mr. Scarrick to be such a truthful man.  Heavens! He just presided at a lecture on Savonarola.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS AND CLOSES

MRS. GREYES    Don't let's bother about the 3.12.  Let's dash, and talk this out at Laura Lipping's

MISS FRITTEN     Perhaps we should buy a few things first.  Since we're here.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.    TEA

MISS FRITTEN    [recounting lusciously] Turning up the deep astrakhan collar of his long coat, the stranger swept out of the shop, with the air of a Satrap proroguing a Sanhedrim.

MRS. LIPPING    Do Satraps prorogue?

MISS FRITTEN    [coldly superior] Have you ever seen one that didn't?

GLORIA    I don't even know what a Sanhedrim is.  Is it a dance?

MISS FRITTEN    It is a simile and hardly matters.  Or do I mean an allegory?

MRS. GORDON    And the boy?

MRS. GREYES    I should have though him Greek, but after seeing that beard--

MRS. LIPPING    They could have been unrelated.

MISS FRITTEN    Unrelated?  And both asking for "quail seed"?  Mark my words.  There's something afoot.

MRS. GREYES    What bothers me most is this unprecedented streak of falsity in our local grocer!

GLORIA    I've never known Mr. Scarrick to prevaricate like that before!

MRS. GREYES    It's the influence of that artist that took the flat above the shop.  Mark my words.  [importantly] Bohemian.

MRS. GORDON    [tragically] I shall never again be able to believe what he tells me about the absence of colouring matter in the jam.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.    SCARRICK'S

SOUND    DOOR, BELL

SOUND    BROOM

LUCY    Jimmy?

JIMMY    Yeah.  Here.

LUCY    Goodness, it looks like a tornado touched down.

JIMMY    Fabulous, isn't it?

LUCY    But, what happened?

JIMMY    This afternoon, from tea onwards, we had a constant stream of shoppers. 

LUCY    Is this something to do with the odd individuals who may or may not have been in this afternoon?

JIMMY    [overly innocent] Whomever do you refer to?

LUCY    Come on!  It's all over town.  People talked about it at tea, and more people talked about it at supper.  I expect they're all talking about it over Bridge even as we speak.  The dark young man and the Beard. 

JIMMY    Sounds a bit like a music hall act.

LUCY    [speculatively] Yes... yes, it does....

MUSIC

 

SCENE 6.    SCARRICK'S

[MANY CUSTOMERS]

MISS SMITH    Is this the freshest jar of pickles?

JIMMY    Miss?  I suppose so.

MISS SMITH    It looks a bit dusty.

JIMMY    That would be my fault--

SCARRICK    [commanding] Jimmy!

JIMMY    So sorry, must jump.

MISS FRITTEN    [whispered]  Do you think they will return?

MRS. GREYES    I have it on good authority someone's rented that house at the far end of Plummergen.

MISS FRITTEN    But why should they come all this way to shop?

MRS. GREYES    [knowing] Plummergen drapers don't stock quail seed. 

MISS FRITTEN    [getting it] Ah!

SOUND    REGISTER NOISE

SCARRICK    That will be three shillings and four pence.

SOUND    COINS

MRS. LIPPING    I'm looking for something interesting for a savory.  Have you any, any‑‑

SOUND    GENERAL HUSH

MRS. LIPPING    [nervous] --any, um--

SCARRICK    [as if nothing is amiss]  I have some pickled olives.  Imported from turkey.

MRS. LIPPING    Yes, anything.

SOUND    JAR SET DOWN, CASH REGISTER

SOUND    JABBER BEGINS AGAIN

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, BELL, JABBER SLOWLY DIES AWAY.

SILENCE

SOUND    BOY WALKS IN.

SOUND    BOWL SET DOWN.

SCARRICK    [normal]  What can I get for you today?

BOY    I require a pound of honey.

SOUND    BREATH BEING LET OUT ALL OVER

BOY    and - [quieter] and a packet of quail seed.

SOUND    GENERAL INTAKE OF BREATH, GIGGLE QUICKLY MUFFLED

SCARRICK    Very good, sir.

SOUND    CONVERSATIONS, FORCED LAUGHTER, BUT MUTED, LISTENING

MISS FRITTEN    [excited whisper] We might be living in the Arabian Nights.

MRS. GREYES    Hush! Listen!

SOUND    THINGS PLACED INTO BOWL, BOWL REMOVED, BOY STARTS TO LEAVE.

SOUND    QUICK FOOTSTEPS

JIMMY    [hurried, fraught with meaning] We have some very fine Jaffa oranges.  Around behind here.

BOY    [gasps]

SOUND    QUICK SHUFFLE OF FEET

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, MAN STRIDES IN.

SOUND    GASPS

SCARRICK    [unperturbed]  What may I get for you today, Sir?

MAN    A pound of dates and a tin of the best Smyrna halva.

MISS FRITTEN    Halva?  What is that?

MRS. GREYES    It comes from Smyrna - that's figs, isn't it, Smyrna is?

GLORIA    Who would want dates AND figs?

MRS. LIPPING    Hush.

SCARRICK    There you are. 

MAN    Hmm [evaluating noise]  Yes.

SOUND    COINS DROPPED

MAN    Has the dark-faced boy, of whom I spoke yesterday, been here to-day?

GLORIA    [stifled squeak of excitement]

SOUND    [shushing all round]

SCARRICK    We've had rather more people than usual in the shop to-day... but I can't recall a boy such as you describe.

SOUND    [gasps]

MRS. GREYES    [satisfied] Didn't we say?

MISS FRITTEN    It's too too terrible.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.    TEA

MRS. GREYES    It is deplorable that anyone - particularly someone in a position such as Mr. Scarrick -should treat the truth as an article temporarily and excusably out of stock.

MISS FRITTEN    More quail seed!  Those quails must be voracious!  [realizing]  or else... perhaps it isn't quail seed at all.

MRS. GREYES    I believe it's opium, and the bearded man is a detective.

MRS. LIPPING    I don't.  I'm sure it's something to do with the Portuguese Throne.

MISS FRITTEN     More likely to be a Persian intrigue on behalf of the ex-Shah.  The bearded man belongs to the Government Party. The quail-seed is a countersign, of course; Persia is almost next door to Palestine, and quails come into the Old Testament, you know.

GLORIA    [exasperated] Only as a miracle.  [knowing] I've thought all along it was part of a love intrigue.

MRS. LIPPING    I distinctly saw a snarl of baffled rage as the man departed, sandwiched between that heavy moustache and upturned astrakhan collar.

GLORIA    I can’t imagine that that boy is the guilty party here.  Much more likely he's simply perishing of love for someone - perhaps the daughter of the beard, but the match is quite unsuitable--

MISS FRITTEN    Honey and pomegranates - of course!!!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.    SCARRICK'S

SHOP, NIGHT, QUIET

SOUND    DOOR, BELL

JIMMY    [calling from off] Closed!

LUCY    I know, mutton head.

JIMMY    Oh, Lucy!

SOUND    BROOM DOWN, STEPS

LUCY    Another busy day?

JIMMY    The busiest.  Another day or two of brisk trade and we'll be--[cut off with a gasp]

SOUND    KISS

LUCY    [laughing] I was here today, you know.

JIMMY    [uneasy] Oh?

LUCY    [indulgent] You were quite the hero.  Hustling that poor young man off behind the biscuit tins in the very nick of time.

JIMMY    [flustered] Well, I've got a good view of the street from my post at the cheese and bacon counter.

LUCY    [pouty] Jimmy.  Have you EVER known me to gossip?

JIMMY    You, Lucy?  I don’t think so.

LUCY    Quite a vote of confidence.

JIMMY    I didn’t mean that-- [sigh] No.  No I've never known you to gossip.

LUCY    Let me in, then!  Perhaps there's something I can do to help?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 9.    PUB

SCARRICK    It was quite marvelous!  And we sold out of that blasted Halva.

MAN    It looked crowded, but they were actually buying?

SCARRICK     They bought and bought - some came back three or four times, just to have an excuse to linger. 

BOY    "Oh, I forgot" and "silly me, one more thing."

SCARRICK    Exactly.  Even those women whose purchases were of "modest proportions" dawdled over them as though they had, uh--

MAN    Brutal, drunken husbands to go home to?

SCARRICK    [chuckles] I've even had to take on a couple of extra assistants for tomorrow.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.    SCARRICK'S STORE - BUSY

MISS FRITTEN    What do you think?  Is this bowl anything like the one the young gentleman carries?

MRS. GREYES    Nonsense.  His is brass.  Or bronze, perhaps.  That one is copper.

MISS FRITTEN    Still, it's got a lovely patina.

MRS GORDON    Ducks?

SCARRICK    [distracted] Pardon?

MRS GORDON    Ducks?  I found a lovely recipe for Bombay duck, and I was wondering if a domestic duck would suffice.

SCARRICK    I suspect that ducks are much the same the world over-- [small gasp]

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, BELL

GENERAL EXPECTANT HUSH

SCARRICK    You'll excuse me.

SOUND    BOY'S FOOTSTEPS, SCARRICK MEETS HIM

MRS GORDON    oh!

SCARRICK    Sir? 

BOY    Yes?

SCARRICK    [overtly confidential]  I must warn you--

SOUND    [gasps]

SCARRICK    [as if saying something else] We have run out of quail seed.

BOY    [shocked and disappointed] Oh.  I should-- I must--

MRS GORDON    Oh no!

SOUND    SCUTTLING FEET

JIMMY    [excited]  We do have some much finer oranges today, if you want to step over here.

BOY    [dramatic gasp]

SOUND    BOY RUNS

SOUND    DOOR SLAMS OPEN, BELL

SOUND    OMINOUS FOOTSTEPS

MRS. GORDON     [voice over] I found my self sub-consciously repeating "The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold" under my breath.

MISS FRITTEN    [whispered] Watch the door!

SCARRICK    [very tense]  Ah.  Coffee again today sir?  Perhaps figs?

MAN    I am looking for--

LUCY    [in disguise, foreign sounding]  Jaffa oranges, I think.

MAN    What?

MRS GREYES    [voiceover] She slithered out of the aisle like the lady in the lake.

LUCY    Your Excellency does his shopping himself?

MAN    [suspicious] I order the things myself.  I find it difficult to make my servants understand.

MISS FRITTEN    [voiceover]  How ever did we miss a mysterious veiled lady, right in the midst of us all?

LUCY    I was saying... They have some excellent Jaffa oranges here.  [tinkling laugh]

SOUND    HER FEET TAP AWAY TO THE DOOR, BELL

MAN    [considering] Hmph. 

MRS. GORDON    [gasp]

MAN    You!

SCARRICK    [tense] Yes?

MAN    You have, perhaps, some good Jaffa oranges?

GLORIA    [voiceover] Everyone expected an instant denial on the part of Mr. Scarrick of any such possession, but before he could answer‑‑

BOY    No!

SOUND    RUNNING FEET, DOOR, BELL

MISS FRITTEN    [voiceover] Holding his empty brass bowl before him as he dashed into the street. His face was masked with studied indifference

SOUND    THE VOICEOVERS START TO FADE INTO TEA

 

SCENE 11.    TEA

MRS GREYES    Overspread with ghastly pallor!

MRS. LIPPING    I would call it blazing with defiance.

GLORIA    How defiant could he be!  He was so terrified that his teeth chattered!

MRS. GORDON    I distinctly heard him whistling the Persian National anthem.

MISS FRITTEN    But the bearded man - his face was a mask of abject terror!

MRS GREYES    I thought he would dash out after the boy, but he just paced to and fro like a caged animal seeking an outlet for escape.

GLORIA    He couldn't take his eyes off the door.

MRS GORDON    Did he ever come back for his purchases?  Or send his servant?

MISS FRITTEN    I've not had the nerve to ask Mr. Scarrick.  The whole thing was so ...  overwhelming.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.    SCARRICK'S STORE

LUCY    It was so overwhelming.  Trying not to laugh while watching all their faces.

JIMMY    [chuckles] You did a fabulous job.

LUCY    You like me in a veil?

JIMMY    I can think of a certain veil I'd like to see you in.

LUCY    [interested, pleased] Really?

JIMMY    Mm-hmm  [yes]

SOUND    KISS

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.    PUB

SCARRICK    I can never thank you fellows enough.

MAN    We enjoyed the fun of it.  [laughs, then  talks like beard]  And the figs.

BOY    It was a welcome vacation from posing for hours for 'The Lost Hylas'

MAN    You just have to sit still.  I'm the one who has to make you look good.

SCARRICK    What do I owe you?

MAN    No, no.  It was far too entertaining. 

BOY    We did get all those lovely pomegranates.

SCARRICK    At any rate... I insist on paying for the hire of the black beard.

 

THE END

 

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The fate of a favorite.

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From Black Cat Magazine in 1889

What could be better than clockwork staff who don't eat, complain, or revolt?  So, the programming's a little... off....

19 Nocturne Boulevard - THE WATER GHOST OF HARROWBY HALL - Reissue02 Dec 202100:38:24

From our Edwardian Entertainments collection, just in time for the winter holidays.

The Water Ghost of Harrowby Hall

A hereditary curse appears in a torrent of water every Christmas to the current heir.  How to stop this perennial wet blanket?

By John Kendrick Bangs, adapted by Julie Hoverson
Sound produced by Scott Pigg

Cast:
The GHOST - Gwendolyn Jensen-Woodard
Edward - Gareth Bowley
Leslie - Tansy Undercrypt
Father - John Lingard
Mother - Jennifer Dixon
The American - Julie Hoverson

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THE WATER GHOST OF HARROWBY HALL

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from the story by John Kendrick Bangs

[published in 1894]

Cast:

  • The GHOST
  • EDWARD Oglethorpe, the Young Master
  • LESLIE Widdrington, The Secretary
  • HENRY Oglethorpe, the father
  • LYDIA Oglethorpe, the mother
  • Christina, vapid American debutante

 

MUSIC - CHRISTMAS

 

SCENE 1.    BALLROOM

SOUND    FAIRLY SEDATE PARTY

CHRISTINA    [american] I'm terribly charmed to meet you!  I've never danced with a Lord before.  Makes me feel like a lady.

EDWARD    [chuckles]  You're lucky I'm also a gentleman - not every lord can claim that.

CHRISTINA    Oh, you!

EDWARD    You're in London with friends?

CHRISTINA    I'm a guest of the Harrisons.  Daddy thought a trip to England would be nice polish.  He's very impressed by nobilities.

EDWARD    I'm sure.

SOUND    CLOCK STARTS TO STRIKE TWELVE

CHRISTINA    Goodness, your parties go late over here.  I'm afraid you must think I'm terribly provincial.

EDWARD    Oh no.  Never.

SOUND    CLOCK FINISHES, SUDDEN DELUGE OF WATER, COVERS EVERYTHING.

CHRISTINA    [screaming!]  My dress!  Oh no!

SOUND    OTHER PEOPLE PROTESTING, RUNNING AWAY

EDWARD    [calm but shouting] Just clear out, everyone, please!

SOUND    DOORS SLAM, NO MORE RUNNING

GHOST    Oglethorpe.

EDWARD    [sigh]  Yes.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.    BALLROOM, DRIPPING WET

SOUND    KNOCK ON THE DOOR

LESLIE    Hello?

SOUND    WATER STILL DRIPPING ALL OVER

EDWARD    [glum] It's all over but the blotting.  Safe to come in.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, WOMAN WALKS IN

LESLIE    Oh, my.

EDWARD    [resigned] I'll take care of any repairs. 

LESLIE    Towel?  I also brought you a robe, but we haven't even been properly introduced yet.

EDWARD    Henry Oglethorpe.  [sigh]  Baron Harrowby, I suspect.

LESLIE    Leslie Widdrington.  Poor relation.

EDWARD    [chuckles, but not really amused] Huh.  I've just come into a great deal of money.

LESLIE    How's that?

EDWARD    My father must have died, or this would have happened to him. 

LESLIE    Ah.  [sympathetical understanding] Ancestral curse?

EDWARD    You're curiously sanguine about it.

LESLIE    [flippant] It's not my ballroom.  Come along, let's get you out of this damp.  Perhaps a hot bath would be in order?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.    CASTLE

LESLIE    [reading] "The trouble with Harrowby Hall is that it was haunted.  What was worse, the ghost did not content itself with merely appearing at the bedside of the afflicted person who saw it, but persisted in remaining there for one mortal hour before it would disappear."

EDWARD    My father had a flowery turn of phrase.

LESLIE    A style the suits the classic ghost story.  You're quite sure you don't mind?

EDWARD    I need to confide in someone, and he's already written it all down.  But you can skip past the part about it appearing only for an hour every Christmas at midnight.  I think we've established that.

LESLIE    You're lucky you didn't catch pneumonia.

EDWARD    I'm still undecided.  [coughs, but not seriously]  At least one good thing came from the deluge.

LESLIE    Oh?

EDWARD    I needed a secretary.

LESLIE    I suppose it pays to be intrepid, then. 

SOUND    PAGES FLIP

LESLIE    Ah.  [start here?] "The owners of Harrowby Hall had done their utmost--?"  

EDWARD    Sounds good.

LESLIE    "--their utmost to rid themselves of the damp and dewy lady who rose up out of the best bedroom floor at midnight, but without avail.  They had tried stopping the clock, so that the ghost would not know when it was midnight; but she made her appearance just the same, with that fearful miasmatic personality of hers, and there she would stand until everything about her was thoroughly saturated."

EDWARD    We've done absolutely everything.  Or tried to.  My own grandfather caulked up every crack in the floor, covered it with tarpaper - every conceivable kind of waterproofing was put into effect.  And yet--

LESLIE    But you weren't even in the tower room.

EDWARD    [sigh] It's all in the manuscript.

LESLIE    At least it will be another year until she makes an appearance.

EDWARD    There is a great deal to be said for predictability.

LESLIE    [reading dramatically] "The following Christmas eve she appeared as promptly as before, and frightened the occupant of the room--"

EDWARD    That wasn't even one of my forefathers.  Just an unfortunate guest. 

LESLIE    "Frightened him quite out of his senses by sitting down alongside of him and gazing with her cavernous blue eyes into his; and her long, aqueously bony fingers were entwined with bits of dripping seaweed - these ends she drew across his forehead until he became like one insane.

EDWARD    I believe he never recovered from the shock, or the damp, or perhaps the cold, and died several years later of pneumonia and nervous prostration.

LESLIE    Then comes a year they chose not to open the room at all.

EDWARD    "Let her haunt the room - she'll not haunt me!"  Father railed, or so I have been told.

LESLIE    Didn't work, though, did it?

EDWARD    [sigh]  No.  Apparently the room is only the primary target.  If there is no one present to receive her, the current lord will always have a visitor. 

LESLIE    Thus the monsoon in the ballroom?

EDWARD    [rueful]  Father didn't even tell me he was doing poorly.  [snappy again] A little warning would have been ... convenient.  I could have spent the night in the desert.

LESLIE    What do you plan to do?

EDWARD    Foil her.

LESLIE    How?

EDWARD    That I do not quite know... yet.  I need to go over father's manuscript with a fine tooth comb for any possible clues.  Anything can be overcome with the application of a modicum of logic.

LESLIE    Well, then.  Shall we get back to it?

EDWARD    Go back to the year father tried to simply ignore the ghost.  It seems she first appeared in the tower room, for the parlor below had a great damp spot on the ceiling.  But she didn't stay there.

LESLIE    [reading]  "She found me in my own cozy room drinking whiskey," undiluted, he notes, "and felicitating myself upon having foiled her ghostship, when all of a sudden the curl went out of my hair, the whiskey bottle filled and overflowed, and I found myself in a condition similar to that of a man who has fallen into a water-butt." [chuckles]

EDWARD    Father always did have a turn of phrase.  And a fondness for water-butts.  [dramatic] And there she stood.  The lady of the cavernous eyes and seaweed fingers.

LESLIE    "The sight was so unexpected and so terrifying that I fainted, but immediately came to, as the vast amount of chill water trickling down over my face restored my consciousness."

EDWARD    I like a good shower bath as much as the next person, but I do prefer it on the tropical side of tepid. 

LESLIE    [teasing] Hush. 

EDWARD    My father was a brave man, and not to be daunted.  Forced to face the ghost, he determined to discover some particulars.

LESLIE    "In an effort to warm myself, I approached the hearth, an unfortunate move as it turned out, because it brought the ghost directly over the fire, which immediately was extinguished."

EDWARD    So he faced her with all the bravado he could muster.

LESLIE    Sounds like he was chock a block with bravado.  At least the way he wrote it.

EDWARD    Let us hope it runs in the family.

LESLIE    [leading into flashback] He faced the ghost...

MUSIC SEGUE INTO FLASHBACK

SOUND    WATER DRIPPING and TRICKLING

HENRY    Far be it from me to be impolite to a woman, madam, but I'm hanged if it wouldn't please me better if you'd stop these infernal visits of yours to this house.  Go sit out on the lake, if you like that sort of thing; soak the water-butt, if you wish; but do not, I implore you, come into a gentleman's house and saturate him and his possessions in this way.  It is damned disagreeable.

GHOST    Henry Hartwick Oglethorpe.  That is a bit of specious nonsense.  You must know that I am compelled to haunt this place year after year by inexorable fate.  I never aspired to be a shower-bath, but it is my doom.  Do you know who I am?

HENRY    No, I do not. I should say you were the Lady of the Lake, or Little Sallie Waters.

GHOST    You are a witty man for your years.

HENRY    Well, my humor is drier than yours ever will be.

GHOST    No doubt - I am never dry.  I am the Water Ghost of Harrowby Hall, and dryness is a quality entirely beyond my wildest hope.  I have been the incumbent of this highly unpleasant office for two hundred years tonight.

HENRY    How the deuce did you ever come to get elected?

GHOST    [matter of fact]  Suicide.  I am the ghost of that fair maiden whose picture hangs over the mantelpiece in the drawing room.

LESLIE    [v.o.] That lovely early Georgian piece?  Or do I mean Jacobean?

EDWARD    [v.o.] Take down a memorandum - draw a mustache on her at the earliest opportunity.

GHOST    Had I lived, I should have been your great-great-great-great-great-aunt.

HENRY    But what induced you to get this house into such a predicament?

GHOST    It was my father's fault.  It was he who built Harrowby Hall, and the haunted chamber was to have been mine.  My father had it furnished in pink and yellow, knowing well that blue and gray formed the only combination of colours I could tolerate.

HENRY    And...?

GHOST     He did it merely to spite me, and I declined to live in the room.  Whereupon father said I could live there or on the lawn, he didn't care which.  That night I ran from the house and jumped over the cliff into the sea.

EDWARD    [v.o.] That was rash.

LESLIE    [v.o.] Dying over pink and yellow?  I should say so.  Green and orange, perhaps.

EDWARD    [v.o.] But only if one is Irish.

GHOST    Had I but known the consequences, I should not have jumped.

HENRY    A bit late for hindsight. 

GHOST    I had been drowned a week when I was informed it would be my doom to haunt Harrowby Hall.  

LESLIE    [v.o.] Informed?  Informed by whom? 

EDWARD    [v.o.] Hmm.  Never considered it.  The local union of apparations, phantoms and sundry visitations?

HENRY    I'll sell the place.

EDWARD    [v.o.] Sound thinking.

GHOST    That you cannot do, for it is also required of me that I shall appear to any purchaser, and divulge to him the awful secret of the house.

LESLIE    [v.o.] Snap! 

HENRY    Do you mean to tell me that on every Christmas eve you are going to haunt me wherever I may be, ruining my whiskey and extinguishing my fire?  And soaking me through to the skin?

GHOST    You have stated the case clearly, Oglethorpe.  And what is more - it doesn't make the slightest difference where you are.  If I find that room empty, wherever you may be I shall douse you with my spectral pres--

SOUND    CLOCK STRIKES ONE

LESLIE    [v.o.] "Here the clock struck one, and immediately the apparition faded away. It was perhaps more of a trickle than a fade, but as a disappearance it was complete"

HENRY    By St. George and his Dragon!  It is guineas to hot-cross buns that next Christmas there'll be an occupant of that room, or I shall spend the night in a bathtub!

EDWARD    [v.o. fading to normal]  He would have lost that bet.  That was last year, and this year, he passed away just in time to avoid the deluge.

LESLIE    And you didn't know, and we are now caught up to the present.

EDWARD    [sigh] But for the bill for the ballroom.  

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.    TEA

LYDIA    So glad you could accommodate me for tea, Edward.  I've not returned to society yet, and I'm getting sick to the teeth of a house covered in black crepe.

EDWARD    Ah.

LYDIA    Your father positively loathed black.

EDWARD    Ah.

LYDIA    And I loathe crepe.  I've developed quite a mental aversion to it.  I don't supposed a doctor could furnish me with some sort of prescription?

EDWARD    I doubt it.  Mourning is mourning, mother.  And you are hardly the only one inconvenienced by father's untimely demise.

LYDIA    [slightly amused] Ah, yes I heard.

EDWARD    You might have sent a wire or something. 

LYDIA    I was rather preoccupied.  So, now that you are the Baron, am I to expect the pitter-patter of little feet in the great hall any time soon?

EDWARD    I could get you some corgis.

LYDIA    Hush.  You know very well what I mean!  It is your responsibility to produce an heir and a spare, particularly now that you are effectively the last of the line.

EDWARD    Hmm...  [chuckle] It would be funny to find out who gets haunted, should I die early.

LYDIA    I should say not!

EDWARD    Anyway, after my very public unmasking as the bearer of an ancestral curse, there's hardly a family worth knowing that would want me as a graft to the family tree.

LYDIA    There's always some rich American.  they'll even pay extra for such a heritage!

EDWARD    [laughing ruefully] While an American won't bat an eye at a spectre or two, true - threaten them with a waterlogged poiret [pwah-RAY] or patou [pah-TOO], and they flee in panic, clutching their pocketbooks.

LYDIA    OH.  Yes, I see.

EDWARD    So I'm down to shop assistants and ladies who speak no English.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, LESLIE ENTERS BRISKLY

LESLIE    Here's your correspondence for the day-- oh.  I'm so dreadfully sorry.  I wasn't aware -- I don't have any engagements on your calendar for this afternoon.

EDWARD    Miss Widdrington, may I present my mother, the Dowager Baroness of Harrowby.  Mother, my new secretary. 

LYDIA    [a bit snotty] Charmed.

LESLIE    [overly subservient, almost goofy] I'll be in the study, then, sir, should you need me.  If I may excuse myself?

EDWARD    [equally over the top] Dismissed.

SOUND    LESLIE LEAVES

LYDIA    Who is she?

EDWARD    My secretary.

LYDIA    Widdrington.  Widdrington.  Any relation to the Haversham Widdringtons?

EDWARD    [offhanded] Poor relation.  Quite destitute.

LYDIA    [musing] Still.  She's got a good back.  Does she ride?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.    STUDY

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

LESLIE    So sorry about that--

EDWARD    You couldn't have known.

LESLIE    It's dreadfully easy to fall into old habits.

EDWARD    Old?

LESLIE    I wasn't always "how you see me now."  Impoverished.  I was polished at the finest schools, only to find that the family coffer had been tapped out to pay death duties and father's debts.  And that, as they say, was that.

EDWARD    At least you're not bitter.

LESLIE    Oh you should have heard me a year ago.  I would have blistered a sailor's ears.

EDWARD    And now?

LESLIE    [pleased] Now, I am employed. 

EDWARD    And you don't mind?

LESLIE    Well I'm also intrigued by your dilemma - most particularly because it's not my own.

EDWARD    [laughs]  

LESLIE    But today's problem is your social calander.

EDWARD    oh?  More cancellations?

LESLIE    Every dinner party, every engagement for the opera, every ball.

EDWARD    Everything that might possibly involve late nights, in other words.

LESLIE    Precisely.  But there are still afternoon teas, ascot, and a tentative engagement for croquet.

EDWARD    [sulky] Suddenly I'm an elderly uncle.

MUSIC - CHRISTMAS

 

SCENE 6.    NEXT YEAR

SOUND    DRIPPING

SOUND    STEAM HISS

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

LESLIE    Time?

EDWARD    [sigh]  Yes.

SOUND    HUGE SWOOSH OF WATER

EDWARD    [disgusted sigh]

LESLIE    I brought some heated towels.

EDWARD    I am par-broiled.  I'll need more than towels!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.    STUDY

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, FABRIC RUBS

LESLIE    Check off steam pipes.

EDWARD    Yes.  Just turned her from cold water to hot.  The Turkish baths for the past month seem to have helped a bit, but on the whole, it was‑‑ [searching for the right word]

LESLIE    [teasing] A washout?

EDWARD    Oh, please don’t.

LESLIE    [apologetic] Sorry.  I thought that since steam-pipes could lie hundreds of feet deep in water, and still retain sufficient heat to drive the water away in vapor, they might‑‑

EDWARD    [cutting her off] It was a good sight better than any of my ideas.   Trying to evaporate the ghost into steam.

LESLIE    Now you have a year to plan.  Again.

EDWARD    I don't know.  I doubt my health can take another such night.  And the room is destroyed.  Again.  Anything not simply soaked through has been cracked and warped to an extent that I've no doubt it will break me to repair.

LESLIE    Heat can do terrible things.  Tea.

SOUND    POURS

EDWARD    [sips]  Worst of all, as the last drop of the water ghost was slowly sizzling itself out on the floor, she whispered that this scheme would avail me nothing, because--

GHOST    There is always water in great plenty where I come from, and next year will find me rehabilitated and as exasperatingly saturating as ever.

EDWARD    She will always be wet.  So I must somehow be dry...

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.    CASTLE

SOUND    TEA

SOUND    CONSTRUCTION [OFF]

MOTHER    Must they be so loud?

EDWARD    At least I can tell they're working. 

MOTHER    So it happened again?

EDWARD    You can't be surprised.  You had to go through it, didn't you?  With father?

MOTHER    Oh, no.  No, I didn't even know about it for quite years.

EDWARD    How the devil?

MOTHER    Language.

EDWARD    I'll devil as I please, until I get what I want.

MOTHER    When your father inherited the title - after his father died of pneumonia, as I recall.

EDWARD    [sarcasm] Imagine.

MOTHER    Hush.  It was in the spring, and Henry somehow managed to pick a dreadful quarrel with me - something that sent me flying home to mother for the holidays.

EDWARD    Truly?  That was clever.

MOTHER    And I believe there was a year where he had to take a business trip.

EDWARD    to the tropics, by any chance?

MOTHER    May very well have been.  I believe I spent the holidays with my sister, in town.

EDWARD    And he kept this up for years and years?

MOTHER    Well you were away at school for much of this. 

EDWARD    No wonder he never had me home for the winter holidays.  I was rather bereft at the time.

MOTHER    We sent presents.

EDWARD    Much appreciated, but--

MOTHER    So - what are you doing about this?

EDWARD    I tried steam pipes. 

SOUND    CRASH

EDWARD    That's what they are engaged in repairing upstairs at the moment, and--

MOTHER    Not that!  What are you doing about providing me with a brace of grandchildren to brighten my declining years?

EDWARD    Oh, that.  [sigh]

MUSIC

 

 

SCENE 9.    STUDY

SOUND    TEARING PAPER - letter opening.

LESLIE    Hmm.  Catalog of some sort?  [gasp, the laughing a bit]  oh-ho.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

EDWARD    What's the joke?

LESLIE    [arch] A catalog of gentlemen's garments?

EDWARD    Hmm?

LESLIE    In the finest quality india rubber?

EDWARD    Oh that!  Uhhhhh... It's not what you--

LESLIE    I would assume they're for waterproofing, except that many of them seem to be ... excised in certain locations.

EDWARD    Skip to the back.  They assured me there would be more... complete... units.

SOUND    PAGES FLIP

LESLIE    Ah.  So you're thinking--?

EDWARD    If I can't keep the room dry, at least I might be able to keep my person insulated.

LESLIE    If you were to wear one of these over something in wool, perhaps?

EDWARD    Mm.  I would start to look like a child in swaddling.

LESLIE    Better swaddled than soaked.

EDWARD    True.

LESLIE    And it would be warm, even if wet. 

EDWARD    Wouldn't want to get cold.  I might -- [idea]  oh!

LESLIE    Oh?

EDWARD    I've got it!

LESLIE    Do tell?

EDWARD    Order me one of those - a size bigger than my suits, and in their thickest rubber.  Then another two sizes larger.

LESLIE    Why?

EDWARD    I'll let you guess.  I must go and consult a furrier.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.    MONTAGE - PHONE CALLS

LESLIE    That sounds like it will precisely fill the bill.  And everything is reinforced with asbestos?  Very good.

EDWARD    You have the address to ship to?  Excellent.  I realize it will take a prodigious amount of power to maintain.  If necessary, I shall buy the power company!  

LESLIE    Woolens.  Two sizes larger than I had originally inquired.  Yes - the warmest you have.  Oh, no, he likes it thick.

EDWARD    No, no, the first set was quite satisfactory.  [annoyed] Please place my order and refrain from further comment on my proclivities!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 11.    DRESSING ROOM

SOUND    CHRISTMAS CAROLS PLAY LIGHTLY IN THE BACKGROUND

SOUNDS    RUBBERY SQUEAKS AND RUSTLES AS SHE DRESSES HIM.

EDWARD    I've come to hate that music.

LESLIE    This may be the last time it calls to mind such misfortunes.  I've stitched the wool together at the waist.  Too bad your valet can be no help.

EDWARD    He demanded this week off.  No wish to be anywhere in the entire country when the ghost arrives.

LESLIE    Some people simply do not pay attention.  The ghost only makes a bother in a given vicinity for a given time.

EDWARD    Logic has nothing to do with superstitious fear.  Let's see if the second rubber suit will go on.

LESLIE    I've brought talc.

EDWARD    You plan for everything, don't you?

LESLIE    That's why you keep me around, though I must say you are the master planner here.  Fur, then rubber, then wool, and rubber again - she shan't be able to get a drop of her icy dampness near you!

EDWARD    No, indeed.  Have you noticed, is it still snowing?

LESLIE    There are great drifts on the windward side of the house, though the wind has died away.

EDWARD    Excellent.

LESLIE    When this is all over, you can focus on finding yourself a bride and satisfying your poor mother.

EDWARD    [musing] Yes.

LESLIE    Now the diving helmet. 

SOUND    LARGE METAL PICKED UP

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.    MUD ROOM / PORCH

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, HEAVY SQUEAKY RUBBER NOISES ENTER

SOUND    CLOCK CHIMES TWELVE, DOOR SHUT IN THE MIDDLE OF IT

SOUND    CAREFULLY SITTING DOWN

EDWARD    [slightly canned throughout - in his diving helmet] Oh... that's a bit tight.

SOUND    SQUEAK AS HE ADJUSTS

EDWARD    [hums a bit]

SOUND    BANGING OF DOORS, WIND, SPLASH

EDWARD    Right on time.

GHOST    Greetings.  You must know you cannot avoid me by hiding here in - in - what is this room, anyway?

EDWARD    It is called a mud room, and I'm not hiding.  In fact, I'm glad to see you.

GHOST    You are the most original man I've met, if that is true.  And what an odd hat!

EDWARD    It is a little portable observatory I had made for just such engagements as this.

SOUND    CLUNK ON HELMET

EDWARD    Is it true that you are doomed to follow me for one mortal hour -- to stand where I stand, to sit where I sit?

GHOST    That is my detestable fate.

EDWARD    Let's go for a walk, then.

GHOST    You cannot get rid of me that way!  My water does not wear out with movement of any sort.  I will merely damage more of your home.

EDWARD    Then we will not walk through the house.  Come along.

SOUND    SQUEAKING, FOOTSTEPS

SOUND    DRIPPING SQUISHES FOLLOW

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, SNOWSTORM, FEET INTO SNOW

 

SCENE 13.    OUTSIDE

SOUND    XMAS MUSIC NEARBY FROM INSIDE

GHOST    But, my dear sir!  It is fearfully cold out there!  You shall be frozen hard before you've been out ten minutes.

EDWARD    Not I!  I am very warmly dressed. Come along!

SOUND    SNOWSTORM GETS LOUDER TO SHOW TIME

SOUND    MUSIC IS FARTHER AWAY

GHOST    Oh sir!  You walk too slowly!  I am nearly frozen.

EDWARD    Is that so.  Hmm.

GHOST    My knees are so stiff now I can hardly move. I beseech you to accelerate your step.

EDWARD    I should like to oblige a lady, but my clothes are rather heavy, and a hundred yards an hour is about my top speed. Indeed, I think we would better sit down here on this snowdrift and talk matters over.

GHOST    Do not! Do not do so, I beg!  Let us move along.  I feel myself growing rigid as it is. If we stop here, I shall be frozen stiff.

EDWARD    [chuckles] That, madam, is precisely why I have brought you here. We have been on this spot just ten minutes; we have fifty more before your hour ends. Take your time about it, madam, but freeze, that is all I ask of you.

GHOST    I cannot move my right leg now!  And my overskirt is a solid sheet of ice. Oh, good, kind Mr. Oglethorpe, light a fire, and let me go free from these icy fetters.

EDWARD    Never, madam. I have you at last, and I plan to keep you!

GHOST    Alas!  Help me, I beg. I congeal!

EDWARD    Congeal, madam, congeal!  You have drenched me and mine for over two hundred years, madam. Tonight you have had your last drench.

GHOST    Ah, but I shall thaw out again, and then you'll see. Instead of the comfortably tepid, genial ghost I have been in my past, sir, I shall be iced water!

EDWARD    No, you won't, either!  For when you are frozen quite stiff, I shall send you to a cold-storage warehouse, and there you shall remain an icy work of art forever more.

GHOST    But warehouses burn.

EDWARD    So they do, but this warehouse cannot burn.  It is made of asbestos and surrounding it are fireproof walls.

GHOST    For the last time let me beseech you. I would go on my knees to you, Oglethorpe, were they not already frozen. [freezing up] I beg of you do not doom me--

SOUND    DISTANT CLOCK STRIKES ONE

SOUND    CRACKLE OF ICE

SOUND    WIND RISES

EDWARD    I do feel for you, miss.  But I feel for myself more.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.    STUDY

SOUND    PHONE HUNG UP

LESLIE    Delivery was made, and all is well.  The room has been sealed, and that, as they say, is that.

EDWARD    I'm almost at a loss.

LESLIE    What?  Why?

EDWARD    If you have an obstacle for such a long time, then it is gone, what can be left?

LESLIE    Your mother still wishes for grandchildren.

EDWARD    Now that "all good families" will have me over again?

LESLIE    You are now not only rich and titled and eligible, you are also known to have single-handedly defeated an ancestral ghost.  You are quite the talk of the town.  Parents will be lining up to introduce their marriageable daughters to you.

EDWARD    I think I can save them the trouble.

LESLIE    What do you mean?

EDWARD    There is something very alluring about a person who will stand by you through thick and thin.

LESLIE    [oblivious] You're still upset that they wouldn't have anything to do with you while you were haunted?

EDWARD    I shan't pay any mind to what they did.  Just what you did.

LESLIE    Pardon?

EDWARD    [teasing] Are you not interested in being the mistress of Harrowby Hall?  There is an opening in that position.

LESLIE    [startled] Me?  Marry you?

EDWARD    If not you, my next best option is to thaw out the ghost and make an honest woman of her.  I'm reasonably certain we're far enough removed that it would be legal.

LESLIE    You're quite serious?  About me, not her.

EDWARD    Of course.  About you, not her.

LESLIE    Of course!

CLOSER

END

 

Atomic Julie - The Non-Electronic Bug by E. Mittleman30 Nov 202100:19:32

Rigging a card game is tricky, but rigging someone's thoughts?

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Sometimes an advance takes a long long time...

19 Nocturne Boulevard - DRAWER 23 - Reissue20 Nov 202100:34:09

Tim might expect to see corpses, working graveyard
in the morgue, but never expected one that could talk...  

Cast List
Timothy Grant - Jasper Loovis
Bedelia Crane - Emmatrice Devan
Gordy - George Dunn
Darcy - Megan Lane
Halston - Gene Thorkildsen
Sophia - Julie Hoverson
Mr. Summerfield - Bryan Hendrickson
Male Body - Reynaud LeBoeuf
Security Guard - Sky Iolta

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Recorded with the assistance of Ryan Hirst of Neohoodoo Studio
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Design:  Brett Coulstock

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's a morgue - can't you tell?"

 

*********************************************************

DRAWER 23

Cast:

  • Olivia, host
  • Timothy Grant (M20s), temp. night shift at morgue
  • Sophia (F30s), who Tim is replacing
  • Gordy (M20s), the go-to guy
  • Darcy (F20s), med student
  • Halston (M40s), swing shift attendant
  • Bedelia Crane (F40-ish), ghost, southern belle from the 1920s
  • MALE BODY - Bedelia, but with a man's voice
  • Summerfield (M50s), tough boss
  • Security guard (any)

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a morgue, can't you tell?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 1.    MORGUE, NIGHT

SOUND    WHOOSH OF HYDRAULIC DOORS OPENING

SOPHIA    And THIS--

TIM    --Got it.  I watch CSI.

SOPHIA    On this shift, you won't usually have to deal with the - well, everyday ins and outs, but there are times when somebody has to get in here right away, so you need to know the check-in procedures.

TIM    Oh, sure. 

SOPHIA    Is this your first time dealing with cadavers?

TIM    Mm, yeah, but I--

SOPHIA    Try not to faint when you smell them.  The cold helps, but I have some mentholatum if you need it--

TIM    Oh, yeah, I saw Silence of the Lambs.

SOPHIA    [sigh, then muttered]  And you plan to be a doctor...?

TIM    Hmm?

SOPHIA    If you, or anyone else, does faint, and sustains any appreciable injury, you must fill out a form 5-C-H dash 2-1-7 dash 62.

TIM    There's a form for it?

SOPHIA    There's insurance for it.  Did you ever see Quincy?

TIM    Quincy Jones?

SOPHIA    [Sigh] A television show.  In the opening credits - never mind. 

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

SOPHIA    There are 30 drawers.  You always fill the top row first, followed by the next down, and the floor level ones last of all.

TIM    30?  I never thought that Cumberland Pass would--

SOPHIA    We really don't.  I've only seen all the drawers filled once - after that really bad fire.  Well, all the drawers but one.

TIM    [waits, then] One?

SOPHIA    [sighs, somewhat embarrassed]  This one.  Twenty-three.  It's... tsk... It's supposed to be haunted.

TIM    I guess it's the right place for a--

SOPHIA    I don't really believe it, but everybody else does.  No one will put a body in that drawer.  And me, I figure - why take a chance?

TIM    I-- I'm not getting it.  So there's a ghost and you don't want to put a body in the drawer why...?  Because it'll get scared?

SOPHIA    For 12 years, I have not seen anything to be scared of.  I haven't heard anything but stories. 

TIM    [eager] Tell me!

SOPHIA    Timothy, most people find working third shift hard enough without having ghost stories to freak out over.  Just do the three months and when I get back, I promise you I will tell you everything I know.

TIM    What if you decide not to come back?

SOPHIA    Oh, please!  Once this munchkin arrives, I'll be desperate to get back to my wonderful peaceful nights here.  Dale swears up and down she's ready to lose sleep for the both of us.

TIM    Kids take a lot of time.

SOPHIA    [teasing] Don't get your hopes up - they take a lot of cash too, and I'm not about to give up my health benefits.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.    CAFETERIA

GORDY    [coming on]  Hey pal!  I heard you got graveyard shift in the land of the dead!

TIM    Yeah, Sophia's been showing me the ropes.  Seems easy.  Clean this, lock that, don't take pictures of dead celebrities, make sure no one gets in without proper authorization.

GORDY    Did she tell you about the ghosts?

TIM    More than one?  I mean, she mentioned [snickers] a haunted drawer in the cool room, but--

GORDY    Hmm.  Never heard THAT one, but there are supposed to be a bunch of--

DARCY    [coming on]  This seat taken?  [sits without waiting]  Hey, Tim!  [less enthused] Gordy.

GORDY    The lovely Lady Darcy. 

TIM    Hey Darce. 

GORDY    Deigning to sit among the common folk?  What will the world come to?

TIM    Gordy was just telling me--

GORDY    Warning you.  About the ghosts.  In the morgue.

DARCY    That's ridiculous. 

GORDY    Huh?  And I suppose you know everything about--

DARCY    I don't know anything about the morgue, but I do have a smattering of supernatural lore‑‑

GORDY    I suppose someone's got to watch Ghosthunters.

DARCY    AND it is absolutely accepted common belief that a ghost haunts the place it DIED, not the place its body went later. 

TIM    Maybe someone ... died in the morgue. [shudder]

GORDY    "Accepted common belief"?  That's about as nebulous as "according to statistics."

DARCY    The O.R., now.  Or the Burn Ward.  That's where you'd find ghosts.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.    MORGUE, NIGHT

SOUND    HYDRAULIC DOOR OPENS

TIM    Hello?  Hello?  Hello?

HALSTON    [off]  Just a moment!

SOUND    HYDRAULIC DOOR CLOSES

SOUND    PAPERS RUSTLE

TIM    [muttering to self]  Checklist, check.  Clipboard - no scheduled arrivals, check.

HALSTON    [coming on]  Yeah? 

TIM    I'm Timothy Grant--

HALSTON    Oh, yeah.  Soph's gone off to spawn?

TIM    She went into labor this morning, so I get to start early--

HALSTON    Don't worry.  Piece of cake job.  Could be done by a monkey, only monkeys won't work for this pay.

TIM    [chuckles]  Seems fine to me.

HALSTON    Yeah, well, you don't have the monkeys' union.  You need anything before I take off?  Any last questions?

TIM    I don't think so - Sophia left me a pretty comprehensive set of notes.

HALSTON    Not surprising - she's so damn organized, that kid won't stand a chance.  Well, don't you go slacking off and make her clean up your messes when she gets back.  It'll be bad enough when all the construction starts, [shrugs] but she's always happiest telling people what to do.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS START TO LEAVE, DOOR OPENS

TIM    Oh, I did--

HALSTON    [pause] What?

TIM    Oh, [embarrassed] someone was telling me about a... well, a ghost.  In one of the body drawers.

HALSTON    And?

TIM    What do you think?  I'm dying of curiosity. 

HALSTON    You ain't the ghoulish type, are you Tim?

TIM    I - I don't think so.

HALSTON    [thinks, then sighs]  The guy who used to do nights, before Sophia took over, swore that there was ghost in drawer 23.  He said the guy before him told him about it, but that no one really knew any details, like who or what it was, just that--

TIM    Yes?

HALSTON    Shit.  This is just one of those "you can't win" things.  No matter what I say now, chances are you're gonna do something stupid.

TIM    Maybe not.  I mean, I'll try--

HALSTON    Just don't blame me.  So Fred - the guy who told me this - Fred said that one night he DID put a body into 23.  And nothing happened.

TIM    [deflated]  Oh.

HALSTON    Until midnight.  Then the corpse woke up and screamed.  It screamed and scratched at the drawer for just about an hour--

TIM    The witching hour--

HALSTON    Whatever - around one, it just shut off like a light. 

TIM    Maybe the poor stiff was still alive!  Why didn't he open the drawer and check?

HALSTON    [beat, ominous]  Because the body was already autopsied.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.    DAY, SCHOOL

SOUND    QUICK FOOTSTEPS IN A TILED HALLWAY

TIM    [off mike, slightly out of breath]  Hey!  Darcy?

DARCY    Huh?  Tim?  What...?

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS APPROACH AND STOP

TIM    Hey.  I- um, I wanted to ask--

DARCY    [excited]  Yes?

TIM    --about ghosts.

DARCY    [deflated]  Oh.  Why?

TIM    It's the stories - you know about the ghosts in the morgue.  And you seemed to know a lot.  I mean, about ghosts.  So-- I figured what the heck?

DARCY    This is really not the place--

TIM    Step outside?  Just for a moment.  I just got off shift and need some fresh air, anyway.

 

SCENE 5.    OUTDOORS, CONTINUOUS

SOUND    DOOR OPENS.  MORNING NOISES - BIRDS, CARS

DARCY    [takes a deep breath]  So.  Ghosts.

TIM    Anything you can tell me.

DARCY    That's like asking a gearhead about cars.  It covers way too much territory.  You need to be more specific.

TIM    How do you ...talk to them?

DARCY    Depends.  Some ghosts can't talk.  A lot of them don't even realize they're dead - they say it's the trauma.  They wipe their death right out of their memories, and then get mad because people are ignoring them.

TIM    Do you ...need a medium or something?

DARCY    Do you need a doctor to know when you have a cold?

TIM    What?

DARCY    I'm saying that without some detail about your symptoms, you won't know whether to consult an expert.

TIM    Oh, Ok.

DARCY    I approach ghosts from a theoretical and psychological angle. 

TIM    Very scientific.

DARCY    So?  Bring me some parameters.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 6.    MORGUE, NIGHT

SOUND    BIG DRAWER ROLLS OUT

TIM    I wonder if it has to be pushed in?

GORDY    [filter, crackly] Dude, you're breaking up - the morgue sucks for reception.

TIM    [snicker] A dead zone.

GORDY    [filter, crackly] Ha-ha.

TIM    So I got this guy...  [muttered, to corpse] Sorry, man.  [to Gordy]  I wonder if it needs to be rolled in?

GORDY    [filter, crackly] Did you remember to tie it up?

TIM    [resigned] Yes.

GORDY    [filter, crackly, fading]  You'll thank me if this is a flesh eating zombie situation.

TIM    In, I think.

SOUND    DRAWER ROLLS IN

TIM    10, 9, 8--

GORDY    [filter, crackly, fading badly] 7--[static] 5--

TIM    4, 3, 2...

SOUND    PHONE BEEPS OFF

TIM    Crap! 

SOUND    MUFFLED SCREAMING ["MALE BODY"] AND BANGING - CONTINUES UNTIL NOTED

MALE BODY    [light accent - very southern belle] LET ME OUT!

TIM    [almost paralyzed]  Oh, shit!  Oh, shit oh shit oh shit!!!

MALE BODY    PLEASE!!!  LET ME OUT!!!

SOUND    DIALING PHONE

TIM    Gordy, man!

SOUND    PHONE BAD CONNECTION SOUND

TIM    Shit!

MALE BODY    [Screaming incoherently]

TIM    [yelling] If I open the drawer, will you shut up?

MALE BODY    [suddenly silent, then] Is there someone out there?

TIM    Yes.  Just, be calm, OK?

MALE BODY    I'll try.

SOUND    DRAWER ROLLED OUT

TIM    [reacts in fear]

MALE BODY    Thank you ever so much!  I was afraid--  I-- Why on earth am I bound?  [clears throat, tries to speak higher pitch] And what in heaven's name has happened to my voice?

MALE BODY    I think somehow there is a great deal you are choosing not to tell me.

TIM    You're right, but--- this isn't going to be easy.  First, who are you?  Do you remember?

MALE BODY    Remember?  Of course.  Bedelia Crane.  Miss Bedelia to my students.  And yourself?

TIM    Um, Tim.  Timothy Grant. 

MALE BODY    Grant.  Well, there's a name for you.

TIM    And -- what year do you think it is?

MALE BODY    1932.  Now it's your turn.  Why don't you begin by telling me what it is you are keeping back.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.    EMPTY CAFETERIA

SOUND    STRAW POPS MILK CARTON

GORDY    One advantage of working nights - we have our choice of tables. 

TIM    Yup.

GORDY    So, do I have to beat it out of you?

TIM    What?

GORDY    What happened?

TIM    Oh.  [lightly] Body came to life, killed me, went off on a rampage.

GORDY    Right, and even now, it is heading for the nation's capital, in search of brains.

TIM     Wrong direction.

GORDY    Well, that's because I was employing sarcasm.  It's a tool of the trade for oncologists.

TIM    [beat, shrug] Nothing.

GORDY    Nothing?

TIM    Nope.

GORDY    Well. Guess I better cancel that Ghostbuster stripper I hired. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.    OUTSIDE, DAY

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS ON CONCRETE, SECOND SET HURRY UP

TIM    Darcy!  Got a minute?

DARCY    Hi! [damping her enthusiasm] Tim.

TIM    I have some more info on the ghost.

DARCY    You're serious?

TIM     Oh, yeah.  I talked to her last night.  Asked a bunch of questions - it was weird cause I didn't know she was a SHE, and I'd stuck in a man's body, but--

DARCY    Tim?

TIM    Yes?

DARCY    You're telling me you spoke to a ghost?

TIM    Yes.

DARCY    A real live ghost?

TIM    Apart from the poor choice of words, yes.

DARCY    Are you sure you didn't just fall asleep?

TIM    [not too sure] Pretty sure.

DARCY    [sigh] I mean, I want to believe you, but - actually speaking to a ghost?  Most people "feel a presence," or notice items have been moved a teensy bit from their previous position, or run into a cold spot. 

TIM    Nope.  We just chatted - once I explained how things were, she seemed mostly OK with it.  I guess no one ever just talked with her before.

DARCY    [thinks for a moment, then]  You need to video this or something.

TIM    Don't you even want to know who she is?  I was kind of hoping you could help me look up her records... [running out of steam] Being in records, and all.

DARCY    Oh sure.  Once I see your recording.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 9.    MORGUE, NIGHT

SOUND     DRAWER ROLLS OUT

TIM    Is this one better?

BEDELIA    [delighted]  Oh, much.  I almost feel like myself again.  Though of course, I am not.

TIM    You're taking it very well.

BEDELIA    I have always prided myself on being a practical woman.  There is no use in shedding tears over what cannot be changed.  [losing confidence] I do, however, worry some little about what's to become of me.

TIM    I have some questions for you.  Are you up to answering?

BEDELIA    Certainly.  And, Timothy?  Thank you so very much.  For everything.  Particularly for providing me with ... garments.  I know it's ludicrous to be modest with another's--

TIM    No, no.  Perfectly reasonable.  I'm curious‑‑

BEDELIA     Could you help me out first?  I would prefer to hold any such interview in a less horizontal position.

SOUND    DRAWER OUT A BIT MORE

TIM & BEDELIA    [grunts as he helps her up]

SOUND    SEVERAL BARE FOOTSTEPS

BEDELIA    [sighs as she sits] Timothy, was this poor girl deformed?

TIM    Huh?

BEDELIA    I can barely keep my balance and walk with such a monstrous bosom.  Poor, poor child. 

TIM    It's--  Um - guys like girls who--

BEDELIA    How times change.  Now in my day - well, my heyday, shall we say - the style was a more delicate, and slender figure.  Athletic.  A girl like this would have cried her eyes out every night and bound herself to kingdom come, trying to achieve a decent flapper slouch.

TIM    [shudder] Uhh.

BEDELIA    Of, course, I was hardly a flapper - I was a bit old to run with that crowd, [nostalgic] but I spent my share of time in the speaks.  Weekends only, o'course.  It would never do to show up hung at the schoolhouse of a morning.

TIM    Can I ask - I mean without offending you - when you were born?

BEDELIA    Oh, Timothy.  You are a delight.  I'm dead, child, how can you offend me? 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.    MEETING DARCY

SOUND    [On RECORDING] OUTSIDE NOISES

BEDELIA    [on recording]  I was born in the year 1891, in Rock Creek, Georgia.  I came here in--

SOUND    CLICK - TAPE MACHINE OFF

DARCY    [sucks in breath, exasperated noise]  But--  but that could be anyone.

TIM    Yeah, I figured you might think that, so here--

SOUND    CLICKING OF COMPUTER KEYS

DARCY    [gasp]

TIM    Sorry, it's the only way to prove - see the time code - this was 11:50, and then this--

SOUND    CLICKING

TIM    Was 1:08.  There.  Before and after shots of the same woman - dead.  Autopsy scars and all.

DARCY    Still...

TIM    You could come and see for yourself.  You can even choose the body--

DARCY    I -- no.  I mean, I'm in records for a reason.  I don't like ...the smelly parts of medicine.

TIM     All right, so--

GORDY    [coming on]  Hey, hey!  Darcy, are you warm in here, or is it just me?

DARCY    Is it funny in here, or is it just the way you smell?

TIM     Um--

DARCY    I've got to go, Tim.  If I think of anything, I'll let you know.

TIM     Um, Ok. 

SOUND    CHAIR, FOOTSTEPS LEAVE

GORDY    Since the ghost in the drawer was a bust--

TIM    [snort - almost a laugh]

GORDY    --I did a little digging in old newspapers and I found you another one.

TIM    Really?  In the morgue too?

GORDY    Yup.  There was this freshman at the medical school, who for a hazing had to spend the night in the morgue - to make sure he didn't cheat, the frat boys handcuffed him to one of the drawers

TIM    Number 23?

GORDY    Dude, no one was sober enough to count.  Anyway, so this poor newbie was handcuffed, in his underwear, in the morgue all night, and when they came to let him out--

TIM    [waits, then]  --Yes?

GORDY    He was gone.

TIM    Oh.

GORDY    Wait, wait - He was gone, but his hand was still in the handcuff - he had chewed it off to escape!

TIM    That's insane -you can't chew through bone.

GORDY    Animals do it.

TIM    Animals have teeth made for it.  Humans simply don't have the jaw strength--

GORDY    Dude, it's just a story.  I guess you don't want to hear the best part.

TIM    [long sigh, then]  OK, what is it?

GORDY    [offhand, not caring] His body was never found.

TIM    Mm.  Of course.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 11.    MORGUE, NIGHT

SOUND    DRAWER PULLS OUT

TIM    Morning.

BEDELIA    [chuckle]  Help me out of here, if you please.

TIM    Up you come. [grunt]

BEDELIA    [sigh] Oh, this is very nice.

TIM    You like?

BEDELIA    Yes.  A good deal closer my own age, and not bad looking. 

TIM    I was telling a friend about you--

BEDELIA    [curious] But why?  I mean, you start telling people that you're speaking with the dead, they're liable to look at you strangely.

TIM    Oh, no - Darcy's cool. I asked if she wanted to drop in, but she's - a bit creeped out.

BEDELIA    You have the most colorful colloquialisms.

TIM    It's not the ghosts that wig her, it's more the corpses.

BEDELIA    "wig"?

TIM    Bother her.

BEDELIA    Ahh.  I don't wonder - not everyone can take a spirit at face value.

TIM    Come, sit.  I'm eating lunch - I don't suppose you would like some...?

BEDELIA    I highly doubt it.  But it certainly smells delicious. 

TIM    [gracious] Smell away.

BEDELIA    Tell me about this lady friend of yours.  Is it serious?

TIM    [almost choking]  You mean like dating?  Me and Darcy?

BEDELIA    Of course we called it courting in my day, but yes - is she your intended?

TIM    I-- we-- I guess I never really thought about it.  I mean, she's smart and pretty and all, but she--  [snort] She'd never be interested in me.

BEDELIA    Why not?  After all, you're obviously smart, kindhearted, and a fine-looking young man.

TIM    [huh?] Me?

BEDELIA    Of course.  Is there anyone else in this room?  Why, if I weren't a couple decades too old for you--

TIM    --and dead--

BEDELIA    --and, yes-- [sigh] You see there?  Perhaps that's why you haven't any lady friend.  You don't seem to think before you open your mouth. 

TIM    But - I just - it's the truth.

BEDELIA    You are much too literal, Timothy.  Sometimes - most of the time - tact isn't in what you say, so much as when you choose to say nothing at all.  You would be amazed at how far a little tact and charm can take you.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, ANGRY FOOTSTEPS ENTER

SUMMERFIELD    What in hell's going on?

TIM    I--I--

BEDELIA    [sharp]  Sir?  And who the devil are you?

TIM    [whispered] It's my boss.

SUMMERFIELD    Yeah, I'm his boss, he's my soon to fired employee, and who the devil are you?

BEDELIA    [sweetness] I am Timothy's aunt, Bedelia Crane.  I am so pleased to meet one of Timothy's co-workers.  I didn't think I'd have such a chance--

SUMMERFIELD    This is a restricted area, lady.

BEDELIA    [as if he was being polite] Oh, you can call me Bedelia.  And you are--?

SUMMERFIELD    [rapidly losing steam] Alvin Summerfield, but--

BEDELIA    I'm afraid this is all my fault, Mr. Summerfield.  Or may I call you Alvin?

SUMMERFIELD    [softening noticeably] Alvin--Alvin's fine.  Or Al.

BEDELIA    [troweling it on] Alvin is much more dignified.  As I was saying, this is entirely my fault.  I'm afraid I dropped in without the least warning - I'm only in town for a couple of hours, before my bus leaves again - and I came by with lunch to surprise him.  I'm afraid Timothy just didn't have the heart to send his poor old aunt back out into the night, when we never get to see each other, ever, ever.

TIM    Yeah.

SUMMERFIELD    Well, I really can't let you stay, ma'am, but I... I understand.  I won't write Tim up.  This time.  May I walk you to your car?

BEDELIA    I'm parked quite some ways away, and couldn't possibly take you away from your business here for that long - but I would certainly appreciate an escort out of the building--

SOUND    TAKES HIS ARM, THEY WALK OFF

BEDELIA    [fading out]  --I got myself terribly lost, trying to find my way in.  But then, it is a fascinating place!

SOUND    DOOR STARTS TO SWING SHUT, RUNNING FOOTSTEPS, DOOR SWINGS OPEN AGAIN

TIM    Don't forget the time, aunt Bedelia! 

BEDELIA    Oh?

TIM    You've only got [checks] uh, 43 minutes.  Until you gotta be where you have to be.

BEDELIA    I understand!  [fading again] Such a good boy - wants to make sure I don't get left behind somewhere--

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.    MORGUE, NIGHT, LATER

SOUND    PACING

TIM    12:49.  Where the heck is she?  I need to get that body back--

SOUND    CELL PHONE RINGS

TIM    [startled] Aah! 

SOUND    FUMBLES WITH PHONE, THEN TURNS IT ON

TIM    H-hello?

GORDY    [on phone]  [spooooky voice] Whooo-ooooo.  This is your wake-up ghost. 

TIM    Gordy?

GORDY    [on phone]  No, it's Mabel fable, put the money back on the table.

TIM    Gordy!

GORDY    [on phone]  Ok, ok!  Jeez, don't get your shroud in a bunch. 

TIM    Is there a point--?

GORDY    [on phone]  Yeah.  I was googling the morgue and stuff, and realized that one reason I didn't find much was that the hospital changed its name in the 1970s.  Once I found that, I uncovered a bunch of stuff.

TIM    In the middle of the night?

GORDY    [on phone]  "Best time"  "In an empty house"? - "best place."

TIM    Huh?

GORDY    [on phone]  [sigh] You're such a nerd.  All right.  Most of the stuff is crap.  Not very interesting. [beat] Except....

TIM    [disinterested] The freshman's handless body?

GORDY    [on phone]  No. [serious]  There really was a guy - and you can believe this, cause there's a wiki entry on it - who was working in the morgue and went nuts in the middle of July 17th.

TIM    [beat]  That's it?

GORDY    [on phone]  He claimed that a huge black shadow had risen from the floor or something, and touched him, and he like had visions or something and went nuts.

TIM    When did this happen?

GORDY    [on phone] uh [checking] 1945.

TIM    He was probably listening to War of the Worlds or something.

GORDY    [on phone]  Well, there's more, [tailing off] but if you're not interested--

TIM    All right.  Go on.

GORDY    [on phone]  It happened three other times - People claimed to have seen something horrible on July 17th, or else [pause, for suspense] they killed themselves.  Two suicides - a janitor and a nurse who wasn't even supposed to be in the area, both in the mid 50s.

TIM    You're really serious?

GORDY    [on phone]  As a snack attack.

TIM    But Sophia's worked here for twelve years, and she's never had a problem.

GORDY    [on phone]  Hmm.  Ask her.

TIM    Yeah - besides, she'll be back by then anyway. 

GORDY    [on phone]  Good.  You can start leading a normal life again.  Oh, wait, you never had a normal life.  Oh well.  Chow! 

TIM    Bye.

SOUND    TURNS OFF PHONE

SOUND    MOMENT OF SILENCE, THEN A TAP AT THE WINDOW

TIM    [startled] Ahh!  Oh shit - Bedelia!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.    OUTDOORS, EARLY MORNING

TIM    [fading in] --and then it was 1 a-m and I had to drag the body back in really quick and clean it up!

DARCY    [chuckling] You are such a freak!

TIM    You think I'm a freak - It's Mr. Summerfield who was making all googly eyes at her.  Ugh.  Jeez, I hope he doesn't spot that body on the slab.

DARCY    [shudder]  The way you talk about her, it's easy to forget she's really... well... dead.

TIM    Yeah, and she's been giving me all sorts of great advice-- [stops]

DARCY    Mm?

TIM     Nothing.  [changing gears with difficulty] Um, Gordy told me there's concrete evidence of another ghostly presence, and I was hoping you might be interested.

DARCY    Who is it this time?

TIM    He said the only description was a "dark presence" and that came from a guy who went mad.  I can forward you the e-mail.

DARCY    [interested] Yeah.  Do.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.    MORGUE, NIGHT

BEDELIA    It was so lovely.  Being outside, in the night.

TIM    You shouldn't have been out alone!  You could have been--

BEDELIA    Killed?  [chuckles]  Oh, I haven't any real worries on that score. 

TIM    Guess not.

BEDELIA    But I do appreciate your concern, Timothy.  That's very considerate of you.

TIM    Well, I--

BEDELIA    Now yesterday, before we were so rudely interrupted, you were telling me about your young lady friend.

TIM    Uh, yeah.  Look - there's something more important--

BEDELIA    More important than romance?  Goodness.  That is just like a man. 

TIM    It's another ghost.

BEDELIA    Oh?

TIM    Here in the morgue.  Someone - something - who only appears once a year - July 17 - and drives people crazy.

BEDELIA    I had an uncle like that, but he only--

TIM    Please!  Have you ever seen this - thing?

BEDELIA    [takes a moment to contemplate him]  tsk.  Timothy, you know very well that I have spent very little time of the last 75 years or so taking any notice of the world around me.  When there's no body in the drawer at midnight, I just carry on asleep. 

TIM    I figured it couldn't hurt to ask. 

BEDELIA    Of course not.  It never hurts to ask.  You should ask your young lady to dinner sometime.

TIM    Why?  We eat together - breakfast - all the time.  [flushes, realizing how this must sound, blurts] I mean when I get off shift, and she's coming in.

BEDELIA    Silly boy.  That's just food.  "Dinner" is an event.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 15.    OUTSIDE, MORNING

DARCY    I think I found out something for you... about your friend Bedelia. 

TIM    Go on?

SOUND    FLIPS PAGES

DARCY    Hold on.  All right. I found her hospital records, and they're pretty useless - it's amazing how unspecific stuff was back in the day!  But they do say she was admitted on a Saturday morning, very early, unconscious, slipped into a coma and stopped breathing.

TIM    But did it say why?

DARCY    [she knows something] Noooo.  [beat]   But--

TIM    But?

DARCY    I checked the papers around the same time, and there were a number of near deaths from a bad batch of bathtub gin--

TIM    In 1932 - but prohibition ended-- [cuts self off]

DARCY    [waits a second, then] And, they all looked dead, presumably a deep coma, but then revived.

TIM    You mean she--?

DARCY    She probably revived in the drawer and then really died.

TIM    Oh.  [swallows]  Well, thanks!  Sounds like you did a lot of work on that.

DARCY    Oh, I like going through old newspapers.  The ads are hilarious!  [beat] I also discovered one of the ineffable truths of life.

TIM    Huh?

DARCY    Gordy is an idiot.

TIM    Oh, well - we knew that.

DARCY    Your dark shape?  It exists.

TIM    Really?

DARCY    In Ontario.  Gordy mistook Moss Creek General, which was the old name here, for Moose Creek General, which is in some teensy town in Canada.  Tsch. The wonders of the internet.

TIM    Darcy...

DARCY    Hmm?

TIM    [very awkward] Would you like to go to dinner sometime?

MUSIC, MUCH TIME PASSES

 

SCENE 16.    ENTERING MORGUE, NIGHT

TIM    Thanks for staying up - Sophia warned me it would be awkward to readjust to days - and even more awkward to just work weekends like this.

DARCY    What else am I going to do with my weekend nights?  [teasing] My boyfriend has to work.

SOUND    KISS, they break apart, both laughing a little

SOUND    A COUPLE MORE STEPS, THEN DOOR PUSHES OPEN.

TIM    [shock and horror] What the hell?

HALSTON    Hiya Tim.  I shoulda warned you - they finished over on the quad building ahead of schedule, so they started tearing stuff out over here.  Think of it - six months, and we'll have the newest facilities in the state!

TIM    But--

DARCY    Oh, no!  [sympathetic] Tim!

HALSTON    What?  Didya leave something in the morgue? 

TIM    Yeah.  In one of the drawers.  Where- where ... are ... they?

HALSTON    Out back with the rest of the rubble, I suppose.  Why?

TIM    [strained] Nothing.  Have a good night! [aside, to Darcy]  Help me?

DARCY    Um, sure.  What do you--

TIM    Come back at 11:30 and--

HALSTON    [slightly off] At least it means work will be a piece of cake - everyone's being re-rerouted to Central until we get an interim suite set back up.

TIM    [whispered] 11:30.  We'll take a look.  I just need to - at least say goodbye.

DARCY    [a little unsure] Sure.  Um.  What's the worst that can happen?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 17.    OUTSIDE, OUT BACK

AMBIANCE    DISTANT TRAFFIC, NIGHTTIME

SOUND    CLANKING NOISES

DARCY    [whispered call] Found em!

SOUND    HURRIED FOOTSTEPS

TIM    Where?

DARCY    But they're all out of order.  Ooh.  Some really didn't take it well.

TIM    Check the numbers?

DARCY    Oh, Tim - most of them don't seem to have them--

TIM    Look for a dent on the front that looks like a pair of lips - I rammed a gurney into the drawer one night.

SOUND    METAL RATTLES, ETC.

DARCY    [beat] This one?

TIM    Oh, yes!  Help me turn it back over.

DARCY    But without a body, how can you--

SECURITY GUARD    Hey, you over there! 

TIM    Run, Darcy! 

SOUND    DARCY RUNS

SOUND    TIM CLIMBS UNDER THE DRAWER AND HIDES.

SECURITY GUARD    Hey!  You kids!

SOUND    RUNNING FEET GO PAST

TIME PASSES

SOUND    DARCY'S FEET RETURN

DARCY    [whispered call] Tim?  Tim?

TIM     Over here.

DARCY    Oh!  When I realized you weren't behind me, I thought he got you!

TIM    [Sounding like Bedelia] Nonsense.  I waited in ambush.  [then, completely himself] Gotta get back to work.  See you for breakfast?

DARCY    Did you--?  The drawer--?

TIM    No. [rueful, but sounding just a touch like Bedelia]  Not a soul.  Any longer.  

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already... 

END

Atomic Julie - Planet of Dreams by James McKimmey, Jr.16 Nov 202100:22:47

A life of nothing but pleasant contemplation - no work, no worry - would be a lovely hell, wouldn't it?

19 Nocturne Boulevard - THE SEVENTH KEY - Reissue11 Nov 202100:34:04

THE SEVENTH KEY

A writer makes a bet that she can change her style - and perhaps her life - overnight

Written and produced by Julie Hoverson

Cast List

  • Cindy Applegate - Chandra Wade
  • Troy - Matthias Rebne Morgan
  • Mandy - Crystal Thomson
  • Regia - Kristina Yuen
  • Tex - Mike Campbell
  • Lucas - Abner Senires
  • Roarke - Rick Lewis
  • Old Scupper - Julie Hoverson
  • Trooper 1 - Glen Hallstrom
  • Trooper 2 - Franknvox

19 Nocturne theme music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)

All other music is from the album "Pursuit of Happiness" by C. Filipe Alves (used under a Creative Commons License, found at www.jamendo.com)

Recorded with the assistance of Ryan Hirst of Neohoodoo Studio

Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson 

 

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's a writer's studio, can't you tell?"

 

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The seventh key

The seventh Key is the other play vaguely inspired by the Seven Keys to Bald Pate - The book by Earl Derr Biggars, and the play by George M. Cohan, and the 1970s loosely inspired film The House of Long Shadows.

While Murder Ward arose primarily from the catfishing aspect of the story, this one is more obviously the basic plotline - author makes a bet to write something different if given an inspirational place, and then things go awry.  There's a hint that the catfishing is still happening, but maybe it's not.

Part of this is simply an indictment of the unrealistic expectations that romance novels give women - we all complain about porn creating unreal expectations for men, then dream about 7 foot tall warrior hunks with long fabio hair and tribal tatoos, and more junk than any man should have, since he would pass out every time from blood loss to the brain.

That's why every man in this play is utterly impossible, from Cindy's point of view.  They all prove that reality is terrible.  Originally Tex and Luke were both sort of dudebros, but a last minute replacement put Michael Campbell in for his first session with us, and he sounded too similar to Luke, and wasn't comfortable with a cowboy type accent (my original intention for Tex).  So on the spot we decided Tex was effusively gay - which would be another and different way he could be "completely unavailable" to our lovelorn writer.

The multiple endings are also inspired by Seven Keys to Bald Pate, and are more meant to show the many horrible ways a writers mind expects projects to go down in flames, or fall apart, than necessarily to show an actual event.  We all imagine having our book done, then finding it's gone horribly wrong....

**********************************************

THE SEVENTH KEY

Cast:

  • Olivia - Host
  • Cindy Applegate (F30s), a writer
  • Regia (F40s), Cindy's publisher
  • Troy (M30s), Cindy's imaginary boyfriend
  • Mandy (F30s), Cindy's sister
  • Tex, Luke, Roarke (M20s/30s, obnoxious) - film crew
  • Old Scupper (M, elder)- crusty old salt
  • Trooper1 and 2 - (M, any) police

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a writer's condo, can't you tell? 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 1.    WRITING AT HOME

SOUND     COMPUTER, TYPING

CINDY    [muttering as she types, overwrought] ...and  I love you too, my dearest darling.

SOUND    PHONE RINGS

CINDY    [irritated mumble] Go away, he's about to make an indecent proposal. 

TROY    I can no longer contain my passion.  My blood hums for you.  You must be mine!

CINDY    [ecstatic sigh]

SOUND    PICKS UP PHONE

CINDY    [almost an ecstatic sigh] Yes?

REGIA    You've been writing, haven't you?

CINDY    [still dreamy] Of course.  That's what you want me to do, isn't it?

REGIA    Of course.  So.  What's the new one?

CINDY    "Rogue of Fate"

REGIA    Quick précis?

CINDY    Warwick Wellington, handsome and devilish owner of Wellington shipping lines and dabbler in exotic animals hires cat breeder Gloriana Mundy to help him birth a rare white leopard--

REGIA    They hate each other on sight, and yet fall in love, have a steamy sex scene and then argue, never to see each other again, but then the panther--

CINDY    --Leopard--

REGIA    --goes into labour and they have to work together to save the cubs, and realize their attraction is unavoidable?

CINDY    [shocked] How-- how did you guess?

REGIA    Cindy, you know I'm your friend as well as your agent, right?

CINDY    Yes, but what has--

REGIA    It's roughly the same as every plot you've ever written.  In fact I think it's identical to "Never the Twain Shall Sleep" except that was a prize-winning race horse instead of a leopard.  You're kind of predictable. 

CINDY    [truly distressed] But - no.  It can't be, I don't--  not on purpose!

REGIA    I know.  That's actually the very sad part.  I know, and you know, that you just happen to write that way, and not that you have a formula tacked to the wall that says "page 32, they meet.  At page 230, they quarrel" or anything like that. 

CINDY    I don't!  I swear!

REGIA    The good thing is that your books always sell.  I'm never going to fault you for that - but I'd love to see what you could do if you ever did break out of this rut.  You're a competent writer, and you'll always have an audience, but you could do more, if you tried something a little different.

CINDY    Like what?

REGIA    Are you seeing anyone?

CINDY    Dr. Mallory said I didn't really need--

REGIA    I meant dating.

CINDY    Oh.  [grudging] No.

REGIA    You should.

CINDY    Men are pigs.

REGIA    Which is why your heroes perspire rather than sweat.  Real women like real men.  At least a little bit.

CINDY    They're ... messy.  Uncooperative.

REGIA.      Yup.  Try it - you might like it.

SOUND    PHONE HANGS UP

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.

CINDY    You are the only one who understand me, Troy.

TROY    Of course, my proud beauty.  For you are complex and mysterious and most men can't be bothered to see past the ends of their--

CINDY    [cutting him off] Yes, yes.  Troy, you will always love me, won't you?

TROY    As long as there is breath in my body.

CINDY    Oh, Troy!

TROY    Oh, Cindy!

SOUND    PHONE RINGS

CINDY    Oh, pooh!

SOUND    PICKS UP PHONE

CINDY    Yes?

MANDY    Hey sis.  I guess I caught you at a bad time?

CINDY    [irritated] I was just... composing. What do you need?

MANDY    I was just going to see if you wanted to come to dinner this weekend.  George and I haven't seen you in ages.

CINDY    Who is it this time?

MANDY    [overly innocent] Whatever can you mean?

CINDY    Please - when you start talking like... like--

MANDY    One of your heroines?

CINDY    [pedantic] The way people talked in the 18th and 19th century--

MANDY    I give up!  I will give you the code words.  His name is Rob, and he's a banker.  He's nice.  Cute even - if you don't mind someone a tad... cuddly.

CINDY    Stop trying to fix me up - why can't you believe I'm just fine?

MANDY    Because you're alone, and if I know you, you're talking to your imaginary boyfriend again.

CINDY    You said you'd never--

MANDY     Drop it!  Sorry!  Come to dinner anyway.  We'll tell Rob you have something contagious, and you can just sit and be bored with the three of us.  [beat]  Cody misses his auntie.

CINDY    Cody can't feed himself yet.  I doubt he can tell us apart, the way he keeps trying to get into my shirt.

MANDY    For a romance writer, you are the least sentimental person I know.  No wonder all your characters are cardboard cutouts.

CINDY    They are not!

MANDY    Sweetie.  They all use the same 10 lines at some point in their respective narrative - there's an entire website devoted to spotting them and mocking you.

CINDY    What ten lines?

MANDY    Lessee - "my proud beauty"

CINDY    [squeaky gasp]

MANDY    "As long as there is breath in my body", "you may take my body but you will never have my heart" - that one from her, whoever "her" is at the moment.  Hmm.  I can forward you the URL if you like.

CINDY    No!  And I'm not going to come to dinner.  I'm busy.  Writing.  Something completely different.

MANDY     I'll believe that when I read it.

CINDY    You bet you will.

MANDY    You're on!  

CINDY    What?

MANDY    I'll bet you one year that you can't write a real novel - even a novella - in the same time that it takes you to rattle off one of your froufrou books.

CINDY    One year?  Of what?

MANDY    [chuckles evilly]  One year that you come to dinner twice a month and be nice to whoever we invite--

CINDY    Whomever.

MANDY    --against one year when I won't even ask you over.

CINDY    You're - you're on!  I could use a year of not being nagged.

MANDY    But you have to get the first draft done in a weekend - that's how long you told Women's Day it takes you to write one of your books.

CINDY    [gasp] How can anyone be so horrid?

MANDY    I'm your sister - and yes, that one's on the list too.

SOUND    MANDY HANGS UP.  CINDY SLOWLY PUTS DOWN RECEIVER

CINDY    Am I really that ... predictable?

TROY    A woman is a bundle of senses, with a dash of nonsense.

CINDY    Argh!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.

CINDY    Why didn’t you ever tell me?

REGIA    [on phone]  I did - you just never heard.  I didn't push it because you always sell so well - to women who like a certain kind of man, a certain kind of story, and a certain kind of resolution.  You always deliver.

CINDY    I'm - I'm boring!  This website even says so.  "Good god!  How could I have been so blind" - oh No!  I will never say that again!

REGIA    It's not that bad.  Ignore the critics.  Write what you love.  As long as it sells, why worry about it?

CINDY    Is money all you think about?

REGIA    I am an agent.

CINDY    But I want people to like my books, not laugh at them.  I want to write something good.  Something meaningful.

REGIA    Oh, man.  I said you should try something different, but, meaningful?  Why such a change?

CINDY    Because just surviving isn’t living at all.  [defiant] and yes, that's one of the ten.

REGIA    Ten?

CINDY    Never mind.  Will you help me?

REGIA    Help you - with what?

CINDY    I need a place to write.  Inspiration.  Atmosphere.  Just for a weekend - enough to rough out a new story.  [definite] Something meaningful.

REGIA    Meaningful books are a tougher sell.  I like your books the way they are.

CINDY    I can always go back to churning out the same old... crap...later.

TROY    During our year of peace.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.    OUTSIDE THE LIGHTHOUSE

SOUND    WALKING, OUTSIDE, WIND, ONE PAIR OF FEET IS VERY STOMPY

OLD SCUPPER     Yar.  The lighthouse heah was decommissioned night on fotty yeahs gone. 

SOUND    BIRD NOISE

CINDY    Oh, seagulls!

OLD SCUPPER    [completely dry] Cahnt see why - being right heah on the beach, and all.

SOUND    KEYS JINGLE - OLD CREAKY DOOR OPENS

OLD SCUPPER    Cahs it ain't been empty the hul time - we gets renters from time to time who want to paint or try that meditation yahoo, but-- but no one eveh stays more'n a month. 

SOUND    THEY GO INSIDE, CREAKY DOOR SLAMS SHUT WITH AN ECHO

CINDY    [eep!]

OLD SCUPPER    It's all on account o' the ghost. 

CINDY    Yes, that's exactly why I came here.

OLD SCUPPER    Har har har.  Y'ain't the fust, young lady, to think they cud stand up t' the ghost. 

CINDY    I heard it was a woman who committed suicide?  Jumped off the--

OLD SCUPPER    Ain't that romantic, now?  Nar.  She were killed.  And then he killed hisself.  No one atall is dead sure which one itis which haunts the place - or mayhaps it's both of 'em. 

CINDY    Well, can't they see?  If it's in a dress--?

OLD SCUPPER    Yer head is full o' crap.  It's them movies and the T-V makes it sound like ghosts look just like regular folks.  Bah.  [spookier and spookier] This haunt - or haunts, as the case may be - is just a dark shape which covers the winduhs, making day inta night, and then it lets out such a scream -  a scream to shake down the very heavens.  Them as hears the scream falls inter a deep sleep and when they finally wake up, they find they've done ... terrible things.  Best you come on back befoah dark and stay in town.  Tis not far - just an hour or so afoot.

CINDY    No.  I'm fine.  Thanks. 

OLD SCUPPER    Suit yerself.

SOUND    FEET STOMP OFF.  DOOR OPENS.  CLICK

CINDY    Hey!

OLD SCUPPER    Ayah?

CINDY    What about the electricity?

OLD SCUPPER    Yer don' know how t'work a jenny?

CINDY    Who's Jenny?

OLD SCUPPER    [disgusted noise] Gar. 

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS, FEET STOMP AWAY INSIDE

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.

SOUND    TYPING AWAY ON A LAPTOP

CINDY    [mutters as she types]  --window high above the pounding surf.  The darkness closes in, the wind echoes through the huge column of stone, and the rocks call out to her.  "Join us."  No, scratch that, "we have the answer to all your pain"--

SOUND    KNOCK ON THE OUTER DOOR ECHOES LOUDLY

CINDY    [eep!]  Coming!

SOUND    A COUPLE MORE LAPTOP KEYS

SOUND    ENDLESS FEET DOWN STAIRS, THEY STOP.  THEN CONTINUE

CINDY    Just a minute!

SOUND    FEET DESCEND AND FINALLY FADE INTO--

CINDY    Coming!

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

CINDY    [out of breath]  Hello?  [half wolf whistle, half gasp]  Hell-o!

TEX    [very campy] Hello!  Is this the Sutter's Wharf lighthouse?

CINDY    [puzzled and disappointed] Yes.  Um.  Is there something I can do for you?

TEX    I wanted to make sure before we start bringing in the equipment.  [turns away and gives a huge whistle] 

CINDY    Equip... what?

TEX    We'll be staying in here, then? 

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS INTO ECHOES

TEX    [echoey] Hmm.  Not bad.  We're with "In Specter" - you know, the ghost hunting show?  We're doing a spot on the lighthouse this weekend.  Didn't you get the memo? 

CINDY    But... but I'm renting the lighthouse this weekend.

TEX    You aren't the owner? 

CINDY    I-I'm a writer - I came here for some peace and quiet and--

SOUND    SQUEAKY WHEELS APPROACH

LUKE    ["dude" yelling from off] Dude, get out of the way!  Got the beers!

CINDY    [nearly in tears] -- and atmosphere.

TEX    Sorry.  We've had it booked for six months.  You'll have to talk to Roarke.  Our boss.

CINDY    Roarke?  That's a nice name.  I gotta make a note--

TEX    You got one?

CINDY    A note?

TEX    [snorting laugh] No.  A name.  I'm Tex, and this ...studmuffin is Luke.

LUKE    [a little off]  Yo!

CINDY    Cindy.  Cindy Applegate.

LUKE    Oh!  Woah!  Any relation to--?

CINDY    [surprised and pleased] Yes - yes, it's me - I'm the writer.

LUKE    Writer?  No - you know, the hot actress.  Babelicious!  Smoking!  Awoo!

CINDY    Argh!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 6.    OUTSIDE

SOUND    PACING ON DIRT

CINDY    This Roarke will just have to understand.

TROY    You will sway him with your plight.  And your beauty.

CINDY    Maybe he'll even be handsome--

TROY    Your eyes devoured those two musclebound--

CINDY    But this Roarke guy is the boss.  He's probably Irish or something.  Fiery.  Passionate.

TROY    Who wouldn't be, faced with your loveliness?

CINDY    Regia said she arranged everything.

TROY    Unless...

CINDY    What?

TROY    Perhaps she thought the presence of other people might stir your creative juices.

CINDY    Maybe...

SOUND    CAR WINDOW ROLLS DOWN

CINDY    Roarke?

ROARKE    [obnoxiously Brooklyn]  OK, I got 5 minutes.

CINDY    [vastly disappointed] Oh.  Sure.  Um, my publicist--

ROARKE    I was just on the phone with her.  Someone well and truly screwed the pooch on this one, but we're willing to let you stick around while we work--

CINDY    But I need quiet to write!

ROARKE    Tough titty, babe.  You can stay, but only if you let the crew fit you into the show - Your agent said it would be good for your image, all that crap.

CINDY    But when will I be able to write?

ROARKE    We'll be shooting local color tonight and tomorrow by day - write then.  But at night, you gotta be around in case this ghost shows up. 

CINDY    You think I'll really enhance the show?

ROARKE    Chicks scream better.

SOUND    WINDOW ROLLS UP

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.

SOUND    SEAGULLS, OUTSIDE AMBIANCE, OCEAN, WIND

SOUND    KEYBOARD CLICKS

CINDY    [Muttering through gritted teeth]  Ensconced on the parapet, I gazed down over the jagged cliffs below, and wondered if perhaps this was the same view - the last view - of the murdered woman so long ago.  Whether the moaning of the wind in the rocks called to her, the way they sing now - even now - in my head.

SOUND    A COUPLE OF LAST CLICKS, LAPTOP CLOSES

CINDY    [sigh]

TROY    It's going well, all things considered.

CINDY    Yes.  But it's almost dark, and then--

TROY    He required you be available, not actually present.

CINDY    I hope the ghost shows up - then they can get what they want and go. 

TROY    Have you considered--?

CINDY    What?

TROY    That this was much too fortuitous - your arrival followed so closely by theirs?  Perhaps your agent did this a'purpose.

CINDY    But why?  She wants me to write--

TROY    Ah, but she also wants you to socialize.  With real people. 

CINDY    Well, if I don't get this darn draft done, I'll definitely be stuck socializing - if you can call any of Mandy and George's friends "real".  [shudder]

TROY    Would it be so horrible?

CINDY    Yes.

SOUND    KNOCK ON DOOR

TEX    Hey, you up here?

SOUND     DOOR OPENS

TEX    There you are, pretty lady.

CINDY    What do you want?

TEX    Making sure you didn't fall off or nothing. 

CINDY    [chilling] Nope.  Not yet.

TEX    Well.  Dinner's on, anyway. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.    SHOOTING

SOUND    WHIRRING OF MACHINERY

VOICE    [on P.A.] IN SPECTOR

LUKE    OK, so we're here in Sutter's Wharf lighthouse, waiting to see if the infamous screaming shadow will appear. 

TEX    And for once, we're not all alone.  We have a guest - famous romance writer Cindy Appleton. 

CINDY    [hollow, deer in headlights]  Applegate.

TEX    Applegate.  [beat]  Here, honey, wave.  I guess little Cindy ain't exactly hard to scare, huh, Luke?

LUKE    [chuckles]  Well, Tex, writing's a pretty lonely business.  And this is a lonely place.  Right Cindy?

CINDY    Yes. 

LUKE    Yeah.  See, dude?

CINDY    It is a lonely business.

TEX    Right.  Well, they say the ghost has been known to walk the platform around the light, upstairs.  So we're going to haul ass up there for a while.  Come on.

SOUND    LIGHTS SWITCHED OFF

ROARKE    That coulda been better.

CINDY    I thought ...there would be a script.

ROARKE    You wanna write one, go ahead, but we don't got the budget to pay for nuttin like that.

CINDY    I'm... sorry.

ROARKE    No skin off my ass.  Embarrassing famous people goes over great on TV.  And your agent agreed that, short of actual nudity, anything we shoot of you this weekend will get her ok for air time.

TROY    We should get clear of this nest of vipers!

CINDY    [trying to be brave]  Well.  You can film me writing for the next half hour.  I have a scene that has to get written.

ROARKE    Not bad - use the publicity from the show to push the book.  And vicey-versy.  Not bad at all.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 9.

SOUND    DOOR SLAMS, SQUEAK, LATCH

CINDY    Well, I can get a little privacy anyway. 

SOUND    OPEN LAPTOP, POWER UP

TROY    You know I will always support anything you do--

SOUND    HORRIBLE DRILLING NOISE

CINDY    What the blazes?

SOUND    LATCH OPENS, DOOR OPENS

CINDY    What's the--

SOUND    HORRIBLE DRILLING NOISE, LOUDER

CINDY    Ahhhhhhh!  [as soon as it ends] What IS that!

LUKE    Eyebolts, little dudette.  Can't have the cameras falling if the ghost shows up.  We got permission.

CINDY    But the noise!

LUKE    Yeah, sucks, don't it.  Oh, well.  Be done soon.  [laughs] Woah!

SOUND    DRILLING

SOUND    DOOR SLAMS

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.    TIME PASSES

SOUND    TYPING

TROY    [voice cutting the music]  Weren't they coming back to get you?

CINDY    Hmm?  Maybe they forgot about me.

TROY    But it's been hours.

CINDY    Has it?

SOUND    TURNING DOWN VOLUME OF THE MUSIC

CINDY    It is awfully quiet.

TROY    It's past one.

CINDY    Wow.

SOUND    TAPPING A FEW LAST KEYS, CLOSE LAPTOP, REMOVE MEMORY STICK

CINDY    I guess I should see. 

SOUND    LATCH LIFTS, THEN HESITATES

CINDY    They might just be waiting to catch me off guard again.

TROY    Don't let them.  You're much too clever.  You can do this.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

CINDY    [quiet, echoing] Hello?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 11.

SOUND    WALKING AND TURNING ON A CELLPHONE

CINDY    Searching, searching...

TROY    Perhaps they're filming outside?

CINDY    They wouldn't have left all the equipment.  It's all just sitting there...  Even that darn drill.   [gasp]  Drat.  No bars.  Figures. 

SOUND    CELL PHONE SLAPS SHUT

TROY    Leaving is a very viable option.  Grab your smallest case and we can--

CINDY    But their blasted truck has boxed me in. 

TROY    Only about an hour's walk.  According to the ...rustic.

CINDY    But if something happened here, wouldn't it have happened to me too?

TROY    Then... what?

CINDY    I think it's a joke.  They thought it was funny catching me out in front of the camera, and now...

TROY    An even more persuasive argument that you must leave this place.

CINDY    No.  I can just see it - bedraggled author crawls into town after night in haunted lighthouse, only to find camera crew at local bar.  Yes!  That's where they must be.  Well, I'm not playing.

TROY    So you will--?

CINDY     Go upstairs and get back to work.  There's still plenty of time before they stagger in.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.    POWER TROUBLE

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS, DOOR LATCH

SOUND    ELECTRIC NOISE, BUZZ-DIP.

CINDY    Oh, shi--oot!

SOUND    LAPTOP UNPLUGGED, THEN TURNED ON

CINDY    Oh, no!  Good thing I have backup.

SOUND    LAPTOP BOOTS

CINDY    [sigh of relief]

SOUND    ELECTRIC DIP, THEN OUT.  POP OF LIGHT BULB

CINDY    [eep!]

TROY    Now it's truly time to go.

CINDY    But how will I get back down and out of here in the dark?

TROY    How can you stay?

CINDY    Easy.  I write for the four hours I have on battery, and by then dawn will be coming up.  I just sit tight.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.    WORKING

SOUND    TYPING MADLY

TROY    What if it was the ghost?

CINDY    Hey, whose imaginary friend are you anyway?

TROY    [calming] I help you to express your fears.

CINDY    Well, right now, any fears I have are right outside that door, and can stay there. 

SOUND    ELECTRIC NOISE RETURNS

SOUND    DRILL OUTSIDE THE DOOR - continues until noted

CINDY    [Starts screaming]

TROY    Shh,  It's going to be all right. Shh.  Calm down.  You need to be calm.

CINDY    [down to whimpering]

TROY    It's not that bad - the power just came back on and the surge started the drill.

CINDY    [gasping] Really?

TROY    [uncertain]  It's the only logical answer.

CINDY    Logic sucks.

TROY    The noise won't go away until you go out there and turn it off.

CINDY    No!

TROY    What if you're the only one here - that damn noise will drive you mad until you put it right.

CINDY    Someone had to turn on the generator.

TROY    Really?

CINDY    I think so.  So someone has to be out there.

TROY    [ominous] Someone.

CINDY    You're doing it again!  Shh!

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS COMING UP THE STAIRS

CINDY    [eep]

TROY    Who do you think it is?

CINDY    Ssh.

TROY    No one but you can hear me, my sweet one.

CINDY    [whispered] Oh.  Right.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS GET CLOSE.  DOOR IS RATTLED

CINDY    [gasping]

TROY    If they were not villains, they'd hail you, wouldn't they?

CINDY    Uh-huh.

TROY    Bloody hell.

CINDY    Uh-huh!

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS GO ON PAST

TROY    Oh good.

SOUND    DRILL IS TURNED OFF

CINDY    [huge sigh]

SOUND    SOMETHING HEAVY DROPS.  FOOTSTEPS START TO RETURN

CINDY    [rapid breathing, trying to stay quiet]

SOUND    SUDDEN POUNDING ON DOOR

CINDY    [hands over mouth, to keep self quiet]

TROOPER    [muffled] Police!  Open up!

CINDY    Police?

TROY    Can you trust him?

CINDY    [whispered] What else can I do?  [up, but shaky] I'm coming.

SOUND    SLOW STEPS TO DOOR, LATCH OPENS, THEN DOOR

CINDY    Police?

TROOPER1    Will you step out here ma'am?  Please keep your hands where I can see them.

CINDY    What?  Why?

TROOPER1    [calling off]  Found one!

CINDY    One what?

TROOPER1    Survivor.  Come on.

CINDY    I can't leave my laptop!  What do you mean, survivor?

TROOPER1    We're just going downstairs - for the moment.  Everything will be perfectly safe.

SOUND    FEET SLOWLY DESCEND STAIRS

CINDY    Heavens!

TROOPER1    Stay to the right here, at the bottom of the stairs - we don't want you walking in the evidence.  Come on.

CINDY    I can't!

TROOPER2    Hey!  What's the hold up?

CINDY    What happened?

TROOPER1    That's what we want you to tell us, ma'am.  Now if you would just step this way--

CINDY    No!

SOUND    FEET RUN UPSTAIRS, HEAVY BOOTS FOLLOW.  SHE IS GRABBED

TROOPER1    [struggling with her] We've tried to be polite about this, but you have to come with us - it's not a request.

CINDY    [breathing hard, half whispered]  I've never seen so much blood!

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS DESCEND AGAIN

TROOPER1    I'm willing to believe that, miss, but we need to find out what you did see.  I mean tonight.

CINDY    Nothing.  Before the lights went out, no one was here, and then there was no power, so I worked on battery in my room, and then you turned...them back on...

TROOPER1    You didn't hear anything?  Anything at all?

CINDY    I tend to be ... lost... in thought - when I write.  And the walls seem pretty thick.  [breath catches]  What... happened?

TROOPER1     Don't know.  The bodies are all ... missing. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.    ONE PHONE CALL

CINDY    I promise you, I didn't see or hear anything.

REGIA    [on phone] Did you tell them that?

CINDY    Over and over again.  They won't believe me.  They think I did some awful thing!

REGIA    I know a few lawyers.  We'll get this sorted out. 

CINDY    But I didn’t do anything! 

REGIA    Sorry, you caught me in a bad cell zone.  Let me get to a land line and call you back.

SOUND    CLICK PHONE OFF

CINDY    That's a fine kettle of fish.

TROY    They would never convict you - they must see what a lovely soul you truly are.

CINDY    People have been wrongly convicted in the past.

TROY    Perhaps she will find you a handsome and masculine attorney who, convinced of your innocence, will set you free in the eleventh hour.

CINDY     I want to be set free in the first hour!

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

CINDY    [eep!]

TROOPER1    All right, you're free to go.

CINDY    I ...am?

TROOPER1    Found them.  They're fine.

CINDY    But the blood?

TROOPER1    Minor accident with a drill.  All cleared up now. 

CINDY    So I can - go?  Go back to my writing?

TROOPER1    [up close and personal] From the state of you, you need a long hot soak in a scented tub, with candles, and maybe a hot oil massage.

CINDY    [breathless, hopeful]  Really? 

TROOPER1    [flippant] That’s what your agent suggested, anyway.  We can get you to a nice hotel where you can--

CINDY    No.  I'm going to stay right here and finish my new book, and you can't stop me.  [losing her edge]  You can't stop me, can you?

TROOPER1    Do what you want.  You'll be all alone - at least for the night.  The crew should be back by mid-morning, though.

CINDY    All the more reason to use my time wisely.  Bye, now!

TROOPER1    Oh, and watch out for the ghost!

CINDY    [gasp!]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 15.    THE HAUNTING

CINDY    What time is it?

TROY    Nearly 4 am.  Long past the witching hour, now is truly the dead of night.  The darkest hour just before dawn.

CINDY    Dawn is at 6:43 a-m today.

TROY    Ah!  Then the darkest hour is yet to come.

CINDY    Well, I'm a good 150 pages in, anyway.

SOUND    SCREECH

CINDY    What--?

TROY    A night bird, perhaps?

SOUND    SCREECH, LOUDER

TROY    No, it's--

CINDY    The ghost!

TROY    Hide yourself!  Cover your ears!

CINDY    No!  The only way to conquer this sort of phantasm--

SOUND    SCREECH

CINDY    [losing steam rapidly] Is to... face it down?

TROY    You are so brave.  And so beautiful.

CINDY    Thank you.  I needed that.

TROY    Of course.

SOUND    DOOR FLUNG OPEN

SOUND    SCREECH

CINDY    [Screams - much like she is falling, much like the squeak]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 16.    FALSE ENDING ONE

CINDY    [waking up noises, eep]

REGIA    See.  Told you she'd be fine.  Cindy-- [trying not to laugh] The look on your face!  It was priceless.  Here, I caught it - see? 

SOUND    PHONE BEING OPENED, PICTURES SCROLLED THROUGH

CINDY    What are you doing here?  What happened?

MANDY    I just won a bet, is what happened.  Now you've got to make nice to every one of George's friends.

CINDY    What do you mean?  I still have time--

REGIA    You've been dead to the world for over 10 hours, which brings your window of opportunity to a nice tidy close.  Sorry about that, but you should learn to pace yourself.

CINDY    But it's nearly completed - that MUST count for something!

REGIA    This file on your laptop?  The one that just repeats the same ten lines over and over.  Very Stephen King, but not really marketable, sweetheart.

CINDY    I didn’t!  Let me see!  Oh, god, what have I done?

MANDY    Yes, that's one of them.

CINDY    You rigged it, didn’t you?

REGIA    What?  Why would I do that?

CINDY    The two of you - you were in it together, conspiring to make me ...  to force me to lose!

REGIA    [Laughing]  Well, we did hire a couple of guys.

MANDY    They were more than ready to help. 

CINDY    But why?

MANDY    A single woman is an embarrassment.  It's just a fact.

CINDY    This is all just to convince me to find a man?

REGIA    Pretty much.

CINDY    Troy?  Where are you--?

MANDY    Troy's not real.  You must realize that.

CINDY    [Screams - much like she is falling]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 17.    FALSE ENDING 2

SOUND    TAPPING AWAY ON KEYS

CINDY    [mutters]  And she spent the rest of her days locked up in a padded cell, demanding that someone find Troy and get him to come and visit her.  The end.

TROY    Most excellent.  You will surely win your bet.

CINDY    [melodrama] Somehow, the bet is unimportant, now.  I've really grown through writing this.  I can see that my life will be different - better - if I let myself deal with people on a one to one basis.  If I forge a meaningful relationship with a good man.

TROY    Then you will no longer need me?

CINDY    I will always need you, Troy!

TROY    Oh, Cindy!

CINDY    [Screams in ecstacy - still sound much like she is falling]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 18.    THE ENDING

REGIA    And that's how it ends.  It's really--

MANDY    Really?

REGIA    A steaming heap of poo.

MANDY    [very disappointed]  Ohh.

REGIA    It'll still sell millions. 

MANDY    But she worked so hard--

REGIA    Yeah, yeah.  And it has the huge advantage of being the last thing she wrote.  Lucky we were able to recover anything from the laptop at all - since she took it with her when she made that leap off the lighthouse.

CLOSING

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already... 

 

 

Atomic Julie - A Bottle of Old Wine by Richard O. Lewis09 Nov 202100:29:16

A 1953 prediction of "virtual reality" AND "reality reality".

 

19 Nocturne Boulevard - ONE OUT OF TEN (from a story by J. Anthony Ferlaine - REISSUE04 Nov 202100:15:13

Ask Mrs. Freda Dunny where her home town is.  Go on - we dare you.

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from a short story by J. Anthony Ferlaine  (published in Fantastic Universe, November 1956) .

Cast List

  • Smiling Jim Parsons - J. Christopher Dunn
  • Fred Dunny - Julie Hoverson
  • Gertie - Tanja Milojevic (Lightning Bolt Theater of the Mind)
  • Don Phillips - Glen Hallstrom

 

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)

Editing and Sound:  Neil Gustin of Twilight Audio Theatre

Cover Design:  Brett Coulstock

Much thanx to Librivox and Project Gutenberg for curating stories, like this one, that have passed into the public domain.

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's a TV Studio in 1956 - can't you tell?"

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One out of ten

This was a quick little adaptation from a story I read for Atomic Julie's Galactic Bedtime Stories.  It didn't take much to adapt, just a few tweaks, and I think I had to add in the actual questions, since that was just a "dot dot dot" in the story.  Otherwise, this one basically wrote itself.

Atomic Julie, though, was my idea for some filler that has become my secondary series - I read old scifi stories that show up on Project Gutenberg - at gutenberg.org - that public domain treasure house.  I started out adding music to the stories, but people expressed a preference for just the reading, so I adapted.  Hey one less thing to do, right?

Few people realize that I do all Atomic Julie's as cold reads, not even looking at anything but the word count and first page beforehand, as a challenge to myself.  It's also good practice.

The biggest advantage to Atomic Julie is finding stories to adapt - or stories that inspire new ideas in my head.  And then I figured, if I'm going to be reading them anyway, why not read them aloud and then share them with everyone else?

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ONE OUT OF TEN

Adapted from a short story by J. Anthony Ferlaine

from _Fantastic Universe_ November 1956.

Sound and Mastering by Neil Gustin

 

Cast:

  • Olivia - Host
  • Smiling Jim Parsons (M30s), Host
  • Don Phillips (M50s), commercial announcer
  • Freda Dunny (F40)
  • Gertie (F20s) Jim's assistant

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a television studio, in 1956 can't you tell? 

MUSIC

SOUND     COMMERCIAL RUNS IN THE BACKGROUND

DON PHILLIPS    Parlor Quiz!

JIM    What's on the menu tonight, Gertie?

GERTIE    We have five possibles.  Here.

SOUND    INDEX CARDS FLIPPED THROUGH

GERTIE    Don't want to run short again.

JIM    Noooo.  Anything really juicy?

GERTIE    Let's see - [listing off people] kooky name; too many kids; unusual job - she's a taxidermist; oh, here's one - interesting relative, no details; and this top one you're really gonna want to see.

SOUND    SNATCH CARD

JIM    "Ask her where she's from"? 

GERTIE    Guess.

JIM    I'm no good at guessing.  Alaska?

GERTIE    Nope.

JIM    Timbuktu?

GERTIE    Trust me.

SOUND    FANFARE

JIM    Holy crow, that's me.  [mock teasing] Am I beautiful?

GERTIE    Turn.  Yup.  Twenty-four karat gold.

JIM    That's me!

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, NOISE LOUDER.  FOOTSTEPS UNDER.

DON PHILIPS    [on P.A.]  ... And now, on with the show!  And here, ready to test your wits, is your quizzing quiz master, Smiling Jim Parsons.

SOUND    MUCH APPLAUSE, THEN LOWERS

JIM    [ON] Good afternoon!  Here we go again with another half hour of fun and prizes on television's newest, most exciting, game, 'Parlor Quiz.' In a moment I'll introduce you to our first contestant. But first here is a special message to all you mothers ...

SOUND    AD PLAYS

DON PHILIPS    [on P.A.]  Children constipated?  Ladies, does your child have trouble with irregularity?  Issues in the bathroom?  Too much toilet paper?  You know what I mean - trouble with a lack of movement?  Try Maxi-Lax, the mother's little helper for childhood irregularity.  Made with the finest England castor beans, our special patented old-world formula helps with relaxation, since often such troubles stem from tension and stress - yes, even in children - though it works just as well for big folks, too!  So add Maxi-Law to your shopping list!  You can thank us later!  Available at your local R-X Druggist!  Get that Bull Out of the Ring!  Try Maxi-Lax!

SOUND    APPLAUSE

JIM    Now which one is-- 

SOUND    WALKING

JIM    [spotting her] Ah.  No mukluks.  Not even a crazy hat or wooden shoes.  [to her] Mrs. Freda Dunny?

FREDA    Oh, yes.

JIM    You're first.

FREDA    [strangely certain] I know.

SOUND    AD ENDS

JIM     [disconcerted] Oh.  [up, to camera] Well, now, we're all set to go ... and our first contestant today is this charming little lady right here beside me, Mrs. Freda Dunny.

SOUND    APPLAUSE

JIM    How are you, Mrs. Dunny?

FREDA    Fine! Just fine.

JIM    All set to answer a lot of questions and win a lot of prizes?

FREDA    Oh, I'll win all right.

SOUND    LAUGHTER

JIM    You sound pretty sure of yourself.  [chuckles]  Where are you from, Mrs. Dunny?

FREDA    Mars.

SOUND    LAUGHTER

JIM    [a moment, then] Mars! [chuckles] Mars, Montana?  Mars, Peru?

FREDA    [earnest]  No, Mars! Up there.  The planet Mars.  The fourth planet out from the sun.

SOUND    UNCERTAIN LAUGHTER

JIM    Well, well... well [rallying] all the way from Mars, eh? And how long have you been on Earth, Mrs. Dunny?

FREDA    Oh, about thirty or forty years. I've been here nearly all my life. Came here when I was a wee slip of a girl.  Not a weekend getaway, then? JIM    You're practically an Earthwoman by now, then, wouldn’t you say?

SOUND    LOTS OF LAUGHS

JIM    Do you plan on going back someday or have you made up your mind to stay here on Earth for the rest of your days?

FREDA    Oh, I'm just here for the invasion.  When that's over I'll probably go back home again.

JIM    [blank] The... invasion?

SOUND    AUDIENCE MURMURS

FREDA    Yes, the invasion of Earth. As soon as enough of us are here we'll get started.

JIM    You mean there are others here, too?

FREDA    Oh, yes, there are several million of us here in the United States already--and more are on the way.

JIM    [faltering a bit, but trying to stay "on"] There are only about a hundred and seventy million people in the United States, Mrs. Dunny.  If there are seven million Martians among us, one out of every hundred would have to be a Martian.

FREDA    Oh, one out of every ten.  That's what the boss said just the other day.  'We're getting pretty close to the number we need to take over Earth.'  [laughs]

SOUND    MORE NERVOUS MURMURS, TITTERS

JIM    What do you need?  One to one? One Martian for every Earthman?

FREDA    Oh, no.  One Martian is worth ten Earthmen. The only reason we're waiting is we don't want any trouble.

JIM    You don't look any different from us Earth people, Mrs. Dunny. How does one tell the difference between a Martian and an Earthman when one sees one?

FREDA    Oh, we don't look any different.  Some of the kids don't even know they're Martians. Most mothers don't tell their children until they're grown-up. And there are other children who are never told because they just don't develop their full powers.

JIM    Uhh...powers?

FREDA    Oh, telepathy, thought control--that sort of thing.

JIM    [back to humor - this is too silly] You mean that Martians can read people's thoughts?

FREDA    Sure! It's no trouble at all. It's very easy really, once you get the hang of it.

JIM    [joking] Can you read my mind?

FREDA    Sure!  That's why I said that I'd know the answers. I'll be able to read them in your mind when you look at that sheet of paper.

JIM    Now, that's hardly sporting, is it, Mrs. Dunny?  Everybody else has to do it the hard way and here you are reading it from my mind?

FREDA    [complacent] All's fair in love and war.

JIM    Tell me, Mrs. Dunny. Why are you telling me about all this? Isn't it supposed to be a secret?

FREDA    Why not?  Nobody believes me anyhow.  Besides, I have my reasons.

JIM    [grave] Oh, I believe you, Mrs. Dunny.  But we need to take a quick break and consult the rules - mind-reading might be fair in love and war, but this is television!

SOUND    AD COMES ON

JIM    I'll be right back, Mrs. Dunny.

FREDA    I know.

JIM    [really disconcerted] Right.

SOUND    APPLAUSE

SOUND    DASHES OFF

JIM    Gertie?

GERTIE    I've been on the phone with the big brass.  They don't take it very seriously, but they did say I should pull out packet 13 for her.

JIM    [baffled] Packet 13?

GERTIE    You know the one sealed and certified, in case of cheats like that fellow a few years back?  No one knows a single question in here until we break the seal. 

JIM    But what if she--?

GERTIE    I asked!  They said if she wins - well, gosh she wins.

JIM    Even if she manages to ace the whole ten?

GERTIE    Yup.  They figure the publicity is worth it. And you're on!

SOUND    JIM DASHES AGAIN

DON PHILLIPS    It looks like we have a decision!

JIM    Well, Mrs. Dunny, we scoured the rulebook, and couldn't find a darn thing to stop you.  Guess there's just no precedent for mind-reading.

SOUND    LAUGHTER

FREDA    Of course.

JIM    And now, let's see how you do on the questions.  Are you ready?

SOUND    RIP OF ENVELOPE, CARDS PULLED OUT

FREDA    Oh, yes!

SOUND    AUDIENCE MURMURS

JIM    I should point out, even I haven't seen these questions and answers before this very moment, so there's no possibility of collusion.

SOUND    APPLAUSE

JIM    Name the one and only mammal that has the ability to fly.

FREDA    A bat.

JIM    Right! Did you read that from my mind?

FREDA    Oh, yes, you're coming over very clear!

FADING INTO MONTAGE SCENE - TICK TOCK MUSIC, FADE OUT BETWEEN EACH PAIR

JIM    A princess is any daughter of a sovereign. What is a princess royal?

FREDA    The eldest daughter of a sovereign.

SOUND    APPLAUSE

JIM    Is a Kodiak a kind of simple box camera; a type of double-bowed boat; or a type of Alaskan bear?

FREDA    A bear.

SOUND    APPLAUSE

JIM    And finally, who directed the 1925 silent film "The Crowd?"

FREDA    King Vidor.

JIM    [shaken] Very good.  That was a tough one.  Don Phillips, tell the lady what she's won!

DON PHILLIPS    [in the background]  You get a lovely modern cyber-electric garbage disposal and a lovely gas range, provided by Savannah Ranges of Burbank.

JIM    Gertie?  What just happened?

GERTIE    I dunno!  The impossible?

SOUND    FREDA APPROACHES

FREDA    Mr. Parsons?  Perhaps you could help me carry my prizes to the car.  After all this is finished.

JIM    [almost robotic] Of course.

FREDA    You're such a nice fellow.

GERTIE    You're what?  [incredulous] Helping?  Jim?

JIM    [snapping back, searching for an excuse] I ... I just have to find out who put her up to this.

GERTIE    Sure.

MUSIC SURGES, THEN RECEDES

DON PHILLIPS    join us tomorrow for another round of Parlor Quiz!

GERTIE    Jim!  Morty Howard of Savannah Ranges has been calling for the last twenty minutes, to confirm the win, and wants an assurance that he won't have to shell out another one for at least three months.

JIM    Later. 

SOUND    HE TROTS OFF

GERTIE    [calling after him] Jim?

SOUND    OUTSIDE DOOR OPENS.  DISTANT TRAFFIC

JIM    [calling] Mrs. Dunny?

FREDA    [satisfied chuckle] 

JIM    I want to talk to you!

FREDA    When do I get the gas stove?

JIM    uh... It should be delivered in a few days. Did you leave us your address?

FREDA    Oh, yes.  My Philadelphia address, that is. I don't even remember my address at home any more.

JIM    Come, now, Mrs. Dunny. You don't have to keep up that Mars business now that we're off the air.

FREDA    It's the truth.

JIM    But--

FREDA    [cutting him off] And I didn't come here just by accident. 

JIM    No?

FREDA    I came here to see you.

JIM    Me?

SOUND    PURSE OPENED, RUMMAGING, PAPER NOISE

FREDA    Ah, there it is.  [up] Yes, I came to see you. And you didn't follow me out here because you wanted to. I commanded you to come.

JIM    [spluttering but worried] Commanded me to come!  What for?

FREDA    To prove something to you.  Do you see this piece of paper?

SOUND    PAPER SHAKEN

JIM    It's blank.

FREDA    Well, that side is.  This side has my address.

JIM    So...?

FREDA    I am reading the address.  Concentrate on what I'm reading.

JIM    [unable to stop] Two fifty-one South Eighth Street!

FREDA    You see, it's very easy - once you get the hang of it.

JIM    Oh.  [realizing] Oh!  [beat, then kind of pleased]  Let me see you home, Mrs. Dunny.  I guess we have a lot to talk about.

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

 

 

Atomic Julie - Restricted Tool by Malcolm B. Morehart, Jr.02 Nov 202100:16:28

Finding an advanced alien machine could change the course of history, right?

BINGO THE BIRTHDAY CLOWN, episode 4 (19 Nocturne reissue of the day)19 Apr 202300:09:00

It's episode 256 - again.  And again.  And again.

What's behind the magic door?

19 Nocturne Boulevard - HALLOW'S EVE - Reissue28 Oct 202100:30:58

HALLOW'S EVE

Good intentions may pave the way to ruin, but when Fran - a precocious 11-year old - sets out to rescue what she fervently hopes is a kidnapped child, Halloween may never be the same!

Written and produced by Julie Hoverson

Cast List

  • Fran - E. Vickery
  • Bobbie - M. Lane
  • Officer Hooper - S. Connor
  • Grigg - C. Hornaday
  • Bool - B. Poole
  • Kidnappers - J. Harvey & Mr.  Synyster
  • Timmy & Billy - B. Lomatewama & R. LeBoeuf
  • Mrs. Hooper - A. Kirby
  • Thompson - S. Hoverson
  • Ari & News Report - J. Hoverson

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)

Recorded with the assistance of Ryan Hirst of Neohoodoo Studio

Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson

Cover Photo: Jeff Mackay (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

 

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's a suburban street, where else would you find...goblins?"

 

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This was one of the original episodes I had ready for the 2008 Halloween season.  It's set in a sort of 1950s era of classic monster movies.  I never actually specify that, but references to bobby socks and Corliss Archer (an old time radio show) should be a bit of a clue.

One silly thing I should note in here is Fred and Bob (and in other episodes June and Kathy as well) - these are my generic names for extra characters who speak but don't really have personalities, and show up in surprising numbers if you look over the cast lists for a lot of my shows.  I found that I would waste time trying to come up with interesting names for all these background characters, and lose my train of thought and it would stall my writing, so I just dub the first such characters Bob and Fred for males and June and Kathy for females, and move on.  Later, they may become more specific and get real names, but often enough they just remain half generic.  I also find it makes them slightly easier to keep track of than "man1" or "woman B"

Naming characters is often half the fun.  You see me play with names in many of my shows - D. Meeks in "A Stitch in Time", where Dougie jokes about "D. Meeks inheriting de Earth," or the way so many people in the vampire world of "The Big Dark" took new "vampire names" that are some variation on the characters from Stoker's Dracula.

The names of episodes are often some kind of pun or inference, as well.  Not so much Hallow's Eve, but The Big Dark is a riff on The Big Sleep (which was a euphemism for death, in the Chandler novel), and the most difficult title to explain "Crumping The Devil" - crumping being a sort of hip hop adjacent challenge dance, conflated with my vague memory of story about an old woman Mrs. Crump who was so awful the devil wouldn’t even take her.

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ALL HALLOW'S EVE

Cast:

  • Olivia, host
  • Barbara "BOBBIE" Chandler [16], babysitter
  • TIMMY Martin, child [9]
  • FRAN Hooper, child [10]
  • BILLY Jones, child [8]
  • OFFICER HOOPER [30s]
  • HOOPER [30s]
  • GRIGG [alien] [adult]
  • BOOL [alien child]
  • FRED [30s], a thug
  • BOB [30s], a thug
  • ARI [8], kidnapped child
  • THOMPSON [50s]
  • RADIO VOICE

MUSIC

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a suburban street, can't you tell?  Where else would you find "goblins"? 

MUSIC     SOMETHING CHILDLIKE

 

SCENE 1.    OUTSIDE, STREET

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS, COSTUMES

BOBBIE    There you go, that one's got a light, now shh!

SOUND    CRUNCHING OF LEAVES, THEN FOOTSTEPS ON WOOD.

BILLY    [giggles]

TIMMY    Shh!

SOUND    DOORBELL RINGS.  DOOR CREAKS OPEN.

  1. THOMPSON [deep spooky voice] Yeeees?

CHILDREN    Trick or Treat!!!

  1. THOMPSON [regular voice, pleased] Well, you kids!  Hey Martha, come and look, we've got a ghost and a clown and -- and what are you, little boy?

FRAN    I'm a girl.  And I'm a Martian.

  1. THOMPSON [amused] Well, fancy that! An invasion right here on our street!  Martha...?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.    INSIDE, HOUSE

MRS. HOOPER    Looks like we've got more goblins coming, dear!

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS

RADIO VOICE    --in the five county manhunt for--

OFFICER HOOPER    Just a minute, hun.  Gotta see what they're saying--

RADIO VOICE    --involved in the Stanopopolus kidnapping-- [continues under]

MRS. HOOPER    It's not your case.  And it's Halloween.  Just because Bobbie was kind enough to take Fran with her doesn't let you off for holiday spirit.  At least until you go on shift.

SOUND    SNAP.  RADIO OFF.

SOUND    DOORBELL.

MRS. HOOPER    Well?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.    OUTSIDE, STREET

BOBBIE    Come on punkins, you must be getting tired by now!

BILLY    [very tired] I'm not!

TIMMY    I slept all day.

FRAN    [raring to go] I only have half a bag.  We can't stop yet!

BOBBIE    It's almost 9 o'clock!  No one will be up much longer. 

CHILDREN    Please!

BOBBIE    All right.  Three more houses.  That's all.

FRAN    Big houses always have the best treats.  We should go to the Palmer's, the Winchell's and that big one on the corner.

BILLY    On the corner?  But, that's ... that's the haunted house!

TIMMY    Scaredy cat. 

FRAN    Phooey!  It was just empty.  I saw someone moving in yesterday. 

BOBBIE    If they just moved in, they're probably not--

TIMMY    Let's make Billy go into the haunted house!

BOBBIE    No!  Timothy--

BILLY    No!  I don't wanna--

FRAN    Shut up!  It's not haunted.  Boys are dumb.

BILLY    Not haunted?

BOBBIE    Look, it's getting cold out here, so let's get a move on, whichever houses you plan to go to.  OK?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.    ON PORCH

SOUND    TENTATIVE KNOCK ON THE DOOR

BILLY    [scared, but hiding it - relieved] No one home!

FRAN    I hear something!

SOUND    DOOR OPENS SLOWLY

CHILDREN    [Gasp]

BOBBI    Well, he looks normal enough.

GRIGG    [weird foreignish accent] Help you may I?

TIM    [giggles] He's funny.

FRAN    We're here for candy.  Trick or treat.

GRIGG    Please?

BOBBIE    Oh, gosh, you're foreign aren't you?  They might not even DO trick or treat where he comes from.

FRAN    You have to give us candy or we have to play a trick on you!

BOBBIE    That's hardly fair if he doesn't know the rules.  Plus, you said it yourself, they just moved in.

GRIGG    Candy?  Schweets?  I have--

BOOL    [child's voice, off mike, accented]  I want to go home!  I hate it here!  Take me home!  [Tails off into gibberish with lots of Ls and Ss]

GRIGG    [agitated] My child.  He wants to go back to our old home.  He is not used to this one.  I should go to him.

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS

TIMMY    [beat] I don't want any foreign candy anyway.

FRAN    Bobbie?

BOBBIE    No arguments.  Time to go home.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.    BOBBIE'S ROOM 

SOUND    TAP ON WINDOW

BOBBIE    Hank?

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS

BOBBIE    Hank, this is hardly--

SOUND    WINDOW OPENS

BOBBIE    Who's that?  You're too short for Hank.

FRAN    [whispered] It's me.

BOBBIE    [sarcastic] So it's The Whisperer?

FRAN    Me!  Fran!

BOBBIE    Fran?  By Crosby, this is way too late for you to be out playing Halloween jokes, even on a Saturday night.  You need to get home - your parents will be worried sick.

FRAN    Dad's on patrol.

BOBBIE    Oh, great, then he'll be the one to arrest you for something.

FRAN    Did you listen to the radio at all tonight?

BOBBIE    Only Corliss Archer.  Gee, she has some trouble with--

FRAN    Argh!  The news?

BOBBIE    Why?

FRAN    The kidnapping news!

BOBBIE    Look, let me get my penny loafers on and I'll walk you home.

FRAN    The son of a Greek raccoon was kidnapped today.  No, that's not right.  Raccoon, typhoon--

BOBBIE    Tycoon?

FRAN    A rich guy.  He was kidnapped from their hotel room.

BOBBIE    Was he a tycoon, or just a millionaire?

FRAN    [whispered with emphasis]  IT DOESN'T MATTER.  We heard him, and we need to go rescue him.

BOBBIE    We did what?

FRAN    The kid at the haunted house.  Screaming "I want to go home"?  Does that maybe put some thought into that teased-up skull of yours?

BOBBIE    They did sound awfully foreign, but I'm not sure if it's Greek.

FRAN    Well it ain't Spanish or Chinese.  Or French.  What else is there?

BOBBIE    Don't say "ain't" - it ain't in the dictionary.

FRAN    Are you coming, or am I going by myself?

BOBBIE    Why me?

FRAN    Who else?  Timmy?  [dismissive noise]  Besides, you're the only one tall enough to see in the windows. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 6.    OUTSIDE, YARD

SOUND    CREEPING THROUGH BUSHES

BOBBIE    OK, this is silly.  And dirty.  I'm walking‑‑

FRAN    No, we have to crawl!  They'll see us!

BOBBIE    No one's looking!

FRAN    But the window's open, they'll hear us.  [panic] Shh!  Did you hear that?

BOBBIE    [beat, listening, then dismissively] No.

FRAN    [grumpy] Ok.  Walk to the window.  Get spotted.  See if I care.

SOUND    WALKING CAREFULLY ON GRAVEL.  BUSHES RUSTLE

BOBBIE    Fran?

FRAN    [off, loud whisper] I'm coming.  Keep your hair on.

BOBBIE    Don't worry-- Shh!

SOUND    LOUD RUSTLE

SOUND    [FROM INSIDE] CLICK, FOOTSTEPS

NOTE:  BOOL AND GRIG ARE INSIDE, HEARD THROUGH A WINDOW, WHILE BOBBIE AND FRAN ARE OUTSIDE. EAVESDROPPING

BOOL    I down wanna be here.  Go home.

GRIGG    "don't", not "down", child.  You need talk some good words, living here.

BOOL    No talk.  No stay.  Home!

GRIGG    Home is soon enough.  Soon as requirement is received.

FRAN    [coming on, loud whisper] What are they saying?

BOBBIE    Shh!

BOOL    [speaks foreign]

BOBBIE    Is that Greek?

FRAN    Oh, sure, I'm the expert.

GRIGG    [angry] English.  Need to hear normal!

BOBBIE    [muttered] Like your English is so good, mister.

GRIGG    People must not apprehend you are strange.

FRAN    Shh.

GRIGG    Sleep, child.  Dream of home.

BOBBIE    Now that's just mean.

SOUND    DOOR CLOSES

FRAN    See?  We've got to rescue him!

BOBBIE    But what if--?

FRAN    What if he turns up dead like little Charlie Lindburgh?  How you gonna feel then?

BOBBIE    You need to stop reading those crime books.

FRAN    Argh!  Fine.  Boost me up, and you can go.  I'll figure something out!

BOBBIE    No.  I-- I'll help, but only if the kid wants to come.  That's where I draw the line - if he wants to stay, then we'll just...  let your dad know and leave it at that.

FRAN    Fine, but who's gonna ask him?  Better do it now, or he might fall asleep.

BOBBIE    [sigh, then voice raised a bit, calling quietly] Little boy? 

BOOL    [off, gasp]

BOBBIE    We're here to --

FRAN    [prompting, whisper] --to take you home.

BOBBIE    We're here to take you home!

BOOL    [off] Home?

SOUND    SCUFFLE AS HE ROLLS OUT OF BED AND RUNS TO THE WINDOW

FRAN    Yes, home!  Don't you wanna go home?

BOBBIE    Your parents must be worried sick about you.

BOOL    What is *lala* parents?  Want home!

FRAN    Come on then, we'll get you out of there.  Bobbie, give him a boost.

BOBBIE    [sigh]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.    OUTSIDE

SOUND    NIGHT NOISES, WALKING ON SIDEWALK

BOOL    [squeak]

SOUND    MILD SCUFFLE

FRAN    Put it on!  They won't look twice at us if we got masks on!

BOBBIE    It is a little late for--

FRAN    So they'll worry, but they won't--

GRIGG    [way off, unearthly shriek]

FRAN    Eep!  That sounds like--

BOOL    [squeak]

BOBBIE    What if he has a car?

FRAN    Then we duck into the bushes - honestly, does every girl lose her brains when she grows into angora?

BOBBIE    It's Acrilon.

GRIGG    [slightly closer, shriek]

FRAN    Run!

BOOL    [squeak, ends in gasp]

SOUND    RUNNING FOOTSTEPS

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.    OUTSIDE, A LITTLE LATER

BOBBIE    [whispered] Do you hear anything?

FRAN    [listens, then whispered]  Nope.

BOOL    [whispered squeak]

BOBBIE    [comforting whispers]  Shh. It'll be o-k, kid.  All we have to do is get you safe and then--  [sudden thought]  Say, Fran, what is the plan?  Where are we taking this poor kid?

FRAN    [whispered, sarcastic] I thought we'd just lie here under this bush until morning and hope it doesn't rain.

BOOL    [a bit too loud] What is *lala* rain?

BOBBIE    Rain makes-- [whispered] Rain makes you wet.  We should take him to your father.  He'll know what to do to get him home.

BOOL    [plaintive wail, way too loud] Home! 

FRAN    [whispered] Great.  Now you've set him off again.  We can't go to pop, cause - being a cop and all - he might just deduce I sneaked out.  

BOOL    Holme! Home!

BOBBIE    [whispered] Well, you did.

FRAN    [exasperated noise, then] Ssh!

BOOL    Home-- [cut off in mid-word as a hand is clapped over his mouth, then a squeak]

FRAN    [whispered] His parents must be worried sick about him--  we need to get him h-o-m-e.

BOBBIE    [whispered] To Greece?  [sarcastic]  I'm pretty sure my folks' car doesn't have that much gas. 

FRAN    [whispered] See?  There's still a little smarts under all that fluff!  They're stopping at a hotel downtown.

BOBBIE    [whispered] Which one?

FRAN    [whispered] The news didn't say - there can't be that many, can there?

BOBBIE    [exasperated] Ohhhh!

BOOL    [muffled squeak]

GRIGG    [distant, shriek]

FRAN    [whispered] What is that weird guy doing?  He's not exactly sneaky.

BOBBIE    [whispered] Someone's going to--

SOUND    CAR PULLS UP, SINGLE WHOOP OF SIREN

FRAN    [normal voice, resigned] --Call my dad. 

BOBBIE    It's probably for the best - this bush isn't doing my Acrilon any good.

FRAN    All right, but--

GRIGG    [closer, shriek]

BOOL    [squeak]

BOBBIE    It's all right little boy, we won't let the scary man take you away.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 9.    INSIDE, HOUSE

SOUND    RADIO PLAYS IN BACKGROUND

FRED    No way!  How could they have found us?

BOB    Stay cool.  It's Halloween, it could be anything.

SOUND    WINDOW SASH GOES UP

BOB    [worried] Stop it.

SOUND    REVOLVER HAMMER CLICKS BACK

FRED    But it's parked right outside!  I'm not going down for this!  Go check on the kid.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.    OUTSIDE, STREET

GRIGG    [shriek]

OFFICER HOOPER    Ok, that's enough.

GRIGG    [caught in mid-shriek] *Haysa?*  [deep breath]  What?

OFFICER HOOPER    It's much too late, even on Halloween, to be running around screaming.  Time to go home and sleep it off, pal.

GRIGG    Sleep, what?  I am missing child.  Must find.  Child will listen me.  [starts to shriek]

OFFICER HOOPER    [cutting off the shriek] Hey!  I'm figuring you're new around here, so you may not understand how we do things in the U-S of A, but if your kid's gone missing, you need to let the authorities - that's me - know about it, so we - I - can help you.

GRIGG    Help?  Too many wordsssss.  [wail] Bool!

BOOL    [slightly off, squeak]

OFFICER HOOPER    Eh?

FRAN    [slightly off] SHH!

OFFICER HOOPER    What the--?

GRIGG    Bool!

OFFICER HOOPER     Fran?

SOUND    GUNSHOT

BOBBIE    [Scream]

BOOL    [squeak, quickly muffled]

GRIGG    Bool!

OFFICER HOOPER    Get down!

FRAN    Bobbie, get the kid out of here!

OFFICER HOOPER    That you, Barbara Chandler?  Don't you move a muscle!

SOUND    GUNSHOT

GRIGG    [voice no longer sounds remotely human] WHAT IS THAT NOISE?

OFFICER HOOPER    Stay down, sir, and let me handle this.

SOUND    QUICK GRAPPLE

GRIGG    [intense] YOU ME TELL - IS WEAPON?  HURT MY CHILD?

BOBBIE    Heavens to Bette Davis, Fran, it's the kid's real dad!

FRAN    Phooey.

BOOL    [long squeak]

OFFICER HOOPER    [forced calm, but furious underneath] As long as they stay behind my car there, they will be fine, now let go of me and let me stop the idiot who's been shooting up my town.

GRIGG    SHOOT ARE GUN ARE DANGER? 

OFFICER HOOPER    That's my job.  You stay here, and when it's clear, you can go to your kid.  [raising his voice] Bobbie!  You get those children down behind the car, you hear? 

BOBBIE    Yes, sir, Officer Hooper!

OFFICER HOOPER    [calling] You're still in trouble.  [to Grigg] You. Stay.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 11.    INSIDE, HOUSE

SOUND    RADIO PLAYS UNDER

BOB    You idiot!  They weren't here for us!

FRED    They won't take me alive!  Federal pen? 
Uh-uh!

BOB    Fine.  You play at O-K Corral.  I'll be out of the line of fire.

FRED    [cold, commanding] Don't.

BOB    What?  You gonna shoot me, now?

FRED    Bring the kid out here.  We can still do this.

BOB    Yeah, we give him back, and they take us alive.  I like that - the being alive part.

FRED    Get him!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.    OUTSIDE HOUSE

OFFICER HOOPER    Throw out your guns and come out with your hands up!

FRED    [calling from inside] We've got the kid.  Walk away or we kill him.

OFFICER HOOPER     [calling to off]  That's not going to happen.  Let the kid go and I'll put in a good word for you.

FRED     [from inside] I've got all the words I need, copper!

ARI    [from inside] ow!

FRAN    That must be the real Greek tyfoon's son,

OFFICE HOOPER    [warning] Fran!?  I told you to--

FRAN    Pop!  I'm going to be a policeman when I grow up, so I figure I should start learning.

OFFICER HOOPER    No, you're not, and you shouldn't.  This isn't a game.  Get back over there--

SOUND    GUNSHOT

BOTH    [react]

FRAN    He hasta run out of bullets ... eventually.

OFFICER HOOPER    And how many guns does he have?

FRAN    Huh?  [shrug] I dunno. [realizing] Oh.

OFFICER HOOPER    See?  Now, get back--

SOUND     GUNSHOT

OFFICER HOOPER    [fading out] Oh, heck.  Stay right here.  On this spot, young lady.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.    INSIDE, HOUSE, BUT HEARD FROM OUTSIDE

SOUND    RADIO PLAYS UNDER

BOB    [fading in] You've got the kid, you've got the gun.  Let me go.

FRED    Like you say, I've got the kid and the gun - what do I need you around for, ya bum?

BOB    Good.  [raising his voice] I'm coming out coppers!  I'm giving myself up! 

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS, DOOR OPENS

 

SCENE 14.    OUTSIDE, SHIFT OF PERSPECTIVE, BUT NO ACTUAL SCENE BREAK

BOB    Don't shoot!

SOUND     BOB TAKES THREE MORE STEPS, THEN--

SOUND    GUNSHOT

BOB    Argh!

SOUND    BODY FALLS

SOUND     DOOR SLAMS

MOMENT OF SILENCE

 

FRAN    Is that guy ... dead?

OFFICER HOOPER    Dammit, I can't even go check. 

GRIGG    [incoherent, alien tongue]

OFFICER HOOPER    Oh, jeez, not you too?  [speaking slow]  Go back.  Your child is safe.  Bobbie has him, over there.

GRIGG    [deep breath, then equally slowly]  This you child?

FRAN    I'm Fran.  I'm really really sorry about--

OFFICER HOOPER    Yes.  Much as I may want to deny it, she has my nose.

FRAN    [not getting it]  Huh?

GRIGG    Much words.  You child?

FRAN    He don't speak much English, do he? 

OFFICER HOOPER    [sigh] Yes.  Mine.

BOOL    [squeak]

SOUND    SKITTERING FOOTSTEPS

SOUND    GUNSHOT

BOOL    [Screamy squeak]

SOUND    BODY DROP

FRAN    [running off] Hey! Kid!

OFFICER HOOPER    Fran!  No!

SOUND    [after a moment]  SCUTTLING COMING CLOSER

FRAN    [breathing hard] Here.  I think he's OK.

BOOL    [whimpering]

GRIGG    My child!

OFFICER HOOPER    Fran, dammit!

FRAN    What?  He coulda got shot!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 15.    INSIDE, HOUSE

SOUND    RADIO ON IN BACKGROUND

FRED    Kid, you speak English?

ARI    A little.

FRED    You know I'm gonna shoot you if you don't do everything I say?

ARI    Yes.

FRED    Good. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 16.    OUTSIDE

GRIGG    Your child is brave heart. 

OFFICER HOOPER    That's one word for it.

GRIGG    She bring safe my Bool.

OFFICER HOOPER    Um, yeah.  Dammit.  I can't tell where that guy is.

GRIGG    Some child is hurted there?

FRAN    Stolen.  Like we did, except we were only trying to help.

GRIGG    [decisive] I help bring child to home.

OFFICER HOOPER    At least you're an adult, even if you can't understand English.  [talking loud again] We go in.  You go left - that way - I go right.  Get to wall, up against it, then to door.

GRIGG    Ahhhh.

OFFICER HOOPER    Does he understand?

FRAN    I guess.  He's nodding.

OFFICER HOOPER    You don't come with us.

FRAN    But I--

OFFICER HOOPER    Give me your hand.

FRAN    Are you giving me a gun?

OFFICER HOOPER    [heavy sigh]

SOUND    HANDCUFFS SLAP ON WRIST, THEN ON DOOR HANDLE

FRAN    Hey!

OFFICER HOOPER    Now you'll stay put.  [sigh] I'm leaving the key here, in case.

SOUND    KEY PUT DOWN ON CAR

OFFICER HOOPER    Out of reach.  [loud, to Grigg] We go.

SOUND    RUNNING FEET, OFF IN TWO DIRECTIONS

SOUND    AFTER THEY LEAVE, JINGLE OF STRUGGLING WITH HANDCUFFS

FRAN    [grunting]  Uun uun.  Darn it. 

SOUND    SCRABBLING ON THE CAR HOOD, TRYING TO STRETCH

FRAN    Hey, Bool?

BOOL    Bool!

FRAN    Yeah, [talking slow] I'm Fran. 

BOOL    Flan?

FRAN    Good enough.  Can you hand me that? 

BOOL    [Hmm noise]

FRAN    [slowly again] Give to me?

BOBBIE    [coming on]  You're still here!  Let's get going.

SOUND    REACTION INCLUDING RATTLE OF THE HANDCUFFS

FRAN     How'd you--?

BOBBIE    I went around the block.  I'm no dummy.

FRAN    Brilliant!  We should--

BOBBIE    You are not talking me into any more shenanigans.

FRAN    [whispered] Bool, get the key!  [Up]  Huh?  No, of course not... I --

BOBBIE    Are you -- chained to the car?

BOOL    Kaaaay?

FRAN    [too bright] No!  Whatever gave you that idea?  [whispered]  Bool!

BOBBIE    Oh--

SOUND    SMALL METAL SCRAPE

BOBBIE    --so this isn't the key?

FRAN    Oh -- Drat! 

BOOL    [squeak]

FRAN    Boo-ul!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 17.    OUTSIDE, AROUND HOUSE

SOUND    RUSTLE IN A BUSH

OFFICER HOOPER    [muttered]  Ok, mister rat bastard kidnapper, let me get a look atcha.

GRIGG    [off]  Go?

OFFICER HOOPER    [muttered] Oh, good, you know one word. [up, calling very quietly]  Make a noise!

GRIGG    [shriek]

SOUND    [OFF] CLATTER INSIDE

FRED    [from inside] What the hell--? 

OFFICER HOOPER    Come out of there with your hands up!

FRED    [from inside] What's that noise?

GRIGG    [shriek]

OFFICER HOOPER    [sudden idea] Uh, what noise?  I don't hear anything.

FRED    [from inside] What do you mean--?  You didn't hear that--

GRIGG    [shriek]

FRED    [from inside] --that "THAT"?

OFFICER HOOPER    [very pleased] Nope.  Don't hear anything. They say some people are bothered more than others by [slight chuckle] haunted houses.

FRED    [a bit disturbed] Haunted--?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 18.    OUTSIDE AT CAR

BOBBIE    If I unlock it, you have to come home.

FRAN    [sounding almost teary]  But- but our dads are in there.

BOBBIE    That's what your dad does.  It's his job.

FRAN    But it's not Bool's dad's job.

BOBBIE    Bool?  Is that your name?

BOOL    [sounding mournful] Chob. 

FRAN    See? He's upset too.

BOBBIE    Is he?  Tell you what, I'll get you home and then we'll call for more police.

FRAN    [sniffing]  But I was thinking... tsch.  ohhhh.

SOUND    THREE METAL TAPS - key on car

BOBBIE    [thinking...]  What?

FRAN    [sounding really down] Nothing.  Unlock me and we'll go home - [offhanded] even if we maybe COULD help.

BOBBIE    Right.

FRAN    Even if maybe our dads end up shot.  [long sniff]

BOOL    [squeaky sniff]

SOUND    UNLOCKING HANDCUFF

BOBBIE    Come on.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 19.    INSIDE, HOUSE

SOUND    SHUFFLING FEET AS FRED PACES NERVOUSLY, DRAGGING ARI BACK AND FORTH WITH HIM

SOUND    RADIO IN BACKGROUND

FRED    [to self] Haunted?  Of course.  That explains so much.

ARI    Maybe there is ghosts?

FRED    That's what haunted means, ain't it?  And it's Halloween.

OFFICER HOOPER    [from outside]  It's late, pal.  Almost the witching hour.  Let's get this sorted out.

FRED    Witching--? 

OFFICER HOOPER    [from outside]  You know, midnight.  Let's settle this and get that kid home safe and sound.

FRED    You're going to tell me I can still get out of this, huh?  What about Bob out there?

OFFICER HOOPER    Oh, your friend here?

FRED    Friend.  [snort]  yeah.

OFFICER HOOPER    Hmm.  Killing him on the doorway of house like that might a been a bad move.

FRED    Whadda you mean?  Oh!

GRIGG    [long, drawn-out shriek]

FRED    Oh!!

SOUND    RUSTY CREAK OF DISTANT DOOR, INSIDE

FRED    What the heck?

ARI    [scared]  Oh no!

FRED    Shut up, kid.  I'm trying to listen, you hear me?

ARI    [gasp and sniff- trying to stay quiet]

FRED    [trying to convince himself] It's those cops.  They're doing this - [up, calling] You're doing this, aintcha, copper?

OFFICER HOOPER    Doing what?

FRED    [clinging to control] Making the damn noises!

OFFICER HOOPER    [pleased with himself] What noises?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 20.    INSIDE, HOUSE, UPSTAIRS

[NOTE, THEY WHISPER THROUGHOUT SCENE]

SOUND    CREAKING MOVEMENT

BOBBIE    [whispered] Frannie, if any of us end up dead, it is entirely your fault.  That door was so loud.

FRAN    On purpose.  C'mon, the stairs are over here.

BOBBIE    How do you know?  This house--

FRAN    Sleepover two years ago, when Jennie and Sam lived here.

BOBBIE    Your father is going to kill me.

FRAN    We'll be upstairs - well out of the line of fire.  Now c'mon.

BOOL    'mon.

FRAN    See, Bool agrees with me.

BOBBIE    Yeah.  Like a parrot.  [sigh]

SOUND    TIPTOEING FOOTSTEPS

MUSIC

 

SCENE 21.    INSIDE, HOUSE, DOWNSTAIRS

SOUND    RADIO MUTTERS IN BACKGROUND

FRED    [muttering]  They've probably got the back door covered...

ARI    [small voice] You should let me go. 

FRED    [about to hit him] Ahh! 

SOUND    CREAKING FOOTSTEPS SOUND IN WALL AND CEILING

FRED    Shh!  Hell!  What's that?

ARI    [scary whisper] Evil spirits. 

FRED    [gulp] Really?

ARI    Maybe it is your dead friend.  He is very angry, I think.

FRED    [weak] Shut up.

SOUND    THEIR SCUFFLING FOOTSTEPS

FRED    We'll just - Let's go check it out, eh?  I bet even ghosts don't like getting shot.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 22.    INSIDE, HOUSE, UPSTAIRS

[NOTE:  STILL WHISPERING]

FRAN    OK, Bool, you see this vent?

BOOL    See.

BOBBIE    Great, now he's Spanish. 

FRAN    Sh.  Bool, lean in and make a scary noise, like this...  [she does, and the noise echoes through the vents]

BOOL    [like a laugh] Ah!  [leans in, mimics her noise, but it ends in his standard squeak - all echoey]

BOBBIE    Did we ever figure out where Bool and his dad come from?

FRAN    This isn't the time.  C'mon.  Now, Bobbie,  you creak this door - not too often, just from time to time.  Got it?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 23.    OUTSIDE NEAR FRONT DOOR

OFFICER HOOPER    OK, fella, time to come out.  [a beat]  Are  you in there?  [beat]  Oh, darn it all to--, they're gone.  Come on - [slow] help me break in the door.

GRIGG    [yes] *Heh*.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 24.    INSIDE, HOUSE, UPSTAIRS

FRAN    I'll be right across the hall - now start.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

FRAN    Eep!

BOBBIE     Oh, no!

BOOL     [squeak, which echoes]

FRED    Ghosts, eh.  Looks like I got me a bunch more bargaining chips.  All of you move out here in the hall, real slow.  [snarls] Get over there--

ARI    [gasp]

SOUND    THUD AS HE HITS THE WALL

FRED    Keep your hands where I can see 'em!

FRAN    [sarcastic] Of course, I might just have a gun.

SOUND    SMACK

FRED    Keep your mouth shut!

FRAN    [gasps in real pain]

BOOL    [mimics her gasp]

FRED    You, too!

BOOL    Flan! [squeaky growl]  Lalalala!

FRED    What the hell's wrong with that kid?

BOOL    [growl builds]

FRED    [starting to get freaked out] Stop it.  What the hell?

BOBBIE    Fran, is Bool glowing?

FRAN    [sniff, then uncertain] Um, I think so.

BOOL    [shriek which is a childish echo of Grigg's]

FRED    [scream of terror]

SOUND    GUNSHOT

BOBBIE, BOOL, FRAN, ARI - scream, gasp, etc.

SOUND    POUNDING FEET COMING UP THE STAIRS

GRIGG    [full-on shriek, deeper and very alien]

OFFICER HOOPER    Holy cow!  What the--?

FRED    The light!   No!  [drawn out scream, which fades into a weird little popping noise]

BOBBIE    I guess we--[gasp] might know--[gasp] where they came from, now.

OFFICER HOOPER    [suspicious] Where'd he go?

GRIGG    I made him nothing.  He try my child hurt.  Your child also.

OFFICER HOOPER    Yeah, I, uh, noticed-- 

FRAN    [excited] Are you guys Martians?

OFFICER HOOPER    [exasperated] --but she's clearly fine.

GRIGG    I know not Marchan.

BOOL    [Part muffled, satisfied] Flan!

FRAN    [just as pleased]  Bool!

BOBBIE    I don't know what to tell you, Mister - officer, I mean - Hooper. 

OFFICER HOOPER    Don't worry, I blame my daughter.  [Back to Grigg]  So we don't have to worry about him coming back?

GRIGG    Nothing.  No colme back.

OFFICER HOOPER    And what exactly - well - are you?

ARI    They saved us, is that not enough?

FRAN    Yeah.  They're "good people," as mom would say.

GRIGG    No concern, Hooper man.  We no stay now, you see us be do that.  We find more - uh - new home.

BOOL    Home?  No!  [plaintive] Flan!

GRIGG    [softly] No, Bool.  Go.

OFFICER HOOPER    Tell me one thing, Grigg.  You planning to invade?

GRIGG    *Haysa*?

FRAN    He means are you gonna bring a bunch of people here and try and take over the planet - like in the movies?

GRIGG    We hide - no one come with.  Bad place come away.  Alone.

FRAN    There!

BOBBIE    Are you thinking--?

OFFICER HOOPER    [considering] I'm thinking I don't want to try writing this up.  Much easier if we just didn't see anything.  The one guy shot the other, then when he saw it was hopeless, he skedaddled.

BOBBIE    But--  what--?

FRAN    I didn't see anything.  You, Ari?

ARI    No.  I was much too frightened.  He threw me against a wall and then ran off before my head cleared.

FRAN    See, Bobbie?

BOOL    Bah-bee?

BOBBIE    That's kinda cute.  Good thing I-- I didn't see anything else.  Besides, anyone who would do whatever it takes to protect their kid - well, they can't be too bad.

OFFICER HOOPER    You're still not babysitting for Fran ever again.

BOBBIE    [truly relieved] Oh!  Thank you!

FRAN    Hey!

MUSIC, CLOSING

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

Atomic Julie - Beyond the Yellow Fog (pt 8 of 8) by Emmett McDowell26 Oct 202100:16:32

The finale chapter!!!

Yay!

 

19 Nocturne Boulevard - QUESTIONS IN A DARK ROOM - Reissue 22 Oct 202100:30:23

QUESTIONS IN A DARK ROOM

Written and produced by Julie Hoverson

Carol wakes in a strange dark room, with a man she's never seen before - and when the questions start to fly, there's lives at stake.

CAST
Carol - Beverly Poole
Thaddeus - Cole Hornaday
Madame Foulet - Julie Hoverson
Tour Guide - Julie Hoverson

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Sound effects found on Soundsnap.com
Cover Photos:  Front - Nazareth Maceda  (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a residential hotel,
sometime between the two World Wars, can't you tell?"

******************************************

QUESTIONS IN A DARK ROOM

 

Cast:

[Olivia, host]

Carol (20F), urban songbird

Thaddeus (20-30M), deep south

Madame Foulet (50-60F), calm older lady

Crowd Noise (any)

Tour Guide (any)

OLIVIA    Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a residential hotel, can't you tell?

MUSIC CREEPS IN

NOTE:  there are no definite "scene changes" in this episode - characters slide in and out of scenes without any break until the very end.  Scene changes are marked only when Foulet enters and leaves

 

SCENE 1.   DARK ROOM, SLIGHTLY ECHOEY, NO SPECIFIC ERA.  CAROL SPEAKS LIKE SOMEONE FROM THE 1920s, THADDEUS IS FROM THE 1860S DEEP SOUTH

CAROL   [waking up noises]  Mmm.  Oh.  [suddenly sitting up]  What!  [panicking]  Where--

THADDEUS   Don' you worry none.  You safe now.

CAROL   Safe?  Why--?  Who are you?  I-I don't know you.  [rising hysteria]  Is this... your room? 

THADDEUS   Calm yourself, now, miss.  I be all the way over here.  No threat to you, I promise. 

CAROL   But I -- how did I get here?  What's going on?  [whimper of pain]  Ahh!  My side.  What.. happened?

THADDEUS   Probly a bruise.  You was attacked, miss.  In the stairs.  I spect he hit you some.  I got you outta there and din't have no other place to put you.  You been out cold.

CAROL   [calming a bit, but still in pain]  You rescued me?  [deep breath]  Oh, goodness that hurts.  Well, thank y--  [sharp]  In the stairs, you said?

THADDEUS   Yes miss.  I heared you start--  Well, I heared it when you screamed.  The stairwell, it echoes somethin fierce.

CAROL   I guess I'm lucky you were there.

THADDEUS   Well, I was kind of listenin fer you, miss.

CAROL   Listening?

THADDEUS    [aw shucks]  I got a lot of time on my hands during days, and one time a while back I heared you singin in there, so sometimes I jest ... wait.

CAROL   [pleased and embarrassed]  Oh.  Thank you.  But--  But, do you think -- the creep who attacked me... was...?

THADDEUS   I don' see the papers much, miss, but even I heared about that there Stairway Stabber.  I'm pretty sure that was the fella, all right.

CAROL   They say he's already killed at least eight girls!

THADDEUS   That they do.  At least.

CAROL   Oh!  Oh, goodness.  I - I could have been murdered! 

THADDEUS   [quiet]  Yes'm.

CAROL   You saved me? 

THADDEUS   I did what I could, miss.  You was right out before I done got there.

CAROL   I -- I don't remember ... well, anything, really.  Um, what should I call you?  Your name.  I mean. 

THADDEUS   I understand, miss.  You can call me Thaddeus.  Tha's my name.

CAROL   And you live in my building?

THADDEUS   More years'n I care to count.  I mostly jest keep an eye on things.  Don' you worry now, I don' take up much space.

CAROL   I didn't mean to imply--

THADDEUS   It's understandable, miss.  I don' much look like I belong here.

CAROL   Please.  I don't want to sound like a snob.  I'm really just overwhelmed.  And you can call me Carol, if you'd like.  I mean, you don't have to call me "miss" all the time.

THADDEUS   I'd be right pleased to, Miss Carol.

CAROL   [forced laugh]  Just Carol, Thaddeus.  No miss.  Please.

THADDEUS   Don' seem quite respectful, miss Carol.

 

SCENE 2.  

MADAME   [filter]  Is there anyone here?

THADDEUS   By golly, she early.

CAROL   What was that?

THADDEUS   This lady wanna ask about what happened.  She with the police.

CAROL   But I don't remember--

THADDEUS   And I din't see much, but we gots to talk to her.  You gon' be all right?  I can hep you.

CAROL   [standing]  Well, I'm a little wobbly, but I'm game, I guess. 

SOUND:   SLOW FOOTSTEPS 

CAROL   But, my head -- it's amnesia.  I'm sure of it.

THADDEUS   You might be surprised what all come back to you if a body ask the right questions.  Come on now.

SOUND   Door opens.  Footsteps continue.

CAROL   Why is the room so dark?  I can barely see her.

NOTE:     [unless otherwise mentioned, Madame sounds very calm and speaks almost in a sing song voice.]

MADAME   Ah.  [deep breath]  I mean you no harm.  Please come and speak with me.  Am I addressing Carol Bournemouth?

CAROL   Why yes.  [to Thaddeus]  Did you--  [puzzled]  Oh... no, I only just told you my name.

THADDEUS   I said she with the police.  She know a lot.

MADAME   Carol, I want to hear what happened to you yesterday.

CAROL   Yesterday?  I was knocked out for a whole day?

THADDEUS   Shh now, and answer, miss Carol.

CAROL   Oh.  I really don't....  I don't remember a darn thing.  He -- Thaddeus -- said I was attacked in the stairwell.  I think I was hit on the head. 

SOUND   Very distant sound of someone knocking on a door.

CAROL   Amnesia.  I don't remember a thing!  Really!

MADAME   Calm down, Carol.  There is no need to-- 

CAROL   I'm...sorry. 

MADAME   Ah, good.  Everything is all right now.  You are safe.  It is safe to remember.  Think of it like a movie, and you are the projector.  The projector can stop a movie, Carol.  The projector can simply freeze on a single frame, and the movie never has to reach its end.  Have you ever seen that happen, Carol?

CAROL   Why is she talking like that? 

THADDEUS   Can they really just up and stop a movin' picture?  That would be somethin' to see.

CAROL   Not very exciting, really.  It's -- well, it's just a slide, then. 

MADAME   [sharp]  Carol!  [calm again]  I need you to concentrate.  What is the last thing you remember?

CAROL   [pain]  Oh!  [deep breaths]

SOUND   Knocking on door again.

THADDEUS    Just a minute, ma'am.  She got a stitch.

MADAME   Relax Carol.  Relax.  Remember, you are the projector, and the movie can stop long before anything unpleasant happens.  Just take it one frame at a time, Carol.  Do you remember going into the stairwell?  Picture the door for me.  You push open the door and step in.  There are five flights of stairs below you, but you walk them every day, don't you?  You walk them--

CAROL   It's slimming. 

MADAME   You begin to walk down the stairs, just as usual.  One step, then another.

CAROL   The way she talks--

MADAME   You pass the fourth floor door.  Nothing there for you. 

THADDEUS   She just tryin to help.

MADAME   One brisk step in front of another--

CAROL   [getting agitated]  But it's like-- it's like she's trying to hypnotize me!

SOUND   Knocking on door, slightly louder.

MADAME   Passing the baby carriage the Joneses leave tucked into the corner of the third floor landing--

THADDEUS   Don' know nothin 'bout that, but I spect she think it'a help you 'member what happened.

MADAME   All the way around to the next set of stairs--

CAROL   STOP IT.  I don't want to be hypnotized!  I don't want to--  [pain] Aaagh!  Whatever happened, I don't want to remember it, you hear?  Do you HEAR me?

SOUND   Muffled and distant:  Strange thumping and crashing noises.  Particularly, a noise like someone pounding on a door, and a crash of a broken glass.

 

SCENE 3.  

THADDEUS   Shh, listen, miss Carol.  Shh.

CAROL   What was that?  Something broke?

THADDEUS   Don't pay it no mind.  They's some noisy neighbors in this building.

CAROL   But-- It's-- it's gone now.

THADDEUS   Yes'm.  Never lasts.  Just so long as someone done got a mad on.  Then it blow over. 

CAROL   Oh.

THADDEUS   You gon' try and answer the lady, now?

CAROL   What?  No, no Thaddeus, I can't.  I don't remember anything, and when I try, oh, it hurts! 

THADDEUS   Look around.  Ain't no one here gon' hurt you, and that there pain in your side - well, a bruise is jest a bruise, ain't it?  Whatever caused it, that's all over now, and you safe. 

CAROL   Safe?

THADDEUS   I swear'n I won't let no one touch you.  The lady, she jest tryin to find out what you know so's the police can stop this fella.

CAROL   Oh.  Yes, you said she's with the police.

THADDEUS   Since I never saw none of his face, you the only one who can help.  You got to help stop this fella.

CAROL   She looks -- awfully tired.

THADDEUS   [gently]  You been wearin her out a bit with your temper.

 

SCENE 4.  

CAROL   Oh.  I'll try and do better.  You're-- sure it's safe?

THADDEUS   She said you the projector, miss Carol, you can--

MADAME    [a bit gravelly]  Shall we continue?  Ahem.  [normal, not sing song] Carol.  If you will not help, please let me know.  I want to work you through this, but your resistance--

CAROL   I just don't know what I can do!  I'm frustrated too, you know.  I can't remember a thing about--  [realizing]  Oh.

MADAME   Yes?  Continue.

CAROL   I was in a hurry.  On my way to a job interview.  Or was that Tuesday?

MADAME   Yesterday was Tuesday, yes.

CAROL   Oh!  So I was dashing down the stairs, quick as I could -- I'm faster than the elevator, you see.  That old thing.  [chuckles]  I swear it's pulled by mice.

THADDEUS    [chuckles]

MADAME   Can you remember how far you got?  Did you reach the second floor landing?

CAROL   Second floor.  Hmm.  I -- yes!  Little Billy from 203 keeps dropping gum wrappers in there, and I was thinking--  [gasp of pain]

MADAME   [gasp of pain]

SOUND   distant, barrage of knocks on a door.

THADDEUS   Miss Carol?  Miss Carol, come on -- you tough.  You can do this.  No old stitch gon' slow you down.  Here, take my hand.  Right there, now you squeeze.  Squeeze out all that bad old pain. 

CAROL   No!  No, I--

THADDEUS   [hiss intake of breath]  Good.  You keep on squeezin long as you need. 

CAROL   [several quick breaths, then one deep one]  I think  --  Thaddeus, I think that's when he hit me.  He must have hit me real hard.

MADAME   [deep breath]  Carol.  I need to stop for now.  I will return soon.  While I'm gone, can you try and remember?

CAROL   I'll try...

MADAME   Goodbye.  [NO footsteps or door]

SOUND   brief, vague rumble of voices, nothing clear.

 

SCENE 5.  

CAROL   Are they having a party?

THADDEUS   Who?

CAROL   Your neighbors.

THADDEUS   Might could be.  You doin' all right?

CAROL   Sorry to be such a baby about all this.  When it hurts - well it really hurts.

THADDEUS   I know.  Get myself the same thing in my neck sometimes.

CAROL   Oh?  [beat, changing subject]  So, do you know her?  The woman asking the questions?

THADDEUS    A bit.  She Madame Foulet and work for police, I do know that.  Some years back, she asked me a coupla questions. 

CAROL   About what?

THADDEUS    Somethin I seen ... way back when. 

CAROL   She seems kind of old to be a police matron or whatever she is. 

THADDEUS   She one of a kind, I guess.  they cain't afford to retire her.

CAROL   Is she a hypnotist?  Was I right?

THADDEUS   I don' know nothin about that, miss.  I spect you probly mostly right.

CAROL   [decisive]  Well.  If I want this guy caught - and boy do I want him caught, especially if he's the one who killed all those girls - I better get cracking and remember something.

SOUND   pacing footsteps

CAROL   In the movies, if you hit your head and get amnesia, you can hit your head again to get your memory back. 

THADDEUS   I don' guess it work that way in real life, miss.

CAROL   I have got to stop being a whiny baby about this - after all, I survived, didn't I?

THADDEUS   [dubious]  Well--

CAROL   So, it's all in the past and I shouldn't be frightened.  Oh. 

SOUND:     PACING STOPS

CAROL   Unless he decides to come back -- to make sure I can't identify him.

THADDEUS   He won't never find you now.  I promise you that.

CAROL   Really?  You didn't... 

THADDEUS   Din't what, miss?

CAROL   No, no.  You said you never even--

THADDEUS   [amused]  You thinkin I mighta kilt him?  I know I'm a big fella, but I cain't--

CAROL   I meant it as a compliment.

THADDEUS   I guess so. 

CAROL   Did you have to ... fight him off?  I mean, to save me?

THADDEUS    [distinctly uncomfortable]  Nah.  When he caught sight a me, he jest run. 

CAROL   [smiling]  You do look pretty intimidating.

THADDEUS   Nah.  Look, you should be tryin' t'member--

CAROL   [sigh]  I know, but this takes my mind off it.  I figure, it's like a word at the tip of your tongue.  When you THINK about it SO HARD that you feel like your brain may be squeezed out your ears, it never comes.  Then, the minute your mind is off it, voila!  The word tumbles right out.

THADDEUS   That sounds 'bout right.

CAROL   I need to get into the stairwell.  That'll really jog my memory.

SOUND   Rapid footsteps.  Doorknob turns, but doesn't open.

CAROL   What?  Why is the door locked? 

THADDEUS   I reckon it's jest stuck, miss.  [worried] But you really don' wanna go into the stairwell.  I- I promise you that.

CAROL   Open this door!  I don't like being locked in here--

THADDEUS   With me?

CAROL   What?  No, no.  No-- It's got nothing to do with you, Thaddeus.  I like you.  I just [SOUND: pounds once on door] don't [pound] like [pound, weakening] being [more of a smack] locked [tap] in [tap].

 

SCENE 6.  

MADAME   [slightly off mike] Good.  We can begin again.

CAROL   What?  Where'd she...?

THADDEUS   Madame said she jest needed a lil break.  She didn't say she was goin' off no place.

CAROL   But she was gone.

THADDEUS   It's real dark in here.  I never heared her go. 

CAROL   Then she must have listened to everything we said.

THADDEUS   I spect she jest shut up her eyes and her ears and took a lil nap, miss. 

MADAME   May we proceed?

CAROL   [sigh] Yes.  [fierce] Yeah, I want this fiend drawn and quartered!

SOUND   distant brief chuckle, like several people in another room.

MADAME   Now, Carol.  We'll start with something easy.  I want you to be comfortable.  I want you to remember something very pleasant. 

CAROL   Pleasant?

MADAME   Think back to a time when you were happy.

CAROL   [thinking]  Oh! No, no - that's too silly. 

MADAME   The first thing that comes to mind, Carol.

CAROL   Well, I was very sick once, when I was little - measles, I think, but I don't remember too well - Just the itching.  Oh, how it itched!  Mama gave me sweet tea each night she came home and didn't see any scratches on me.  If I could just control myself, I could have sweet tea.  [pause] Of course, I fooled her - I learned to scratch around.

THADDEUS   Scratch around?

CAROL   Yes.  Maybe it was chicken pox.  But anyway, if you scratch around the spots, it stops some of the itch, but doesn't look like you've been scratching. 

THADDEUS   Your best memory is of feelin poorly?

CAROL   No, don't be silly.  She just asked me for a memory of a happy time, and it was... oddly enough.  I got sweet tea, AND I fooled my mother.  [giggle]

SOUND   distant chuckles

CAROL   Sounds like they're having a whale of a time over there.

MADAME   Very good Carol.  You sound like you feel better now.  I need you to keep this feeling of well-being with you while we try again.

CAROL   I still don't think it will work.

THADDEUS   Try.

CAROL   All right.

MADAME   Ignore any pain.  Ignore any fear.  Ignore any interruptions.  Ignore any distractions.  We must find this man.  We must find him and stop him.  [beat]  You have just reached the second floor landing.  What do you see, Carol?

CAROL   [breathing rapidly]  I see the gum wrappers.  Little brat.  Then a shadow.  I hardly ever see people - oh! - on the stairs.  [groans] 

MADAME   Continue, please.

THADDEUS   Take my hand, Carol, jest like before.  Thass a girl.

SOUND   very distant knocking and shuffling noises.

CAROL   [whining gasp, obviously in pain]  I turn around, and there's a flash - like sunlight on water. 

MADAME   Ignore the flash.  Look only at the face. 

SOUND   knocking and shuffling noises get louder, nearer.

CAROL   No!  No I can't  - it hurts too much!

THADDEUS   Yes you can.  You gots to.  You the only one left behind - none of them other girls can say nothin, but you - you got yourself a chance to be a hero, now. 

CAROL   Are you sure he can't come back and get me?

SOUND   glass breaks

THADDEUS   Sure as I'm sittin here wit you, miss.  He cain't never even touch you - no way, no how.

MADAME   Carol!  Stop the movie!  You need to stop it and look!  Break the film in your mind, so there IS NO END.  Nothing but the face.

CAROL   No, I can't!

SOUND   heavy pounding, neighbors getting upset.

THADDEUS   Shh.  Shh.  You takin my hand right off, miss Carol.

SOUND   ALL sounds stop abruptly.

CAROL   It's a knife, isn't it?

THADDEUS   Yes.

CAROL    He's holding a knife, but it's on my right - my right...  Oh No!  Oh, Thaddeus, I'm--

SOUND   distant knocking begins again.

THADDEUS   That ain't nothing, miss Carol.  You gots to see it's just hysteria.

SOUND   Knocking gets louder

CAROL   [in tears]  But I'm bleeding!  I have to get to a doctor!

THADDEUS   They ain't no blood, miss.  Not a chance of it.  It's all in ya' head, see?

CAROL   No, look, my side, it hurts--

THADDEUS   Shh.  I don' see no blood.

SOUND   knocking begins to recede

CAROL    No blood?

THADDEUS   Not a bit of it. 

CAROL   [deep breath]  All right.  [realization]  Oh!  But if I saw a knife in his hand, on my right, then he must be left-handed!  That's important, isn't it?

MADAME   [very tired]  Very ...good.  I must have another rest.  We shall speak again.  Goodbye.

 

SCENE 7.   

CAROL   How does she do that?

THADDEUS   What?

CAROL   She just -- it was like she just wrapped some of the darkness around her and vanished.

THADDEUS   She probly jest turned off a light.  You doin all right?

CAROL   No.  My side hurts.  I want to go home.

THADDEUS   Got to finish first.  This GOT to be done.

CAROL   I know, but-- [begins to weep]

THADDEUS   I shore do like that song Poor Papa you sing sometimes.

CAROL   [surprised]  What? 

THADDEUS   I heared you sing it over and over one day, so I got it near enough memorized myself.

CAROL   [sniffs, but no longer crying]  I was getting ready for an audition.  No one can hear me in the stairwell, so it doesn't bother anyone if I practice there. 

THADDEUS   And that song -- that song is jest plain funny.  When mama gets to ride in the car--

CAROL   [cheering up] Oh, yes, when "papa bought a limousine, the most expensive kind, now he wears a chauffeur's suit, and mama rides behind!"

THADDEUS   [laughing]  Thassa one, thassa one gets me every time.  One tough female, mama is.

CAROL   You really listen to me?

THADDEUS   Whenever I hears you in the stair, I'm there quick as all get out, tucked up high so's not to bother you or, well, make you afeared.

CAROL   Oh, I'm not afraid of you.

THADDEUS    You probly would be if'n we hadn't talked first. 

CAROL   [beat] I wish I could say you were wrong.  [deep breath]  Thank you.

THADDEUS   Fer what?

CAROL   For the distraction.

THADDEUS   [teasing]  Is that what I's doin?  I thought I was complimentin you on your singin, thass all.

CAROL   Don't act dopey. 

THADDEUS   You up to tryin again? 

CAROL   Maybe...  Should we see if she'll come back?

THADDEUS   Nah.  Jest try right here.  Maybe SHE the one makin it hard fer you to think.  You come up with somethin now, you can always tell her when she come back.

SOUND   PACING

CAROL   [beat]  This is futile.

THADDEUS   Nah--

CAROL   [revving up]  Futile.  Pointless!  Hopeless! 

THADDEUS   You know what you needs?  You needs to scratch around.

CAROL   What?

THADDEUS   You cain't scratch the spot what itches, cause that jest get you into trouble.  Scratch around

CAROL   [realizing]  Thaddeus, you're brilliant!  [beat]  But, how CAN I think around--? 

THADDEUS   Mebbe... you ever see them funny pictures with an artist, and he holdin up his thumb?  How bout if you hold up ya' thumb - block out the part you gots to scratch around.

CAROL   I think I see -- Just look at the edges, because the middle is too scary.

THADDEUS   Yes'm.

CAROL   I see the door to the second floor hallway.  It's off to my left.  I see the light fixture on the wall.

THADDEUS   Don' worry about no lights.

CAROL   Right.  I see a [deep breath] a hat - no a cap, like a deliveryman would wear.  It's [breathes quickly for a moment]  blue- I think it's blue--

SOUND   Thud, like a body drop.

THADDEUS   Calm now, Miss Carol.

CAROL   --and hair, blonde?  Or maybe light brown. 

 

SCENE 8.  

MADAME   Be calm, Carol.

CAROL   Yes, a deliveryman.  I remember!  I was thinking it must have been a small package, since he was coming up the stairs instead of the elevator, when-- [hollow, pained] oh!

SOUND   LOUDEST thumpings and rattlings yet.  they CONTINUE until noted.

CAROL   Oh!

THADDEUS   S'all right.

CAROL   Oh!  No, but Thaddeus--

THADDEUS   I understand.  I promise you, I do.

CAROL   But--

SOUND   CRASH OF GLASS.

CROWD   [reactions - gasps, a scream.]

CAROL   But, he ... he killed me, didn't he?  [beat] Didn't he Thaddeus?

SOUND   Deep creaking & cracking noises.

CROWD   [reacts again]

MADAME   Carol.  I need to end this now.  Goodbye.

SOUND   Sudden silence.

 

SCENE 9.  

CAROL   Thaddeus?

THADDEUS   Yes, miss Carol?

CAROL   [calm] I'm right, aren't I?

THADDEUS   I spect you'd rather not be, but -- yes.  You dead, too.

CAROL   Too?

THADDEUS   I wished I coulda stopped him, I truly do - but they ain't nothin much a ghost can do!  Jest makin him see me was hard enough, and I was ... too late...

CAROL   But, what do I do now?  Do I go somewhere?

THADDEUS   [rueful laugh] If'n I had an answer fer that, miss Carol, I spect I wouldn't be here talkin wit' you.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.  

TOUR GUIDE   [clearly reading]  And here we are at stop number 12 on the haunted hotel tour, the Garibaldi Residential Suites -- rumored to be home to a plethora of ghosts, including a baby in the basement, a chain rattling spook in suite 405, a runaway slave, and the poor girl who was the final victim of the stairway stabber - and can sometimes be heard singing in the stairwells.

MUSIC

OLIVIA   Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

"Poor Papa" lyrics by Billy Rose, 1926.

 

 

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19 Nocturne Boulevard - PLEASE OUIJA PLEASE - reissue21 Oct 202100:07:52

Be careful what you wish for.

Please Ouija Please

  • Griswold – Tom Taverna
  • Maude – Nila Hagood
  • Edgar – Boyd Barrett
  • Winifrid – Julie Hoverson
  • Nurse 1 – Rhys Torres
  • Nurse 2 – Eleiece Krawiec
  • News 1 – Greg Allensworth
  • News 2 – Regan Lussier

Written and produced by Julie Hoverson

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This is one of my newer short audio pieces.  Another one where a single scene in some movie will stick in my head and I will come up with an entirely new story - in this case, a nurse walking away, and someone sneaking out of their rooms at night.  Can't even recall what movie it was, but the whole story came to me in an instant. 

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Please Ouija Please

Cast:

  • GRISWOLD (M, elderly) leader
  • MAUDE (F, elderly) bossy
  • EDGAR (M, elderly) jokester
  • WINIFRID (F, elderly) worrywart
  • NURSE1 & 2 (any)
  • News1 & 2 (any)

MUSIC - MELANCHOLY

 

SCENE 1.    OLD FOLKS HOME

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS VERY QUIETLY

SOUND    SOFT FOOTSTEPS

NURSE 1    [report, quiet] Everything's fine in here.

SOUND    THEY WALK AWAY

NURSE 2    The boys have been fractious tonight.  They keep claiming they have to "go home."  [chuckles sadly]  These senile cases.  At least they aren't the type to play grabsies like frat boys.

NURSE 1    I'd hate for any of our oldies to get out and go missing like those kids from over the hill.

NURSE 2    I know.  Who knows what could be happening to the poor little things?

SOUND    THEY GO OUT A DISTANT DOOR, IT SHUTS

SOUND    AFTER A MOMENT, A NEARBY DOOR OPENS

MAUDE    [whispered] All clear.

WINIFRID    [whispered] Do you see the boys?

GRISWOLD    Psst!

MAUDE    There they are.  Stay close, Winnie!

SOUND    VERY SOFT SLIPPERED FOOTSTEPS

MUSIC - MYSTICAL

 

SCENE 2.    ATTIC

SOUND    MATCHES STRIKE

EDGAR    [bragging] Stole these from the orderly.

WINIFRID    You could have got caught!

SOUND    CHALK WRITING - WITH MAUDE'S LETTERS

MAUDE    A-B

GRISWOLD    I was watching his back.

MAUDE    C-D-E

GRISWOLD    If anyone came, I was gonna fake a seizure or something.  At least til Eddie got clear.

MAUDE    F-G-H-I-  [falters] uh--

WINIFRID    J-K-L

MAUDE    right.  M- N-

EDGAR    I couldn't find anything quite like a reader thing--

WINIFRID    A planchette.

EDGAR    Yeah, one of those.  But maybe this would work.

MAUDE    O-P-Q-R

GRISWOLD    We don't want to take any chances.  Not again.

WINIFRID    [agreeing dolefully] Nuh-uh!

MAUDE    S-T-U-

EDGAR    But this - I found this magnifying glass - it can circle letters.

WINIFRID    They use a little drinking glass in the movies.  When they don't have a proper one.

MAUDE    V-W-X-

GRISWOLD    There's no time to go get anything else.  And they lock up the dining hall.

EDGAR    We can all touch the edges of the magnifier.  It's big enough.

MAUDE    Y-Z.  There.

SOUND    WRITING ENDS

WINIFRID    [anxious] Now put yes and no.

GRISWOLD    And Goodbye.  NEVER forget goodbye.

SOUND    WRITING AGAIN

MAUDE    [sigh as she starts]  Good...bye.

SOUND    DRAGGING OF MAGNIFYING GLASS ACROSS GROUND.

EDGAR    See?

WINIFRID    That's awful noisy.  Are you sure they won't hear?

GRISWOLD    I don't think so.

MAUDE    [writing, not responding] Yes.

EDGAR    You always agree with Griswold.

MAUDE    [writing, not responding] No.

WINIFRID    Hush, Eddie.

MAUDE    [finished] There.  What?  [waits] We better start.  Who knows when they'll spot we're all gone.

GRISWOLD    Circle up.

SOUND    SCUFFLING MOVEMENT

EDGAR    We all got to touch this.

SOUND    MAGNIFYING GLASS SET ON FLOOR

WINIFRID    Who starts?

MAUDE    Griz did it before, he has to again.  Do you remember who to call?

GRISWOLD    Shh.  [in an important voice]  We are here to call on the spirits.  Are there any here?

SOUND    MAGNIFYING GLASS SLIDES

EDGAR    [hushed but excited]  Yes!

WINIFRID    I didn't--!

MAUDE    Shh!  Go on Griz.

GRISWOLD    We need to speak to the spirit we found before.  The one named--

WINIFRID    It's moving.

SOUND    MOVING

EDGAR    Spelling something!

MAUDE    U-M-A-

GRISWOLD    Sh.  Don't say it if you don't have to.

MAUDE    I wasn't saying it, I was--

GRISWOLD    Shh!

WINIFRID    It was the same name, I was watching.

EDGAR    Me too!

GRISWOLD    Are you here?

SOUND    MOVING

EDGAR    Yes.

WINIFRID    [blurting] Please let us go home!

MAUDE    Shh.  You know it's not that easy.

GRISWOLD    We want to reverse what happened.  Can we do that?

SOUND    MOVING

EDGAR    [shaky and excited] Yes!

WINIFRID    [whimpers]

MAUDE    How?  [prompting] Ask how?

GRISWOLD    How can we reverse it?

SOUND    MOVING

EDGAR    K-

MAUDE    I-

GRISWOLD    L-

WINIFRID    [whimpers, cries]  No.

GRISWOLD    Who?

WINIFRID    [crying]  What?

GRISWOLD    [ignoring her] Who do we have to--

SOUND    MOVING

MAUDE    [reading] Anyone.

GRISWOLD    How many?  How many total?

EDGAR    What?

GRISWOLD    I don't want to get fooled again.  Is it one for all of us, or one each?

SOUND    MOVING

WINIFRID    I can't!

MAUDE    [reading] Only One.

EDGAR    Whew.

WINIFRID    No!

MAUDE    [sigh] We have to, or we'll be here forever.

EDGAR    And forever ain't gonna last very long.  [slight whine] I want to go home, don't you, Winnie?

WINIFRID    I- I-  [breaking down into tears] Y-yes.  I want mommy!

MAUDE    Do we all have to,.. help?  Or can you handle it, Griz?

GRISWOLD    Me?  Um.  I'll ask.  [clears throat]  Who needs to - uh - do the killing?

SOUND    MOVING

GRISWOLD    [reading]  No matter. 

EDGAR    You make it say it clear!

GRISWOLD    [commanding] If I do it - kill someone - will that count for all of us so we can go home?

SOUND    MOVING - ONE SHIFT

MAUDE    [sharp, reading]  Yes!

GRISWOLD    Okay, then.

EDGAR    [dubious] I-I- can help?

GRISWOLD    I got us into this. 

WINIFRID    But Edgar made the wish.

EDGAR    What?

MAUDE    You are the one who said we all wanted to be older.

GRISWOLD    [grim] Never mind.  Let's get it over with.

EDGAR    Don't forget to say--

ALL JOIN IN     Goodbye.

SOUND    LONG WAIT, THEN MOVING - ONE SHIFT

 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.    NEWS

NEWS1    Breaking news tonight is the fire at the Ronson Elder Care facility that claimed three lives.  No details at this time as to the cause of the conflagration.  More as the story develops. 

NEWS2    In other, more pleasant, news, four young siblings who have been missing in the Ronson area for almost two weeks have mysteriously found their way home. 

NEWS1    I'm sure we all wish them the best.

MUSIC STING TO END

Atomic Julie - Beyond the Yellow Fog (pt 7 of 8) by Emmett McDowell19 Oct 202100:16:47

Chapter 8:  forget the heavy gravity, I'm booking!

19 Nocturne Boulevard - MURDER WARD - Reissue14 Oct 202100:33:48

MURDER WARD

"Not guilty by reason of insanity" sounds like an easy out to murderer Edmund - but when he checks into Dr. Larson's mental hospital, he gets much more than he bargained for.

Cast List
Edmund/Achilles - Kim Turner
Preacher Ronald - Pat McNally
Rose Connelly - Joy Jackson
Hector - Cole Hornaday
Dr. Larson - Marge Lutton
Terrance - Greg Porter
Lawyer - Sigmund Hoverson
Ape man - Reynaud LeBoeuf
District Attorney - Melinda Mains
Also heard - Julie Hoverson

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Sound effects found on Soundsnap.com
Cover Photos:  Front - Witek Burkiewicz
            (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

Recorded with American Radio Theater

"What kind of a place is it? 
Why, it's an insane asylum - can't you tell? 
Where else would you find... a murderer?"  

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Murder Ward

This was another episode I wrote specifically in an Old Time Radio format and put together with American Radio Theater, a group that recreates old time radio shows.

Parts of this story were very loosely inspired by (of all things) The Seven Keys to Baldpate, a stage play by George M. Cohen (and a film inspired by it, "The House of Long Shadows"), as was at least one other episode of my show, though in a completely separate way. 

Some stories just stick with me.... Or make me think of ways I could do it better....

A big part of this particular story comes from my love of old true crime and detective stories, and how often (in fiction at least) people claim to be temporarily insane in order to get an easier sentence.

I don't want to say more about this story, just will leave it up to the listener.

I want to talk about how I got into podcast audio dramas.

I was doing OTR re-creations with ART when Reynaud Leboeuf (one of my most reliable stock actors in 19 Nocturne Boulevard) said he'd been cast in this podcast Lovecraftian comedy soap opera called The Unspeakable and the Inhuman (which was hilarious), and that they were still looking for a female lead, and would I like to audition?

Well, of course I would!

I was cast, and we recorded in early 2008 at Neohoodoo Studios (Ryan's basement), and during one of these recordings, one of the other actors commented that this was so fun, they should make more shows so that we could record more....

...and I said I have some scripts!!!!

Of course, I still had to learn how to mix, and all that sort of thing, but that's basically where it started.  For most of 2008, 19 Nocturne was recorded primarily at Neohoodoo, with the help and kind permission of Ryan - and that got me good sound to work with for my beginning efforts, which made a huge difference.  Joy from ART and Ryan both showed me a few things and gave me some tips on mixing.

I have to admit to being a teensy bit smug when, after Unspeakable and Inhuman kind of fell apart, I ran into the main writer Derek at a convention a few years later, and he asked me "How did you make it to so many episodes, when we never got past 9?" and I replied "I'm not a committee."

I do wish Unspeakable and Inhuman was still available somewhere, but I don't think it is.  Maybe I'll get in touch with Derek someday and get permission to post the episodes - for posterity.

For the first year of 19 Nocturne, episodes came out in the U&I feed - after the first 8 came out at Brokensea - which further muddies the waters as to what the original order of episodes might have been.  It was late 2009 before I decided I was definitely going to keep making shows, and therefore it was worth getting my own page and RSS feed.

...Everything else, as they say, is history.

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MURDER WARD

Cast:

  • OLIVIA, the host
  • EDMUND Rafelsen (M/30s) - evil alter ego "Achilles"
  • RUDY Horton, Esq. (M/50s) - Edmund's lawyer
  • TERRANCE (M/20s) - the guard
  • ROSE Connelly (F/20s) - paranoid, hears voices
  • HECTOR Wilson (M/20s) - phobic, fears women
  • RONALD Tomlinson (M/40s) - believes he's obeying god
  • VINCENT (M/any) - frightening, violently crazy
  • DOCTOR Sara LARSON (F/40s) - psychiatrist
  • CROWD, GIRL, MOM, KID - any voices
  • D-A. - District Attorney

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's an insane asylum, can't you tell?  Where else would you find ...a murderer? 

MUSIC

OLIVIA    [voice over]  "Not guilty by reason of insanity".  A legal defense, often misused to try and get a lighter sentence for a heinous crime.  And what does it really mean?  In a nutshell--

 

SCENE 1.  OFFICE

RUDY    --it means at the time you did what you did, you didn't - couldn't - understand what you were doing was wrong.  It's a tough sell, Ed.  No matter what the movies make out, most juries just don't believe--

EDMUND    [cultured voice]  Mr. Horton, I would prefer that you address me directly when you speak to me.

RUDY    Ed, this isn't funny.

EDMUND    There is no "Ed" here.  Edmund, however, is sleeping.  Mr. Horton, if you cannot bring yourself to use my name, at least--

RUDY    OK, look--

SOUND    rustling paper

RUDY    [disapproving]  --Achilles - I--

EDMUND    And I am not insane.  Nor is Edmund.  I knew perfectly well what I did was wrong.  All those pretty little women.  I was really doing them a favor.  The world is so harsh.

RUDY    I--  Look, Achilles, let me talk to Ed for a while.  It's his name on the docket, after all.

EDMUND    Very well.  I shall rouse him for you.  [voice changes to more lower class - after this, he speaks as Ed any time not otherwise noted]  Yeah?  What is it shyster?  Hey!  Why's my cigarette all burned down all of a sudden?

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.  COURTROOM

CROWD    [MURMURS]

SOUND    GAVEL

DOCTOR LARSON    Ahem.  As I said, after a thorough examination, I have concluded that while Edmund is nominally the dominant persona, his alter ego Achilles was the one who actually committed... [fade out]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.  ASYLUM HALLWAY

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS ON TILE.  JINGLE OF KEYS

TERRANCE    Guess you think you're lucky, eh?

SOUND    DOOR UNLOCKS

EDMUND    And why's that?

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

INMATES    [AD LIB, MURMURS "IN CHARACTER" see monologues at end]

EDMUND    What the--?

TERRANCE    Your new pals, bub.  As I was saying, I guess you THINK you're lucky, getting off without the death penalty and all.  Come on.

SOUND    SLOW FOOTSTEPS

EDMUND    Look mac, I thought I was gonna have a private room--

TERRANCE    These are the induction cells.  Once the Doc gets a handle on your syko-sees, she'll move you to someplace appropriate.

EDMUND    She? 

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS STOP

TERRANCE    Sure.  You saw her at your trial - Doctor Larson.  She's got some big-brain new ideas about how ta deal with luniacks like yourself. 

SOUND    KEYS JINGLE. 

TERRANCE    Your room, misshur.

SOUND    CELL UNLOCKS, DOOR OPENS.

EDMUND    But, but there's a DAME in here.  Ain't we supposed to be--

TERRANCE    Funny thing about that.  Dames go off the pier too.  And we're overbooked in that department.  She probly won't be here long.  Besides, she's waaaay over there.  She can't hurt you.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS

HECTOR    [fading in - urgent milktoast]  --he's right.  She shouldn't be in here.  You don't understand the damage they can do.  [fading] Women are--

RONALD    [fading in, hissing whispers]  ‑‑have new instructions.  It is time for you to let me go.  HE has declared it.  [fading]  My presence is required--

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS END, JINGLE OF KEYS

ROSE    [fading in] --staring at me.  Are you sure they can't get out?  Please, would you check the locks again?  [fading]  I'm so afraid--

SOUND    DOOR OPENS AND SHUTS.

INMATES    [MOMENT OF SILENCE]

ROSE    [sigh]

RONALD    [normal, husky voice]  Hey.  New guy.  Got any smokes?

EDMUND    What?

RONALD    Smokes. 

EDMUND    Even if I did, they wouldn't let us have any matches, would they?

ROSE    [hard dame]  Who are you kidding?  You can get pretty much anything in here, just as long as you know who to ask.  And HOW to ask it.

EDMUND    Funny, you sounded crazy a minute ago.

ROSE    [snort]  Yeah, well.  We all have our bad days...  [raising voice slightly]  And some never have good days, right Heck?

HECTOR    Wicked Jezebel.  You shouldn't be here.

ROSE    [to Edmund]  We're pretty sure that Hector there is the real McCoy. 

RONALD    Now, now.  We're ALL nuts.  We must keep that in mind.

ROSE    Yeah, but THAT guy - he just never lets up!

EDMUND    But if you ain't crazy--

RONALD    [chuckles]  Court says we are.  Even with moments of lucidity, well--  What can they do?

EDMUND    What if they're listening?  Recording, maybe?

ROSE    I thought I was the one with the persecution complex.

RONALD    I've been trying to catch them for over a month.  Nothing doing.  They're just not interested.  Besides, once the jury brings down the verdict, the court has to keep you locked you up until they cure you.

ROSE    OR you give up and confess.

RONALD    Oh, sure.  [sarcastic]  I'll just admit it was all phony, take my lumps and go to the Chair! 

EDMUND    What if one of you decides to squeal?

ROSE    [laughs]  Who'd take the word of a head case?

HECTOR    If you try and spit your fiendish poison at me, fiend, I shall find a way to defend myself!

ROSE     [disgusted sigh]  I am real sick of him. 

RONALD    He probably had a bad mother.

ROSE    Yeah?  Well who didn't?

EDMUND    The guard said I'd only be in here for a little while--

RONALD    Yeah.  Us too.  I've now been here for two months, and Rose--

ROSE    Rose Connelly, p'raps you hearda me?

EDMUND    YOU'RE Rose Connelly?

ROSE     [pleased]  Yeah.  The one and only.  My sister's got a scrapbook of clippings for me.  She can't bring them, but she tells me all about them when she visits. 

RONALD    Rose's been here about three weeks.  Since her sentencing.

EDMUND    And Romeo over there?

ROSE    Hah!  Cute.  Two incredibly long days. 

EDMUND    And...this is it?

RONALD    What?

EDMUND    This is what we get?  I mean, in prison they at least get some kind of exercise and stuff.  Geneva convention, and all that. 

ROSE    Ah, it's just temporary.  I guess the loony bins are all booked up right now.  [giggles]  Say, maybe there's a convention in town.

RONALD    Don't worry.  We get to talk to the Doc each day, regular as clockwork.  She's a sweetheart, but I bet Hector isn't making any improvements.

HECTOR    [matter of fact]  Doctor?  She's the devil!  I refuse to give her the satisfaction of a single word.

ROSE    [derisive]  "Doctor," hah!  She's the one that let me get myself in here.  I thought it would be real tough to fool a head shrinker, but boy was she a pushover.  Always so sympathetic.  So understanding.  She don't deserve to be a nurse, let alone a doctor. 

RONALD    Funny, she testified at my trial too.  Hmm.  Guess we both got lucky.

EDMUND    [absently]  Yeah.  Lucky.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.  DOCTOR'S OFFICE

DOCTOR LARSON    Edmund, I can't help you if you refuse to cooperate. 

EDMUND    [as Achilles]  I am trying my utmost, madam, but he simply refuses to converse with you.

DOCTOR LARSON     [not batting an eye]  Then let's you and I talk, Achilles.  You claim that the killing was--

EDMUND    [as Achilles]  Killings.  Let us be precise.  Mercy killings, actually.  [fading]  I felt so kindly‑‑

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.  CELL HALLWAY

SOUND    SNORING FROM ALL INMATES

SOUND    SCRITCHING, LIKE A MOUSE TRYING TO BORE THROUGH WOOD

EDMUND    [snores, then wakes, frightened]  Ah! ah!  What?

[NOTE    LOW VOICES]

RONALD    Shh.  You'll wake the neighbors.

EDMUND    What was that?  But that noise - it's--

RONALD    I know.  We call him Mortimer.

EDMUND    This place has mice?

RONALD    We haven't seen him, so we're not sure what particular type of rodentia he is, but we sure hear him.  Particularly when it's quiet. 

EDMUND    But how can I get any sleep--?

RONALD    You get used to it.  We all get used to lots of things.

HECTOR    [coming awake with a scream]  Aaagh!  Off me, you fiend from hell!  No! No! [goes on incoherently]

ROSE    [Wakes with a whimper]

[NOTE    VOICES NORMAL]

EDMUND    That'll take some getting used to.

RONALD    Yeah.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 6.  DOCTOR'S OFFICE

DOCTOR LARSON    Edmund, why don't you tell me about your mother?

EDMUND    [as Edmund]  My mother?  What - why?  My mother's fine.  She got nothing to do with this.

DOCTOR LARSON     Do you love your mother?

EDMUND    Well, o'course.  I mean, you gotta - it's just nature, ain't it?  [trailing off with] No matter... what... she does t'you.

DOCTOR LARSON    What did your mother do, Edmund?  [beat]  Edmund?

EDMUND    [as Achilles]  It's no use, doctor.  He has gone into retreat.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.  CELL HALLWAY

SOUND    CELL BLOCK DOOR OPENS

INMATES     [begin their various muttering]

TERRANCE    This way folks.  Step lively now.

SOUND    CROWD MURMURS, LOTS OF SHUFFLING FOOTSTEPS

HECTOR    What is this?  How dare you bring in more of THEM!  Mischief!  Mischief!

ROSE    [aside, shocked, not pretending] What's a kid doing here?

MOM    Tommy, now look at that - that's what crazy folks look like.

KID    Gee.

TERRANCE    [like a carnival barker] Not just any crazy folks, lady, these are all crazy murderers!

CROWD    Ooh!

TERRANCE    Each and every one of these... people... has committed the most heinous of crimes!

GIRL    Wow, look at that one over there, he's kinda cute--!

HECTOR    Harlot!  Harlot!  Do not approach, or I must smite thee down!

GIRL    What's smite - is that bad?

TERRANCE    Best to stay away from the bars.  Now, this here is Rose Connolly, known throughout the entire state--

ROSE    [seriously disturbed] Stop looking at me!  How can you--?  Get them outta here, wontcha? 

TERRANCE    --For killing her husband while under the inexorable compulsion of a persecution complex.

ROSE    This isn't right!

GIRL    What's inexcorable - is that bad?

MOM    Killing your man - now, that ain't right!

RONALD    Come, come, now - leave her, she is unimportant, aha!  But I - I have a message to give unto you.

MUSIC - TIME PASSES

 

SCENE 8.  CELL HALLWAY

SOUND    CROWD WANDERS OUT, DOOR SHUTS

ROSE    [Breaks down]  Oh!

RONALD    How mortifying.

ROSE    [sobbing]  Like animals in a zoo. 

EDMUND     I'm surprised they didn't start throwing us peanuts.

RONALD    I tried to get them away from you, Rose, I really did.  But big headlines trumps preaching, I guess.

HECTOR    This should stand as a warning to you, woman!  You are never alone!  There is always a witness to the wicked things you do!

ROSE    I have had just about enough out of you!  You-- noisy little weasel!  We girls, we're just folks just like everybody else - you have no right to--

RONALD    Rose, calm down.  Shh.  It's not going to help.

EDMUND    Yeah.  For crying out loud, we've made it this far, how much worse can it get? 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 9.  DOCTOR'S OFFICE

EDMUND    [as Achilles]  It was mortifying for Edmund, Doctor.  I think he may have suffered a terrible setback.

DOCTOR    Now, the tours are conducted for very good reasons.

EDMUND    What, pray tell?

DOCTOR    It's really not something we should be discussing, but - since you are so concerned - First, it is to show the public that this facility is on the up and up - you've certainly heard of the old fashioned "asylums" where inmates were neglected and beaten?  This way, nothing is hidden - so no abuses occur--

EDMUND    [almost breaking character]  No abuses?

DOCTOR    Also, it helps to make insanity seem less frightening to the general public.  Most people have seen insanity only in movies - where it is so inevitably terribly destructive and dangerous.  This way, they see the human side of it.

EDMUND    [as Achilles] I see that your intentions are admirable, but I can't help but think that a trip through the violent ward would merely reinforce the negative popular belief?

DOCTOR    That's why the tour through the violent ward is only for serious students of psychology.  [fading]  You must have misunderstood.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.  CELL HALLWAY

SOUND    CELL BLOCK DOOR OPENS

RONALD    And the lord said--

ROSE    Can't you make them stop staring?

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS, DOOR CLOSES

INMATES    [CONTINUE MURMURS]

SOUND     CELL DOOR OPENS

EDMUND    [Achilles]  Thank you, my good man.

SOUND    CELL DOOR CLOSES, FOOTSTEPS.  THEN A SCUFFLE!

HECTOR    [struggling]  Give it to me! 

TERRANCE    [struggling]  Leave go, you ape!

HECTOR    [struggling]  I have to-- oof! [air knocked out of him]

SOUND    TWO FOOTSTEPS.  DUSTING OFF HANDS

TERRANCE    That'll show you to tangle with me. 

HECTOR    [weak]  Yes, but ... I have your gun.

ROSE    [scream] 

EDMUND    Stop him Ron - you're closest!

SOUND    GUN SHOT

TERRANCE    Aargh!

ROSE    Oh no!  No!

HECTOR    [calm and creepy] The next one is for you, Delilah!  Salome!

ROSE    Me?  I didn't do anything-- [gasps]

INMATES    [GASP]

SOUND    CLICK

RONALD    Who put out the lights?

HECTOR    It was the monster - Lilith, devourer of infants! 

SOUND    PSSST OF GAS

EDMUND    Do you... hear... [getting sleepy] Some...thing...?

MUSIC - TIME PASSES

 

SCENE 11.  CELL HALLWAY

EDMUND    [waking up]  Hmm?  Wha--?

RONALD    [groans]

ROSE    [wakes with a startled gasp]

EDMUND    What happened?

RONALD    At least the lights are back on.

ROSE    But I don't wanna open my eyes.

EDMUND    Look!

RONALD    Where?  [disgust]  Oh!

ROSE    Just ... just tell me, I don't wanna--

EDMUND    Better you don't look, Rose.  [muttered]  That's a lot of blood.

RONALD    [muttered back]  You don't lose that much and walk away.  Too bad.  Terry was a right guy.

ROSE    Blood?  Oh, no!  Hector?  Where is he?  He's going to shoot me!

RONALD    Calm down, Rose.  He's gone.

EDMUND    So's the guard.  There's just the... blood.

SOUND    CLICK - LOUDSPEAKER ON

DOCTOR LARSON    [filter/loudspeaker]  We apologize for the inconvenience of using a psychotropic gas on you. 

EDMUND    Gas?

DOCTOR LARSON    [filter]  Rest assured there will be no long-term effects. 

EDMUND    That was what I heard.

DOCTOR LARSON    [filter]  If you are feeling groggy or your head aches, sit quietly, breath deeply, and it will pass.

SOUND    CLICK - LOUDSPEAKER OFF

ROSE    [breathing deeply but raggedly]  It wasn't our fault - they haveta know that! 

EDMUND    It's not like we're a bunch of babes in the woods.  They may know what happened and just not care.

ROSE    So just because I killed my husband, I;m gonna - I'm gonna hurt a random stranger?  That's silly.

RONALD    [chuckles]  No.  Just insane, m'dear. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.  OFFICE

RUDY    I don't see any way to--

EDMUND    What?  This is cruel and inhumane--

RUDY    You don't understand, Ed.  [dry]  It is Ed I'm talking to, isn't it?

EDMUND    Yeah, yeah.

RUDY    You are not a free citizen.  You've been consigned to Dr. Larson's care, and--

EDMUND    Now you don't understand, Horton.  A guard was killed last night, in our block--

RUDY    You didn't--?

EDMUND    Nah, it was this loony who thinks women are all evil.

RUDY    Which, of course, you don't--?

EDMUND    This ain't the time for that, Rudy.  I'm talking about a murder.

RUDY    There's no record of--

EDMUND    The corpse's name is Terry, Terrance, something like that.  He is - was - a guard here.  Come on, someone's gotta be doing something!

RUDY    I haven't seen anything in the papers.  These state-run facilities, though-- sometimes they're like a world in themselves.

EDMUND    Well get me another world.

RUDY    [chuckles]  There's only ONE way to do that.

EDMUND    Yes?

RUDY    Admit that you're not insane... and go to the chair.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.  CELL HALLWAY

SOUND    CELL BLOCK DOOR OPENS, ROSE'S FOOTSTEPS AND A HEAVY SET OF MAN'S FOOTSTEPS, SLOW AND MEASURED.

ROSE    Can't you please stop looking at me?  I know why - I know why you're staring!  You can read my mind!

SOUND    KEYS JINGLE

EDMUND    [Achilles]  You are such a lovely young lady.  And so frightened.  Come to me and I shall cure you of all your fear.

SOUND    DOOR UNLOCKS, OPENS

ROSE     Stop!  Don't say things like that.  He never takes his eyes off of me, you know. 

RONALD    [quietly]  And he said unto me, for I am the way--

SOUND    ROSE'S QUICK FOOTSTEPS, DOOR SHUTS, LOCKS.

EDMUND    Hey, buddy, don't you talk?

SOUND    KEYS JINGLE.  HEAVY FOOTSTEPS LEAVE

RONALD    Justice is ever mute.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, CLOSES

INMATES    [quiet for a moment]

EDMUND    What's with that guy?

RONALD    I hate being ignored like that.

ROSE    He didn't say anything in the halls - going to the doc's office OR coming back, either.  No matter what I did.

EDMUND    Did the doc say anything about the dead guard?

ROSE    Not a word, even though I asked.  She just ignored the question.

RONALD    She didn't ignore you completely, though?

ROSE    No... But she didn't say much.  Did she talk to you at all during your appointment?

RONALD    I didn't have an appointment with her this morning.

EDMUND    But you were gone--

RONALD    I wasn't going to say anything, but the guard just took me out and walked me around the halls for an hour. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.  OFFICE

EDMUND    I got rights, Horton!

RUDY    Well, technically, no.  Actually, I could do more for you if you WERE in prison.  Once you're committed to the doctor's care, you really can't complain.  Particularly since you don't have any proof for any of your allegations--

EDMUND    Allegations?  Proof?  How's this for proof - the others will back me up!

RUDY    [condescending]  Two other certified inmates?  Oh, sure.  That'll stand up in court.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 15.

EDMUND    You guys ever wonder what they did with old Hector?

RONALD    Solitary confinement, I guess.  Killing a guard's pretty serious.

EDMUND    [sarcastic] Oh, yeah, unlike whatever it was we did to get here.

ROSE    Hey, I draw the line at killing strangers. 

EDMUND    Just your husband?

ROSE    Looking back, I guess it wasn't such a great idea.

RONALD    You guess?  Hah! You--

EDMUND    Why'd you do it, then?  Did he push you around or something?

ROSE    [snorts] Nah.  If he'd'a beaten me, I woulda had a defense in court.  Nah, it was just little things.  Like the sounds he makes when he eats - ate - and the thing with his toenails.  Us women have to put up with this kind of thing all the time, but...  It just got to me.

EDMUND    It just got to you? 

ROSE    Well, yeah! 

RONALD    There's a reason the marriage vows say until death do we part--

ROSE    AND I wasn't going to the chair for something like that, so I started pulling the "he was out to get me" hash on my lawyer, and it worked.  More or less.  Not like this joint is anything to write home about. 

RONALD    It wasn't so bad up until that guy Hector showed up.  Since then... well.

EDMUND    So who'd you kill?

SOUND    TINNY CHAMBER MUSIC BEGINS TO PIPE IN, VERY QUIETLY.

RONALD    I don’t think so--

EDMUND    [pushing] Go on.  Who?

ROSE    Oh, leave off.  Hey, that's kind of nice.

RONALD    What? 

ROSE    The music.

RONALD    Hmm.  And if I prefer to maintain my right to avoid self-incrimination?

EDMUND    Geez.  Don't take it that way, I was just curious.  [pause]  I killed four women.

ROSE    Four?  Maybe I SHOULD be worried.

SOUND    MUSIC STARTS TO VERY SLOWLY GET LOUDER

EDMUND    Oh, I put on a song and dance for the cops about how they needed to be killed to save them and all.  Making up a Mr. Hyde personality to take all the blame.  [beat]  Three of em were mob snitches. 

RONALD     So what, you're a hit man?

EDMUND    I owed some money.  Shouldn't have got caught at all, seeing as how there was no connection between me and them, but the cops got something - fingerprints or something - and they tracked me down.

ROSE    And ...the fourth?

EDMUND    Huh?  [offhanded]  Oh, just some dame - I did her to throw off the connections and make myself look nuts.  I'd already figured on being caught - and better a whacko than a torpedo, ya know? 

SOUND    MUSIC IS LOUD ENOUGH THAT THEY ARE RAISING THEIR VOICES OVER IT

RONALD    You are some piece of work.

EDMUND    Still casting stones, eh, preacher?  Why don't you explain how you got here--  What in the name of --- What IS that MUSIC?

ROSE    It was ok... to start with... but, now--!

SOUND     MUSIC REACHES A CRESCENDO, THEN CUTS OUT WITH

MUSIC STING - TIME PASSES

 

SCENE 16.  CELL HALLWAY

SOUND    DOOR LOCK UNLOCKS, DOOR OPENS.

RONALD    --said the offender must be plucked out!

SOUND    SLOW FOOTSTEPS - ORDERLY BRINGING IN NEW INMATE, VICTOR

EDMUND    I am so sick of this guy.

ROSE    Are you taking me away?  I know you've been watching me.

SOUND    RATTLE OF LARGE CHAIN, STUMBLING FOOTSTEPS

VICTOR    [growls and snaps] 

SOUND     KEYS, CELL DOOR OPENS.

ROSE    [whispered]  Ed?  Ed?  That guy - is he even human?

EDMUND    [whispered]  Shh.  I dunno.

ROSE    [whispered]  But he's so... so huge!

SOUND    SHUFFLING FOOTSTEPS, CHAIN RATTLING.

RONALD    The beast!  For I have seen--

VICTOR    [growl - lunge]

SOUND    SCUFFLE OF FEET, CHAINS CLANG AGAINST BARS.

RONALD    Aah! 

SOUND    SCUFFLE AWAY.

VICTOR    [snarling]

SOUND    THUNK OF NIGHTSTICK ON FLESH, RATTLE OF CHAINS

ROSE    He didn't-- it didn't even notice!  The guard hit it and hit it--  [screaming]  Get me out of here!  Please!  Please get me out of here! 

sound    cell door closes, locks, rattle of chains against bars

EDMUND    Shh.  He's not listening anyway.

ROSE    Anything!  Whatever you want!  [collapsing into sobs]  I can't take any more!

SOUND    GUARD'S FOOTSTEPS, KEYS, CELL BLOCK DOOR UNLOCKED

ROSE    Please!  I'll admit everything!  Take me to the doctor - the lawyer - the JUDGE!  Anything!

SOUND    [BEAT]  FOOTSTEPS RETURN, KEYS, CELL DOOR UNLOCKS.

ROSE    [Breaking down] Oh... thank you.  Thank you...!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 17.  OFFICE

RUDY    --none of your business.  She's not my case.  Now, Ed, they can keep you locked up any way they want - with anyone they want - for as long as they want.  You're getting three squares a day, right?

EDMUND    Usually.  Sometimes it comes pretty late, though.  And there's been a couple of times it's been too salty to eat.

RUDY    So they have a crummy cook - place like this?  Go figure. 

EDMUND    You gotta get me out of here, Rudy.

RUDY    I've told you, there's no place else to put you.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 18.  CELL HALLWAY

RONALD    I think he's asleep.

EDMUND    It.  Rose called it an it.

RONALD    I asked the doctor about Rose.  The doc said a whole lot of nothing, but I get the impression she - Rose - has revealed all, as they say, and is heading for a short vacation in a nice clean death row cell.

EDMUND    Not so bad for her.  Women get pardoned all the time, specially pretty ones. 

RONALD    Yeah.  And you would know all about the pretty ones, eh?

EDMUND    [remembering fondly]  They were all lookers, yeah. 

RONALD    How can you sleep? 

EDMUND    Don't get high and mighty moral on me, bud, you're in here too.

RONALD    I was only--  It WAS a moral choice.  A decision that had to be made and no one was making it.

EDMUND    Oh, so who'd you kill?  Cripples?

RONALD    I ended the suffering of several decrepit--

VINCENT    [ROAR!]

SOUND    CHAINS SMACK AGAINST CELL BARS

RONALD    [half choking] Let go!

EDMUND     Nobody's got arms that--!

RONALD    [gasping]  Get someone!  You gotta-- [choking]

EDMUND    Hey!  Hey! over here, ugly!

SOUND    RATTLE OF CHAINS

RONALD    [gasps for breath]

SOUND    THUMPING FOOTSTEPS, RATTLE OF CHAINS

EDMUND    Hah!  Gorilla!  Even you can't reach this far, eh? 

SOUND    CELL DOOR BEING SHAKEN

VICTOR    [growls]

RONALD    [hoarse]  Thanks, pal.

EDMUND    Don't thank me yet - I think those hinges are coming loose!

SOUND    CELL DOOR BREAKS OPEN, RATTLE OF CHAINS

RONALD    Oh, god!  No!  Release the gas!  Someone please release the gas!!!  [choking]

VICTOR    [growls]

SOUND    CHAINS RATTLING AGAINST BARS

SOUND    TINNY CHAMBER MUSIC PLAYS OVER THE FIGHT NOISES

EDMUND    Not the music!  The gas!  He's dying, for crying out loud! 

RONALD    [expiring noise]

SOUND    GAS

MUSIC

 

SCENE 19.  OFFICE

EDMUND    Horton, whatever I need to do, whatever I need to sign, just hand it over.  I ain't spending another night in this place.

RUDY    You understand the consequences?  You won't have the slightest option of recanting again and going back to your original statement. 

EDMUND    Yeah, yeah.  Anything - and I mean anything - is better than this freak show. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 20.  RECEPTION PARTY

SOUND    GLASSES TINKLE, DRINKS BEING POURED

DOCTOR LARSON    I'm so glad you find my program effective, Mr. District Attorney.

D-A.    Well, I admit I had my doubts, when you first outlined it--

DOCTOR LARSON    You expressed concern about the danger of physical harm to the subject?  As you now see, there is never any direct physical contact.  Thus, there can be no allegations of physical harm or coersion.

ROSE    He might have come close to dying with fright, though.  [teasing]  You were quite terrifying, darling.

VICTOR    [growls jokingly, then fairly cultured voice]  After fifteen movies as monsters

ROSE    And an apeman...

VICTOR    [chuckles]  And one apemen, who wouldn't be?

HECTOR    I'm rather glad I get to duck out early.  Murderers just [shudders] give me the creeps.

TERRANCE    Hey, we're out of sham-pane.  Want me to go and get some more?

HECTOR    Nah, I'll go.  Be right back! 

D-A.     It seems like a lot of effort, though, for a single confession.  A lot of manpower.  [tip of the hat]  And woman power.

DOCTOR LARSON    Ah, but it's valuable work on a number of levels.  We convince a murderer to confess, and we learn a great deal about the human psyche each time through the experiment.

D-A.    Each time?  How many--?

ROSE    Hmm...  [thinking]  I've had the screaming meemies four times--

RONALD    And I've nearly died... oh, three, I think.

DOCTOR LARSON    Not all of them last as long as our good friend Edmund. 

D-A.    I'll drink to that.

MUSIC

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

 

INDIVIDUAL SPEECHES FOR THE "INMATES" FOR "ad lib" SECTIONS

ROSE    I can feel them, all the time, watching everything I do - always making sure.  Always knowing.  I never get a moment alone, never a smidgen of privacy.  How can I live like this?  It's always the same - at first, they seem so nice, so different, then they turn on you, controlling you, having to know everything you do, and then they just don't let you do anything.  I couldn't even have a glass of water without getting permission.

HECTOR    Sinner!  Be penitent and god may be merciful and end your despicable life - hah, raise your head in the presence of your condemnation, will you?  Created to sin, designed by Satan to tempt honest men from the path of righteousness.  Daughters of Eve, you share her taint!  You try and draw us into your web, to make us debase ourselves for your enjoyment!  Wickedness!  Temptress!  Succubus!

RONALD    God moves in mysterious ways, for his decisions are inscrutable and his calling ineffable.  He has summoned me to his bidding, and I must obey.  There is no evil in ending the suffering of those that god would have called home to his presence.  He does not strike out in anger, but reaches forth to embrace his injured and damaged children, who need his solace.

Atomic Julie - Beyond the Yellow Fog (pt 6 of 8) by Emmett McDowell12 Oct 202100:18:46

Chapter 7 - a short trip to the slave camp on the heavy gravity planet.

19 Nocturne Boulevard - THE CANTERVILLE GHOST - Reissue07 Oct 202100:33:40

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from the story "The Canterville Ghost" by Oscar Wilde

[Family friendly]

In the late 1800s, an American family moves into an old English castle, only to find that the fixtures include an ancestral ghost...

Cast List
Sir Simon de Canterville - Cole Hornaday
Lady Eleanor - Julie Hoverson
Mr. Otis - Michael Faigenblum
Mrs. Otis - Megan Lane
Mrs. Umney - Lyndsey Thomas
Washington - Jasper Loovis
Virginia - Beverly Poole
Cecil, Duke of Cheshire - Powers Chandler
The Twins - E. Vickrey, R. LeBoeuf
 

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photo:  Peer Kamphuis (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it?  Why it's an Olde English Castle
- where else would you find an ancestral spirit?"

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The Canterville Ghost

Who doesn't love the classic Oscar Wilde satire "The Canterville Ghost"?  It's a story about a traditional horrific British spirit haunting a traditional British Manor, who runs afoul of a very modern (for the late 1800s) American family who has no respect at all for tradition.  This has always been one of my two favorite classic comedic ghost stories, the other being "The Water Ghost of Harrowby Hall", which I will probably get in here soon, just because of the season.

I had so much fun adapting this, playing with the practical, unflappable, and often gormless Americans.  I did make one major change in the cast, which was not entirely original to me.  I added the ghost of Lady Canterville to pester and haunt Sir Simon - and also give him someone to rant to, complain at, and plan with, since otherwise all his best bits would either be pages of soliloquies or just left out (like they usually end up being left out when this story gets made into films). 

I really really tried to keep as much of the descriptions of Sir Simon's various semblances and costumes in the dialogue as I could.  They're so much fun, along with the descriptions of whom he terrified with them.  I crammed it as full as possible, without going completely off the deep end.

I recall when I was in grade school, I read a novelization someone had done based on The Canterville Ghost where they added Lady Canterville as a ghost, but I specifically didn't go back and find that book again before writing this, so I wouldn't accidentally usurp any other ideas from it - I have a good memory, but it has been decades since I read it (more then 2), so I should be pretty safe.  Including her is a logical step, anyway, since if HE haunts the house because he was murdered, why shouldn't SHE also haunt it because HE murdered HER?

When I set about to cast this, I was still pretty much working with friends and locals, and not yet to the point of recruiting or auditioning people on line.  And while I knew I wanted Cole as Sir Simon  - and of course myself as Lady Eleanor, since I wrote the role for me (a big advantage of being a writer/producer), I had no particular idea who else I wanted in there.  So I got Beverly Poole (who was at the time in high school) and said "Cast all the living characters from your high school drama class."  In response, she rubbed her hands together gleefully (and a bit evilly), grinned, and said "Ooh!  The Power!"

Of all the special effects in this story that were hard to make or find, considering it has rattling chains and moans and all the classic ghost noises, the most awkward turned out to be "knocking small bottle to floor" and "throwing pillow across room".

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THE CANTERVILLE GHOST

Cast:

OLIVIA

The English:

  • Sir SIMON de Canterville, (300+) Ghost
  • Lady ELEANOR de Canterville, (300+) his dead wife
  • UMNEY, (60) housekeeper
  • CECIL, (17) young Duke of Cheshire
  • MOVER (any)

The Americans:

  • HIRAM Otis, (40) American Minister
  • Lucretia OTIS (36) his wife
  • WASHINGTON Otis, (18) know-it-all
  • VIRGINIA Otis, (15) sweet young thing
  • GROVER and OSCAR Otis, (12) the twins

 

NOTE:  The Americans are the classic annoying Americans of a previous century, very self-assured at all times and never bothered.

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's an English Castle, can't you tell?  Where else would you find an ancestral ghost? 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 1.  MAIN HALL

SOUND    HEAVY FOOTSTEPS, LOW MOAN OF EFFORT, HEAVY SOMETHING BEING DROPPED [play up as if a ghost, then]

MOVER    Ow!  Leave off!  Now, on two... one-- [grunt of effort]

SOUND     HEAVY FOOTSTEPS GO OFF.  THE OTIS FAMILY IS MOVING IN.

HIRAM    [self satisfied]  Yes, that - that will do nicely.

SOUND    SHARP FOOTSTEPS AMONG THE HUBBUB

MRS. UMNEY    [nervous] Mr. Otis, Sir? 

HIRAM    Yes, my good woman? 

MRS. UMNEY    Sir, where are the Canterville portraits? 

HIRAM    Those?  I'm returning them to his Lordship.  I'm quite sure he didn't mean them to go with the house.  They're rather ugly old gewgaws, to be perfectly frank.  Out with the old, in with the new.

MRS. UMNEY    [muttered] These are the ugly new gewgaws, then?

HIRAM    [didn't hear her] Hm?

MRS. UMNEY    [louder] This is your family, then, sir?

HIRAM    What is your name, my good woman?

MRS. UMNEY    Mrs. Umney.  I've been housekeeper here at Canterville Hall for--

HIRAM    Oh, yes, we did take on all the fixtures.  Well, Madam, we Americans don't hold with all this "sir" nonsense.  You can call me Mister Otis, just like anyone else.

MRS. UMNEY    [servile] Of course, Mr. Otis.  Certainly Mr. Otis.

HIRAM    Stop with the curtseying, it's bad for your knees.  Ask my wife - she's campaigned against it, you know.

MRS. UMNEY    That would be Lady - pardon - Mrs. Otis in the portrait with you?

HIRAM    Yes - lovely woman, though she does tend to look a bit cross-eyed when she's forced to sit staring into a lens for time on end.  Still it's a lovely shot.  This is the children.  Washington, in back - he's even taller now.  Must remember to get another study taken.  They grow so fast, don't they?

MRS. UMNEY    Yes sir.  Mr. Otis, sir.

HIRAM    The twins, Oscar and Grover - like weeds, as well - are going to Eton.  They'll be home with us until the school year begins.

MRS. UMNEY    And the young lady? 

HIRAM    [with warmth]  Virginia.  She is just the perfect doll - smart as a whip.  Takes right after her mother that way.  And the way she rides - she raced old Lord Bilton twice round the park and won by a length and a half.  That Cecil [he prnounces it incorrectly, as SEEsel] fellow, Duke of Cheshire[chehSHYER], proposed for her on the spot, but they're both much too young, and we Americans don't hold much with titles.

MRS. UMNEY    [muttered]  Tell that to the Vanderbilts.  [out loud]  And this must be... your father?

HIRAM    [laughs uproariously]  Ho-ho!  No, that's President Cleveland, our country's leader.  You know, a bit like your British Queen Victoria, except that we choose ours.  [pause]  And they don't carry on quite so long.

MRS. UMNEY    [disapproving] Ah.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, FOOTSTEPS ENTER

MRS. OTIS    Dearest, can you do something with the twins, they've gone quite mad in the conservatory. 

HIRAM    Boys will be boys.  

SOUND    HIS FOOTSTEPS LEAVE, DOOR

MRS. OTIS    Mrs. Umney, why what's the matter?

MRS. UMNEY    Ma'am?  I'm ... just not used to your American ways, I expect. 

MRS. OTIS    I'm so sorry for you.  Well. 

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS START TO LEAVE, HESITATE

MRS. OTIS     [suddenly remembering] Oh, there is something you could help with - there's a terrible stain near the fireplace in the library.  Would you be a dear and see that it gets cleaned up?

MRS. UMNEY    [ominously]  The bloodstain?

MRS. OTIS    How horrid!  I don't at all care for blood-stains in a library.  It cannot possibly be hygienic.

MRS. UMNEY    [ghoulish, enjoying every minute] It is the blood of Lady Eleanor de Canterville, murdered on that very spot by her own husband, Sir Simon de Canterville, in 1575.  Sir Simon's guilty spirit still haunts the Chase, though HIS body has never been found. 

[Umney clearly expects to scare her, but gets no response.]

MRS. OTIS    It must be removed immediately--

MRS. UMNEY     The blood-stain has been much admired by tourists, and cannot be removed.

MRS. OTIS    Nonsense.  [calling]  Washington!!

MRS. UMNEY    [mood broken] What?  Ma'am?

SOUND    THUNDERING FEET COMING DOWN STAIRCASE

WASHINGTON    [entering] Yes, mother?

MRS. OTIS    Do you have some of that new cleaning solution in your kit?

WASHINGTON    [eager] Pinkerton's Champion Stain Remover and Paragon Detergent?  I'll fetch it directly.

MRS. UMNEY    [trying to be spooky again] The blood stain cannot be cleaned, ma'am.  It is proven fact.  Many have tried.  Many more have faced the ghost and were never the same again.

MRS. OTIS    Ah, but this is a patented formulation. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.

SOUND    OUTSIDE.  TWO HORSES' HOOVES MOVING SLOWLY, AN OCCASIONAL WHINNY

CECIL    I'm frightfully pleased you're so nearby, Miss Otis.  I mean, we can... go riding together... often.

VIRGINIA    [she pronounces it correctly - seh-sel] Cecil.  Or... I'm so sorry, I've forgotten, what does one call a Duke?

CECIL    It's Your Grace, but you needn't--

VIRGINIA    But I should at least KNOW.  And an Earl?

CECIL    [quietly]  I would rather you thought of me as more than merely a tutor.

VIRGINIA    [musing] How DO you keep them all straight?  [catching up] What?

CECIL    [earnest]  You know how I feel.

VIRGINIA    I also, which is why this is all particularly important.  Just in case... In case... [gasp]

BOTH    [Take a breath, as if about to speak, or possibly kiss, then check themselves]

[SLIGHT PAUSE AS THEY BOTH CALM DOWN A BIT, CLICK TO THE HORSES, ETC.]

CECIL    Oh, Virginia, I hate the thought of you living in this blasted old pile.

VIRGINIA    [pleased]  You called me Virginia.

CECIL    My apologies, Miss Otis.

VIRGINIA    Silly.  Cecil, I've been trying for ages to get you to call me--  [by my first name]

CECIL    It's the ghost!

VIRGINIA    The ghost's name is Virginia?

CECIL    No.  Your father cannot have heard about it, or he'd never have put you in such danger. 

VIRGINIA    While he's not actually against them, father generally avoids spirits.  [joke - "spirits" as in alcohol]

CECIL    [ominously, admitting]  My own grand-uncle once bet a hundred guineas that he would play dice with the ghost, and was found the next morning on the floor of the card-room in such a paralytic state that, though he lived to a great age, he was never able to say anything but "Double Sixes."

VIRGINIA    Backgammon, was it?

CECIL    It isn't important!  It's simply not safe!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.

AMB    BEDROOM, GETTING READY FOR SLEEP

MRS. OTIS    [exasperated] It's simply not safe, I tell you!  That housekeeper fainting all about the place - and all over cleaning up a silly bloodstain.

HIRAM    Hmm...

SOUND    RATTLE OF A PAGE TURNING IN A BOOK

MRS. OTIS    What if it happens again?  What if she's holding crockery?  What do you do with a woman who faints?

HIRAM    Yes, dear.

MRS. OTIS    [sweetly] Dearest, your nose has fallen off.

HIRAM    Oh, has it?  Good.

MRS. OTIS    You're not listening to me!

HIRAM    Gracious!  Do you hear that?

MRS. OTIS    What, over the sound of my own voice?  Heaven forbid!

HIRAM    Shh.

SOUND    MUFFLED, AND SLOWLY GETTING CLOSER, HEAVY FOOTFALLS AND CHAINS RATTLING. THEY CONTINUE UNTIL NOTED

HIRAM    Now that is just too much.

SOUND    BEDCLOTHES FLUNG ASIDE, SLIPPERED FOOTSTEPS.

HIRAM    We'll see about--

SOUND    DOOR IS FLUNG OPEN

SOUND    HEAVY FOOTSTEPS AND CHAINS ARE NO LONGER MUFFLED. 

SIMON    [off - low moaning]

HIRAM    Now see here!

SIMON    [moan interrupts]

MRS. OTIS    [unworried, off] Is it the twins?

HIRAM    I don't think so. 

SIMON    [insistent ghostly moaning]

HIRAM    No, it's certainly not the twins.  Hold it right there.

SIMON    [moan interrupts quizzically]

SOUND    SLIPPERED FOOTSTEPS, DRAWER PULLED OUT, RUMMAGING

MRS. OTIS    Should I join you?

HIRAM    No need.  Though he is quite a curiosity - looks like a scraggly old feller all done up in chains and ragged old-style clothes.

SIMON    [off - moaning again, suppressed fury]

HIRAM    Now where did I - Aha!

SOUND    RUMMAGING STOPS, SLIPPERED FOOTSTEPS

HIRAM     My dear sir, I really must insist on your oiling those chains, and I have brought you for that purpose a small bottle of the Tammany Rising Sun Lubricator. 

SIMON    [moaning stops, grumpy noises]

HIRAM    It is said to be completely efficacious upon one application, and there are several testimonials to that effect on the wrapper.  I shall leave it here for you, and will be happy to supply more, should you require it.

SOUND    SMALL BOTTLE SET DOWN, LIGHT FOOTSTEPS, DOOR CLOSES DECISIVELY

SIMON    [bellow of rage, then moaning until noted]

SOUND    BOTTLE SLAPPED, ROLLS ACROSS TABLE, CLATTERS TO FLOOR.

SOUND    TWO HEAVY FOOTSTEPS, HEAVY THUD ON WALL ACCOMPANIED BY CHAIN RATTLING

OSCAR    Get em!

SOUND    PILLOW FLIES THROUGH THE AIR, HITS THE WALL

GROVER    Did I score?

SIMON    [one last shriek, and out]

OSCAR    Tsk. Nope.

MUSIC    SPOOKY

 

SCENE 4.

AMB     GHOST'S GARRET

SOUND    AGITATED PACING, ROCKING CHAIR

SIMON    [bellowing and outraged] A Pillow!  At my HEAD!

ELEANOR    [complacent but needling]  I suppose it's a good thing you were wearing it, then.

SIMON    Not if they'd hit me!  I'm not certain I fastened it on completely.  It's never been an issue!

ELEANOR    You've gone without a challenge for far too long.

SIMON    A challenge!!  A challenge!  Who needs a bloody challenge when I have you to torment me?

ELEANOR    Every time you get frustrated you turn the argument on me.  If you didn't want me haunting you, you should've never killed me. 

SIMON    Tcha!

ELEANOR    Ruined my favorite bodice, as well.

SIMON    Oh, your bloody bodice. 

ELEANOR    Precisely.

SIMON    Hush!  These ... people... Have no respect for artistry.  When I think back on the Dowager Duchess, frightened into a fit; the four housemaids, who went into hysterics when I merely grinned at them through the curtains; old Madame de Tremouillac, who woke to find me, as a skeleton, seated by the fire reading her diary, and was confined to her bed for six weeks with brain fever--

ELEANOR    [dry] Yes, yes, you're quite handy with the ladies.

SIMON    Shut up, wife!  What about wicked Lord Canterville, whom I left choking on the knave of diamonds because he had cheated by means of that very card, so I made him swallow it.  That was justice!

ELEANOR    Oh, yes, justice for men and torment for women.  So like a man.  What did poor Lady Stutfield, ever do to you?  You left her obliged to wear a black velvet band round her throat to hide the mark of five fingers burnt upon her white skin. 

SIMON    [pleased]  She drowned herself at last in the carp-pond at the end of the King's Walk. 

ELEANOR    Did she cheat at cards as well? 

SIMON    [grudgingly]  No.

ELEANOR    Admit it, you just like the attention.  Women are so much more --

SIMON    Biddable?

ELEANOR    I was going to say demonstrative.  I know how you adore an appreciative audience.  Women are allowed hysterics, while men are limited to "good god!", a little gibbering, and then shooting themselves in the pantry.  There's simply not much in between.

SIMON    [sulky]  Or offering you oil for your chains!  Oh, what impertinence!! 

ELEANOR    What do you plan to do about it, my lord?

SIMON    Aha!  I was thinking of reprising my costume as "Gaunt Gibeon, the Blood-sucker of Bexley Moor," and playing ninepins with my own bones upon the lawn-tennis ground. 

ELEANOR    Perhaps Americans do not play ninepins?

SIMON    No?  I think the point will not fail.  It is bones...  [thinking]  Or perhaps ... Oh, yes!  "Reckless Rupert, or the Headless Earl."

ELEANOR    Oh, my lord.  You know that one takes hours to put on.  Do you even know where both horse pistols are?

SIMON    Bah!  I am an artist.  I laugh at complex preparation.  [chuckling]  I haven't pulled out old Rupert for some fifty years--

ELEANOR    Seventy.

SIMON    Seventy?  Really?  Where does time go?  [warming up again]  Not since the night I frightened pretty Lady Barbara and she broke off her engagement with Lord Canterville's grandfather, and ran away with Jack Castleton, declaring that nothing would induce her to marry into a family that allowed such a horrible phantom to walk up and down the terrace at twilight. 

ELEANOR    [bored]  ...and then he was shot in a duel.

SIMON    [running over her]  Poor Jack was afterwards shot in a duel by Lord Canterville

ELEANOR    [bored]  You sound like the social pages.

SIMON    [trying to drown her out] --and Lady Barbara died of a broken heart, so, in every way, it was a great success. 

ELEANOR    Yes, yes, yes.  You recall I was present. 

SIMON    I am merely reiterating--

ELEANOR    Reiterate away.  I shan't return until you are quite through.

SIMON    Oh, if I only could believe that, I would never stop. 

ELEANOR    Just as big fish eat little fish, my own good lord, ghosts are never truly alone.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.

SOUND    GENTEEL BREAKFAST NOISES

MRS. UMNEY     [off, screams]

VIRGINIA    Oh no!

WASHINGTON    What?

MRS. OTIS    Good gracious, she's at it again.

HIRAM    I'll just go and see--

MRS. OTIS    No, no.  You finish your breakfast, Hiram, dear.  I shall see to the household.

SOUND    WE FOLLOW HER AS SHE LEAVES THE ROOM, ENTERS THE LIBRARY

MRS. UMNEY    [praying, slightly hysterical]  ...deliver us from evil for thine is the power and the glory--

MRS. OTIS    [coming on]  What is the matter now?

MRS. UMNEY    [spoooooky]  Look!!!  The bloodstain!  I told you that it could never be removed!

MRS. OTIS    [mildly bemused] Oh.  How unusual.  I wonder if there is a leak somewhere.  [calling] Washington?

SOUND    EAGER FOOTSTEPS APPROACH

WASHINGTON    Yes, Mother?

MRS. OTIS    I thought you said you had dealt with this?

WASHINGTON     Well, now doesn't that just take the cake?

MRS. OTIS    Pray don't be vulgar.

MRS. UMNEY    [muffled snort]

VIRGINIA     [coming on]  What's going on?

WASHINGTON    Mother, I give you my solemn oath - that stain was gone.  I guess I'll just have at it again.

MUSIC    TIME PASSES

 

SCENE 6.

SOUND    GENTEEL BREAKFAST NOISES

[the blood stain keeps re-appearing, and they're finding it amusing]

HIRAM    Shall we?  I made a particular point of locking the door last night, so there can be no chance of outside interference.

MRS. OTIS    Yes, let's.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

OSCAR    Me first!

GROVER    No, me!

SOUND    SCUFFLE, RUNNING FOOTSTEPS

GROVER    It's back!

MUSIC    TIME PASSES

 

SCENE 7.

SOUND     RAIN, GENTEEL BREAKFAST NOISES

WASHINGTON    [listing the colors the bloodstain has come back in] ...that's crimson, rust, burnt sienna, and maroon.  So far.  Anyone?

HIRAM    Perhaps the color changes like leaves in the fall?  I think I shall lay odds on pumpkin.

WASHINGTON    I am more inclined to believe, father, that there is a scientific basis for the inconsistent pigmentation.  Some chemical interaction between the nature of ectoplasm and Pinkerton's Champion Stain Remover.  All I need to do is find another, similar ghostly stain and compare the results.

HIRAM    Sound thinking, my boy.

MRS. OTIS    Well, I'm in the mood for a bright cherry red myself, on such a gray day.  Virginia?

VIRGINIA    [subdued, almost sulky] I have no opinion on the matter.

SOUND    DOOR SLAMS OPEN

GROVER    It's green!!

OSCAR    Emerald green!

VIRGINIA    [very quiet wail, then going off]  Oh, no!  

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.

AMB    GHOST'S GARRET

SOUND    RUMMAGING THROUGH PILES OF CLOTHES

SIMON    [off, muffled]  Have you seen my red slouch hat?

ELEANOR    It is no longer my responsibility to look after your garments, husband.

SIMON    Hmph. 

SIMON    Which winding sheet do you think will be most effective, the ones with the ruffles at the cuffs, or the hideous brown stains?

ELEANOR    My lord - those aren't your brown stains.  I believe a mouse has littered in your sheet.

SIMON    Eugh. 

SOUND    FABRIC FALLS TO FLOOR

SIMON    Well, aren't you even curious?  I mean about what I intend to do?

ELEANOR    Not really.  [sigh]  Pray enlighten me.  If you must.

SIMON    You'll be singing a different tune when you hear--

ELEANOR    Begin, my lord - we haven't all day.

SIMON    Very well.  [dramatic] See this rusty dagger?

ELEANOR    Yay, verily.  One rusty dagger.  Noted.

SIMON    [dramatic] I will make my way quietly to Washington Otis's room, you know Washington - the interfering knave who repeatedly cleans my bloody--  well... bloodstain.

ELEANOR    My bloodstain.  Bright boy. 

SIMON    Shush.  Here, you be Washington.

ELEANOR    I haven't the height.

SIMON    [angry] I mean, you stand in and I shall show you what I intend!  [back to glee] I will gibber at him from the foot of the bed, and stab myself - once, twice, thrice! - in the throat to the sound of low music.  Having reduced the reckless and foolhardy youth to a condition of abject terror...  [prompting] Terror!

ELEANOR    [flat]  Oh, terror! 

SIMON    [sigh]  I will proceed to the bedroom of the parents.  Now, you are Mrs. Otis.

ELEANOR    To do that I shall have to secure some exceedingly plain underclothes.

SIMON    [growl]  Woman!  I will place a clammy hand on Mrs. Otis's forehead--

ELEANOR    [flat]  Oh, clammy.

SIMON    --while I hiss into her trembling husband's ear the awful secrets of the charnel-house. 

ELEANOR    He'll probably tell you of some new patented method for charnelling.  I suppose that poor girl will get the worst of it, since she's the only one even a mite sympathetic?

SIMON    I... [almost sheepish]  I ...don't think so.  She's done nothing at all to annoy me, even though she could easily... [he's been stealing her paints, as she mentions later - so she could unmask the bloodstain]  A few hollow groans from the wardrobe will suffice.

ELEANOR    You're becoming soft in your old age.

SIMON    I am merely saving my best efforts for [snarling] those wretched twins...

ELEANOR    Shall I be one of them?

SIMON    No need.

ELEANOR    Oh, prithee my lord.  I wish to realize the full impact of your cunning plan.

SIMON    Truly?  Well, go ahead then.

ELEANOR    I shall be Grover.  He has the sweeter disposition.

SIMON    Be whichever you wish to be, but be quiet!  [deep breath]  I will enter the room, in the form of a green, icy-cold corpse--

SOUND    WHOOSH THUMP OF A PILLOW

ELEANOR    Ha-ha! [aping the twins' laughter]

SIMON    WOMAN!!!!

MUSIC    STING

 

SCENE 9.

AMB    BALLROOM

MUSIC    WALTZ

CECIL    You are so brave.  And so lovely tonight.

VIRGINIA    You dance divinely, Cecil, but this must be our last waltz, or people will talk. 

CECIL    My cousin says your brother is an excellent partner as well. 

VIRGINIA    Oh, yes.  He is well suited for diplomacy.

CECIL    I wish we could dance all night and you never need return to that moldy old pile.

VIRGINIA    Fainting aside, Mrs. Umney is a fine woman. 

CECIL    Tomorrow is the anniversary of Lady Eleanor's death.  The ghost will certainly leap upon the propitious moment.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.

AMB    ECHOEY HALLWAY

SIMON    [soliloquizing]  Ah!  The propitious moment!  The clock strikes the quarter--

SOUND    CLOCK STRIKES THE QUARTER

SIMON    The moon hides her face behind a cloud.  All is in readiness, and the night holds its stygian breath. 

SOUND    STEALTHY THUMPING FOOTSTEPS

SIMON    And now Washington, screw your courage to the sticking point you may, but I shall have you unstuck!  [begins a moan]

SOUND    TWO MORE STEPS

SIMON    [moan become a shriek of fear]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 11.

AMB    PARENTS BEDROOM

HIRAM    [snoring]

MRS. OTIS    [waking up] Huh?  [matter of fact] Hiram!  Wake up!

HIRAM    Yes, dearest?

MRS. OTIS    Do you hear ...something?

HIRAM    Is it that ghost fellow again?  [listens]  No, I cannot say I actually hear anything.

MRS. OTIS    [already falling back] Hmm.  Must be the twins.

HIRAM    [snoring]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.

AMB    GHOST'S GARRET

SOUND    AGITATED PACING, ROCKING CHAIR THROUGHOUT

ELEANOR    [flatly amused]  A ghost?

SOUND    CRUMPLING OF PAPER IN SIMON'S HAND

SIMON    [terrified]  YES!  A Ghost!  Its head was bald and burnished, its face round, and fat, and white.  From the eyes streamed rays of scarlet light, the mouth was a wide well of fire, and a hideous garment, much like mine own--

ELEANOR    Lacking the mouse insults.

SIMON    --like to mine own, swathed its Titan form.  On its breast was a placard with strange writing in antique characters--

SOUND    RATTLE OF HEAVY PAPER

SIMON    Doubtless some record of wild sins, some awful calendar of crime, some--

ELEANOR    Why not read it and see?

SIMON    [voice cracking] See?

ELEANOR    See what it says.

SIMON    [hesitates]  No.

ELEANOR    Why take it, then?

SIMON    [mutters something]

ELEANOR    Speak up, my lord.

SIMON    [through gritted teeth] I found I had just clutched it as I left.  I have no need to know--

ELEANOR    Afraid?

SIMON    AFRAID!  [unconvincing]  No.

ELEANOR    Perhaps because he is the more terrifying ghost? 

SIMON    Nonsense!  I have merely never chanced to SEE a ghost - except in a looking glass.

ELEANOR    Give it me, ninny.  I shall read it.

SIMON    You dare--

ELEANOR    I'll call you coward in an instant--

SIMON    I WILL READ IT!  [muttering as he reads, then a sound of outrage!]

ELEANOR    So very wicked, my lord?

SOUND    PAPER BEING VICIOUSLY CRUMPLED

SIMON    [grim] Those damned children!  They made it!

ELEANOR    Made a ghost?  I should have thought murder was a bit outside their purview.

SIMON    AAArghh!! 

SOUND    PAPER BEING SNATCHED AWAY

ELEANOR    Argh, indeed.  [reading]  YE OTIS GHOSTE, Ye Onlie True and Originale Spook, Beware of Ye Imitationes.  All others are counterfeits. 

SIMON    No more games!  [bellowing] When Chanticleer [rooster] has sounded twice his merry horn, deeds of blood will be wrought, and murder shall walk abroad with silent feet!

ELEANOR    That would be you?

SOUND    ROOSTER CROWS - ONCE.

[PAUSE, WAITING]

SIMON    [muttered]  Come on. 

ELEANOR    Perhaps you should go frighten it.

SIMON    [muttered]  Once more - for daddy.

ELEANOR    It's not going to happen.

SIMON    Nonsense, it always happens.

ELEANOR    [pause]  Nay.  I hear nothing.

SIMON    Perdition seize the naughty fowl, I have seen the day when, with my stout spear, I would have run him through the gorge, and made him crow for me an 'twere in death!  [a bit whiny]  Every time, throughout all known history, that such an oath has been sworn, chanticleer has sounded his blasted horn twice.  Where is its respect for tradition?

ELEANOR    Perhaps, dear husband, it is an American rooster.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.

AMB    OUTSIDE

SOUND    TWO HORSES REINING IN FROM A GALLOP

VIRGINIA    [laughing]  I let you win!

CECIL    [teasing]  Nonsense.  Good breeding.

VIRGINIA    So your blue blood makes you faster?

CECIL    Not mine.  The horse.

VIRGINIA    [chuckles]

SOUND    HORSES WALKING

CECIL    Have you been well since I saw you last?

VIRGINIA    Yes, very.  No ghost.

CECIL    None?

VIRGINIA    I warned everyone about the anniversary, but nothing - well - a turnip ghost was found in the upper hall, but I am quite certain that can be attributed to my brothers. 

CECIL    How ... remarkable.

VIRGINIA    Cecil, would you do me a tremendous favor?

CECIL    Anything... Virginia.

VIRGINIA    Would you--  Could you take my horse to the stable?  I fear I've torn my habit and want to get upstairs before anyone spies me. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.

AMB    BACK HALLWAY

SOUND    [OFF SLIGHTLY] LIGHT ECHOEY FOOTSTEPS

SIMON    [gusty sigh]

SOUND    [COMING ON] FOOTSTEPS CONTINUE

VIRGINIA    Hello?  [gasp]  You!

SIMON    [gasp] You!

VIRGINIA    [anticipating being scared]  Ahh! [pause, nothing happens, confused]  Oh!

SIMON    Pfft.  Don't fret yourself, girl.  I cannot seem to gather myself for the effort.  This is the one room where I can truly be alone.  My wife haunts me in every other chamber.

VIRGINIA    Should I leave you--?

SIMON    Stay a moment. [overly casual]  If you wish.

VIRGINIA    My brothers are going back to Eton tomorrow, and if you behave, no one will annoy you.

SIMON    Behave myself?  Absurd.  I must rattle my chains and walk about at night.  It is my only reason for existing.

VIRGINIA    That is no reason at all. 

SIMON    Why else would I be here?

VIRGINIA    Mrs. Umney told us - you killed your wife.

SIMON    It was purely a family matter.  My wife was very plain, never had my ruffs properly starched, and knew nothing about cookery. 

VIRGINIA    [adamant] It is very wrong to kill anyone.

SIMON    Oh?  Her brothers starved me to death. 

VIRGINIA    Oh, Mr. Ghost -- I mean Sir Simon - I have a sandwich in my case, would you like it?

SIMON    I never eat anything now; [beat, softening] but it was very kind of you.  You are much nicer than your horrid, rude, vulgar, dishonest family.

VIRGINIA    Stop it!  It is you who are rude, and horrid, and... and as for dishonesty!  You stole my paints for your ridiculous bloodstain.  First you took all my reds and I couldn't do sunsets, then it just got ridiculous - who ever heard of emerald-green blood? 

SIMON    [meek, sulky]  What was I to do?  It is very difficult to get real blood.  Your brother began it all with his Paragon Detergent, so I saw no reason why I should not have your paints. 

VIRGINIA    [annoyed, decisive]  Good evening!  I will go and ask papa to get the twins an extra week's holiday.

SIMON    Please!  Don't go, Miss Virginia.  I am so unhappy, and I really don't know what to do.  I want to sleep and I cannot.

VIRGINIA    That's quite absurd!  It is very difficult sometimes to keep awake, especially at church, but even babies know how to sleep, and they are not very clever.

SIMON    I have not slept for three hundred years, and I am so tired.

VIRGINIA    Have you no place where you can sleep?

SIMON    [wistful]  Hmm.  Far away beyond the pine-woods, there is a little garden.  The grass grows long and deep, with great white stars of hemlock flower, and the nightingale sings all night long.  The cold crystal moon looks down, and the yew-tree spreads out its giant arms over the sleepers.

VIRGINIA    [awed]  You mean the Garden of Death.

SIMON    Yes, death.  Death must be so beautiful.  To lie in the soft brown earth, and listen... to silence.  To have no yesterday, no to-morrow, to be at peace.  [eager] You must help me.  You can open for me the portals of death's house, for love is always with you, and love is stronger than death. 

VIRGINIA    How could I--?

SIMON    You must weep with me for my sins, because without remorse, I have no tears; and pray with me for my soul, because I have no faith.  Then, perhaps, the angel of death will have mercy on me.  [pauses, waiting, then sighs in despair]

VIRGINIA    [deep breath, courageous but shaky]  I am not afraid, and I will ask the angel to have mercy on you.

MUSIC - LONGER

 

SCENE 15.

AMB    FRONT HALL

HIRAM    Virginia is nowhere to be found.  Even the [rustics] are helping search for her.  Washington, my boy?  [confidential]  The fish-pond?

WASHINGTON    Nothing.

HIRAM    Good.  Don't tell your mother we checked.  The poor woman is already nearly prostrate.

CECIL    It is the ghost.  I know it!  He was jealous of our happiness and spirited her away!  If only you had allowed our engagement, sir, none of this would have--

HIRAM    Balderdash, Cecil [mispronounced see-sul].  First thing in the morning, I will engage Scotland Yard--

SOUND    CLOCK STRIKES TWELVE - LOUD CRASH

SOUND    VIRGINIA STEPS OUT OF A SECRET DOOR

CECIL    Virginia!

HIRAM    Goodness Gracious!

WASHINGTON    [excited] A secret door!

HIRAM    Good heavens! child, where have you been?  Cecil and I have been riding all over the country looking for you, and your mother has been frightened to death. 

VIRGINIA    I have been with the ghost.

CECIL    [rather melodramatic gasp]  How did you escape?

VIRGINIA    Oh, Cecil, he is at peace, now.  He had been very wicked, but he was really sorry for all that he had done, and now-- [almost a sob]

SOUND    DOOR FLUNG OPEN, FOOTSTEPS

MRS. OTIS    My own darling!  Thank God you are found; you must never leave my side again!  [mmm - like a big hug, then] What is this?

VIRGINIA    Sir Simon gave me this box before he died.

WASHINGTON    But he's been dead for centuries.

VIRGINIA    Only half dead, I think, would be more accurate.  Now he's entirely dead.  Finally able to sleep.

GROVER    What's in the box?

OSCAR    Yeah!  Open it!

HIRAM    Your sister can open the box or not as she pleases.  She's not to be ordered around by monkeys like you two.

SOUND    SMALL WOODEN BOX OPENS

MRS. OTIS    Goodness! 

MRS. UMNEY    The long-lost Canterville jewels!  Aaah.

SOUND    BODY DROP

MRS. OTIS    [exasperated sigh] She's fainted again.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 16.

AMB    VIRGINIA'S BEDROOM

SOUND    GENTLE GIRLISH SNORING

ELEANOR    [coming on, exasperated ghostly groans]

SOUND    LADYLIKE CHAINS

VIRGINIA    [waking] Huh?  Sir Simon?

ELEANOR    [somewhat annoyed] No.  You've seen to that, so now I have nothing better--

VIRGINIA    Are you Lady Eleanor?

ELEANOR    [surprised] Yes.  He-- he told you--?

VIRGINIA    He gave me something for you. 

SOUND    DRAWER PULLS OUT

VIRGINIA    There.

ELEANOR    A handkerchief?

VIRGINIA    Open it.

ELEANOR    But there's nothing--

VIRGINIA    Look closer.

ELEANOR    A spot?

VIRGINIA    A tear.

ELEANOR    [stunned]  He ... cried--?

VIRGINIA    He said he was very sorry for having killed you. 

ELEANOR    [skeptical] Oh?  He did, did he?

VIRGINIA    And for ruining your best bodice.

ELEANOR    [believing] Oh!

VIRGINIA    He hoped you could forgive him now and move on as well.  He wants you to join him, where the nightingales sing, and he can give you a bouquet of white flowers.

ELEANOR    Yes.  [sigh]  I could do with some sleep. 

MUSIC - rise and out

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

 

Atomic Julie - Beyond the Yellow Fog (pt 5 of 8) by Emmett McDowell05 Oct 202100:16:19

Finding out this ship is special.

19 Nocturne Boulevard - CHILLIN' - Reissue30 Sep 202100:35:10

When eccentric recluse Simon Strong, who lives in a perpetually chilled state, vanishes (leaving some rather suspicious remains behind),
his only known associate—a teenage delivery girl—is interviewed by the police!

Cast List
Amber Sorensen - Krystal Baker
Simon Strong - Joel Harvey
Det. Phyllis Jermyn - Julie Hoverson
Det. Howard Upton - Reynaud LeBoeuf

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Recorded with the assistance of Ryan Hirst of Neohoodoo Studio
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photo:  (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's a police station, can't you tell?"

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Chillin'

This didn’t actually begin with me choosing to adapt another Lovecraft story (in this case "Cool Air").  Frankly, I really liked the 1999 short film, and have a soft spot for the version made for Night Gallery back in the 70s, so I never really considered Cool Air as a priority for adaptation - it had already been done well.  Plus it was kind of low hanging fruit - one of the simpler, more straightforward stories to adapt.

Previous to this, I had produced Within the Walls of Eryx, and even before that, while studying screenwriting, I had practiced adaptation by playing with The Thing on the Doorstep, turning it into an hour-long screenplay that I eventually re-wrote into an episode of 19 Nocturne Boulevard.

Nope, this started when my niece Krystal and I went to see the film Juno.

We enjoyed the movie, and leaving it I decided I wanted to write a sassy teenage character, and started clicking through plots in my head that I could slap her into.  The irony of sticking a character HPL would undoubtedly loathe into one of his stories did not escape me, and when "Cool Air" crossed my mind, it basically started to write itself.

I hammered out the script in less than a week and sent it to Krystal and asked if Amber sounded reasonably authentic, since Krystal was right about that age herself.  Her response was "Could I please play her?"  She did, and did a great job.  I really love working with and encouraging kids in the arts.

Sig and Laurie (mentioned in the story as Amber's folks, but in reality my own dad and stepmom) came to watch the recording session with Krystal and be supportive, and Laurie at least can be heard in the bloopers in the end. 

I also owe great thanks to my friend Robyn who helped with the punk rock details.  She knows rock history back and forth and I knew I just needed the right comment or two to make the character really pop. 

The story adaptation is extremely loose - in the original, a writer moves into a flat below a doctor who keeps his rooms unnaturally cold, and finds out that the doc has maintained his life, long past standard death, by keeping himself perpetually chilled, presumably at least in part to prevent decay.

Rather than going the doctor/science route for my version, I went with magic and reanimation.  I did work a little hint into the story that Simon might be considering some further hocus pocus to preserve himself, but which might involve harming Amber, and he decides he can't.  On the other hand, Amber's slightly guilty concern about having her backpack possibly searched and her disregard for the missing "spooky books" might just indicate that she's not quite ready to let go yet.

The original story "Cool Air" is also notable in that a female character is actually quoted as speaking - the landlady of the flats.  Of course, this is only so she can be a terrible ethnic stereotype, but at least she actually talks, and may be the only female in all of HPL's major works who does. 

Stay tuned at the end of this for a short clip of the German version of Chillin' (retitled "Eiskalt") from Contendo Media!!!

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CHILLIN'

Cast:

Olivia (host)

Amber Sorensen (16), punky teen

Simon Strong (60s), aged punk rocker

Det. Howard Upton (30s), tough cop

Det. Phyllis Jermyn (30s), nice cop

Bouncers

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a police station, can't you tell? 

MUSIC    MODERN COP DRAMA STING

SOUND    THUNK OF TAPE RECORDER TURNING ON. 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM - WHIR OF TAPE RECORDER.  OCCASIONAL SCUFFLE OF CHAIRS

UPTON    Name?

AMBER    [mocking] Sorensen. Amber.  S-O-R-E-N-S-E-N.  O-N is Norwegian.

UPTON    What?

AMBER    [said a million times] O-N is Norwegian, E-N is Danish.

UPTON    So you're Danish?

AMBER     [disgusted noise] Do I sound Danish?  Uch.  Like my great great great great great was. 

UPTON    Then why--?

JERMYN    I understand.  My name gets misspelled all the time.  Let's move on.  Present are detectives Howard Upton and Phyllis Jermyn [pronounced "german", pause] J-E-R-M-Y-N, and Amber Sorensen, with an E-N. 

UPTON    Age?

AMBER    I have the right to remain silent.  I have the right to an attorney.  If I cannot afford one, one will be ... assigned?  Allotted?  I should know this - I watch enough Law and Order. 

UPTON    [sigh] We don't read witnesses their rights.  That's for suspects.  Age?

AMBER    [sullen] You got my I.D.  What does it say?

UPTON    Hmm.  You don't look 21.

JERMYN    [sympathetic] You really don't.

AMBER    Fine.  So it's a fake - I want to speak to the D.A., like trade my information in return for a slide on the bogus I.D., can I‑‑??

SOUND    PHONE BEEP

UPTON    Oh, turn that off.  Not just silent, either.  Off.

SOUND    PHONE BEING TURNED OFF

JERMYN    We're really not interested in prosecuting you.  We just want to know about Simon Strong.

UPTON    The alleged Simon Strong. 

AMBER    Dude.  He was the full meal deal, you know.  I watched videos of his band, from like before I was born, and it was totally him.

UPTON    Then who was the deceased?

AMBER    Like I said, it was him.  What?  Do you ride the short bus?

UPTON    It couldn't be him, because you said you spoke with him recently, and--

JERMYN    [cutting him off]  Let's start at the beginning.  How did you meet Mr. Strong?

AMBER    [miserable]  He hates being called Mister.  [deep breath, blasé lies]  I was making a delivery--

MUSIC

 

SFX    HEAVY METAL/PUNK MUSIC FADES INTO THE BACKGROUND, AMBER BECOMES VOICE OVER.

AMBER [v.o.]    --of, some box or other.  I got inside, took the wrong turn--

SFX    MUSIC IS MUFFLED BY DISTANCE, BUT CLEARLY LOUD

SOUND    AMBER'S HEAVY BREATHING UP CLOSE - SOUNDS LIKE ECSTASY, BUT IT'S JUST PANIC AND EXERTION.

AMBER    Oh, shit!

AMBER [v.o]    I was supposed to go to the manager's office--

SOUND    HEAVY FOOTSTEPS APPROACH AT A RUN

SOUND    AMBER'S BREATHING QUICKENS.  HER FOOTSTEPS TAKE OFF QUICKLY.

BOUNCER    [off] Get back here, dogmeat!

AMBER [v.o]    And I just knocked on the wrong door.

SOUND     HEAVY FEET ARE DISTANT, BUT APPROACHING. 

SOUND    AMBER'S FEET GET CLOSE.

SOUND    SLAM OF BODY AGAINST DOOR.  POUNDING ON DOOR

AMBER    Let me in!  They're after me!!!  Please! 

SOUND     POUNDING CONTINUES.  HEAVY FEET GET CLOSER

AMBER    Please!  I - I'm having a heart attack!  Let me in or I'll totally die!

SOUND    SLIDING DOOR OPENS

AMBER    Whoa!

SOUND    STUMBLING STEPS FORWARD, BODY FALLS, SLIDING DOOR SHUTS. 

SFX    MUSIC CUTS OUT COMPLETELY.

AMBER    Oh.  Shit.  Look, I'm--

SOUND    SCUTTLING ACROSS WOOD FLOOR

SIMON     [filtered, mechanical sounding]  Look into the camera please.

AMBER    Camera--?  Oh.  [shivers slightly] 

SOUND    A COUPLE OF HESITANT FOOTSTEPS

AMBER    Hi!  Look, can you just tell me how to get out of here?  There's no need for --

SIMON    [filter] What was that about a heart attack?

AMBER    Oh, that.  That was - that was bullshit.  [joking]  I had it removed - years ago.

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM [CUTS IN SUDDENLY]

UPTON    Was your relationship with this Mister Strong, sexual?

AMBER    Ew!!!  He was like my great grandad's age - like, even older than you!

JERMYN    [coughs away a laugh]  You say you made the delivery and just happened to "make friends" with Strong?  Everyone else says he was a complete recluse.  Didn't like people.

AMBER    Nah.  He liked people, but he was really sick.  I mean, like ill, not deviant.

SIMON    [on filter]  Step through.

SOUND    DOOR SLIDES OPEN

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE     COOL ROOM - THE HUM OF A HEAVY FREEZER UNIT

AMBER    [gasps at the cold]  Whoa!  Um, can I just go?  I promise not to try any --

SIMON    [unfiltered, but rough and almost a whisper]  What WERE you trying?

AMBER    I ... really just wanted to hear the band, but your guys caught me.  I mean, I assume since you're here, they're yours--

SIMON    I own the club, yes. 

AMBER    [after a slight silence]  Okay, is it just me or is your heater broken?  [brr noise]

SIMON    [dry chuckle] 

AMBER    [noticing something] Dude! 

SOUND    A COUPLE OF EXCITED FOOTSTEPS

AMBER    Can you watch, like, the whole entire club from here?

SFX    ELECTRIC WHEELCHAIR SHIFTS

SIMON    [disinterested] I can--

AMBER    Omigod!  Do you have sound?  Is there a button?

SIMON    --but it gets boring after a while. 

AMBER    They're totally bumping uglies in the bathroom, right there!  Look!  Look!

SOUND    SWITCH

AMBER    [annoyed]  Hey!

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM CUTS IN

UPTON    Sick?  What kind of disease did he have, Ebola?  The state of that body--

JERMYN    We really shouldn't go into that yet, Howie.

AMBER    What time is it?

UPTON    What?  Why?

AMBER    Just asking.  You made me turn my phone off.  I have a curfew. 

JERMYN    Would you like us to call home for you?

AMBER    [shrug]  Nah. 

UPTON    And your parents, they approved of all this?

AMBER    My folks are...  Cool.  They don't care--

UPTON    Like they don't mind that hair cut?

AMBER    Sig and Laurie let me do dumb stuff cause they know I won't do anything stupid. 

UPTON    Like spending all your time hanging out in a bar?

AMBER    It's a club.  And, for a rocker, Simon was pretty uptight about underage boozing and ...stuff. 

UPTON    [leaps on it] Stuff?  What kind of stuff?

AMBER    What?  Stuff.  Just ... stuff.  Dude, you need to switch to decaf.  Or valium.

UPTON    Did you ever see this man with any illegal substances?

AMBER    Well, he had all kinds of medications - being sick and all, and I [sounding mock sorry]  I guess I forgot to look them all up in the handy dandy book of all things illegal. 

UPTON    I thought prescription pills were the latest thing these days. 

AMBER    Only with the kind of freak whose parents go to shrinks and who have time to sit around and stare at carpet lint.  I got better things to do.

JERMYN    Like what?

AMBER    Plus it's dangerous.  You know what viagra can do to--  What?

JERMYN     What kinds of things do you like to do?

AMBER    I-- like music, I write. I function as a higher organism.

UPTON    She means what do you plan to do with your life, Amber Sorensen with an E-N?

JERMYN    Actually I was just--

AMBER    What do you want, a mission statement and a business plan?  Dude, I'm 16. 

UPTON    I knew what I wanted to do at 16.

AMBER    [muttered] But your ass is so tight it whistles. 

JERMYN     [tries not to snicker]

UPTON    Hmm?

AMBER    [louder] I bet your dad was a cop.

UPTON    So?

AMBER    Nothing.  Just you seem like maybe you grew up with it. 

UPTON    Are you gonna follow in your folks' footsteps?

AMBER    [flat and sarcastic] Oh, yeah.  Weddings are my life.

JERMYN    We don't want to keep you here all night - curfew, and all that.  What was wrong with your friend?

AMBER    Simon said he had some kind of wasting thing --

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COOL ROOM

SIMON    Munoz syndrome.  I have to carefully regulate my body temperature.

AMBER    So you're, like, Mr. Freeze?  Not exactly Ahh-nold, there, string bean.

SIMON    And I have to avoid excitement. 

AMBER    [pause]  That's a hint, eh?  Can I at least get out without going through the American Gladiators?

SOUND    SLIDING DOOR OPENS

AMBER    Thanks.  Hey, if you get completely bored or anything, my I-M is--

SIMON    No.

AMBER    Um, ok.  You just seem kinda lonely.

SOUND    HER SLOW FOOTSTEPS

SFX    WHEELCHAIR SHIFTS AGAIN

SIMON    Perhaps you could come back tomorrow, during the day.  I could use someone to run errands for me.  The pay would be reasonable. 

AMBER    Could I watch the band?

SIMON    You could watch from here, but you'd have to dress warmly--

AMBER    I'll bring a parka!

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

UPTON    Are you adopted?

AMBER    [flabbergasted] What?  Whoa!  I think there are some low-flying non sequeters in here.  Did you see where that came from?

JERMYN    Uh... no.

UPTON    You call your parents [checks notes] um, Sig and Laurie.

AMBER    Doh, everyone does.  [slow and condescending] Those are their names, Billy.

UPTON    Most kids your age still call their folks mom and dad.

AMBER    Maybe most kids your age.  Most of us would rather be cremated.  [shrugs] mm.  Except to their face.  The folks still like to think we're all the same little rugrats they knew and love.  [snort]

UPTON    So you make a point of lying to your folks?

AMBER    There's that non-sequeter again.  You should really get a bug zapper.

JERMYN    You probably think of it as "humoring them" rather than lying.

UPTON    Two faced is two faced.

AMBER    If you can't be two-faced, you shoulda found a better one to be stuck with.

UPTON    Look here--

AMBER    I bet you never get to play good cop. 

UPTON    What?

JERMYN    Howie, maybe we should take a break.  Get some water. 

UPTON    [growl] I'm fine.

JERMYN    Would you get me some?  Amber?

AMBER    Uh, sure.

UPTON    [annoyed noise] 

SOUND    STOMPS OUT, DOOR SLAMS

AMBER    Wow.  Where do I get one?

JERMYN    Don't be fooled - I'm not always the good cop.

AMBER    Oh?

JERMYN    You say you don't do drugs.  We could test you--

AMBER    [disgusted noise] pssh.

JERMYN    --and go through your backpack--

AMBER    [worried] Huh?

JERMYN    But I'm going to trust you on that, because you walked right past one of our drug dogs on the way in, and I don't think you're the type to get caught in a stupid lie.

AMBER    [thinks, then] You think I'll get caught in a smart one?

JERMYN    Let's just agree that I won't underestimate you, and you do me the same favor.

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COLD ROOM

SOUND    DOOR SLIDES OPEN

SIMON    You can leave it there.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS

AMBER    Hey.  Wassup?

SOUND    WHIR OF WHEELCHAIR TURNING

SIMON    [annoyed] What?

AMBER    Just making conversation.

SIMON    "Wassup" isn’t conversation.

AMBER     It is if you answer.  Besides, with most of my friends, I-M-H-O, O-M-G, L-O-L is conversation.  Wassup is practically a monolog.

SIMON    [snort, then painful noise, trying not to cough]  Well.  [dismissive] Now that that's settled--

AMBER    [overly casual] If you want me to go, just say.  [shrug] I got stuff to do.

SOUND    a MOMENT, then FOOTSTEPS GO AWAY

SIMON    [calling] You... you wanted to watch the band?

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, FOOTSTEPS

UPTON    Your water.

SOUND    WATER BOTTLES GET SLAMMED DOWN, ONE BY ONE

JERMYN    Thank you. Howie.

UPTON    [makes disgruntled noises]

AMBER    Yeah.  Cheers, Howie.

UPTON    [disgusted noise] Huh. 

AMBER    Look, my parents actually like me to use their names - makes them feel like they're helping me assert my personhood or something.  I do it to humor them.

UPTON    Fine.

UPTON    [trying to sound unconcerned] We need a physical description of the alleged Mr. Strong.

AMBER    Watch a video of Madness Machine on Youtube.  Then figure older.  A bunch older. 

UPTON    How very...specific.  How tall was he?

AMBER    That's kind of a pickle.  I never saw him stand up - he was always in his bumper car.

UPTON    What?

JERMYN    The mechanized wheelchair.

AMBER    He had to avoid exerting himself  [thinking]  OK, so imagine classic Simon, then really thin - like even more than heroin-chic, maybe almost to starving third world skinny.

JERMYN    Could it have been faked?  Perhaps something in the way he dressed?

AMBER    Doubtful, Phyllis.  He usually kicked it in jams.  Not much to hide behind. 

UPTON    Speak English.

AMBER    [sounding british-ish]  The subject in question had a strong tendency to desport himself in capacious yet abbreviated trousers, much as those the predominant choice of American surfboard riders lean toward.

JERMYN    [Snicker]

UPTON    You mean he wore shorts.  In that cold?

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COLD ROOM

SIMON    If it bothers you, I could put something else on.

AMBER    Yeah, 'cuz like you're so tasty, Bubba-Ho-Tep, that I'm gonna totally jump on you if you keep wheeling around half-naked like that.  [beat]  Nah - it's kinda creepy, but I'll adjust.  Like having a weird uncle.

SIMON    [wheezy laugh] 

AMBER    But a cool one.  I mean - not just [brr], but cool.

SIMON    I must be, since you're neglecting your social whirl to spend time here in this arctic wasteland. 

AMBER    Oh, yeah - I have to sneak out the window to get away from the endless line of bimboons waiting to take me to the prom.

SIMON    Bimboon? 

AMBER    It's like someone in a boy band,  The guy equivalent of a bimbo. 

SIMON    [laughs] 

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

UPTON    He scooted around in a wheelchair, wearing shorts, and you didn't think that was odd?

AMBER    Duh.  Of course.

UPTON    But you never told anyone about him?

AMBER    He'd'a been pissed.  Plus people woulda thought - you know - creepy stuff.

UPTON    What if he decided to try something?

AMBER    Beep beep.  I can outrun a wheelchair.  At least as far as the stairs.

UPTON    And what if he could really get up?

AMBER    I doubt it, Billy.  He didn't have any little blue pills.

UPTON    [flustered] I didn't--  I meant get up and walk.

AMBER    Yeah you did.  You're the one who's all worried he's gonna go perv on me.

UPTON    If you were my daughter--

AMBER    Get out of the way of the door.  One of us would probably be dead.

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COLD ROOM

AMBER    The bottles - it's all for your illness, right?  Like the meth lab in the bathroom?

SIMON    [shocked]  It's not a--!

AMBER    Doh, yeah.  I was kidding.  So is it a big secret experiment thing? 

SIMON    I - I keep tracking down recipes for preparations and elixirs that ... that might help me.  Some seem to work for a little while, but nothing ... lasts.

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

JERMYN    [snap] Howie.  Did you have any more questions?

UPTON    What about his hair?

AMBER    [snapped back] What?  It looked pretty much the same.

UPTON    A-ha!  Too clever for his own good.

AMBER    Not every guy over 50 needs canned hair, Billy.

UPTON    And this guy claimed to be THE Simon Strong.

AMBER    I already told you he was.  I didn't even know who that was that first time, cause like I'd never heard of him before, but soon as I could, I googled him and voy-la!

UPTON    Vwa-la.

AMBER    [whispered] Beep Beep.

UPTON    What?

JERMYN    For the record, Simon Strong was the lead singer and songwriter for a punk band called Madness Machine in the mid to late 1970s. 

AMBER    American punk band.

UPTON    Who cares?

AMBER    [earnest] It's important - British punk was British punk and American punk was--

JERMYN    But you'd never heard of this band before you met Strong?

AMBER    [sigh]  Pre-cisely.  Funny sort of six degrees thing, though - once I saw the band name, it clicked, 'cuz my grandad had one of their albums in his LP collection.  Serious.  How's that for whoo-OO-oo [spooky noise]?

UPTON    [disbelieving snort] Your grandpa listened to punk?

AMBER    Duh.  He willed his tattoos to science.  Stay back from the door, Billy.

JERMYN    You said you met Mr. Strong --?

AMBER    Halloween night.  That's why they had such a cool band in the house.

JERMYN    About nine months, then.  And how often did you see him?

AMBER    Most days.  I did his shopping and stuff and stopped in for a chat. 

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COOL ROOM

SIMON    Are you a retard?  The Sex Pistols were totally the Monkees of punk.  They were a made band.  Their manager put them together.

AMBER    [teasing] I suppose you met him too?

SIMON    Once.  How much respect can you have for a guy who also created Bow Wow Wow?

AMBER    Bow Wow What?

SIMON    You must ride the short bus.  Beep beep, Billy, don't stand in the way of the door.  [wheezy chuckle]  The Ramones, now, they were the real thing.  They lived punk.

AMBER    You're pretty feisty for an old crip who's s'posed to keep frosty.

SIMON    [dry chuckle]

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

JERMYN    When our people searched the "residence" over the club, they found a number of, um - unusual items.

AMBER    Like?

JERMYN    The enormous refrigeration unit that apparently kept the place fairly, um--

UPTON    Meat locker-ish. 

AMBER    [wry]  So he was cool.  So?

UPTON    According to electric company records, he was using enough energy to be frozen. 

AMBER    And?  What, didn't he pay his bill?  It's his business what he does with his juice.

UPTON    There are a lot of things you can do with that much juice.  Things, for instance, that the narcotics squad would be very interested in. 

AMBER    [exasperated] Beep beep.

UPTON    I am getting really sick of--

JERMYN    Amber.  Can you shed any light on the occult paraphernalia he apparently collected?

AMBER    It's not like I had the run of the place.  We'd just hang in the main room - where all the video consoles are.  He talked about some old books, though.

JERMYN    Did you ever see anyone else with him?  Did he talk about other visitors?

AMBER     Oh, heck no.  He didn't like people to see how sick he was, but like, since I already knew, he had somebody to talk to, right?

AMBIANCE    COOL ROOM

SOUND    DOOR SLIDES SHUT

AMBER    Hey! 

SIMON    [anxious] You're late.

AMBER    [aping his wiped out voice] "Hi Amber, so glad to see you."

SIMON    I was exp-- [slight chuckle, sigh]  I am.  Yes.

AMBER    You worried about me or your [singsong] Special Delivery!?

SIMON    It's here?

AMBER    No, it's a phone book I wrapped up and sent the long way, let's see, through - wow.  Egypt and London?  That's tight!

SIMON    Open it, please.

AMBER    'kay.

SOUND    PAPER UNWRAPS FROM LARGE BOOK.

AMBER    Oh, jeez - you got so ripped off.

SIMON    What do you mean?

AMBER    This is such a gag gift.  It's like from that movie - "I'll swallow your soul!  I'll swallow your soul!"

SIMON    Give it here.  [pause]  Ah.  No, this is the real thing.  The dark jewel of any occult collection.

AMBER     [sniffing] Ok, so it smells older than Bruce Campbell, but still --

SIMON    I need to be alone.  Come back next Wednesday.

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

AMBER    He did burn incense and drink weird stuff.  I figured it was alternative medicine, or maybe Kabbalah - that's all the rage with the red carpet crowd, right?

UPTON    Did he ever say what was wrong with him?

AMBER    Mun-yoes syn-drome, Billy.

UPTON    Stop calling--

JERMYN    But what is Munoz syndrome?  Did you ever, say, Google it?

AMBER    Well, yeeah.  There were a couple - but they had longer names, and were like degenerative eye diseases, so I figured, you know, that wasn't it.

UPTON    Did you ever ask him?

AMBER    Well, right off I asked if it was catching, and he said no, so I figured that's all I care about, and if wants to talk about it he'll say.

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COOL ROOM

SIMON    Munoz syndrome is extremely rare.  I contracted it almost thirty years ago--

AMBER    Ooh!  Let me guess.  When you [reporter voice] "vanished from the public eye"!

SIMON    Where--?

AMBER     Wikipedia.  Shh.  I'm shushing.

SIMON    My band was in New Orleans, when this came on.  Normal medicine couldn't help, so I turned to the uh, folk practitioners.

AMBER    Like Voodoo?  No wonder you're buying all creepy books and incense.

SIMON    It's a lot more serious than movie voodoo, but that's close. 

AMBER    And the cold?

SIMON    It slows my metabolism. 

AMBER      Mine too - Brr.

SFX    THE HUM OF THE FREEZER DIPS FOR A MOMENT

SIMON    [gasps and holds his breath until the power returns]

AMBER    Wha--?

SIMON    [very tense]  The wiring's getting old. 

AMBER    So get a new fridge.

SIMON    No, the building's wiring.  Between music and lights and all, it carries quite a load.

AMBER    You should move, then - and before summer.  Seriously.

SIMON    How can I go anywhere?  I have to stay a constant level.

AMBER    I dunno.  [thinking]  Hey, ice cream truck - I once saw this movie where they were carting a corpse around in the back--

SIMON    [strong]  No.  No.  Tomorrow, maybe you could look at generators. 

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

JERMYN    But he was well off - according to the IRS.

AMBER    He spent a buttload on his creepy books and exotic bags of dirt and stuff.  [catching herself]  Or, that's what he told me. 

UPTON    And he trusted you to carry around these expensive packages?

AMBER    I didn't know what they were.  I'd probably have freaked and got all paranoid.  He said other people were after them, too.

UPTON    [eager] Other people?  Do you think they might have taken the books after Strong disappeared?

AMBER    Tscha.  He didn't disappear.  He's dead.  Beep Beep.

UPTON    [takes in an angry breath]

JERMYN    Ok, let's go back--

UPTON     No, let's talk about this.  You're saying that the corpse you discovered in that - what you call "the cold room" - was the person you knew as Simon Strong.

AMBER    It had to be.

UPTON    Then pray explain to me how it could be that that body had been dead for well over a decade?

AMBER    [shrug, statement]  You're wrong.

UPTON    So all our experts are wrong.  And you know better.

AMBER    [trying] Your experts obviously aren't familiar with Munoz Syndrome.  That's all.

UPTON     Right.  So you know better.  You know what I think?

JERMYN    [warning]  Howie...

UPTON    No, Phyl.  Not this time.  I'm getting tired of this little girl, trying to live in a dream world.  She needs a dose of harsh reality.

AMBER    [hysterical laughter]  Harsh reality?  [can't stop laughing]  You don't have a clue how harsh reality can get.  [breaks down into tears]

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    COLD ROOM

SIMON    Turn the thermostat down a bit, would you?

AMBER    Down?  Dude, my eyeballs are already icing over. 

SIMON    [pause] Maybe you shouldn't come here any more.

AMBER    [upset]  What?  [beat, then blasé]  And lose the school credit I'm getting for looking after the elderly and infirm?  Uh-uh.

SIMON    [slight wheezing laugh, turns into cough, then deep breath]  I... I probably won't last much longer.

AMBER    No way!  You're fine!  Well, not fine, but‑‑

SIMON    It's been coming for a long time.  And the elixirs aren't working any more.  Nothing is working.

AMBER    The book can't--?

SIMON    I thought there would be things I could ...bring myself to do, but it's not worth it.

AMBER    It's always worth living.

SIMON    When I'm gone, take it and burn it.  Promise?

AMBER    If you can't use it, sell it!  Use the money to get more colder.  You'll be fine.

SIMON    No. 

SFX    POWER DIP, THEN HUM RETURNS

SIMON    [long shaky breath]  I always think it will be the last one. 

AMBER    I'LL buy you a generator.

SIMON    Have you seen the gas prices recently?  Cooling takes too much energy - even if you get one, I won't be able to afford the gasoline. 

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

AMBER    [still breathing in little gasps, coming down from a crying jag]

SOUND    WATER BOTTLE OPENED

JERMYN    Drink.

SOUND    PLASTIC BOTTLE SET ON TABLE

UPTON    [annoyed] Are you through? 

AMBER    [cough, sniff]

UPTON    So, here's what I think is going on.  This guy has been trying to establish himself as Simon Strong, famous recluse and mysterious celebrity.

AMBER    That's too dumb even for the short bus.

UPTON    Oh, yeah?  Dumb to the tune of half a mil a year.  Between the club, which the real Strong did purchase in December of 1979, and the royalties on his old music - particularly the musical um, chunks, or segments--

JERMYN    Riffs.

UPTON    Yes, whatever, that people used in their own--

JERMYN    Sampled.

UPTON    [deep annoyed sigh] During the 80s and 90s-- [waits, but there is no interjection] --he had pots of money rolling in.

AMBER    Which he spent on books and crud.  I told you.

UPTON     Kid, no one spends that much on books.  Did you ever actually see these books, or did you just bring him book-shaped packages?

AMBER    [silent for a beat]  No, I guess I never actually saw them.

UPTON    I say he's been salting it away, staying around long enough to move everything to the Caymans and then - Voy-la - take a powder.

AMBER    But the body--

JERMYN    [sadly] WAS the real Simon Strong.  Dental records have confirmed it.  But Amber, he'd been dead for a very long time. 

UPTON    Which explains the cold.  The fake didn't want the - uh - deceased stinking up the place.

AMBER    [muttered] Yeah, easier to freeze the whole place, than just pack a corpse in a chest freezer.

JERMYN    Are you up to telling us how you discovered the body?

AMBER    [very subdued] Sure.  I got to the club, and everything was dark.  I freaked-- Well, I got really worried, and ran up to his room.  The body was just... there... and it was...

JERMYN    --In an advanced state of decomposition.

AMBER    Yeah, that.

MUSIC

 

SFX    NO SOUND OF FRIDGE, JUST DISTANT STREET NOISES. 

SOUND    DOOR SLIDES OPEN WITH DIFFICULTY.

AMBER     [Grunts] Dammit, open!  damm---it [squeaks through]  Simon!  Simon?  [almost chokes] What is-- oh jeez!

SOUND    HESITANT FOOTSTEPS

SOUND    SQUISHY MOVEMENT NOISE

AMBER    What the he-e-e-ll?

SIMON    [Almost inaudible]  Turn off the flashlight. 

SOUND    CLICK FLASHLIGHT OFF

AMBER    I'll get you some ice, I'll ---

SIMON    Damage is done.  Don't go.  I wasn't sure if I wanted you here or not -- for this.

AMBER    Can I--?  Do you need--?

SIMON    Don't... touch me.  Please.  Just listen.  Listen!  Take the books and burn them.  I need to know you will.

AMBER    Yeah, sure.

SIMON    I- I've willed the club to you.  Don't get your hopes up, the police aren't going to .... [trails off] 

AMBER    Simon!  [breaking down] I don't want you to die.  You can't die! [etc., sobbing]

SIMON    This isn't -- I... haven't... been living...  for a long time.  Let me go.

AMBER    No!

SIMON    Shh! 

AMBER    [controls herself] Shushing. [gasp]

SIMON    In 1977, I O.D.ed on heroin and, [gasping cough] -- I... died.  It was never reported because a local Bocor brought me back...

AMBER    [small voice]  Like a zombie?

SIMON    [sigh, not quite a chuckle]  I knew you'd understand.

AMBER    But we can do it again, right?  Bring you back?

SIMON    [dying, trailing off]  Beep Beep.  Get out of the way of the door, Billy....

AMBER    [sobs]

MUSIC

 

AMBIANCE    INTERVIEW ROOM

AMBER    Guess I'm glad it ain't him - the ... borscht.  But he was cool.  For an old dude.

UPTON    If he contacts you in any way--

AMBER    [dryly sarcastic] Oh, sure.  I'll be right on the phone to you.

UPTON    Do you understand the meaning of accessory to fraud?  Harboring a fugitive, maybe?

AMBER    Well, I do watch a lot of TV.  Besides, it's not like I'm getting anything out of it.

UPTON    The club has been transferred into your name, Amber Sorensen with an E-N.  The heirs of the real Simon Strong will probably contest it.

AMBER    Pff.  Don't care.  Are we done?

JERMYN    You'll have to wait a few minutes while your statement is typed up.  Once you sign it, you're good to go.

AMBER     Sure.  Hey, did your CSI guys really not find any books or anything at the scene?

JERMYN    Nothing of any importance. 

UPTON    And no clue to his offshore account.

AMBER    Hmm.  Oh well.  [grunts with effort]

SOUND    CREAK OF LIFTING A HEAVY BACKPACK ONTO HER BACK

JERMYN    You going to be OK without a coat?  It's a bit chilly out tonight.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS. 

SFX    OFFICE NOISE. 

SOUND     COUPLE FOOTSTEPS

AMBER    Really?  [laughs]  Nah.  I'm cool.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS LEAVE.

MUSIC    MODERN COP THEME, FADE OUT

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...  

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BINGO THE BIRTHDAY CLOWN, episode 3 (19 Nocturne reissue of the day)16 Apr 202300:08:23

Episode 3 "Talent Show"

It's all for the children.  And... where do all the old Starrettes go?

Atomic Julie - Beyond the Yellow Fog (pt 4 of 8) by Emmett McDowell28 Sep 202100:20:36

Chapter 5 - The trip to Jupiter goes ... oddly

19 Nocturne Boulevard - THE OUTPOST - Reissue23 Sep 202100:38:30

[The Outpost won the Gold Mark Time Award for best sci fi audio drama for 2008]

You wake up, millions of light years away, in a place nothing like home. 
...What do YOU do?

Cast List

  • Grant Hickey - Gene Thorkildsen
  • Vanessa 98949 - Julie Hoverson
  • Lassiter - Russell Gold
  • Yasmin - Melissa D. Johnson
  • Recorder - Beverly Poole

Episode and incidental music from the album "...go..." by Sulatus (www.sulatus.cbl.pl). 
(available on Jamendo.com) [Used under a Creative Commons license.]

Show theme:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Recorded with the assistance of Ryan Hirst of Neohoodoo Studio
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Design:  Brett Coulstock

"What kind of a place is it?  Would you believe it's a habitat, in an asteroid cloud, in a distant corner of the galaxy?"

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The Outpost

This story was very loosely inspired by the movie Suna No Onna (Woman in the Dunes), from 1964; directed by Hiroshi Teshigahara from the novel by Kôbô Abe, as adapted by Eiko Yoshida, starring Eiji Okada and Kyôko Kishida and the sand. 

It's an awesome film - superficially about a man who is trapped by a small town and placed with a woman as her new husband.  In the film, he's an office worker and amateur entymologist seeking to make some kind of name for himself by finding a new species of bug on his day trip to a beach.  He falls asleep and wakes to find he missed the last bus, but a local town has someone who will take him in for the night  - a woman who lives at the bottom of this odd huge sand pit. 

The whole town live at the bottoms of these pits, and we slowly realize that the sand has built up over the town for generations, and they just dig out the areas around the huts by night and have the sand taken away. The woman lost her husband and child in a sandslide and cannot handle the work of digging the sand all by herself, so they have placed the man with her as her new husband - letting him down and taking away the ladder.  The man also finds out that he's not the only one - other men in other houses were similarly abducted.

I didn’t want to work with any of that for my story, specifically since I had determined to make it a gender reverse, and a woman kidnapped and handed to a man to be trapped as his wife is kind of ... a lot of real history.

So I focused on the subtext and themes of the movie.  At its heart, it's a culture clash, the man representing "modern japan" (in the 60s) and the town and woman being so traditional that they won't even leave ancient homes that are being devoured by the sand.  In modern life, people are cogs, and he's coming from a life where he's basically interchangeable - hardly even missed when he vanishes - into one where the good of the community and the comfort of the partner are directly affected by the actions of the individual and each person is therefore important.

That gave me a more satisfying framework to play with.  By creating these two cultures - the efficient and interchangeable people she comes from - where even her personal achievements are somewhat generic - and the humble, personal, and individual life in the asteroids, where he takes time to respect the dead, and is proud of his little triumphs.

I also wanted an equivalent to the sand.  The film is basically a three character piece, with the sand as much a presence as the two people in it.  I made the outpost, with its gripes and problems, sounds, and needs, as similar to that as I could.  

I like to think it's the writing that makes this episode really great but I give a lot of credit to my costar, for being able to bring to life a male character that is strong without being overbearing, who is in control without being controlling, and who is never ashamed to feel.

That left me free to be a bitch. 

Of course the climax comes in both stories when the captive has a chance to walk away.  I won't spoil it.

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THE OUTPOST

Cast:

  • Olivia (host)
  • Grant Hickey (M20s-30s), calm and lonely. Stoic, eager.
  • Vanessa 98949 (F20s-30s), sharp and commanding, modern
  • Recorder (any)
  • Lassiter (M20s-30s), on Janice (another nearby outpost)
  • Yasmin (20s), another survivor of the Xanadu

OLIVIA     Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's an outpost in an asteroid cloud, can't you tell? 

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     INSIDE OUTPOST MU LAMBDA EPSILON [Millie]

SOUND    MACHINE AND ELECTRONIC NOISES, SLOSHING OF LIQUID

VANESSA    [waking up noises, then with a start, coughing]

GRANT    Easy now.  Just breathe.

VANESSA    [breathing, coughing a bit]

GRANT    Tell me.  Do you know your name?

VANESSA    My what?  Of course.

GRANT    Tell me your name.

VANESSA    Vanessa 9 [breaks into coughing]

GRANT    [incredulous]  Your name is Vanessa 9?

VANESSA    Don't be stupid.  It's Vanessa 98949.  How old do I look? [coughing]

GRANT    [not a clue] Um...

VANESSA    Where am I?

GRANT    I'll tell you whatever you wanna know.  Later.  You're all wrung out.

VANESSA    Nonsense.  I am ordering you to tell me--

GRANT    Now there ain't no call to get huffy, miss.

VANESSA    [offended]  Where is your Vox?  I plan to let her know precisely--

GRANT    My what?

VANESSA    [altering slightly] Your Vox?  The one who gives you orders?

GRANT    Ain't got none. 

VANESSA    There must be a female around here somewhere!

GRANT    Nope.  Just me.  And you.

VANESSA    What the hell kind of place is this?  [pain]  ooh....  ah.

GRANT    There, now.  You lie back down and get yourself some rest.  [fogging out]  Waking from deepsub is no cakewalk...

MUSIC

VANESSA    [waking sharply again, gasp] Ohh.

SOUND    SWOOSH OF POD HATCH OPENING, HESITANT FOOTSTEPS, A STUMBLE

VANESSA    Where is that throwback?  Hmm?

SOUND    SHE PICKS UP A NOTE AND A RADIO

VANESSA    [reading] Frequency 12.  great.  [louder, commanding]  Frequency 12.

SOUND    NOTHING

VANESSA    [more strident] Frequency 12.  [Ugh!]

SOUND    RADIO UNIT BEING SHAKEN, CRACKLES TO LIFE

VANESSA    [hesitant] Frequency 12?  Is there anyone here?

GRANT    [on filter]  No need to holler. 

VANESSA    Your comm unit isn't set to recognize my voice!

GRANT    [baffled] Oh.  I'll... see what I can do.  You need anything?

VANESSA    [snap] No.  Well, I could use something to eat.

GRANT    All righty.  I have to finish up something, and I'll be down as soon as I can. 

SOUND    CLICK RADIO OFF

VANESSA    What?  You get down here immediately!  Ugh!

SOUND    THROWS RADIO UNIT - SOMETHING SNAPS

MUSIC

SOUND    SHE PACES

SOUND    DOOR SWOOSHES OPEN, HE ENTERS, DOOR SHUTS

GRANT    [sigh] All righty.  Brought you some chow.

VANESSA    [seething]  It's been almost an entire hour!

GRANT    [matter of fact]  You caught me outside.  Was quicker to finish what I was doing than to come in and get back out again later.

VANESSA    Give me that.

SOUND    TRAY RATTLES

GRANT    [grunt of effort] No.

VANESSA    What?  How dare you?

GRANT    You're in my home, and if you can't be civil, then ... well, I can be downright rude too.

VANESSA    There must be someone else here - I will report your behavior--!

GRANT    Nope.  Just me.  Like I told you.

VANESSA    Take me to your comm unit--

GRANT    No. 

VANESSA    [faltering] But I--

GRANT    You can ask nicely.

VANESSA    [indignant] What?  How can you even look me in the face and say such a thing, male?

GRANT    [beat, then sigh]  Call me again when you're in a better mood.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS, DOOR SWOOSHES OPEN

VANESSA    [up]  The-- [deep breath, forces herself to a nicer tone] The radio is broken. 

GRANT    Broken?  Hold up.

SOUND    SETS TRAY DOWN. PICKS UP RADIO

VANESSA    I... shook it.  It wouldn't listen to me!

SOUND    RADIO SHAKES, RATTLES

GRANT    Hmm.  Looks like I'm gonna have to get in there.

SOUND    VANESSA TRIES TO BE SNEAKY, GRABBING SOMETHING TO EAT

GRANT    But I still don't understand what you're saying about-- [sees her eating, makes an impatient noise]

VANESSA    [around a mouthful]  You expect me to starve?  I just woke from deepsub.  I require caloric intake.

GRANT    [sigh, tsks] 

SOUND    HIS FOOTSTEPS LEAVE, DOOR SWOOSHES SHUT

MUSIC

SOUND    TINKERING WITH MACHINERY - LITTLE ZAP NOISES, ETC.

VANESSA    Just ...about ...there!

SOUND    BLIP AS SOMETHING TURNS ON

RECORDER    [crackly] Life pod B-L-T-L-1-4-5, ship Xanadu, designated X-14-Z-3-J--2-0-5--

VANESSA    [real relief]  Finally - a civilized voice!  Recorder.  Play back the Xanadu's final entry.

RECORDER    Final log entry of star cruiser Xanadu.  G-vector, Delta quadrant, encountered space debris.  Explosion.  Unknown cause.  Xanadu evac mandated.  Pods loosed at ship day 172, T-vector, speed normal.

VANESSA    Calculate time in transit.

RECORDER    Calculating.  One thousand, three hundred and eighty two days since Xanadu Evac.

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

VANESSA    Four years--?

GRANT    [off] You were on a star cruiser? 

VANESSA    [gasp]

SOUND    BONKS HEAD AS SHE REACTS

GRANT    That musta been interesting.

VANESSA    Yes, I am part of the crew of the Star Cruiser Xanadu, bound for Ganymede 800 in the Gargon nebula.  There will be people looking for me.

GRANT    [rueful]  Not here they won't.

VANESSA    What do you mean?

GRANT    I don't know what all your specs there are, but first, no one much comes this far out, and second, well, I do know the Gargon Nebula is hellagone from here.

VANESSA    You have to let me contact someone.

GRANT    Nope.  I don't have to do anything.

VANESSA    I order you!  As third under-lieutenant subchief, engineering bay 5 of the star cruiser Xanadu, I command you to take me to your comm room.

GRANT    Pff. 

SOUND    DOOR OPENS, FOOTSTEPS LEAVE

VANESSA    [very last second] Please.

GRANT    [off, leaning in]  Wish I could.  Left you some food there. 

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS

MUSIC

SOUND    ELECTRONIC MENDING NOISES

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

GRANT    Whatcha doing?

VANESSA    Keeping busy.  What do you want?

GRANT    You about ready to come out? 

VANESSA    Out of what?

GRANT    The room here?

VANESSA    The room? [working up] You kept me locked up in here, and now you ask--

GRANT    Door don't even lock.  I was wondering why you never--

SOUND    HER STOMPING FOOTSTEPS

VANESSA    Door open!  See?  Nothing happens!

GRANT    Well o'course not.  Doors don't have ears.

VANESSA    Normal doors take orders.  Radios too.

GRANT    You're an underengineer sub chief thingee and you don't even know how to work a door?

VANESSA    Normal doors take orders!

GRANT    Well, I guess we're all a bit old fashioned here.  This is how you open the door.  Wave your hand right here--

SOUND    WhoooosH.  DOOR OPENS

VANESSA    [sullen] Oh.  I see.  Wait!

GRANT    What?

SOUND    SLAMS HIM UP AGAINST THE WALL

VANESSA    You said we're all a bit old fashioned - who is "we"?

GRANT    [controlling some strong emotion, at being slammed against a wall] Well - um - I was including the doors and all.  [deep breath] Since you like t'talk to them all.

SOUND    SHE LETS GO

MUSIC

GRANT    [off] To the left there.

SOUND    DOOR SWOOSHES OPEN. A COUPLE OF FOOTSTEPS, THEY SLOW

VANESSA    This is it?

GRANT    [pride] Yup.  Millie's brain center.  There are 42 more like her spread throughout the cloud - um, here.

SOUND    BUTTONS PUSH. SCREEN HUMS TO LIFE

GRANT    Pretty, huh?

VANESSA    It's rubbish.

GRANT    [hurt, but covering]  Millie has 12 chambers - each a self-sealing unit, in case of breaches - and a backup--

VANESSA    How do you call out?

GRANT    Hmm?

VANESSA    Out!  How do you call out!  I need to make arrangements to get the hell out of here!

GRANT    It don't quite work that--

VANESSA    Nothing here works!  Nothing works at all! [almost hysterical]

SOUND    SLAP

VANESSA    [stunned gasp]

GRANT    Now I'm real sorry about that, but you need to breathe.  And let me finish my sentences.

VANESSA    I could have you up on charges so fast!

GRANT    Well, not here, you couldn't.  [sigh]  Now, as I was about to say, you can call the other habitats, or the quarterly supply ship - if he's in range.  Just might be - he come through here only last week.

VANESSA    Another male?  What is this, throwback central?

GRANT    What you got against fellows?

VANESSA    [disgusted noise] Males have been proven inferior and in the civilized galaxy have been effectively relegated to a purely functional capacity.

GRANT    You mean where you come from is all ladies?  Don't it get boring?

VANESSA    What?  What are you implying--?

GRANT    Just - well, how do you have kids?

VANESSA   

GRANT    So everyone has to have kids? 

VANESSA    No one "has" children. [shrugs, indifferent] Everyone donates genetic material, and it's automatically matched up with compatible fertilizing agents.  Children belong to the community, and are raised in a proper safe environment, under supervision. 

GRANT    But - those poor little boys and girls--

VANESSA    Girls.

GRANT    [sigh] Them poor little kids, never knowing who their - mommas are.

VANESSA    They're cared for by properly trained personnel.  Much better for their long-term physical and mental health.  How would someone like me, with a career on a star cruiser, ever find that sort of time?

GRANT    That's real sad.

VANESSA    Not to mention, I haven't spent my life immersed in study of childhood ailments and development.

GRANT    Well, neither did my mama.

VANESSA    Yes.  I'm sure.

GRANT    [hurt, slightly annoyed]  Look, you can mock me, and turn your nose up at Millie, but don't you never speak ill of my mama. 

SOUND    CRACKLE OF STATIC

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter] Hey Grant?  You there?  Grant?  You there? 

SOUND    SQUEAK OF CHAIR, CLICK

GRANT    Yup.  Whatcha need?

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter] That capsule thing you sold me - you got yours to work OK?

GRANT    [hurried] Ah, hell.  Let me call you back, Lassiter.

SOUND    CLICK

VANESSA    [absolute fury] Sold?

GRANT    I got work to do.

SOUND    SLIGHT SCUFFLE, SHE BLOCKS HIM FROM LEAVING

VANESSA    [not quite screaming] Was he talking about a deepsub pod like mine? 

GRANT    [muttered] I find all sorts of things.

VANESSA    You sold a - a - a PERSON to that - that male?

GRANT    What makes you think the pod weren't empty?

VANESSA    That's slavery!  And you know what that means?

GRANT    Don't matter.  Sides, what would I do with two of y'all out here?

VANESSA    The same as you're doing with one - nothing at all!

GRANT    [standing up to her a bit]  Yup.  long as I'm talking to you, I'm doing nothing at all.  Like I said, I got work to do.

SOUND    HE LEAVES, DOOR

MUSIC

VANESSA    It was one of these switches--

SOUND    RADIO STATIC

VANESSA    Yes!  [lower, into the mike] Lassiter?  Come in Lassiter?

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  Huh?  Who's this? 

VANESSA    I'm at .... Millie. 

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  Excellent - it did work!  You tell Grant to let me know what he did, y'hear?

VANESSA    To wake up the woman in the pod?

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter] Yeah.  [eager] I can't wait.

VANESSA    [warning] Lassiter.  You do know it's vastly illegal to rescue someone and then force them into slavery, don't you?

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  What?

VANESSA    If you press her into service, you are committing high seas slavery, according to Rule 4715 D of the unitary code.

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  Is Grant there?  Can you put him on?

VANESSA    Shut up!

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  Jeez.

VANESSA    Lassiter.  I will make a bargain with you.

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  I dunno--

VANESSA    I will help you revive the survivor, if you will --  let me talk to her as soon as she wakes up.

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  Sure.

VANESSA    And if you understand that I will find a way to come over there and kill you if you hurt her in any way.

LASSITER    [scratchy, on filter]  Hurt her?  Hey!  I paid good money for--

VANESSA    Agh!

MUSIC

YASMIN    [scratchy, on filter]  What do I do?

VANESSA    Be placating - we have to try and get together, make our way home.

YASMIN    Aye-aye, Vox.  Data mode for now.  I await your word.

VANESSA    Remind him I will kill him if he hurts you.

YASMIN    He doesn't seem very threatening.  I could put him down if I have to.

VANESSA    Good.  Engineer Vanessa 98949 Out.

YASMIN    Yasmin 222338 Out.

GRANT    [sad] Whatcha doing?

SOUND    CHAIR WHIPS AROUND

VANESSA    Huh?

GRANT    I see you found your friend.

VANESSA    We were part of the same crew.  I have rank, so I told her I would protect her.  It's my duty.

GRANT    Protect her?  From Lassiter?  He ain't some kinda --  of -- I ain't even sure what you're thinking he is.

VANESSA    A man.

SOUND    GETS UP FROM CHAIR

GRANT    [realizing]  Are you afraid of me?

VANESSA    [thinks, then] You hold all the cards.  All you have to do is refuse me food, and I'm helpless.

GRANT    I wouldn't do that!

VANESSA    You already did.

GRANT    I was trying to get you to-- Look, if I wanted to actually hurt you, I gotta blaster for that.  I just wanted you to think twice and act civil.

VANESSA    How many more were there?

GRANT    More?

VANESSA    Of the deepsub pods.  Did you just find the two?

GRANT    [grudging]  Four.  Total.  Lassiter's was the last to revive, so all of y'all are all right.

VANESSA    All right?  Let me talk to them!

GRANT    You gotta learn to stop giving me orders.  You're not my momma.

VANESSA    Your mother is--?

GRANT    She died.  Since then... [shrug]  I got work to do.

VANESSA    [belligerent] What is this work that seems to constantly demand your attention?

GRANT    You ask nice, you'll get a lot more answers.

VANESSA    [beat, then making an effort]  What is it that you do all day?

GRANT    Salvage.  Used to be mining, but the cloud here grabs every lump of crap out of the nearest 10-20 sectors, so salvage pays a helluva lot better. 

VANESSA    Salvage?

GRANT    And maintenance.  Millie here's old.  I keep her limping along, but it's truly full time. 

SOUND    DOOR OPENS

GRANT    Come on.  I'll show you where the food units are.  Then you ain't gotta wait on me if you get hungry.

MUSIC

GRANT    So this switch here changes the band - you gotta jiggle it a bit, here, sometimes.  And this list here shows all the other habitats  - the ones up top are closest - most reliable for contact.  Next down, these three - well - I ain't heard from them in a while.  Not even sure they're still... functional. 

VANESSA    Vacated?

GRANT    No one vacates.  Not unless--  But [trying to convince himself] comm equipment goes down sometimes - a lot - and it's a bitch to get the right parts.

VANESSA    All the habitats are as old as ...this one?

GRANT    Yeah, they were built for miners - never really meant to be permanent, but you know how things go.

VANESSA    Why don't you leave?

GRANT    Leave?

VANESSA    If you sell your salvage, it must go somewhere.  Someone must be buying it.  Why don't you just go, too?

GRANT    Why?

VANESSA    You say it's a full time job just keeping this place from falling down around your ears.  So find another place.

GRANT    But this is my home.  I was born right here in Millie.

VANESSA    It is falling apart.  I hope you don't think I plan to stay here with you.

GRANT    [beat, then neutral] Course not.  But you do owe me.

VANESSA    [indignant again] Owe you?

GRANT    I rescued you.  I pulled your damn pod in here and I woke you up. 

VANESSA    That's --

GRANT    And I've been feeding you and letting you breathe my air - which ain't cheap, I should point out.

VANESSA    Then let me get out of your air.

GRANT    First you gotta ... you know...pay me back.

VANESSA    [suspicious] How, exactly?

MUSIC

SOUND    ELECTRONIC REPAIR NOISES

VANESSA    Damn!  Bloody stone-age tools!

SOUND    CLICK RADIO TURNS ON, VERY CLEAR AND NO STATIC

VANESSA    Ha!

GRANT    [on radio] What?

VANESSA    [a little winded] I patched your antenna into the router from the pod's emergency signal - some serious interface issues, let me tell you - but you should get much clearer signals now.

GRANT    [on radio] [congratulatory]  Damn.

MUSIC

SOUND    CLANK OF METAL DROPPED

VANESSA    Damn.

GRANT     Everything all right?

VANESSA    Half my damn solar cells were damaged in the landing. 

GRANT    So?

VANESSA    I was thinking I'd jury rig them into something, get you a little extra free power.  Bloody hell.

MUSIC

SOUND    SOLDERING IRON SPARKS, STOPS, FACEPLATE UP

GRANT    That's a nice bead right there.

VANESSA    Yeah, I think I'm getting the hang of it.  Now watch this.  [command] Chicken!

SOUND    VENDING MACHINE RUMBLES, THEN CLUNKS

GRANT    Holy cow!

VANESSA    Well, chicken, but yes - you get the idea.  I still have to code the machine's other foodstuff options in for voice.  I'll need to get your voice into the system sometime, too.

GRANT    [mood dropping] Right.  O'course.  So I can do it myself.

VANESSA    [not noticing] Absolutely. 

MUSIC

VANESSA    You didn't have any trouble making contact?  I appear to be at the very arse end of the cloud, so they're out of my range from here.  Damn these archaic --

YASMIN    I... got them.  You may be disappointed, though. 

VANESSA    Why?

YASMIN    Helen 74589, and Griselda 80281 ... um... do not ... wish to participate.

VANESSA    What are you saying?

YASMIN    They have become attached to this place.

VANESSA    How the blazes--?

YASMIN    Griselda declined any details, but Helen seems to find some - companionship in the man Conrad and his children.

VANESSA    [disparaging]  Children.  At least we've only got men to deal with.

YASMIN    [iffy note] Yes.

MUSIC

SOUND    MACHINE DISPENSES FOOD

VANESSA    Sit down.

GRANT    Sit?  Why?  I always eat standing.

VANESSA    You practically sleep standing.  I have never seen you relax.

GRANT    Last time I just sat and waited was...

VANESSA    Yes?

GRANT    [evasive] Don't know.  doesn't matter.

VANESSA    Why not sit?

GRANT    Too much to do.

VANESSA    Please.

SOUND    BEAT, THEN SQUEAK OF A CHAIR

VANESSA    Haven't I helped at all?

GRANT    Oh, yeah - many hands make light work, like momma used to say, but there's always more to do.  [beat]  But the repairs are real good.  If this keeps up, I can maybe repressurize capsule 14.  [trails off]

VANESSA    Do you need the space?

GRANT    [hurt but covering] Never hurts - could put some more hydroponics in there, maybe put in some greens and generate oxy of my own.  Why not?  It's like minting money.

VANESSA    You'd be better off with algae tanks.  They take more processing to make them palatable for eating - much more - but they've been genetically manipulated to give a much higher O2 to cubic foot ratio, and they require less nutrient.

GRANT    I'd have to get it from somewhere--

VANESSA    Shouldn't be difficult - most cruisers have algae tanks, and all you need is a dip to start with and some growth media.  The tank - well you could pretty much put anything together, if you're not too concerned about sterile edible conditions - but for oxy production, anything that will contain the growth medium and keep the temp stable will do.  You'll need U-V simulators, too--

GRANT    Yeah.  [sigh]  Maybe you can send me some when you get home.

VANESSA    --you could re-make one room for food plant growth and have the algae - What? 

GRANT    Nothing. 

VANESSA    There's even better technology out there, you know.  I'm surprised you're not more curious.

GRANT    Well, I figure it's like this - of all you've talked about so far, doors that listen and whatever, this algae thing is the only one that seems like it'd fit into my life.  Everything else is like - so far beyond me, I don't see it mattering much.

VANESSA    But you would know.  You would have something to - to work toward.

GRANT    Something to chase?  Something to... miss.  Something to worry about not having?  Nah.  I figure, easier just to assume you're gonna tell me you can shit blueberry cobbler - it's all well and good, but I don't wanna do it.  And goodness knows I don't wanna eat it. 

VANESSA    [laughing] Cobbler?

GRANT    I-I got things to do.

VANESSA    Let me help.

GRANT    [breath] Nah.  It's all outside - I gotta hawk in some stuff.

VANESSA    [brightening a bit] Outside?  In a suit?

GRANT    [very unhappy] Yes.

VANESSA    Let me help!

GRANT    No.

VANESSA    Why?  Are you afraid I'll run away?

GRANT    [muttered] No, just ...float away.

VANESSA    What?

SOUND    HE GETS UP

GRANT    It's my job.  I have to do it.

VANESSA    Do you have two suits?

GRANT    Yes.

VANESSA    Many hands make light work.

GRANT    [thinks, then] No.

VANESSA    Look, I've put in my 100 hours on simulators, plus over 300 hours working on the hull in stagnant space.  Goodness - you've even got gravity here--

GRANT    Minimal gravity.

VANESSA    Point is, I know my way around a suit!

GRANT    [finally snappish] Look!  If things didn't have to be done, I'd never get into one of those damn things myself!  There's no way I'd put you in that kind of danger.

VANESSA    You don't - you don't like being out there?

SOUND    DOOR WHOOSHES OPEN

VANESSA    But - but I enjoy--

SOUND    HIS FOOTSTEPS EXIT

GRANT    You don't want to be here and that's fine.  I'd rather see you leave on the cargo ship than [barely controlled] floating off into blackness...

SOUND    DOOR SHUTS

MUSIC

VANESSA    Can you ask your Lassiter something?

YASMIN    [on filter]  You can talk to him yourself.

VANESSA    I just want to know about suit drifts in this area.

YASMIN    Why?

VANESSA    [overly casual]  Just something Grant said.

YASMIN    Ah, here he is - You can help Vanessa, can't you?  [teasing, fond noise] Hmm?

LASSITER    [on filter] Sure.  What you need? [snickers, then aside]  Stop that!   

MUSIC

GRANT    Chicken. 

SOUND    DISPENSER DISPENSES FOOD

VANESSA    How old were you?

GRANT    [completely startled] what?

VANESSA    When your father drifted?

GRANT    [tightly controlled]  Why do you care?  You don't even have a father.  [beat]  I should get back to--

VANESSA    No.  Unless you actually physically move me, you're not leaving this room.  Talk to me. 

GRANT    [mumbled]  I don't want to talk to you.

VANESSA    Why?

GRANT    [swallows, then sighs, speaks very quietly]  The more I talk to you, the more I'll miss having someone to talk to - later.  [sniff] Get out of my way.

VANESSA    No.  I've lost people in space too - I did my time in the corps, shipboard accidents...  I- I understand.

GRANT    It's different with family.

VANESSA    Show me.

GRANT    I was 12 when my father's line got tangled, and he had to cut it - then something in the piece he was salvaging blew, and - it took forever for him to be completely out of sight - he kept talking right up to the edge of radio range....

VANESSA    [pause, then sincere, if dry] I feel for you.

GRANT    Thank you. 

VANESSA    I wish I knew what to say.

GRANT    That's all right.  [deep breath]  I've got work to do. 

SOUND    HE WALKS AWAY

VANESSA    Your food?

SOUND    HE DOESN'T SLOW - DOOR SHUTS

MUSIC

VANESSA    How do you talk to them?

YASMIN    [arch] It's not always in the talking.  What's wrong?

VANESSA    I want to - offer him sympathy, but he just walks out of the room.  He says he... just wants to ignore me until I leave.

YASMIN    Are you still planning to leave?

VANESSA    Aren't you?

YASMIN    Well.  No. 

VANESSA    Why?  Is it the sex?

YASMIN    Well... That's part of it - you have to admit it's kind of fun.

VANESSA    I don't - haven't.

YASMIN    Maybe that's why he's avoiding you.

VANESSA    But don't you want to go back to your job?  Your home?  Don't you want your life to have some meaning?

YASMIN    Meaning?  What meaning?

VANESSA    I was on the way to making full chief engineer - and I would have been the youngest to reach that grade.  Ever,

YASMIN    [dry] You would have impressed everyone.

VANESSA    Don't talk like that about my goal.  The point of ... everything.

YASMIN    And who benefited from this goal?

VANESSA    I would.  The ship would.  Everyone on it.

YASMIN    And someday someone would reach that rank even younger, and when you retired, someone else who could do the job just as well would take over, and no one would even remember you.

VANESSA    I would--

YASMIN    Unless you did something like - I don't know - discover an alien race or die to save a bunch of people - but how often does that really happen?

VANESSA    I once prevented an explosion because I spotted a faulty valve.

YASMIN    And I'll bet every person you saved came and thanked you. 

VANESSA    [somewhat dissatisfied]  The point of preventing a disaster is so that no one knows they were ever in danger.

YASMIN    [sigh]

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     SPACESUIT.  BUZZ, BREATHER, ECHO

SOUND    BOTH - this scene - on filter throughout

VANESSA    You needed help--?  Oh!

GRANT    It's jammed.  I can't shift it alone.

VANESSA    I see.  Hold on.

SOUND    METAL IMPACT

GRANT    Is your line secure?

VANESSA    Yes.  I checked and double checked.  Hmm. 

GRANT    Do you think the person inside is still all right?

VANESSA    Won't know if she is till we clear some of this debris.  [beat]  Looks like it still has some power.

GRANT    Help me shift this plate - I think it'll clear some of this.

VANESSA    Hold on - No, not that.  There's too much leaning on it, and we don't know which way it'll fall. 

GRANT    What then?

VANESSA    Um.... This.  I think this is the key piece, and I don't see anything it can bring down with it.

BOTH    [Grunt with effort]

SOUND    A BUNCH OF STUFF SHIFTS

GRANT    Ah hell.

VANESSA    What? [seeing the damage] Oh.

GRANT    At least we should be able to get it clear, now. 

VANESSA    Let's lighten the load - get the corpse out of there.

GRANT    No.

VANESSA    Why?

GRANT    You want to just dump her out, right here?

VANESSA    Why not?  She's dead.

GRANT    She still deserves some respect.  I'll do it, if you don't want to be bothered.

VANESSA    Do what?

GRANT    Bury her.

MUSIC

SOUND    HATCH SHUTS, HELMETS COME OFF.  SOUND OF REMOVING SPACE SUITS

SOUND    SOMETHING DROPS

VANESSA    [sharp gasp]

GRANT    Hey?  What's wrong?

VANESSA    [in pain] Nothing.

GRANT    Let me-- [sigh] You shoulda come back in earlier - your fingers are nearly blue.  I told you the heat circulation in that suit ain't up to snuff.

VANESSA    I'm fine.

GRANT    Give me your hands.

VANESSA    What? 

GRANT    Let me warm your hands fro you.

SOUND    BEAT, THEN SKIN ON SKIN, AS HE SLOWLY CHAFES HER HAND.

VANESSA    How do you do that?

GRANT    Hmm?

VANESSA    [gasp] Your hands are... warm.

GRANT    They just come that way.  Here, hold your hand here while I--

VANESSA    In your jacket?

GRANT    Just do it.  Give me the other one.

SOUND    SLOW CHAFING AGAIN

VANESSA    They're fine now.  I'll go and--

GRANT    I don't like that nail color there.  Can you feel this?

VANESSA    Yes.  I'm perfectly capable of--

GRANT    This?

VANESSA    [a bit more irritated] Yes.  I know what the--

GRANT    This?

VANESSA    --difficulties with cold can be, and--  what?

GRANT    This?

VANESSA    [startled] No.

GRANT    Here.  [puts her finger into his mouth]

VANESSA    [long gasp, startled, amazed, and aroused]

GRANT    [talking around her finger] Stop squirming. 

VANESSA    Let - let go.  Let go!

GRANT    Need to get the circulation back.  Heat and suction.

VANESSA    Ahh!

SOUND    SLIGHT STRUGGLE, SHE PULLS HER HAND FREE

GRANT    [mouth noise] Look.  Whatever it is you don't like about this - is it worth losing a finger over?

VANESSA    [long beat, erratic breathing]  No.  [gasp as he takes her finger again] 

MUSIC

GRANT    [talking on the radio]  Thanks for the heads up Lassiter, but it'll happen or it won't.  Glad you're doing well, and... and congrats.

LASSITER    We're real happy.

GRANT    Out.

SOUND    CHAIR TURNS

GRANT    [startled] Oh!

VANESSA    Congrats?

GRANT    Lassiter and Yasmin are pregnant.

VANESSA    [bothered] Oh.

GRANT    Well, they're pleased.

VANESSA    I didn't mean to sound... I'm just confused.

GRANT    Well, it won't be for much longer.  Quarterly cargo ship will be here in the next couple of hours. 

VANESSA    Grant?

GRANT    Don't worry - by my calculations - we're pretty much square, in fact you're a bit ahead, hooking up those solar panels and all--

VANESSA    Grant--

GRANT    So I'll just cover the cost of your trip, at least as far as--

VANESSA    Grant!

GRANT    Damn, now you got me lost. 

VANESSA    Grant, I--

GRANT    I appreciate your help here... Vanessa.  Got me ahead of my schedule.  [cracking a little]  Um, I should go and get the cargo ready.

SOUND    CHAIR SQUEAK, FOOTSTEPS, THEY STOP

VANESSA    Grant.  I need to know something.

GRANT    Whatever I can help with.

VANESSA    Would you--  Do you-- [a breath] What will you do?

GRANT    When?

VANESSA    If - when - if I go.

GRANT    Same as I done before.  Nothing's gonna  change.

VANESSA    You should have kept Yasmin or Helen - they love it here.

GRANT    Yasmin loves Lassiter. And Helen--

VANESSA    [snapping him back] Grant.  Why me?

GRANT    [muttered] You're ...the prettiest.

VANESSA    I ...am?

GRANT    Yup.  I looked at you and I knew that if I was ever gonna take a chance, it'd have to be on that one.  [sniff]

VANESSA    Tell me you want me to stay.

GRANT    N-no.

VANESSA    You don't - want - ?

GRANT    You go home.  Have a good life.  I got cargo to move.

SOUND    HE SHOVES PAST HER

MUSIC

SOUND    RADIO TURNS ON

LASSITER    Grant?  You there?

GRANT    Um - yeah. 

LASSITER     How'd it go?

GRANT    I'm doing all right.  Even ordered an algae starter culture. 

LASSITER    But your ...lady--?

GRANT    Oh, I'm still ahead, even after her ticket--

LASSITER    Ticket?  Ticket?  You let her leave?

GRANT    Course.  [breaking down] She - sh-she don't belong to me. 

LASSITER    She woulda gotten used to it.

GRANT    I had to get used to being all alone.  How could I do that to--?

VANESSA    --to me?

SOUND    CHAIR TURNS FAST

GRANT    What-- What happened?  Did they-?  Did you miss it?

LASSITER    Grant?  Grant?

VANESSA    I decided there was a better use for the cost of my passage - negotiated for three more solar panels, and a couple more oxygen tanks for the suits.

GRANT    I don't understand.

VANESSA    It was what Yasmin said, about being important to someone.

GRANT    But I never said you were--

VANESSA    You said it every time you couldn't look me in the face. 

GRANT    But what do we do now?

VANESSA    We build a tank for the algae.  Many hands make light work.

GRANT    Many hands make light work.

VANESSA    Oh, yes, and--

GRANT    And?

VANESSA    This--

SOUND    NOISY KISS, RUSTLE OF AN EMBRACE

VANESSA    Not bad.  You could use a little practice.

GRANT    [gasping a bit for breath, making a joke] Well - I may have had my 100 - and then some - hours of simulation, but I never actually took one of those there out for a spin.

VANESSA    [chuckles] Wait till you see the rest of the equipment...!

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

Atomic Julie - Beyond the Yellow Fog (pt3 of 8) by Emmett McDowell21 Sep 202100:26:31

Chapters 3 and 4!

The ship finally gets into orbit, and with difficulty must try and escape law enforcement.

19 Nocturne Boulevard - WHERE ARE YOU NOW? - Reissue16 Sep 202100:31:32

[warning - mature themes and explicit violence]

A surreal Q&A session reveals the workings of a victim's mind.

Cast List

  • Marnie - Julie Hoverson
  • Doc - Julie Hoverson
  • Jerry - Brandon O'Brien
  • Momma - Risa Torres
  • Harold - Mr. Synyster
  • Deputy Fred - Joel Harvey
  • Little Girl - Krystal Baker
  • Little Boy - Marhya Post
  • Grampa - Rick Lewis

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)

Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson 

Cover Photos:  Alan Bridges (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it? Don't you know where you are?"

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Where are You Now?

This is a weird ass episode.

I wrote this very deliberately in a stream of consciousness style, probably inspired by a weird dream, but I don't remember specifically.

I did write the entire script in roughly one sitting, then cast and recorded it immediately - I wanted to see if I could make an entire episode in a single week, which I basically did.

The most challenging effect in this was throwing the chiffoniere down the stairs.

I actually have a sort of sequel - more in tone than using the same character(s), obviously - in mind, and may do it someday.  A big part of the idea for this was to make the vast bulk of the dialog mine, so I didn’t have to get too much out of other people, thus making it a quicker recording turnaround.

SPOILER ALERT!!!

I'm going to explain, sort of, what this episode is and what it means, at the end of the transcript, below.  A lot of info will be there, since most of my memories of making this are tied up in why I wrote what I wrote.

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WHERE ARE YOU NOW?

Cast:

  • Olivia
  • Doc (F/40+), german, sounds like shrink
  • Marnie (F/20), hysterical young woman
  • Harold (M/30), mush mouthed freak
  • Fred (M/30), a crooked deputy
  • Old Man (M/senile)
  • Creepy Little Girl (F/10)
  • Creepy Little Boy (M/10)
  • Momma (F/30ish), Mrs. Cleaver - with cleaver
  • Jerry (M/20), Marnie's dead boyfriend.

OLIVIA  Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Don't you know where you are? 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 1.

SOUND     A SLOW CHORD, WHICH STAYS UNTIL NOTED

DOC    Where are you now?

MARNIE    [startled awake] What?

DOC    Can you hear my voice, Marnie?

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    Where are you now?

MARNIE    [slightly panicked] I - I don't know.

DOC    Tell me what you see.

MARNIE    I see a room. 

DOC    Are there people in the room?

MARNIE    [fear] Yes!

DOC    You are safe, Marnie.  Calm down.  Now tell me what you see.

MARNIE    [calm, almost robotic]  I see five people sitting at the table. 

DOC    Are you sitting with them?

MARNIE    No, I'm in the corner. 

DOC    Do they know you're there?

MARNIE    [ominous] Oh, yes.

DOC    Tell me what they look like.

MARNIE    There's a very old man, a small boy, a girl who looks a bit older than the boy, a police officer, and a very large man with a bag over his head.

DOC    Is there food on the table?

MARNIE    No.  It's not here yet.

DOC    Good.  Tell me one thing about the little girl.

MARNIE    Her eyes can suck your soul.

DOC    Good.  And the old man?

MARNIE    He has a scar on his leg that aches when it rains.

DOC    Good.  Has the food arrived yet?

MARNIE    The one with the bag is named Harold.

DOC    Please answer only the questions I ask you, Marnie.

MARNIE    [frightened, small]  I'm sorry.

DOC    I forgive you. 

MARNIE    I love you.

DOC    That was not the question.

MARNIE    [trying to remember] Um. Um.  The food!  No.  Still no food.

DOC    Good.  Are you comfortable?

MARNIE    [lying, almost a whisper] Yessss.

DOC    Very good.  Tell me about where you are sitting.

MARNIE    I'm in the corner.

DOC    Are you in a chair?  Look down.

MARNIE    It's a chair with wheels, and straps. 

DOC    Straps?  Are you strapped in?

MARNIE    [breathing hard, getting louder and louder] Yes - my hands are - hands are - I can move them, but the leather cuffs - like movies about crazy people!

DOC    Are you crazy?

MARNIE    [almost a wail] No!

DOC    Can you control yourself, Marnie?

MARNIE    [a couple of gasping breaths, then quickly] Yes!

DOC    I can help you.

MARNIE    [wail] No! No! [gasp, then tight but controlled] No.  I'm all right.

DOC    For now.

MARNIE    I feel... peachy.

DOC    [beat] Your hands are restrained.  What else?

MARNIE    There's a strap around my chest, and I can feel one around my legs.

DOC    Do the people talk?

MARNIE    Yes. Some.  They're waiting for someone.

DOC    Someone?  Or the food?

MARNIE    [almost hysterical] I don't know!

DOC    What do they say?  Tell me exactly.

MARNIE    I'll try--

DOC    [still even and calm] Trying isn't going to cut it, missy.

MARNIE    [noisy gulp] 

DOC    I know you can do it.

MARNIE    [sob]  The man with the bag doesn't talk at all.

DOC    Harold?

MARNIE    Yes, Harold.

DOC    And?

MARNIE    The policeman says--

MUSIC     FADES OUT, NO OTHER TRANSITION

 

SCENE 2.

FRED    You shoulda seen her!  Jumped clean over the fence. 

BOY    I can do that.

OLD MAN    Pancakes.

FRED    You can't 'cause - 'cause you're a little butterball.

BOY    I'm magic.

GIRL    [pronouncing] You are a shoe.

SOUND    CLATTER OF SPOON DROPPED ON PLATE

OLD MAN    Pancakes!  Pan! Cakes!

FRED    [panicky, trying to calm him]  Shh!  Shh!  Pancakes, yes.  It's all coming.  Shh.  Clouds.  [dropping to a whisper] Little white fluffy clouds.

OLD MAN    [drawn out whisper]  Pancakesssss. Pancakes.

SOUND    MOMENT OF SILENCE, THEN

 

SCENE 3.

MUSIC    COMES IN WITH A CHORD

DOC    [sigh] You know what happens when you lie to me.

MARNIE    [resigned groan] I'm not lying.

DOC    Pancakes?

MARNIE    [almost a sob] Yes.

DOC    The food - is it there yet?

MARNIE    [sharp gasp, then frightened] It's coming!

DOC    Good.  Let's move forward.  Who brings the food?

MARNIE    [awe, fear] Momma.

DOC    Tell me.

MARNIE    [mounting fear]  Perfect.  Plastic.  Pearls.  Each hair in line, like sweet little soldiers. 

DOC    She is carrying--?

MARNIE    [rising fear] She ...has a cart.  There is a covered dish.

DOC    What are you wearing?

MARNIE    [snapped back] What?

DOC    I ask the questions. 

MARNIE    I'm sorry!

DOC    What are you wearing.  Look down.

MARNIE    Oh.  [beat] T-shirt, jeans - I can feel ... sneakers. 

DOC    And--?

MARNIE    What?

DOC    [warning] And--?

MARNIE    My clothes?  They're... torn up - I think I was in a fight.

DOC    [calm again] Are you injured?

MARNIE    [beat]  My ankle hurts.  I'm scratched up.  My... head...

DOC    [avid] Is there blood?

MARNIE    I -

DOC    [avid] Is there blood?

MARNIE    I - I don't think it's mine.

DOC    Tell me who then.

MARNIE    [on a long sigh] Jerry.

DOC    How?

MARNIE    [shocked] I found him in the barn.  He was flopped over the edge of the ...hayloft - I thought he was dead.  There was blood everywhere.  [starting to sob] Dripping all over me.

DOC    What did you--

MARNIE    [interrupting, still sobbing] Then he - he moaned.

MUSIC    FADES OUT

 

SCENE 4.

JERRY    [very weak] Marnie!

MARNIE    [whispering] Jerry!  Oh, god - Jerry!

SOUND    CREAKING OF LADDER

JERRY    Help... me....

MARNIE    Here, let me move you - [grunt as she drags him]

JERRY    [moans, trying to keep quiet]

MARNIE    Oh, god.

JERRY    It's bad.

MARNIE    I think so.  It's too dark.

JERRY    [gasping, in agony] No.  It was the kid.  You have to get out of here!

MARNIE    But you--

JERRY    I ... I'm not going anywhere ... you gotta go and get help!

MARNIE    Where?

JERRY    Just get the hell out!  The woods--

MARNIE    [smothered gasping sob]

JERRY    [whisper] Shit!

HAROLD    3,4 shut the door...?

SOUND    BARN DOOR CREAKS OPEN

MARNIE    [smothered gasping sob]

SOUND    SILENCE, THEN

 

SCENE 5.

MUSIC CUTS IN

DOC    Is that when they took you in?

MARNIE    No.  Jerry distracted him. 

DOC    Who?

MARNIE    Harold. 

DOC    [satisfied, smug] Harold.

MARNIE    [sobbing] After I jumped out the window, I heard Jerry scream.

DOC    [warning] Did I ask?

MARNIE    No?

DOC    You don't sound very sure.

MARNIE    [quick, panicky] No.  You didn't ask.  I'm sorry.

DOC    I think you need a reminder--

MARNIE    Please!  I remember!  [long beat, then]  I... love you.

DOC    Pancakes.

MARNIE    Pancakes?

DOC    Is the food on the table?

MARNIE    [long shaky sigh of relief]  Yes.

DOC    Where did you sleep?

MARNIE    [blindsided] What?

DOC    Where did you sleep?

MARNIE    I didn't....  Oh, I was... knocked out.  The food‑‑?

DOC    Please try and keep up.  When were you knocked out?

MARNIE    That was later - after... Jerry.

DOC    Who did it?

MARNIE    Harold, I said it was Harold.

DOC    That knocked you out.

MARNIE    Oh, no.  He did Jerry.

DOC    You're not following.  Let's have a break.

MARNIE    [long wail] No!!!

SOUND    ELECTRIC HUM

MARNIE    Umumumumum.  [jittery series of hums, like being electrocuted]

MUSIC    OUT

SOUND    HEARTBEAT

 

SCENE 6.

AMBIANCE    WOODS, CHEERFUL

SOUND    CRUNCHING OF WALKING

JERRY    Marnie?

MARNIE    Yeah?

JERRY    Uh, This camping trip isn't too bad, eh?  I mean, I know you didn't want to--

MARNIE    [sweet] It's not too bad.  Gloria had to beg me to get me to come, but...  It's OK.

JERRY    I mean, what can you say against nature, right?  Fresh air, secluded lake.  Perfect for... skinny dipping?

MARNIE    I brought a suit.

JERRY    Ah... It'll be cool.

MARNIE    Probably freezing - that's a glacier-fed lake.  But, yes, it will be fun.

JERRY    Good.  You don't mind ...  Gloria being kinda busy all the time?

MARNIE    Oh, you noticed?  [laughs] She and Tim haven't stopped fooling around since we got here.

MUSIC SUDDENLY CUTS IN

 

SCENE 7.

DOC    Better now?

MARNIE    [gasping, shuddering, trying to force words out coherently]  Better.  Yes.  Of course.

DOC    Good.  Let's continue.

MARNIE    [snorty sob, then deep breath]  All right.

DOC    Jerry died.

MARNIE    [almost a sob] Yes.

DOC    You loved him.

MARNIE    I think so.

DOC    You don't know?

MARNIE    I - I liked him, but we were just getting to know... each... other?  [afraid she said something wrong, gasping snorty sobs]

DOC    [beat, then slightly disdainful]  How sweet.

MARNIE    [she calms a bit]

DOC    Did you screw him?

MARNIE    No!

DOC    Of course not - pure sweet innocent you.

MARNIE    I-- I don't--

DOC    [casual] Shut up.

MARNIE    [hiccuping gasp]

DOC    Where is Gloria?

MARNIE    Gloria?  [starting to cry]  She's my best friend.

DOC    Was that the question?

MARNIE    She... she... Um [trying to remember] she's dead?

DOC    [sigh, tsks] 

MARNIE    No - no!  She's - was - in the van.

DOC    Very good. [beat]  When did you find her?

MARNIE    Uh - after the barn.  I was trying to get away.  [suddenly remembering] Jerry gave me the keys.

DOC    Good old Jerry.  Go on.

MARNIE    I ran to the van, and Gloria and Tim ... were...  [sobs]

DOC    Please be specific.

MARNIE    [through sobs] They were in the middle of - you know--

DOC    Sex?

MARNIE    Yes.  They were together, and someone had cut off... both... their... heads...!

DOC    [Tsks]

MARNIE    The heads were lined up next to them... like they were watching.

DOC    Charming.

MARNIE    Checking their progress.

DOC    Has the food arrived?

MARNIE    [gasp, stops herself from speaking, then dead calm] Yes.  Momma is in the room.

DOC    What does she do?

MARNIE    [getting agitated] She opens the dish.

DOC    What is in the dish?

MARNIE    [almost incapable of speaking] Sssteam.

DOC    Look down at your lap.

MARNIE    [snort, hiccup] Yes.

DOC    What do you see?

MARNIE    My knees.  Blood.  The carpet.  I'm glad the blood is all tacky, so it won't drip and ruin the carpet.  They would be so angry.

DOC    Are they talking?

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    Don't look.  Just speak the words.

MARNIE    Momma says--

MUSIC     OUT

 

SCENE 8.

MOMMA    Three cheers for the founder of the feast.

FRED    Hip hip hooray-- [tapers off, when he realizes no one else is with him]  Oh.

LITTLE GIRL    Can I eat the tail?

LITTLE BOY    Pancakes.

OLD MAN    PAN CAKES!

FRED    You just had to set him off! Didn’t you?

HAROLD    [quietly] 1-2 buckle my shoe.

OLD MAN    PanCAKES! Lovely golden brown.

MOMMA    Nothing like a nice dinner together. 

 

SCENE 9.

DOC    Are there empty chairs?

MARNIE    No.  They are all here.

DOC    What about your chair?

MARNIE    I'm in it.

DOC    Are you?  Look back. 

MARNIE    I'm strapped in.

DOC    You must have got free.

MARNIE    Yes.  I-- [gasps and catches herself]

DOC    What?

MARNIE    I'm sorry.  That wasn't the question.

DOC    Good girl.

SOUND    ELECTRICITY

MARNIE    [hums and groans with the jolts]

SOUND    HEARTBEAT

 

SCENE 10.

AMBIANCE    OUTSIDE, PLEASANT WOODS

JERRY    Don't worry about it.  It was probably just a hiker or something.

MARNIE    [mildly worried] But he looked so weird.  His face was like a puzzle.

JERRY    It was just the bushes.

MARNIE    I know.

JERRY    I bet it was the weird guy we saw on the road on the way in.  You know, the one that just stood there and stared as we drove past.  You know.  Now, we all agreed this weekend is for fun.

SOUND    SPLASH

MARNIE    What was that?

JERRY    What?

MARNIE    The splash?

JERRY    Wow, you need some serious relaxation. 

MARNIE    But I heard a splash, and -- Something  wet?

JERRY    Nonsense.  [fading out] It's just last night's rain.

DOC    [whispered voice, very spooky]  Marnie.

MARNIE    Jerry!  I know you must have heard that!

JERRY    Marnie, you're making yourself into a basket case.  There's nobody for miles around!  It's perfectly safe.

MARNIE    But that voice--

DOC    [quick echoey whisper] Marnie. 

MARNIE    It knows my name!

DOC    Wake up!

SOUND    WOODS VANISH

 

SCENE 11.

MARNIE    [Crying]  Why can't you just leave me?

DOC    Now, that wouldn't do either of us any good, would it? 

MARNIE    I want to stay there.  With my friends.

DOC    And die?

MARNIE    [hiccups sobs, then uncertain] Yes.

DOC    I don't think that's quite true.

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    You fought so hard to get here.

MARNIE    I walked on broken glass.

DOC    Poor toes.  Poor little piggies.

MARNIE    [resigned] What do you want?

DOC    I ask the questions.

MARNIE    [sigh]  Fine.  Go on.

DOC    I also give the orders.

MARNIE    [beat, sniff]  I'm ready.

DOC    Maybe you can learn the rules.  [beat]  Very good.  Where are you now?

MARNIE    Right here.

DOC    Are you?

MARNIE    [unsure] Yes.

DOC    Close your eyes and when you open them, you will see clouds.

MARNIE    Clouds?

DOC    Do you see them?

MARNIE    I'm afraid.

DOC    Open your eyes.

MARNIE    Clouds.

 

SCENE 12.

OLD MAN    k-k-k-k-ake.

LITTLE GIRL    Burn it.

MOMMA    Dig in!

FRED    Again?

LITTLE BOY    There's a face in my soup.

 

SCENE 13.

MARNIE    [screams]

DOC    Don't backslide. 

MARNIE    [screams and sobs]

DOC    [tsks] And we were making such good progress.  [sigh]

SOUND    SINGLE SHORT JOLT OF ELECTRICITY

MARNIE    [gasps to a stop]

DOC     Just right.  Thought I was going to lose you.

MARNIE    I can't look!  Not at that!

DOC    Have to toughen you up.

MARNIE    I can't--

DOC    Look down.

MARNIE    My lap. 

DOC    And in your lap?

MARNIE    Hands.

DOC    Restrained?

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    Really?

MARNIE    [unsure]  Yes?

DOC    Then how will you escape?

MARNIE    I... can't.

DOC    That is not the right answer.

MARNIE    Please help me!

DOC    Are they very tight?

MARNIE    No.  But if I get loose, they'll see.

DOC    But if you don't get loose while they eat, you will end up in the clouds.

MARNIE    Pancakes.

DOC    Precisely.  Can you pull loose?

MARNIE    I have to brace it against my leg.

DOC    Good girl.  Now you're thinking.  Describe the room.

MARNIE    The table--

DOC    I know about the table.  Where are the windows and doors?

MARNIE    The windows are steamed over.

DOC    Doors?

MARNIE    Momma came from the kitchen.  To my right.  [slowly, carefully looking around]  There's a door beside me.  Over my left shoulder.

DOC    Watch them.  Tell me what they're saying while you get your hands free.

MARNIE    I can't--

DOC    Do you want it again?

MARNIE    No!  [beat, breathing harshly]  I can't look at them.

DOC    Listen.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.

LITTLE BOY    I'm not hungry.

LITTLE GIRL    I'll eat yours. I want to grow up big and strong.

OLD GUY    [mmm mmm mmm - chewing noisily]

HAROLD    Five, six.

FRED    Tasty, momma.  As usual.

MOMMA    Oh, you!

MARNIE    Almost.

DOC    Talk to me, not them.

MARNIE    It hurts.

DOC    Life is pain.

MOMMA    Clean your plate, Hun.

FRED    He's a little butterball.

MOMMA    [cold as ice] That's not nice.

FRED    Sorry, Momma.  Sorry!  I love you.

MOMMA    Did I ask you?  Harold - look at this mess. 

HAROLD    Lay them straight?

MOMMA    You can take him and hose him off. 

FRED    Yes, momma. 

MOMMA    And soak that pillowcase.  [cutesy] Can't have my good linens all stained.

FRED    Can I finish eating first?

MOMMA    [cold] I don't know, can you?

FRED    May I?

MOMMA    [sweetness] Of course, dear. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 15.

MARNIE    My right hand is free.

DOC    Don't struggle too much.  These buckles are tough for a reason.

MARNIE    I think the one with the bag--

DOC    Harold.

MARNIE    --is watching me, but I can’t tell.

DOC    Does he say anything?

MARNIE    No...

DOC    Once you get your wrists free, what will you do?

MARNIE    The strap around my chest--

DOC    And your legs?

MARNIE    I don't think that one is very tight.

DOC    Don't underestimate it.

MARNIE    Why are you helping me?

DOC    [kindly] I ask the questions.

MARNIE    Right.  Sorry.

DOC    No need.  Who am I?

MARNIE    What?  I mean, I don't understand.  I don't know.

DOC    I think you do.

MARNIE    No.  I don't know why I'm here.

DOC    But you're not.

MARNIE    Not what?

DOC    Is your wrist free?

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    Move your hands slowly to the buckle, then quickly unhook it.

MARNIE    Slowly.

DOC    Cats see movement.

MARNIE    Rods or cones?  I forget.

DOC    Clouds.  Watch the clouds.  Unhook the strap.

MARNIE    Freeze.  They're looking.

DOC    Don't move.  Let them forget.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 16.

FRED    Should we feed HER?

LITTLE GIRL    Throw something at her.

MOMMA    A night without supper will do her good.  Take Harold - there's a good boy.

FRED    Yes, momma.

LITTLE BOY    I want a finger.  Can I take a finger?

MOMMA    If you're good.  I'll save one for you.

LITTLE BOY    Good as goat.

OLD MAN    Gold.  Gold is good.  Golden brown.  Pancakes.... k-k-cake!

MOMMA    Yes, popsy.  All good.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 17.

DOC    And now?

MARNIE    They're looking away.  Maybe they will leave me.

DOC    Not if they see your wrists are loose.  Quick - choose.

MARNIE    Choose what?

DOC    Unbuckle and run or pretend you're still secure and wait.

MARNIE    My ankle hurts.

DOC    Then sit.

MARNIE    I'll put my hands back.

DOC    We will see.

MARNIE    D'you think they will?

DOC    I can't see the future.

MARNIE    Isn’t this a memory?

DOC    Is it?

MARNIE    Where did I go when I got free?

DOC    I ask the questions.

MARNIE    But I don't remember.

DOC    Take it one moment at a time.  Who am I?

MARNIE    A doctor?

DOC    Medical?

MARNIE    No. 

DOC    Ah - now you're thinking.  Let's get through this.

MARNIE    They've left the room.

DOC    You are alone?

MARNIE    The old man is still here.  They'll come back for him.

DOC    What can you do about that?

MARNIE    I'll run.

DOC    He'll yell like a klaxon.

MARNIE    I've got the buckle undone.  Now my legs.

DOC    Why don't you kill him?

MARNIE    What?

DOC    I ask the questions. 

MUSIC    FADES TO "ROOM TONE"

 

SCENE 18.

SOUND    STUMBLING FOOTSTEPS

MARNIE    I'm sorry - I thought I didn’t hear you right.  You said to--

DOC    There are always pancakes in heaven. 

MARNIE    Open the gates and let him [exertion] IN!

OLD GUY    Oof! [dying noises]

SOUND    SQUISH OF KNIFE INTO FLESH, GUSH OF BLOOD

DOC    Is there another knife?

MARNIE    I have it--

SOUND    METAL COVER FALLS TO FLOOR

MARNIE    [wail] No!

DOC    Stop. 

MARNIE    [quick] I'm sorry.  The platter!  Oh, god!

DOC    Steam.  Clouds.

MARNIE    Jerry!

DOC    Don't look.

MARNIE    I can't --

DOC    Jerry is gone.  Do it for him.

MARNIE    [hissing whisper] Yesss.

DOC    Knife?

MARNIE    Cleaver.

DOC    Nice.

MARNIE    [turning a bit gleeful] Cleaver.  Momma.  Kitchen.

DOC    Sounds like a plan.

MARNIE    Thank you.

DOC    I love you.

MARNIE    [serious]  That means a lot.

 

SCENE 19.

SOUND    KITCHEN DOOR SWINGS OPEN

DOC    Keep down.

MOMMA    Hmm?  What?

SOUND    HIGH HEEL FOOTSTEPS

MOMMA    Who's playing games?

MARNIE    [whispered] Come just a little closer.

SOUND    A COUPLE MORE FOOTSTEPS

MOMMA    Hello?

DOC    Now!

MARNIE    Ungh!

SOUND    KNIFE CUTS NYLONS, LEG. 

MOMMA    [screams]

SOUND    BODY COLLAPSES, SHOE SCRABBLES ON TILE FLOOR, BLOOD SPURTS

DOC    Neatly done.  Hamstring.  Quick or slow?

MARNIE    No time.  Ungh!

SOUND    KNIFE GOES IN AGAIN

MOMMA    [gurgling, choking]

SOUND    HANDS SKITTER ACROSS TILES, THEN FLOP AND DROP

DOC    [long sigh]  Such a pretty color.

MARNIE    Looks good on her.

DOC    Four to go.

MARNIE    Jerry said it was the kid who... [almost breaks] ...got ...him.

DOC    You're finally taking this all seriously.

SOUND    THUMP OVERHEAD

MARNIE    How many stairs would the house have?

SOUND    DOOR OPENS A CRACK

DOC    [kindly] I ask the questions.  You'll have to count them.

MARNIE    I should see if there's something longer. 

DOC    Tablecloths can cloud the issue.

MARNIE    You and your clouds.

SOUND    FEET COMING DOWN THE STAIRS

DOC    six, five, four--

MARNIE    Three, two one ---

SOUND    DOOR STARTS TO OPEN, THEN IS SLAMMED SHUT, BODY FALLS

FRED    [yell, groan]

DOC    Full point.

SOUND    DOOR SLAMS OPEN AGAIN

FRED    Momma?  What are you doing--?

MARNIE    I ask the questions.

DOC    I love you.

FRED    I think you broke my-- urk!

SOUND    KNIFE PLUNGES INTO THROAT

FRED    [gurgling as he dies]

DOC    It's quite warm, isn’t it?

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    Hot.

MARNIE    Boiling.

DOC    [concerned] Steam?

MARNIE    [dismissive] Clouds.

DOC    [satisfied] Yesss.  Time to go hunting.

MARNIE    Rods or cones?

DOC    Sticks and stones.

MARNIE    [chuckles]

 

SCENE 20.

SOUND    CAREFUL FOOTSTEPS UP THE STAIRS

SOUND    CREAK, FEET STOP

DOC    Steady. Where are you now?

MARNIE    Almost to the top.

DOC    What do you see?

MARNIE    Hallway.  Doors. 

DOC    And behind you?

MARNIE    Just the stairs. 

DOC    [stern]  Did you look, or just guess?

MARNIE    [panicky] Sorry!  I'll - I'll look.  It's stairs.  The door at the bottom is shut.

DOC    Did you shut it?

MARNIE    [almost a wail] I don't remember!

DOC    Calm down.  One, two buckle my shoe--

HAROLD    [off, calling] Three four, shut the door--

MARNIE    [quiet, calming herself]  Five six.  Pick.  Up.  Sticks.

DOC    Harold is looking too.

MARNIE    [calm again] Yes.

DOC    Don't forget the children.

MARNIE    [breaks a little] Jerry

DOC    Yah, dear Jerry.

HAROLD    [coming closer] Seven? eight?  Lay them straight?

MARNIE    [very quietly] Marco!

DOC    [chuckles nastily, then]  Here in the hall, or one of the rooms?

MARNIE    Here.  Here I have someplace to go--

SOUND    DOOR WRENCHED OPEN AT BOTTOM OF STAIRS

HAROLD    Nine, ten - a big fat hen!

DOC    What will you do now? 

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS COMING UP STAIRS

SOUND    GRIND OF FURNITURE BEING MOVED

MARNIE    [exerting herself] No one ever fights them.  That's why.

DOC    What was the question?

HAROLD    Eleven, Twelve - dig and delve.

MARNIE    [exerting] Why do they always win?

DOC    Excellent.

MARNIE    I love you.

DOC    Of course.

SOUND    GRIND OF FURNITURE ENDS, HEAVY SOMETHING GOES THUMPING DOEN THE STAIRS

MARNIE    Hah!

HAROLD    [scream of outrgae]

DOC    Don't get too full of yourself--

SOUND    STAB

MARNIE    [gasp of pain]

LITTLE GIRL    [flat] You broke the chiffonier.

DOC    It's low.  You'll live.  For a while.  Kill her.

MARNIE    She's just a kid!

SOUND    SHUFFLING FOOTSTEPS BACKING UP, SMALL CHILD FOOTSTEPS STALKING, INTERMITTENT DRIPPING

DOC    You do not ask the questions!

MARNIE    [meek and in pain] No.  I'm sorry!

LITTLE GIRL    We could have played.  [tsks]

SOUND    KNIVES SHARPENING

MARNIE    You hurt me!

LITTLE GIRL    If I didn't, Harold would just have to.

MARNIE    I- I can't!

DOC    No time for breaks now.  Give or take.  [beat, solemn] I love you.

MARNIE    I'm sorry.

SOUND    MARNIE DASHES FORWARD

MARNIE    Ung!

SOUND    PICKS UP GIRL AND TOSSES HER DOWN THE STAIRS

LITTLE GIRL    [noises of indignation as she falls]

SOUND    THUMPS AND BUMPS

DOC    [whispered] No breaks.

MARNIE    I'm... hurt.

SOUND    STICKY NOISE

DOC    You should go home.

SOUND    [OFF] DOOR SLAMS OPEN

MARNIE    Harold!

DOC    In here!

MARNIE    Aah!

HAROLD    [incoherent high pitched scream]

SOUND    BODY SLAMS AGAINST DOOR, DOOR SLAMS OPEN, BODY TUMBLES INTO ROOM.  MARNIE SCOOTCHES AWAY FROM DOOR.

 

SCENE 21.

SOUND    MARNIE SCRAMBLES UP TO HER FEET

DOC    Out the window.

MARNIE    [panting heavily]

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS DRAG ACROSS THE ROOM, DRIPPING. 

SOUND    POUNDING ON THE WINDOW

MARNIE    It won't open.

DOC    It is glass.

MARNIE    [long gasping breath, then] ungh!

SOUND    WINDOW SHATTERS

DOC    Out!

MARNIE    But I can't see--

DOC    You can see what's in here.

MARNIE    [scream as she jumps]

SOUND    ELECTRIC NOISES

 

SCENE 22.

DOC    Where are you now?

AMBIANCE    NIGHTTIME, OUTSIDE

MARNIE    I'm on the ground.  What should I do?

DOC    [rueful] You don't ask the questions.

MARNIE    Zap me again. 

DOC    It's much too late for that.  Why aren't you running?

MARNIE    I think I'm broken.

DOC    Will that stop you?

MARNIE    I don't care any more.

DOC    Are you absolutely sure?

SOUND    DOOR BANGS OPEN, OFF

MARNIE    [crying, crawling]

DOC    Is it bad?

MARNIE    Yes.

DOC    I am sorry.

MARNIE    I know.

HAROLD    [howling]

DOC    I love you.

LITTLE BOY    [off] There she goes!

HAROLD    [howling]

SOUND    CHAINSAW REVS

DOC    Where are you now?

MARNIE    In deep shit.

DOC    Where?

MARNIE    Out back.

SOUND    HEAVY FEET RUN ACROSS GRAVEL, COMING ON

DOC    Where are you going?

SOUND    BODY DROPS

MARNIE    [muffled, crying] Nowhere.

DOC    Nowhere?

MARNIE    [panting, crying a little] I can't. My leg.

SOUND    ROAR OF CHAINSAW GETS CLOSER

DOC    What do you want?

MARNIE    How can you ask that?

DOC    It's my job.

MARNIE    [beat]  Jerry--

DOC    But Jerry's--

MARNIE    [sob] Yes!

DOC    Very well.  Let's take that break.

SOUND     ELECTRIC HUM

MARNIE    Umumum

SOUND    HEARTBEAT

 

SCENE 23.

AMB    NICEY WOODS

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS

JERRY    [teasing] What took you so long?

MARNIE    [bright] Sorry.  Got a little caught up.

JERRY    Is there anything wrong?

MARNIE    No, Not anymore.

JERRY    Wanna go down to the lake?

MARNIE    More than anything.

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS IN LEAVES

SOUND    ECHOEY, DISTANT - CHAINSAW, MARNIE'S SCREAMS

CLOSER

OLIVIA    Now that you know how to find us, you'll have to come back.  Maybe next week?  Don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

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The "Truth":

This story is going on inside the disturbed mind of a victim of a "Texas Chainsaw Massacre" type event.  Her boyfriend and other friends were killed by this creepy family of cannibals, and she was captured and chained to a chair.

At first it sounds like she is being psychoanalyzed after the fact, but eventually it becomes clear that this is not "after" anything, she is still stuck in the events she is describing.

The "Doctor" voice is, in fact, inside her head, and seems to represent her logic or her survival instinct - keeping her head clear and focused while the rest of her is busy panicking.  For example, the voice guides her to look around, to avoid things that are disturbing, and to focus on getting herself free.

When all else fails, Doc "shocks" Marnie into a faint, where she experiences a pleasant flashback/dream to calm her down before returning to reality.

To add to the dreamlike atmosphere of the story, and the connectedness of the two, the voices of Marnie and Doc are both played by me, and rotate - moving across the soundscape to trade places - very slowly throughout the episode.

At the end, when there is no remaining hope, Marnie begs Doc for the shock - so she can be unconscious and "in a better place" when they ultimately kill her - and Doc kindly allows it.

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19 Nocturne Boulevard - THE SAKI QUARTETTE - Reissue09 Sep 202100:34:37

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from several stories by Saki (H.H. Munro).

 

Four girls waiting for punishment tell tales of pranks they've pulled.

Cast List

  • Vera - Beverly Poole
  • Matilda - Lyndsey Thomas
  • Helen - Julie Hoverson
  • Nora - Chandra Wade
  • Alice - Xandria Nirvana Barber

    Shock Tactics

  • Heasant - Megan Lane
  • Bertie - Jasper Loovis

The Boar-Pig 

  • Stossen - Jody Montague
  • Miss Stossen - Hillary Dixon

The Storyteller

  • Bachelor - Cole Hornaday

The Open Window

  • Nuttel - Kim Turner
  • Aunt - Robyn Keyes
  • Uncle - Rick Lewis

Alice's stunt doubles

  • Caira Greenfield and Draven Schoberg

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)

Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson

Cover Photo:  Daniel O'Connell (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it? Why it's an Edwardian girls' school, can't you tell? 

This way to the Headmistress' office..."

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[transcript follows]

The Saki Quartette

Adapted by Julie Hoverson from several stories.

I am a huge fan of H.H. Munro, who wrote under the pen name Saki in the early years of the 20th century.  His career ended prematurely when he was killed in The Great War at the age of 46.

Saki is mainly remembered today for the amazing story "The Open Window," which I encourage everyone to read before listening to this episode, so I don't spoil it for you.  It's available on Project Gutenberg, you can get a reading on librivox, it's around.  It is considered to be one of the best short stories ever written in English, right up there with The Lottery by Shirley Jackson.

While Saki wrote a number of supernatural, suspense, or speculative stories, his forte was relatively cruel humor - but always inflicted on those pompous enough that you didn’t feel too badly for them.  And since nobody really got hurt - unless you take it from a modern "mental damage" perspective, you can laugh.  Clovis Sangrail was an ever-recurrent character who sailed through many stories leaving havoc in his wake, but Vera from The Open Window reappeared from time to time as well (later described as a "flapper") - the two of them intersecting in The Almanac.

This episode is an homage to Saki, and incorporates elements from four of his short stories - Shock Tactics, The Boar-Pig, The Storyteller, and of course The Open Window - with a bit of wrap story that is entirely my own.

Three of the four principal girls were from my old high school's drama department, the fourth was me.  Several of the other voices were drawn from ART (American Radio Theater).  It's not a perfect recording - we can't seem to keep the pronunciation of "aunt" straight between us (including me) - and I hadn’t yet learned how to clean tracks perfectly yet, but overall it's fun and quite funny.

Episodes like this were one reason I determined form the start that I wasn't going to nail myself into a "horror story" format.  The name "19 Nocturne Boulevard" is suggestive of the dark side, but open-ended enough to go anywhere I wanted to go.

And as an aside, it has nothing to do with nocturne alley, is it, from Harry Potter?  Several people have commented on that, but when I created 19 Nocturne Boulevard, it was sometime around 2006, and I hadn’t - I may have heard of Harry Potter, but I never actually read the books.  This was entirely on my own.  It’s not a pun like Nocturne alley - nocturnally - was.

I remember the summer of sitting there and thinking I want a number, and an address that sounds cool - what's a cool street? While sitting around at meetings of American Radio Theater.

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SAKI QUARTETTE

 

Cast:

  • Olivia, host
  • Vera [open window] [15], sly
  • Matilda [boar-pig] [14], mischievous
  • Helen [shock tactics] [10], eager
  • Nora [storyteller] [11], shy, rules-bound
  • Alice [15], older girl, screams a lot

[Shock Tactics]

  • Bertie, Helen's older brother
  • Heasant, their mother

[Boar-Pig]

  • Stossen
  • Miss Stossen

[Storyteller]

  • Bachelor

[open window]

  • Nuttel
  • Vera's Aunt
  • Vera's Uncle

OLIVIA    Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's an Edwardian girls' school, can't you tell?  This way to the headmistress's office.

MUSIC   CHEEKY MUSIC FADES INTO

SOUND   CHEERFUL RUNNING CHILDREN, THEN FADES

SOUND   CLOCK TICKS LOUDLY, then under

[three girls sit on a bench outside the headmistress' office, waiting to be punished]

SOUND   COUGHS, FIDGETS.  SMALL FOOT KICKING CHAIR.

HELEN   Why send us here if we're only to wait?

NORA   [startled]  Huh?  What?

HELEN   Oh, Nora.  I wish I could sleep with my eyes open.  I said, 'Why--'

ALICE   [superior]  To put us into the proper frame of mind.  To contemplate our misdeeds. 

HELEN    That's silly - I've been thinking about anything and everything BUT my misdeeds.

ALICE   That's adults for you.

SOUND   FOOTSTEPS APPROACH.  MATILDA SITS.

MATILDA   Well, well.  Fresh blood?

ALICE   They don't look very promising.

HELEN    [huff] I'll have you know I've been called on the carpet plenty of times--

MATILDA   [sweetly, cutting her off] --don't care.  Besides, I wasn't referring to that.  [aside, to Alice]  You're right, they're not much good.  I think one of 'em is a waxwork.

ALICE   Oh, well--

SOUND   DOOR OPENS.  SLOW FOOTSTEPS.

VERA   [heaves a deep sigh]  Your turn, Miss Tramplethorpe.

ALICE   Once more into the breach.

SOUND   BENCH SQUEAKS AS SHE STANDS.  SLOW FOOTSTEPS.  DOOR SHUTS.

VERA   If you don't mind, I'll join you for a bit.

NORA   But you should be getting back--

SOUND    FOOTSTEPS, BENCH

MATILDA   Not a mannequin, then.  No one will notice, at least for a bit.  Was it truly awful, Vera?

VERA   Rather. 

SOUND   MUFFLED BY DOOR, SOUND OF SIX SMACKS [RULER ACROSS HAND] UNDERLIE THE TALKING.

NORA   What did you do?  What did ...she do?

VERA   I?  I did nothing.  I will swear it to my grave.

MATILDA   It's vulgar to ask for details.

HELEN   I talked back to a teacher.  I've been told.  She didn't make any mention of it at the time, but I got a note sending me here.

NORA   It's all quiet now, is it ...over?

MATILDA   Of course not.  There's always castigation. 

HELEN   Isn't that immodest?

MATILDA   [sighs impatiently]

VERA   It means Miss Twicket will be talking at her for some time.  Then there may be more strokes, depending on whether she is contrite.

NORA   Are you contrite?

HELEN   [superior] It's vulgar to ask.

VERA   [chuckles] But I'm not.  It was entirely worth it.  [to Matilda, over the smaller girls]  I'll have to get back soon, Matilda, should we have a quick go-round?

MATILDA   Without Alice?

SOUND   ALICE WAILS, MUFFLED BY THE DOOR.

VERA   [wincing] She'll likely be a while. 

MATILDA   What about the small fry?

NORA   That's not very nice.

HELEN    I'll have you know--

VERA   Oh, let's.  They'll never split on us - will you?

NORA   But - but - but what is it you--?

HELEN   [eager] I'll never tell.  I'm not a sneak.

NORA   But we don't even know what--

MATILDA   Promise or you'll never know.

HELEN   I promise.  I'll never reveal anything, even under torture with wild horses.

NORA   Well...

HELEN   If you don't promise, you're doing me out, too.

NORA   [reluctant]  I don't know.  Ow!  [she's been pinched] I won't tell!! 

VERA and MATILDA laugh.

VERA   It's not so very awful, ducklings.  We have a bit of a club - we call it the Ducks and Geese.  We each take any chance we get to play little tricks on people, and then share the stories.  We're the ducks...

HELEN   And they are the Geese?  

MATILDA   Yes.  And whomever has the best story, wins. 

NORA   Wins?  What?

MATILDA   Vera here is quite a champion liar.

VERA   [correcting]  I prefer the term "romancer."

MATILDA   We always meet here, so we all have to get ourselves into scrapes from time to time, just so we can link up.

HELEN   [excited, but controlling herself]  How does one join?

MATILDA   You have to have a story.  Something good.  I've got a lovely one from last summer holiday.

VERA   Oh, I expect I can top it.

SOUND   SLAPPING AGAIN, SIX OF THE BEST. 

ALICE    [off] [HOWLS in pain]

HELEN   [chagrined]  Oh.  Goodness.  [beat] well, I haven't really...

NORA   I would never--

MATILDA   [dry]  I'm shocked.  [to Vera]  Oh, well, we'll have to talk later.  Perhaps Alice will be out soon.

HELEN   Since I didn't know to prepare, what if I have a truly lovely story, even though it wasn't me that did the joke?

MATILDA   I don't think so.  Sorry.

VERA   Well...  We might listen.  It will pass some time, and then we can deliberate.

MATILDA   It had better be good.

HELEN   I think so - My older brother has a friend--

VERA   Oh, not a friend of a friend tale - those are old enough to have beards.

HELEN   --this friend is quite the card.

MATILDA   An ace or a joker?

HELEN   His name is Clovis Sangrail.

[SILENCE FOR A MOMENT]

VERA   Oh-ho! 

MATILDA   Truly?  You know Clovis?  Perhaps we should make you a member just on the basis of that. 

NORA   Who is Clovis Singrill?

VERA   [very superior] Sangrail.  He is our own Jove - the very top of the tree when it comes to our sort of japes.

MATILDA   Absolutely the lobster's dress shirt.  Though if I do say so myself, a distant cousin of mine, Reginald, is starting to make a good showing.

VERA   Go on, then.  You must tell us your Clovis story.  We might decide to be kind, even if it would be nepotism of a sort.

MATILDA   Clever by association.  What was your name, again, duckling?

HELEN   Helen.  Well, my oldest brother Bertie was chafing terribly, since being nearly 20, he felt mother should stop reading his private correspondence.

VERA   Oh, I cured mine of that long ago.

HELEN   Yes, but Bertie's simply not assertive - not on his own. 

SOUND   MUSIC FOR FLASHBACK SCENE

HELEN   [fading] So one day, a letter arrives...

MRS. HEASANT   [off, a wail, then coming on]  Ohhh!  Helen!  Oh, heavens, Helen!  Bertie is in the toils of an adventuress!  [ominously]  Her name is Clotilde!

HELEN   Truly, mother?  Where?  In the rose garden?

MRS. HEASANT   No!  In the post!

HELEN   How did they fit in the post?

MRS. HEASANT   Hssh!  Listen to this:  "Bertie, carissimo, I wonder if you will have the nerve to do it.  Don't forget the jewels.  They are a detail, but details interest me.  Yours as ever, Clotilde.  Postscript - Your mother must not know of my existence.  If questioned swear you never heard of me." 

HELEN   Clotilde?  I don't know of any--

MRS. HEASANT   Well, your brother certainly does!

HELEN   Perhaps he only just--

MRS. HEASANT   Oh, no!  "As Ever" she says!  As ever!  They've been carrying on under my very nose for ...who knows how long.

HELEN   [narrating]  When my brother returned home, mother braced him with the incriminating Clotilde, and of course he denied it.

MRS. HEASANT   How well you have learned your lesson!

HELEN   He really didn't make much of it, and when she insisted he would have no dinner unless he confessed, I saw him take rather a quantity of sandwich materials up to his room with him.  Then, with the next post:

NORA   [completely enthralled] Another letter?

HELEN   Oh, yes. 

SOUND   INSISTENT KNOCKING ON DOOR

BERTIE   [muffled, speaking through door]  What is it this time?

MRS. HEASANT   Miserable boy!  What have you done to Dagmar?

BERTIE    [muffled]  It's Dagmar now, is it?  It will be Geraldine next.

MRS. HEASANT   [in absolute hysterics]  That it should come to this, after all my efforts.  It's no use; Clotilde's letter betrays everything.  [reading] "Poor Dagmar.  Now she is done for I almost pity her.  The servants all think it was suicide.  Better not touch the jewels till after the inquest.  Clotilde."  [leaves off with a wail]

SOUND   DOOR OPENS

BERTIE   I don't suppose this letter betrays who this Clotilde is?  Seriously, mother, if you go on like this I shall have to go fetch a doctor; I've often enough been preached at about nothing, but I've never had an imaginary harem dragged into the discussion.

SOUND   DOOR SLAMS

HELEN   Mother could have used a doctor, for she was utterly purple about the face from screaming, and had to go and have a lie down - at least until the next post.

SOUND   KNOCKING ON DOOR, MUCH SUBDUED

MRS. HEASANT   [also much subdued] Bertie?  Bertie, darling?

BERTIE   What is it this time?  Have I stolen the Mona Lisa?

MRS. HEASANT   No.  You... have another letter.  From ... Mr. Sangrail. 

SOUND   DOOR IS FLUNG OPEN

BERTIE   [not giving an inch]  Why not go on and tell me what he has to say? 

MRS. HEASENT   [clears throat, then reads, much abashed]  "Dear Bertie.  I hope I haven't distracted your brain with the spoof letters.  You told me the other day that ...somebody... at your home [ahem] tampered with your letters, so I thought I would give them something exciting to read. [slowing with embarrassment]  The... shock might do them good..."

HELEN   [finishing up]  And then, Bertie threatened to get a nerve specialist in to look at mother, since she was obviously far too highly strung - and she couldn't possibly stand the scandal, she said - and they agreed he wouldn't - but only if she would stop.  Reading his mail, you see.

NORA   [concerned]  But, did she?

HELEN   [ominous] So far.

MATILDA   We'll review your application.  Next?

NORA   I?  Oh, I truly don't have anything...

VERA   [warning] You'd best think of something.  We can't have outsiders hearing all our secrets.

MATILDA   I'll go ahead and tell mine - it's not so exotic as to cause a panic, and it will give this little gosling time to think.

VERA   I suppose so.  What do you think, Helen?

HELEN   [surprised and thrilled] Me?  Oh!  [trying to sound grown up and important]  Oh.  I think we should give her one more chance.  She had no time to prepare, after all.

SOUND   SMACKING AGAIN FROM WITHIN, ALICE WAILS

MATILDA   Speaking of preparing - I'd best be quick, as I believe I'm next for the chop.  Very well, I was staying with my aunt in the country, and it was the day of a very important garden party - some princess was attending and everyone wanted to come.  My aunt gloated over the guest list for days. 

VERA   What is it with aunts?  It's as if we all have at least one who is utterly impossible.

NORA   [something is coming to her] Ah!  Aunts...

MATILDA   Mine told me to be on my best behavior, and to imitate my insipid cousin, Claude, which would have been quite horrible. 

HELEN   [bold, trying to sound knowing] I think everyone must have a cousin Claude or Eggbert, or ... something [falters] as... as well as an aunt...

MATILDA   [sigh, eye roll] So... so, when they got on me for eating too much raspberry trifle at luncheon, they said over and over that Claude would never do a thing like that.  So when Claude went down for his nap - imagine, he's all of 11 and still goes meekly to afternoon naps like an infant.

GIRLS    [SNICKER]

VERA   He's the type who will end up married to someone quite overbearing.

HELEN   Like an aunt?

GIRLS    [SNICKER TERRIBLY]

MATILDA   While he was napping, I took the opportunity to take a huge dish of raspberry trifle and force feed it to him - well, much of it got on his sailor suit and the bed, but enough went down him that they will never again be able to say he's never eaten too much raspberry trifle.

VERA   Oh, that's a good one!

NORA   I do have a story!

MATILDA   I'm not finished - that is merely the prologue to my tale, explaining why I was sitting in the back paddock, rather than prancing about the garden party with Claude and Auntie.

NORA   Oh!  I'm so--

VERA   Shh.  Pray continue, scherezade.

HELEN   I thought her name was Matilda?

VERA   Oh, hush.

MATILDA   [taking a deep breath]  So I was sitting in a medlar tree, being stupefied with boredom, when I saw two ladies, dressed as if for the garden party, sail through the paddock in an attempt at infiltration.

HELEN   Weren't they rather obvious?

MATILDA   There was really no one there to see, excepting myself.  And they never once looked up as they passed by.  Well, with no ulterior motive in mind, I decided to let aunt's prize boar-pig, Tarquin Superbus, into the paddock behind them.  It had absolutely nothing to do with the fact that I knew the gate they were aiming for was locked and they would be forced to come back the same way.

GIRLS    [GIGGLE]

SOUND   MUSIC FOR FLASHBACK

MATILDA   So, when they did...

SOUND   OUTDOORS AMBIANCE.  BIRDS.  SLIGHT PIG SNUFFLING IN THE BACKGROUND

MRS. STOSSEN   [fading in] I stopped Mrs. Cuvering in the road yesterday and talked very pointedly about the Princess.  If she didn't choose to take the hint and send me an invitation it's not my fault, is it?

SOUND   DEEP PIG NOISES

MISS STOSSEN   Oh!

MRS. STOSSEN   Oomph! [pulling up short, irritated] What?  Oh!  What a villainous-looking animal, it wasn't there when we came in.

MISS STOSSEN   It's there now, anyhow.  I mean, what on earth are we to do?
I wish we had never come.

BOTH STOSSENS   Shoo!  Hish!

SOUND   CLOSER, DEEP PIG NOISES

MATILDA   [slightly off] If you think you'll drive him away by reciting lists of the kings of Israel and Judah, you're laying yourselves out for disappointment.

MRS. STOSSEN   Oh!  Little girl! 

MISS STOSSEN   Can you find someone to drive away--

MATILDA   [French] Comment? Comprends-pas. [cohm-oh? cohm-prawn pah - what? I don't understand]

NOTE   MATILDA'S FRENCH IS REASONABLY SMOOTH.  MRS. STOSSEN'S IS VERY BAD.

MRS. STOSSEN   Oh, are you French?  Etes vous Francaise? [et voo fran-sehz? - are you French?]

MATILDA   Pas du tout.  Suis Anglaise.  [pah doo toot.  sweez ahn-glehz - not at all.  I'm English]

MRS. STOSSEN   Then why not talk English?  I want to know if--

MATILDA   Permettez-moi expliquer.  [pair-meh-tay mwa eks-plee-kay - let me explain] [narrating again] And I went into a rather long description of Claude and aunt and the raspberry trifle, ending with -- [slightly off again] ...and as an additional punishment I must speak French all the afternoon.  I've had to tell you all this in English, as there were words like 'forcible feeding' that I didn't know the French for.  Mais maintenant, nous parlons francais.  [may mant-noh, new par-lon frahn-say - and now, we will speak French]

MRS. STOSSEN   Oh, very well, tres bien [tray bee-ehn].  [with much difficulty] La, a l'autre cote de la porte, est...um... [la, a low-truh coat de la port, ehst... - there, on the other side of the door, is...] 
[to Miss S] um, a pig?

MISS STOSSEN   Oh, goodness, un grenouille? [uhn grahn-wee?]

MRS. STOSSEN    No, no.  I'm reasonably certain that's a frog.  Oh, yes - un cochon. [uhn koh-shawn - a pig]

MATILDA   Un cochon? Ah, le petit charmant! [uhn koh-shawn?  Ah, le pet-eet shar-mont! - a pig,oh the little sweet!]

MRS. STOSSEN   Mais non, pas du tout petit, et pas du tout charmant; un bete feroce!  [may noh, pah doo too peh-teet, ay pah doo too shar-mont; un bet feh-rohs! - but no, not at all little, and not at all sweet; a beast ferocious!]

MATILDA   Une bete. [Oon bet]  A pig is masculine as long as you call it a pig, but if you lose your temper with it and call it a ferocious beast it becomes one of us at once.  French is a dreadfully unsexing language.

MRS. STOSSEN   For goodness' sake let us talk English then. 

MISS STOSSEN   Is there any way out of this garden except through the paddock where the pig is?

SOUND   OUTSIDE AMBIENCE ENDS ABRUPTLY

SOUND   FOOTSTEPS IN HALLWAY

GIRLS    [SHUSH THEMSELVES, PRACTICALLY STOPPING BREATHING, AS THE FOOTSTEPS GET CLOSER.]

NORA   [Hiccups.  She tries to smother it, but cannot.]

HELEN   [whispered] Shh.  Hold your breath!

SOUND   THE FOOTSTEPS ARE RIGHT ON THEM, AND STOP.

HELEN   [gasp]

NORA   [Hiccups continue.  She is almost crying with the effort of trying to stop.]

SOUND   FOOTSTEPS GO OFF.  AS SOON AS THEY ARE OUT OF EARSHOT--

VERA   Whew.  She's a tartar.

MATILDA   Not a sympathetic bone in her body.

HELEN   Why didn't she say anything?

VERA   She knows we're already in for it.

NORA   Well, [hiccup] you've already been in for it - was it really that [hiccup] bad?

SOUND   AS IF ON CUE, SMACKING AND ALICE'S WHIMPERS FROM BEHIND THE DOOR.

NORA   [gasps - her hiccups are now gone]

HELEN   So what happened with your boar-pig?  Did he devour the invaders?

MATILDA   Devour them?  Oh no - Tarquin Superbus prefers rotten fruit to interlopers any day.  They bribed me to lead him away.  I don't think they were best pleased about it, once they realized what a sweet disposition he has.

NORA   But of course, they were in the wrong, trying to crash a party like that.  So you were merely punishing them.

VERA   Right and wrong have less than nothing to do with it.  We're not the courts, or even public opinion.  A joke is a joke, even if it's on a perfectly nice person who doesn't deserve it in the least.

MATILDA   Though it is much more fun, and less likely to get one into severe hot water, when the person joked on can't complain without revealing their own shortcomings.

NORA   I --

VERA   Speak up gosling.  A sentence is comprised of at least two words.

NORA   [whispered] I might ... have a story.

MATILDA   Five!  And with a full stop.  Alright, then, pray continue.

NORA   We were on a train.  It was some years back, and my aunt was exceedingly boring.  There was a gentleman in the carriage with us, and when he stooped so low as to criticize my aunt's storytelling abilities, she dared him to tell one.

MUSIC   FOR FLASHBACK

NORA   [sounding very young throughout flashbacks] Yes, please - tell us a story!  [narrating] Anything would have been better than my aunt's stories - you would have thought she was never a child herself.

MATILDA   I say, there's an idea - perhaps aunts arrive like motorcars, fully assembled from the factory?

VERA   Shh.  Give ear to the duckling.

NORA   [pause] Oh, me?  Yes.  Well, the story--

SOUND   MUSIC FOR FLASHBACK.  TRAIN LOOP BEHIND BACHELOR

BACHELOR    Very well.  Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Bertha, who was extraordinarily good.  She did all that she was told, she was always truthful, she kept her clothes clean, learned her lessons perfectly, and was polite in her manners.  She was ...horribly good.

VERA   [slightly off] Can one be horribly good?  Truly?

MATILDA   [slightly off] Claude.  Definitely.

VERA   [agreeing] Mm.

BACHELOR   She was so good, that she won several medals for goodness, which she always wore, pinned on to her dress.  They were large metal medals and they clinked against one another as she walked.  No other child in the town where she lived had as many as three medals, so everybody knew that she must be an extra good child.

NORA   [young, gleeful] Horribly good.

BACHELOR   The Prince got to hear about Bertha, and said that as she was so very good she might walk in his park. 

NORA   [young] Were there any sheep in his park?

BACHELOR   No.  There were no sheep.

NORA   [young] Why weren't there any sheep?

BACHELOR   Because the Prince's mother had once had a dream that her son would either be killed by a sheep or else by a clock falling on him. The Prince never kept a sheep in his park or a clock in his palace.

VERA   Oh, very good. 

MATILDA   Was this fellow passenger by any chance a long, lithe, languid type with a somewhat nasal voice?

NORA   No, why?

VERA   She was wondering whether you've encountered Clovis as well.  Roll along.

NORA   Oh, so, um, he said the park was full of little black, gray, and white pigs, and --

BACHELOR   --Bertha was rather sorry to find that there were no flowers in the park. She had promised her aunts, with tears in her eyes, that she would not pick any of the kind Prince's flowers, and she had meant to keep her promise, so of course it made her feel silly to find that there were no flowers to pick.

NORA    [young] Why weren't there any flowers?

BACHELOR   Because the pigs had eaten them all.

VERA   [to Matilda] You know, I'm becoming quite convinced you're right, though the story hardly sounds vicious enough for Clovis.

NORA   Oh, I just haven't gotten to the-- um...

VERA   To the "um..."?  Very well.

NORA   Bertha was just thinking--

BACHELOR   [falsetto] --'If I were not so extraordinarily good I should not have been allowed to come into this beautiful park,' and her medals clinked against one another to remind her how very good she was.  Just then an enormous wolf came prowling into the park to see if it could catch a fat little pig for its supper.  The first thing that it saw in the park was Bertha; her pinafore was so spotlessly white and clean that it could be seen from a great distance.

MATILDA   I have never heard a better argument against cleanliness.  I shall go out and get myself despicably filthy forthwith.

HELEN   After your visit inside.

MATILDA   [annoyed] THANK you.  I had actually managed to forget that for a bit.

NORA   [quickly jumps in]  Bertha saw the wolf and she began to wish that she had never been allowed to come into the park...

BACHELOR   ...She ran as hard as she could, and the wolf came after her with huge leaps and bounds.  She managed to reach a shrubbery of myrtle bushes and hid herself.  The wolf came sniffing among the branches, its pale grey eyes glaring with rage.  Bertha was terribly frightened, and thought to herself: [falsetto]  'If I had not been so extraordinarily good I should have been safe in the town at this moment.'  However, the scent of the myrtle was so strong that the wolf could not sniff out where Bertha was, so he thought he might as well go off and catch a little pig instead.  

VERA   Definitely not Clovis.

NORA   [cross, almost yelling]  LET ME FINISH!

MATILDA   Hmph!  Well, proceed.

NORA   Bertha trembled and the medal for obedience clinked against the medals for good conduct and punctuality.  

BACHELOR   The wolf heard the sound of the medals clinking and dashed into the bush, dragged Bertha out, and devoured her to the last morsel.  All that was left were her shoes, bits of clothing, and three medals for goodness.

HELEN   Were any of the little pigs killed?

MATILDA and VERA laugh somewhat scornfully

NORA   Funny, that's just what my brother asked.  No.  They all got away.  We all agreed it was the most beautiful story we'd ever heard - well, except for aunt, who seemed to find it highly improper.

MATILDA   We shall have to write to Clovis and find out if he's been engaged in the railway storytelling circuit.

VERA   [chuckles] 

NORA   This was some years ago, when I was quite young.

VERA and MATILDA chuckle again.  HELEN joins in, but a bit too loudly.

VERA   I fear, my darlings, that I shall still take the palm today, for I had occasion recently for the most stupendous jape of all... 

[PAUSE]

HELEN   Well?

VERA   I am composing myself.

NORA   [gasps]

MATILDA   Oh, not again.

NORA   [hastily reassuring] No, no.

VERA   I am ready.  I must be careful and include all the vitally important details, for this was more than a mere trick on an aunt...

SOUND   MUSIC FOR FLASHBACK

VERA   [narrating] There was a tedious little man visiting our neighborhood for some sort of rest cure.  [to Nuttel]  Do you know many of the people round here?

NUTTEL   Hardly a soul.  My sister stayed nearby some four years ago, and she gave me letters of introduction to some of the people here.

VERA   [calculating]  Then you know practically nothing about my aunt?

HELEN   More aunts?

MATILDA   Aunts are universal.  Now Shh.

NUTTEL    Only your aunt and uncle's names and the address.

VERA   Uncle.  Oh I see.  [confidential] Aunt's great tragedy happened just three years ago.  That would be since your sister's time.

NUTTEL   T-Tragedy?

VERA   You may wonder why we keep that French window wide open on an October afternoon.

NUTTEL   It is quite warm for the time of the year, but ... tragedy?

VERA   [ominous] Out through that window, three years ago to a day, Aunt's husband and brothers went off shooting... and never came back.  In crossing the moor, they were engulfed in a treacherous piece of bog.  Their bodies were never recovered. [voice breaks]  That was the dreadful part of it.  Poor aunt thinks that they will come back some day, with uncle's little brown spaniel, and walk in that window just as they used to do.  [almost a whisper]  Do you know, sometimes on still, quiet evenings like this, I almost get a creepy feeling that they will all walk in through that window-- [shudder]

NUTTEL   Uh, yes...

SOUND   DOOR, SWIFT FOOTSTEPS

AUNT   I hope Vera has been amusing you?

NUTTEL   [spooked] She has been very... interesting.

AUNT   I hope you don't mind the open window.  My husband and brothers will be home directly, and they always come in this way.

NUTTEL   Um, yes.  [changing the subject]  Um, yes - [awkward pause] the doctors agree in ordering me complete rest and an absence of mental excitement.  On the subject of diet, they are less in agreement.

AUNT   [bored]  Ah? 

NUTTEL   Some opine that toast with marmalade is better for digestion, while other lean more towards toast without.

AUNT   [yawns]

NUTTEL   Still other physicians insist on no toast at all.  On the subject of eggs...

AUNT   [brightening]  Aha! Here they are at last!  Just in time for tea!

VERA   [narrating] I put on my best look of wide-eyed fear and stared - I always think of cats when I do that.

NUTTEL   [confused] What?  [panicked] Ahhh!

SOUND   RUNNING FEET, DOOR OPENS, SLAMS CLOSED.

NOTE   MILK THIS MOMENT FOR SUSPENSE

SOUND   OMINOUSLY SLOW, SQUISHY FOOTSTEPS APPROACH.  DOG YIPS MOURNFULLY, then

UNCLE   Here we are, my dear.  Who was that who bolted out as we came up?

AUNT   A most extraordinary man, a Mr. Nuttel.  Could only talk about his illnesses, and dashed off without a word of good-bye or apology when you arrived.  One would think he had seen a ghost.

VERA   I expect it was the spaniel.  [the awful truth]  He told me he had a horror of dogs.  He was once hunted into a cemetery somewhere on the banks of the Ganges by a pack of pariah dogs, and had to spend the night in a newly dug grave with the creatures snarling and grinning and foaming just above him.  Enough to make anyone lose their nerve.

MATILDA   Oh, bravo - two for the price of one!

NORA   How could he be afraid of a Spaniel?  They're so--

HELEN   Silly!  She was romancing!

NORA   Oh.  [thinks]  Oh! 

MATILDA   And her uncle wasn't dead either.

NORA   Well, I - I think I realized that.

SOUND   ALICE SCREAMING FROM BEHIND THE DOOR - HORRIBLE AGONY

HELEN   What? 

NORA   Eek!

VERA   [slightly shaken] That sounds dreadful!

MATILDA   [very shaken] And I'm next!

SOUND   ALICE SCREAMING TAPERS OFF TO A GURGLE

MATILDA   Poor Alice!

HELEN   Maybe the headmistress will wear herself out before she gets to us --

VERA   [calculating, then dry]  Perhaps, but then, she'll just summon a few prefects to help.

HELEN   Really?  But - but what could she be doing?

VERA   [knowing] Let's see, shall we?

SOUND   SLIGHT CREAKS AS SHE TIPTOES TO DOOR

VERA   Shh.

[pause]

ALICE    [Screams, muffled]

SOUND   DOOR SWINGS OPEN

ALICE   AAH! [notices door] Ahh?

SOUND   SCRAMBLING FEET, THEY ALL COME TO LOOK

NORA   Where's the headmistress?

MATILDA   Oh, jolly good one, Alice.  You gave me such a turn.

SOUND   SLOW SERIES OF HAND CLAPS

ALICE    Yes, yes.  No autographs, please.  Screaming does dry out my throat.

HELEN   It was just you...?

MATILDA   I believe, this time, that Alice takes the laurel. 

VERA   Oh, I don't think so.

MATILDA   Whyever not?

VERA   [grinning like a fiend]  Who do you think sent round the sham detention notices to bring us all here?

SOUND   A MOMENT, THEN GENERAL APPLAUSE

NORA   [confused] Oh? [getting it] Oh!

MUSIC

OLIVIA   Now that you know how to find us, don't be a stranger - we have enough of those already...

 

Atomic Julie - Beyond The Yellow Fog (pt1 of 8) By Emmett McDowell09 Sep 202100:18:44

A new 8 part series!

Chapter 1 - Gavin Murdock gets himself a berth on a venusian slaver ship with a unique spacedrive.  But what is his secret motivation?

19 Nocturne Boulevard - Jack. In the Box. - Reissue03 Sep 202100:34:58

[transcript below]

Reissue episode of the week!

Jack.  In the Box.

Shortly after WWII, a crate full of parts appears on a young divorcee's doorstep.  Can she and her young son figure out what it is and what it's for? ...And how will this affect the fate of the world?.

Cast List

Jack/Unit X-14 - Greg Porter
Trudy Garfunkel - Julie Hoverson
Timmy Garfunkel - Reynaud LeBoeuf
Mrs. MacGruder - Marge Lutton
Susan - Melinda Mains
Col. Chutney - Richard Haviland
Mockam - Cole Hornaday
Pockam - Kim Turner
Additional voices on the radio - Diana Haviland, Joy Jackson, Pat McNally

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com) and Jonathon Roberts (jmtr.com)
Recorded in conjunction with ART (American Radio Theater)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photo:  Kalyana Sundaram (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

 

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's an aging bungalow court apartment, can't you tell?"

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This was an early comedy romance episode I wrote specifically with A-R-T - American Radio Theater - in mind.  This was recorded with A-R-T in Marge's dining room.  I would like to point out that the title is not "jack-in-the-box" but Jack[period] in the box [period].  It's a subtle distinction, but it does make it mean something a bit different.

I also want to point out right away that the whole Chinese suspicion subplot was meant to be silly and a clue to how disconnected from reality Mrs. McGruder is, not serious.  Keep in mind this was written ten years ago and set in the 1940s.  I have nothing but disgust for any frickinh racists who are currently, in real life, harassing people of Asian descent, particularly the elderly. 

The transcript is on the page here, and you will note that the first couple of "radio shows" heard in the background in this episode are in the main script, but after that, they got too complicated to write in between lines and I moved them to the end so they could be recorded "of a piece".  The shows are clear parodies of The Shadow, I love a Mystery, and Flash Gordon.  This also marks the first appearance of Tunis the Unstoppable, whom I later used in Bingo the Birthday Clown.

I realized recently that I haven't yet included the full text of the opening sequence of 19 Nocturne Boulevard in any of my transcripts.  My apologies, and it will follow.  It originally started out much longer, but I whittled it down until it was just the right length.

Platinum Death Ray Forever!

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19 Nocturne Boulevard Opening

VOICE:    19 Nocturne Boulevard

CABBIE:    Nocturne Boulevard?  Not far.  When you hit Howard, hang a right.  Howard meets Philip at a weird kind of angle, then you cross James and Poe.  You can't miss Nocturne, it's just past the Automat.

VOICE:    19 Nocturne Boulevard, your address for suspenseful stories of the speculative, strange, and supernatural. 

[VOICE, or OLIVIA]    Tonight's story is [title]

[also might include warning about violence or language here]

OLIVIA:    Yes.  This is 19 Nocturne Boulevard, won't you step inside?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why it's a [episode specific location]

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JACK. IN THE BOX.

 

Cast:

  • Trudy Garfunkel (F/30ish), divorcee, single mom
  • Timmy Garfunkel (M/10), her son
  • MacGruder (F/50ish), landlady
  • Colonel Chutney (M/70), retired WWI colonel
  • Susan (F/20ish), Trudy's co-worker
  • Jack (M), a robot
  • Mockam (any), an alien
  • Pockam (any), another alien

 

  • ON THE RADIO:
  • Announcer
  • Horse voice
  • Ralph
  • The Spook
  • Thug 1
  • Thug 2
  • Jake
  • Mack
  • Frenchy
  • Snap Harper
  • Amanda Cool
  • Tunis the unstoppable

OLIVIA      Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's a run-down bungalow apartment court, can't you tell? 

SCENE 1.

MUSIC     CREEPY SCI FI

AMBIANCE      VERY ALIEN

POCKAM     The interview will be conducted in the unit's assimilated language.

MOCKAM     Report, unit X-14.

JACK     [very robotic in all scenes with aliens]  Report.  Earth viability as target for invasion--

MUSIC     BREAK

 

OLIVIA     Oops.  My mistake.  Here's that bungalow court...

 

SCENE 2.

MUSIC     A BIT OF MELODRAMA - VERY 40s

AMBIANCE     OUTSIDE.  TRAFFIC NEARBY

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS ON GRAVEL.  DOOR OPENS SLIGHTLY OFF.

MACGRUDER     [slightly off] Trudy?  Trudy!

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS STOP

TRUDY     [sigh]  Mrs. MacGruder. 

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS SWIVEL IN GRAVEL

TRUDY     I'll have the rent on--

MACGRUDER     [slightly off] Oh, no this is ...  When?

TRUDY     Friday.  Um, what, then?

MACGRUDER     [coming on]  You got a package!

TRUDY     What?  I didn't--

MACGRUDER     I was thinking just that.  What's Trudy Garfunkel doing ordering stuff--?

TRUDY     I didn't!

MACGRUDER     On her little government salary, and I knew she-- I mean, you-- wouldn't, so then I wondered if maybe it wasn't that deadbeat man of yours--

TRUDY     He's not mine- he hasn't been for a long time--

MACGRUDER     --Might have sent something for the boy, so I figured no harm in letting the movers into your place - I hope you don't mind - but I wanted to let you know before you walk in and trip over it or anything. 

TRUDY     Thank you for the warning. 

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS - BOTH OF THEM

TRUDY     You don't have to--

MACGRUDER     I better go come along and make sure, since if I let it into your place and it turned out to be something dangerous, well I'd never forgive myself.  On the other hand, I was just thinking it might just be a vacuum cleaner, so I was just thinking if it was a vacuum cleaner, then I would knock a whole dollar off your rent - each week - if you just let me use it.  [gasps]

TRUDY     The box is that big?  I mean big enough for a vacuum?

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS STOP

MACGRUDER     Lands sakes!  You just have to get a gander at it!  [beat] Well?  Open it.

SOUND     A COUPLE OF ALMOST HESITANT STEPS ON STONE, THEN KEY IN LOCK

TRUDY     Did the movers say anything when they--?

MACGRUDER     Say anything?  Well, I expect they did, but they didn't really seem to speak much English.  Didn't worry me much though - they were big Italian looking fellers, not Chinese at all.

SOUND     KNOB TURNS

TRUDY     Chinese?  Why Chinese?

MACGRUDER     Oh, I heard it on the radio just the other day, about the Chinese.  Not sure what they said, but I'll tell you, you better check your laundry reaaal good.

TRUDY     [dubious]  All right.

SOUND     DOOR OPENS.  A COUPLE FOOTSTEPS, THEN PULLED UP SHORT

TRUDY     [gasps]

MACGRUDER     Didn't I tell you?

TRUDY     You said a box - I didn't expect a crate!  How'd they get it through the door?

MACGRUDER     Crate.  Box.  I said it was big enough for a vacuum. 

TRUDY     [joking] Or some Chinese.

MACGRUDER     You think so, too?  Well, you better open it now - maybe this is how they plan to invade or do whatever it was the radio was saying about them.  I'll stay with you while you do it, so that I can run back and call the army if they come popping out of there.

TRUDY     I really doubt it's a box of Chinese people.

MACGRUDER     You better check!

SOUND     SCRABBLING AT WOOD.  TAPPING - SOUNDS PRETTY SOLID.

TRUDY     I don't know how to open it.

MACGRUDER     Here, I'll go and get a hammer.  We'd better get this done quickly!

TRUDY     Yes, I'd rather have this sorted out before Timmy gets home.

MACGRUDER     [going off] Oh, well, that too - I was thinking that "Love of a Generation" will be coming on the radio real soon.

TRUDY     The radio.  Tsch.  [almost chuckling]  Chinese.

 

SCENE 3.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     Status of Earth readiness to hold off an invasion fleet?

JACK     The earth is fully prepared to repel all invaders.

POCKAM     What?  We have seen no evidence--!

MOCKAM     Explain.

 

SCENE 4.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND     SQUEAK OF NAILS AS CRATE LID IS PRIED OFF

MACGRUDER     What is it?

TRUDY     Let me get the lid off before you go jumping in - you don't want the nails to get you. 

MACGRUDER     [sniffs]  Well, it doesn't smell Chinese.

TRUDY     [takes breath as if to say something, then sighs]  No.

SOUND     HEAVY LID FALLS TO FLOOR

MACGRUDER     Well, someone sent you a box of excelsior - sure it wasn't your ex husband?  He seems the type to be making a big deal out of nothing.

SOUND     ROOTING AROUND IN PAPER SHREDS

TRUDY     Every belonging he ever had wouldn't fill this darn thing.  No, the only time he remembers to send us anything is the occasional model airplane for Timmy's birthday - and they're always late.

MACGRUDER     You're better off without him.  Just like Ermintrude on Romances of the Great White Way.  She dumped a crumb who would--

TRUDY     I found something!

SOUND     METAL CLANG AS SOMETHING IS PULLED OUT OF PAPER SHREDS

MACGRUDER     Well...  It could still be a vacuum cleaner.

TRUDY     Here - set this down somewhere.

MACGRUDER     Hmph.  Well, I can't be standing around here all day, and if there's nothing more in there but scrap metal--

TRUDY     Aha!  Papers!

MACGRUDER     Instructions?

SOUND      RIFFLE OF MANY PAGES

TRUDY     Um... Maybe.  I don't think it's in English.

MACGRUDER     Lessee.  I knew it!  Chinese!

SOUND      TAPS PAPER

 

SCENE 5.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     Which country or continent has the largest potential resistance force?

POCKAM     Who do we capture first, in other words?

JACK     [strange stuttering noise] Uh, uh, The main army is not that of any surface nation, but a hidden underground force--

POCKAM     Explain!  Underground?

JACK     The minions of Tunis the Unstoppable are counted in the millions.

 

SCENE 6.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND     [off] DOOR SLAMS OPEN, FEET RUNNING IN

TIMMY     Hey mom!  I'm starvin-- 

TRUDY     [absently]  Close the door.

SOUND     PAGES TURN

TIMMY     Whoa!  What in Hi-ho Silver is that?

TRUDY     Huh?  [coming out of it]  Oh!  Young man, I should make you march right back outside and come back in like a civilized human being, and not like a--  a--

TIMMY     Bucking bronco?

TRUDY     No, that was last week.  Um, a--

TIMMY     Crazy apeman?

TRUDY     Fine.  Like a crazy apeman.  But I happen to be busy.

TIMMY     If--

TRUDY     Ask like a--

TOGETHER     --civilized human being.

TRUDY     [swallows a chuckle]

TIMMY     What is it, then, mom?  It looks -- well--?

TRUDY     Honestly, I'm not sure.  Grab yourself an apple in the kitchen, and come and help me find a part that looks like this--

 

SCENE 7.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

POCKAM     [worried] Of what nation is this Tunis the unstoppable?  Has he no enemies on Earth?

JACK     [sounding slightly human] He is the secret master of the world.  His armies are legion.

 

SCENE 8.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND     SQUEAKY.  METAL PIECES BEING PUT TOGETHER.  FINALLY SNAPS IN

TRUDY     There!  [pause, sigh, gasp] Goodness!  Look at the time!  It's nearly dinner!

TIMMY     Ah, bananas!  I missed the start of Ralph Richardson, Thug Breaker!

SOUND     SCRAMBLE ACROSS THE FLOOR.  RADIO TUNING IN

TRUDY     Don't wanna keep me company in here while I get set to feed you?

SOUND     RADIO CRACKLE, WARMING UP

TIMMY     Oh, c'mon mom!  Ralph just found the smuggler's lakeside warehouse, and then they caught him and tied him to a piling and the tide's coming in!

SOUND     RADIO MUSIC

ANNOUNCER     [very tinny] ...that's why Alfalfa-bet is your best bet for breakfast.  Ask any horse what he likes and he'll say--

HORSE VOICE     Alfalfa-Bet!

ANNOUNCER     And now, hear the creaking of the piling?

SOUND     PILINGS CREAK

ANNOUNCER     Hear the lapping of the incoming tide?

SOUND     TIDE LAPS

ANNOUNCER     But can we still hear Ralph?

RALPH     [A couple of manly grunts]

TIMMY     C'mon Ralph!  You can get loose!

 

SCENE 9.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     [suspicious]  We have seen no evidence of this Tunis the unstoppable.

JACK     He is said to be an ancient sorcerer, who is capable of hiding his every movement.

POCKAM     That's ludicrous!  Explain this title of Sorcerer!

JACK     One who manipulates the ether and the world around him through mental abilities, rather than the use of devices or scientific artifices.

MOCKAM AND POCKAM     [gasp]

 

SCENE 10.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND     RADIO BACKGROUND

The SPOOK     Of course you could not see me, for I have the cloak of ancient darkness to protect myself!

THUG 1     Oh no!

THUG 2     You said it.  He's got us.  There ain't no way out.

SOUND     MUSIC SWELLS

SOUND     CLICK.  RADIO OFF

TIMMY     Well, that's a fine how d'you do!

TRUDY     It's time for bed, and we've nearly finished putting this... thing... together.

TIMMY     I still say it's a robot!  Look, arms, legs - everything.

TRUDY     A robot would look as silly as anyone else without a head.  Up, up!

TIMMY     [moving slowly off] You'll look through the shavings again, won't you?  See if there's anything else in the box?

TRUDY     Aye, Aye, captain.  Now scoot!

 

SCENE 11.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     Is this planet Earth very populated with these... sorcerers?

JACK     From my research, they are few but very powerful.

POCKAM     Bah!  Even such as these cannot withstand our platinum death ray!

 

SCENE 12.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND     [off] DOOR SLAMS OPEN, FEET RUNNING DOWN STAIRS

TIMMY     [off]  Mom? 

SOUND     FEET STOP FOR A SECOND, THEN COME ON RAPIDLY

TIMMY     [panicky, coming on quickly] Mom!  Where'd it go?

SOUND     FEET SLIDE ONTO KITCHEN TILES, THEN SKID TO A STOP

TIMMY     I- I'm --  Whoops!

TRUDY     [very amused] Timmy, you should join us for breakfast.  I would like you to meet...  [considers] Jack.  Jack [searching for a name] Box- Bocscome - Boscome.  Jack Boscome.

TIMMY     Sorry to break in like this, sir.  Mom.  Um, pleased... to meet you?

TRUDY     [almost laughing]  Well, shake his hand!

TIMMY     [whispered] He's not moving - is he OK?

TRUDY     [finally breaks down and laughs]  Jack here?  Why he's just peachy. 

SOUND     SLAP ON THE BACK. 

SFX     WEIRD MECHANICAL NOISES BEGIN.  VERY LOW

TIMMY     What'd you do?

TRUDY     I just - I must have pushed his switch or something.

TIMMY     Oh!  He's--  Oh!  He sure looks ... real with a head and all.

SFX     WHIRRING, ETC., GETS LOUDER, THEN OUT

JACK     [very mechanical sounding]  I am unit X-14.  I am at your service.

TRUDY     Well, he looks real, but he don't sound it.

SOUND     [off] KNOCKING AT FRONT DOOR

TRUDY     [sigh] That will be Mrs. MacGruder, about the vacuum cleaner.  Or the Chinese.

TIMMY      What vacuum cleaner? Huh?

JACK     Explain.  What is Chinese. 

SOUND     RAPID FOOTSTEPS

TIMMY     [fading out under] Oh, Chinese are folks who come from across the ocean and don't talk like us, and they cook good food...

TRUDY     [calling back] Timmy, make sure and keep Jack in the kitchen.  I don't know WHAT Mrs. MacGruder would make of him.

SOUND     DOOR.  UNLOCKING CHAIN AND BOLT.  DOOR OPENS

MACGRUDER     So?  Did you -uh - manage to ... uh?

TRUDY     It's just... Well, apparently it's Ken's idea of a joke.

MACGRUDER     I thought you said he wouldn't--

TRUDY     It was all filled with random pieces of metal, and when I got to the bottom, there was a note from him.  Tsch.  He said it was supposed to be some sort of .... um, furnace... but it didn't even have all the pieces.

MACGRUDER     [suspicious]  Why would he send such a darn fool thing?  Your furnace here is fine, isn't it?  I can always get Bob in to--

TRUDY     No, no!  Um, it was just that... the last time he bothered to stop by, we--we were living in a place with a dicey furnace.

MACGRUDER     [after a long moment]  Man like that, you're better rid of him.

TRUDY     I'll see about selling the bits for scrap or something. 

MACGRUDER     Take your time - you can always burn the crate and the shavings.  [joking, going off]  Save on your furnace worries...

TRUDY     [agreeing noise]

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS QUICKLY BUT NOT QUITE SLAMMED

TRUDY     Whew. 

SOUND     HEAVY FOOTSTEPS APPROACH

JACK     Explain.  What is a "Ken".

 

SCENE 13.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     [sotto] We may need to reconsider the invasion plans.

POCKAM     [sotto] I do not agree-

MOCKAM     If these sorcerers can withstand our invasion--

POCKAM     I think the information unit is faulty.

MOCKAM      That is impossible - the unit must tell the truth.  That is its function.

POCKAM     It may not know the truth.  I say we wait until the other units have been retrieved.

 

SCENE 14.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND      CLICK - MUSIC CUTS OUT

SFX     TUNING IN RADIO

JACK     Explain.  What is--?

TIMMY     Shh.  Now this is a really good show.  Jake, Mack, and Frenchy are the B-9 detective agency.  And they're about to go head to head with the crime syndicate.

SFX     MUSIC IN BACKGROUND - PARODY OF I LOVE A MYSTERY OPENER - SEE SCRIPT AT END

SOUND      KNOCK ON DOOR

TIMMY     Mom!  The door!

JACK     Mom!

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS ON LINO, THEN WOOD.  TRUDY BRUSHES HER HANDS TOGETHER

TRUDY     You two.  You should be doing your homework.  I let you put it off all weekend--

TIMMY     But the show!  Besides, Jack here'll help me with it, won't you Jack old boy?

JACK     Explain.  What is homework.

SOUND     KNOCK ON DOOR AGAIN

TRUDY     Yeah.  A big help.

SOUND     KNOB, DOOR OPENS A BIT

TRUDY     Yes?  Oh!  Susan!

SUSAN     Aha!  [chiding] You remember my name! 

TRUDY     [realizing] Oh, no...  Last night...!

SUSAN     Are you going to just keep me out here on the doorstep while I read you the riot act for standing me up?  You left me high and dry on a Saturday night, with two sailors and only one pair of feet!

TRUDY     I-- [thinks] Let me take you to the corner coffee shop - to make it up.

SUSAN     What?  Why?

TRUDY     Um, Timmy isn't feeling well, so I really don't want to wake him.

TIMMY     [off, sickly sounding]  Mommy?

SUSAN     [mollified]  So that's it.  [sigh] You better stay. 

TIMMY     [off, coughing] 

SUSAN     Kids.  I love em, but I'm not sure I could keep em.  You gonna be in to work tomorrow?

TRUDY     He's much better than he was.  Just needs rest.

SUSAN     OK.  But next time - you could at least call!  See ya manyana!

TRUDY     Bye!  [pause, whew]

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS, QUICK FOOTSTEPS

SFX     RADIO COMES ON - SCENE PLAYS IN THE B/G

TRUDY     Thank you honey!  [hug noise]

TIMMY     [boy hug reaction]  Moooom!  The shooow.

JACK     Explain.  What is sick.

TIMMY     Ssh!

TRUDY     C'mon Jack, and I'll explain.

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS

SFX     RADIO RECEDES AGAIN

SOUND     FEET ON LINO

TRUDY     Have a seat?

JACK     As you instruct.

SOUND     SQUEAK OF CHAIR

TRUDY     [chuckles] You look so darned human, I keep forgetting you're a machine.

JACK     I am X-14, designated Jack Boscome.

TRUDY     Glad you like the name.

JACK     Explain.  What is Like.

TRUDY     First sick.  Hmm.  Well, that's a toughee.  Humans, like machines, have lots of parts that all work together - and when one of the parts doesn't work right - like instead of breathing, you start coughing - that's what it means to be sick.

JACK     Repair seems the obvious answer.  Explain. 

TRUDY     Well, see you might be repairable - like if you broke a spring or something, you could just go in, take out the spring and put in a new one, but it doesn't work that way for living things - If one of our parts starts to break, it has to fix itself.

JACK     Processing.  Corollary - Timmy is sick.  Which part is broken?

TRUDY     [ashamed] Well, he's not really sick.  That was a lie.  My friend Susan keeps trying to fix me up with guys, and I -- well, I really just forgot, we were so caught up with having you working and all.

JACK     Explain.  What is lie.

TRUDY     [rueful] Oh, boy...

 

SCENE 15.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     Three more units!

POCKAM     Three?  Nonfunctional?

MOCKAM     Worse - three more we could not retrieve effectively, so destruct function was activated.

POCKAM     Only five still functional!  When is retrieval?

MOCKAM      It is being done. 

 

SCENE 16.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SOUND      POUNDING ON DOOR, FOOTSTEPS, DOOR OPENED QUICKLY

TRUDY     [breathless] Yes?  Mrs. Mac--

MACGRUDER     [furious] Don't you Mrs. MacGruder me with that innocent look on your face, young lady!

TRUDY     But--! I--!

MACGRUDER     I know you have a man in here.  I've seen him through the window.  What kind of a place do you think I'm running here? And you with a child in the house!

TRUDY     Oh, but he's--

JACK     [slightly off, sounding less robotic]  Trudy?  Is there a problem?

TRUDY     [thinking fast] Mrs. MacGruder, this is Jack Boscome.  He's a-- a [moving closer, whispering]  He's a vet.  Battle fatigued.  Our office sent a memo around, asking for people willing to open their homes to these boys.  How could I say no?

MACGRUDER     [much softened] But it's--

TRUDY     He stays in the living room.  On the couch.  He's really good with Timmy.

TIMMY     [off]  Jack?  Hey, ask me that question again.  On my homework.

TRUDY     See?

JACK     [off] What is the capitol of Idaho?

MACGRUDER     [resigned] You should have told me.

TRUDY     I wanted to wait and see if it was going to work out first.  I didn't want anyone to make a fuss right away - he's still pretty nervous, you know?

MACGRUDER     That's why he never leaves the house, eh?

TRUDY     Yup. 

MACGRUDER     All right.  All right.  No monkey shines, now!

TRUDY     Cross my heart.

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS

TRUDY     Whew.

JACK     [coming on, sounding just like a robot] Explain?  What is battle fatigue?  [then softening]  I should probably know.

 

SCENE 17.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     They are all disabled.  All but the X-14 unit.

POCKAM     All?  But we landed thirty--

MOCKAM     Apparently we both overestimated and underestimated the humans.  Twelve were rendered nonfunctional in assembly, six were completed and placed in government hands and had to be destructed, and eight were never even opened. 

POCKAM     Records show these beings are much more curious and greedy than that.  Wait.  What of the other three?

MOCKAM      [almost reluctant] They tried to resist retrieval and were destroyed.

 

SCENE 18.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

SFX     SCENE 2 PLAYS ON RADIO IN B/G

[following line about Death-O-tron]

TIMMY     Man, I wish we had a Death-o-tron landship.  I wouldn't have to walk to school any more.

JACK     But you are not afraid?  What if Tunis comes here.  His landship will crush this house.

TIMMY     [exasperated sigh] Jack.  Tunis is just a story.  Did you really think all this stuff on the radio was true?

JACK     Why would it not be true?  Explain.

TIMMY      It's ... fun.  Like make believe.  Everyone makes stuff up - you mean you don't have stories where you come from?

JACK     I don't know where I come from.  My memories begin when you assembled me. 

TIMMY     Oh, hold on [listen to the final part of the scene, then as the announcer comes on].  That's kind of sad.  You're sort of just a kid, too.  [pause] But you learn real fast.

 

SCENE 19.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     We must assume this data is correct.

POCKAM     I would prefer a second opinion.

MOCKAM     Of course, but we cannot take chances.  There is another planet in the Gargon Nebula whose dominant life form hasn't yet left the ground.  They should be easy to conquer and enslave.

POCKAM     The Gargon Nebula is light years from here!  We should--

MOCKAM      We are under orders.  No unnecessary chances.

 

SCENE 20.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

AMBIANCE     PARTY - SMALL CROWD.  RADIO MUSIC PLAYS IN THE B/G

TRUDY     [whispered]  Just stick to the plan.  They all want to meet you.  You remember?

JACK     I am unable to forget.  The plan is if the answer to a question is awkward, I ask them what they like on the radio and let them talk.

TRUDY     Right.  Everybody here practically lives for one show or another.  You thought Timmy was stuck on his shows- wait until Mrs. MacGruder starts regaling you with the plot from "my fifth husband."  Just don't go thinking anything they say is real.

JACK     Timmy explained--

SOUND     DOOR OPENS

MACGRUDER     [coming on]  Trudy!  You look lovely.  And this must be--

JACK     Jack Boscome. 

MACGRUDER     I hear you were in the army?

JACK     I-- [uncomfortable beat, error noise] uh, uh, would rather talk about you.  Do you listen to the radio?

MACGRUDER     [fading out] Oh, just occasionally...

BRIEF MUSIC - TIME PASSES - SAME SCENE

SUSAN     Oh-ho!

TRUDY     What?

SUSAN     Nothing.  Just Oh-ho.  Can't a girl Oh-ho a friend without someone thinking maybe she just put all the pieces together and realized why said friend is no longer interested in coming out on Saturday nights?

TRUDY     Jack?  Oh, he's just--

SUSAN     Living in your house.  Where do I sign up?

TRUDY     Oh, that reminds me - I told Mrs. MacGruder he was a vet, and the office set it up.  Don't let on, OK?

SUSAN     Oh-ho!

BRIEF MUSIC - TIME PASSES - SAME SCENE

CHUTNEY     [coming on] You, boy!

JACK     Me?  I am Jack--

CHUTNEY     We met earlier, remember?

JACK     [almost mechanical sounding]  You are Colonel Chutney.  12th mobile.  Great War.  Medal of--

CHUTNEY     It isn't a test, my boy.  Don't try so hard.  [pause] I wanted you to know that there is someone here who understands your condition and what you've been through. 

JACK     Explain?

CHUTNEY     I've seen a number of cases - of course, we called it shell shock - but it's all the same thing.  If you ever need to talk to anyone, and don't want to disturb the ladies.  I'm just across the court.

JACK     [more and more lost and confused] Talk?

CHUTNEY     About your experiences in the war.  Battle fatigue is nothing to sneeze at--

JACK     Oh!  Yes.  Yes, sir.

CHUTNEY     [chuckles, then insinuating]  What sort of action did you see?

JACK     Sir?  Do you listen to the radio, sir?

CHUTNEY     Oh, you can't trust the radio for intelligence.  Everything on it is either so covert no one would recognize it or outright fiction.  Were you with infantry?

JACK     [almost panicking, getting more robotic] Sir?  I cannot answer that.

CHUTNEY     You can't shock me, son. 

JACK     [error noise, very bad] uh, uh, uh, I was slugged, and tortured.  Tied up while the water came in.  Flooded with gas.  [drawing from a radio episode from earlier]

CHUTNEY     [shocked] P-O-W?  I am so sorry, my boy.  No wonder.  I won't ask you any more.  Just know that I'm always ready to listen.

 

SCENE 21.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

MOCKAM     What shall we do with this unit?

POCKAM     X-14?  The only logical choice is to vaporize it.  Its memory cells are congested with data from this planet.  It is easier to assemble a new unit than to refresh this one.

 

SCENE 22.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

AMBIANCE     OUTSIDE, NIGHT

SFX     SOMEWHERE A RADIO PLAYS ROMANTIC MUSIC

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS ON GRAVEL

TRUDY     You were marvelous.  I was so worried when Colonel Chutney buttonholed you like that.

JACK     [almost teasing]  Explain.  What is buttonholed?

TRUDY     [chuckles fondly]  Only three weeks, and you sound like any other guy.  And you look so real.  I-- It's nice having a man around the house, you know.  Timmy loves you, and the way you fixed the furnace!

JACK     Machines make sense.  Humans are confusing. 

TRUDY     Don't I know it!  I- I confuse myself sometimes.

JACK     Explain?

TRUDY     I can't.  Some things are just inexplicable.  Like ... love.

JACK     Explain?

TRUDY     I- well... Love is a lot like "like".  Just stronger.

JACK     A feeling of attachment and a desire to be near the object of the feeling?

TRUDY     More or less. 

JACK     As an example, you love Timmy?

TRUDY     Yes!

JACK     And Timmy loves-- Jake, Mack and Frenchy.

TRUDY     [chuckling]  Yes.

JACK     Do you think love can be learned?

TRUDY     I-- Well, I really don't know.

JACK     If this is a topic you do not wish to discuss, we can talk about radio shows.

TRUDY     [laughing] No.  It's just a topic that no one finds easy to discuss.

JACK      I would like to learn more.

MOCKAM     [on filter]  Unit X-14!  Unit X-14!  Prepare for imminent retrieval.

JACK     Did you hear that?

TRUDY     What?

JACK     [sigh, starting to sound more and more robotic] I am a robot.

TRUDY     I know, but somehow it doesn't matter.

JACK     I may come to understand feelings such as love, but I cannot feel them.

TRUDY     You once said you could never lie, and look how that turned out.

JACK     I have completed my time with you.  [error noise]  uh, uh, uh, uh, I have no feelings for this world or its inhabitants.  Uh, uh, I will fulfill my mission.

TRUDY     Jack, what's wrong?

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS ON GRAVEL, AWAY

TRUDY     Jack!

 

SCENE 23.

MUSIC     SPACE

AMBIANCE      SPACE SHIP

JACK     [very robotic]  I am capable of further use.

POCKAM     What?  Did you speak out of turn, X-14?

JACK     Destroying me-- this unit would be a waste of resources.  Logic dictates utilizing all capabilities.

POCKAM     What did they teach this thing down there?  no wonder three units had the self-motivation to destruct themselves.

MOCKAM     The unit cites logic.  Let it continue.

JACK     This unit has assimilated enough to remain out of the hands of government entities, and to blend into society on the planet below. 

MOCKAM     True.

JACK     Continued data gathering is always of use.

MOCKAM     One unit is not enough to gather all the data we would need for a full scale attack - not in our projected time frame.

JACK     If you go to the Gargon Nebula, this unit can continue to gather information for your return.

MOCKAM     It might work, at that. 

POCKAM     But it will be forty of this planet's years before we would return from the Gargon Nebula!

 

SCENE 24.

MUSIC     40s MELODRAMA

TRUDY     [sigh] No, Colonel.  He had a -- a bad relapse and had to -- go back to the hospital.

CHUTNEY     [on phone] Too bad.  Good boy, that.  When he comes back... well, a divorcee like yourself could do a lot worse.

TRUDY     [trying not to cry]  I-- I know.  I have to go, Colonel, there's someone at the door.

SOUND     AS IF ON CUE, KNOCK ON DOOR

SOUND     PHONE HANGS UP

SOUND      RUNNING FEET, DOOR FLUNG OPEN

TIMMY       [off, yelling, happy and excited] Hey mom!  It's a big wooden box!

TRUDY     [excited gasp] Huh?

END

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RADIO SCENE 1

ANNOUNCER     --in the underground caves beneath the tiny mining town.

MUSIC STING

JAKE     Look, Mack!  It's Frenchy!

FRENCHY     Ooooh.

MAC     Well, dip me in honey and roll me in a haystack!  He's been slugged!

FRENCHY     [bad french accent] Jake?  They took the scrimshaw!  I couldn't stop them!

JAKE     I know, Frenchy.  Mack, Check that door - see if it's clear.  We'll have to leave Frenchy someplace safe while we go after the Syndicate boys.  If they find him, he'll be tortured, or worse.

SOUND     SHAKING LOCKED DOOR

MACK     Well boil me fer a rutabaga sandwich, the door won't open!

JAKE     What's that noise?

MACK      Sounds like someone went and left a faucet running.

FRENCHY     Jake!  The floor!  It is water!

JAKE     So that's the plan, is it - they'll drown us here like rats!

MUSIC STING

****************************************************

RADIO SCENE 2

SNAP HARPER     As long as we have breath, he won't rule the world.  Are you with me Amanda?

AMANDA COOL     Anything you say, Snap!

SNAP HARPER     If we can just get to the central coolant chamber of his death-o-tron landship, Amanda, I think we might be able to--

TUNIS     [on filter] To -- what?  Go on Snap Harper, I am -- powerfully interested.

AMANDA COOL     Tunis the Unstoppable!  Snap!  He's found us, but how?

SNAP HARPER     He must have listening devices planted in these service crawlspaces.  Blast Tunis's cleverness!

TUNIS     I would return the compliment, Snap Harper, but it would be pointless.

AMANDA COOL     Oh, Snap!

TUNIS     For you are about to die!  Flood the room with gas!

MUSIC STING

ANNOUNCER     After just a short word from our sponsor, Tunis the Unstopppable will outline his cunning plan for doing in Snap Harper.  But first--

--END--

 

Atomic Julie - Run, Little Monster! (Part 2 of 2) by Chester S. Geier31 Aug 202100:25:28

In a future ravaged by atomic war, a girl growing up on a farm realizes she has something special.

TW:  tense scenes that could (but don't) turn into sexual assault.

19 Nocturne Boulevard - Within The Walls of Eryx - Reissue26 Aug 202100:35:14

[Transcript below]

Adapted by Julie Hoverson
from the short story by H.P. Lovecraft and Kenneth Sterling

When Kenton Stanfield takes a job on Venus hunting for power crystals, he finds the hazards of the job too much to handle. 

Cast List

  • Kenton Stanfield - Reynaud LeBoeuf
  • Frederick Dwight - Cole Hornaday
  • Marshall Miller - Pat McNally
  • Dana Manners - Julie Hoverson
  • Supply Clerk - Marge Lutton
  • Recorder - Beverly Poole

Music:  Kevin MacLeod (Incompetech.com)
Recorded in Conjunction with ART (American Radio Theater)
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Cover Photo:  Julie Hoverson 

"What kind of a place is it? Would you believe it's a mining colony
on the steamy jungle planet we call Venus?"

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Within the walls of Eryx

 Adapted by Julie Hoverson from the original story by H.P. Lovecraft and Kenneth Sterling.

This was the second story I ever tried to adapt - the first one I did as an audio drama.  I had previously adapted The Thing on the Doorstep into a short film script - which I much later rewrote into an audio drama, and that will come up when it comes up.  This one was also one of the original ten episodes I put together for the series.

You can see, I was starting with an easy writer to adapt.... H.P. Lovecraft.  HAH!

Since then, I have actually adapted a LOT of Lovecraft, and one of the reasons his writing is so hard to translate into other mediums is that much of his genius is in his actual use of words, and unless you quote his long descriptive passages word for word, you lose that.  And if you do quote large chunks of it, you might as well just make an audio book.  I try and walk a fine line.

As an aside - I know the title of the story is actually "IN the Walls of Eryx", but that always bothered me as being incorrect - the RATS are IN the walls (in the story The Rats in the Walls).  These guys are WITHIN the walls - between the actual walls, you know?

In the Walls of Eryx was one of HPL's many collaborations and rewrites.  Little is known of Kenneth Sterling, the high school student and aspiring writer who sought Lovecraft's help, but he was clearly a sci fi fan - Eryx is unusual among Lovecraft's works as being a pure scifi story, with very little horror or mythos or mythical background to it, even if Lovecraft is generally credited with a complete rewrite and expansion of Kenneth's original idea.

In the 1930s, when this was written, a common sci fi trope was that Venus was a steamy jungle planet, often populated by some lizardy species, and it appears as such in this story.  The other details are fairly unique to Eryx.

Since the original story was all one man's report, technically written out, I had to pull scenes from his story and create them, and the characters in them, from whole cloth.  Not to mention adding somebody - "Miss Manners" - he could report in to throughout the story, to add some audio texture when Kenton was technically out on his own, as well as the voice for his "recorder" unit, which also functions as a sort of encyclopedia, and helps break up the heavy data dump of "this is how Venus works". 

Perhaps the weirdest thing to try and portray in audio is the very "visual" presence - or absence - of the walls themselves.  A maze of invisible walls.  Or the native Venusians - whose weird cries were originally geese, if I remember correctly.  I think I slowed them down and ran them backward, or something like that.

I also chose to tell this story vastly out of order, to give a sense of foreboding from the very start, as the audience hears how bad Kenton is doing, winding down, but still without giving away how it will ultimately end.  To make the time shifts clear, since they happen throughout the story, I created three different background ambiances for his log entries - since they have no other point of reference - each with his breather machinery getting a bit clunkier and running down. 

Beyond that, everything rested heavily on Reynaud LeBeouf, the actor playing Kenton, to create the stages of the character's downward spiral.  We did record each set of scenes separately, out of order, essentially, so all the chatty beginnings were all at once and the weak and wearied end at the end.  Rey is one of my core group of go-to actors, and you'll hear him a lot in 19 Nocturne Boulevard.

This was also recorded with the help of A-R-T - American Radio Theater - and many of the actors in it were part of that group.  A-R-T is a group of old time radio enthusiasts who focused on re-creating old episodes and working on the occasional newer play.  Having been part of the group for years before I began 19 Nocturne Boulevard, I featured various actors from A-R-T in a number of my episodes.

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WITHIN THE WALLS OF ERYX

Cast:

Kenton J. Stanfield (M/25), space prospector

Frederick N. Dwight (M/30), space prospector

Marshall Miller (M/40), commander

Dana Manners (F/30), contact at control

Supply Clerk (any)

Recorder, mechanical voice (any)

 

OLIVIA      Did you have any trouble finding it?  What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Would you believe, it's a mining camp on the steamy jungle planet we call Venus? 

NOTE:     "AMBIANCE" CUES ARE FOR BACKGROUND SOUNDS THAT CONTINUE THROUGHOUT EACH SCENE.  THEY ARE DETAILED AT THE END OF THE SCRIPT

MUSIC

SCENE 1.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 5

KENTON     [filter, weak]  Venus month 6, day 14, nighttime.  Kenton J. Stanfield.  Perhaps my final report.  [rasping bark of almost laughter]  My fifth whole day.  Canteen went dry at noon.  Food tablets not dangerously low... yet.  Chlorate cubes are my real worry.  I feel...weak from my forced economy in oxygen, and from my constantly mounting thirst.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 2.     MINING BASE

SOUND     TWO MEN WALK IN A FACILITY

KENTON     [hale & hearty]  You're still using Carter oxygen units?  But they're so darn heavy!

MILLER     Budget's god around here, kid.  You'll see.  We're not funded like the government.

KENTON     A Dubois mask isn't that much more, and does the job at half the weight.  Saves on chlorate cubes, too.

MILLER     Just figure how much "not much more" IS when multiplied by over a hundred prospectors.  If you last up here, you can always get yourself a Dubois.  [chuckles]  Once you start making the big bucks.

KENTON     The way you say that...

MILLER     Oh, it happens.  Just not that often.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 3.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 5

KENTON     [filter, weak]  I do not know the time.  It is dark.  There is something damnable... something uncanny... about this labyrinth. I could swear that I had eliminated certain turns through charting, and yet each new trial belies some assumption I had thought established.  Never before did I realize how lost we are without visual landmarks. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 4.     JUNGLE

SOUND     SLIGHT, RHYTHMIC BEEPING CONTINUES UNDER ENTIRE SCENE [crystal detector]

SOUND     [FILTER] CRACKLE OF RADIO INTERFERENCE INTERMITTENT THROUGHOUT.

DANA     [filter]  Hey greenhorn!  This is your contact, Dana Manners, speaking.  [chuckle]  That's Miss Manners, to you.  You got me for a glorious half hour.

KENTON     What?  Why only--?

DANA     [filter]  Don't none of you boys ever crack a manual?  [quoting]  "The company's only rebroadcast orbiter is a" - well, it's a dang fast critter - so it "provides a window for one half hour approximately every six hours for each sector."  And that's your first five minutes.  Care to waste some more, or you plan to make some kinda report?

KENTON     [chuckling]  Sorry!  OK, my coordinates--

SOUND     different beeping [pocket recorder]

DANA     [filter]  Good-Ness.  Did you bring your blankie, too?  All that boring info is sent up automatic-like. 

KENTON     [worried]  But... my log, too?

DANA     [filter]  [pause, prolonging the agony]  Nah, takes too much juice.  This way, you get to edit out all your little personal comments and naughty little secrets before handing it over for archiving.

KENTON     [relieved]  Oh.  Good. 

DANA     [filter]  So you one of those boys who grew up just panting to work on Venus?

KENTON     Actually, I wanted to be a writer.  Venus just pays better.  Now it seems like I--

DANA     [filter]  --got hustled out of the base the minute your feet touched the sweet soggy ground?  Y'ain't the first.  "Here's your mask, grab your suit, what's yer hurry?"

KENTON     Pretty much.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 5.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 5

KENTON     [filter, weak]  ...Continued.  The effect of all these fr-fruitless wanderings is one of profound discouragement.  I can understand how poor Dwight must have felt.  His corpse is now just a skeleton, and the sificlighs and farnoth-flies are gone.  

MUSIC

 

 

SCENE 6.     MINING BASE

AMB          CANTEEN, EATING

MILLER     It's all about the crystals, kid.  You read the manual?

KENTON     Well...

MILLER     You had an entire rocket trip and--?

KENTON     [sheepish]  Well...  There was this poker game--

MILLER     [oh lord!]  Save me from greenhorns with less sense than kittens!  That book could have saved your life, you know. 

KENTON     Well, I figured there'd be time--

MILLER     There's never enough time.  Men who can withstand the strains of crystal hunting here on Venus are few and far between.  Most - like yourself - last no more than three trips. 

KENTON     What makes you think--?

MILLER     Prove me wrong.

DWIGHT     [off mike]  Hey!  Miller!

MILLER     See that?  Now there's a guy who knows his beans.

DWIGHT     [coming closer, gloating]  Miller!  Read it and weep!

SOUND     paper FLOURISH.

DWIGHT     Twenty-three carats!

MILLER     Twenty-three?  That's--

DWIGHT     Right there in black and white.  Beat that!

MILLER     [to Kenton]  Kenton, this is Dwight - Fred Dwight, one of the brightest stars of the Terra Nova Corp. 

DWIGHT     The brightest star.  Ken, is it?  Well, Ken, there ain't no one else out there's netted as many total lifetime karats as me.  Over seven hundred. 

KENTON     Oh.  Um, I don't--

MILLER     Kid skipped the manual.

DWIGHT     Pfah.  OK, it takes about 20 karats to power, say the entire city of Chicago for a year.  Shoot, by my calculations, I've kept the entire eastern seaboard lit for the last five!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 7.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 4

KENTON     [filter, tired]  Nightfall.  There is nothing to do but persevere.  Dwight would have got out if he had kept on a minute longer.  It is just possible that somebody from Terra Nova will come looking for me before long, although this is only my fourth day out. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 8.     SUPPLY OFFICE

SOUND          OBJECTS BEING BROUGHT OUT AND SET DOWN

SUPPLY CLERK     Suit fit OK?  Last chance.

KENTON     Feels fine.

MILLER     With the tropical atmosphere out there, you better be sure - five days is a long damn time to chafe.

KENTON     [chuckles]  I understand.  I'm sure.  So my tour is five days?

MILLER     To start with.  You remember Dwight?  Now there's a long-hauler.  Does about 2 months - earth months, 60 days - on most trips. 

SUPPLY CLERK     Food tablets.  One week.

SOUND     BOX being set down.

MILLER     But then, he's been Cytherean for over a decade. 

KENTON     Cytherean? 

MILLER     Means "of Venus" to us long-timers.  We feel "Venusian" sounds too damn silly after all the crummy movies.

SUPPLY CLERK     Breathing unit.

SOUND     larger box

KENTON     Cytherean.  Got it.

MILLER     Dwight's practically one of the locals.  You seen them yet?

SUPPLY CLERK     Chlorate cubes.  One week.

SOUND     another box

KENTON     Only pictures - now THAT part of the manual I did look over.  [shudder]  Creepy little buggers, aren't they?

MILLER     Little?  Ken, Ken, Ken.  [sigh]  You didn't look hard enough - on average, the lizard-men run seven feet tall!

KENTON     Holy--!

SUPPLY CLERK     Recording unit.

SOUND     box

MILLER     Don't worry too much.  They're-- well, they're not harmless, not by a long chalk, but they're... manageable.

KENTON     So those...tentacles they've got for arms...?

SUPPLY CLERK     Crystal detector.

SOUND     box.

MILLER     Arms, legs, tongue, who knows what they are - Yup, four or five feet long on some of them.  We call them lizard-men, what with the greenish, scaly skin and all, but they're not really like anything back home.

KENTON     [awe]  Seven feet tall...

SUPPLY CLERK     Flame pistol.  Fully charged.

SOUND     box.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 9.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 4

KENTON     [filter, tired]  Four days out.  I think.  I am resolved not to hasten matters as Dwight did.  His grinning skull has just turned toward me, shifting by the groping of one of the scavengers that are picking him over.  The ghoulish stare of its empty eye-sockets is worse than the tentacled onlookers that stand gloating around the invisible barrier laughing at me.  Another day and I shall go mad, if I do not drop dead from exhaustion.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 10.     JUNGLE

SOUND     strong, rhythmic beeping THROUGHOUT SCENE [crystal detector]

KENTON     You still there, Miss Manners?

DANA     [filter, very crackly throughout]  Just another coupla minutes.  What's your beef?

KENTON     I've got a reading on my crystal detector - looks like a big one. 

DANA     [filter]  Them things ain't reliable for size, just direction.  Could be just an itty bitty one, real nearby.

KENTON     Well, what's the terrain like due, um...

SOUND     beeping gets slower, then picks up again AS HE TURNS

KENTON     North, I think, of my current position?

DANA     [filter]  North?  [prolonged crackle]  --Erycinian highlands--  [crackle]  --last known position of--

SOUND     crackling.  CLICK - radio turned off.

KENTON     Great.  On my own again.  Recorder?

RECORDER     [filter, mechanical voice]  Ready.

KENTON     Erycinian highlands?

RECORDER     [filter]  A plateau mapped by Matsugawa from the air fifty years ago.  Designated 'Eryx'  One of the few areas of any size on Venus noted for a lack of vegetation--

KENTON     Off.  Lack of vegetation?  That'll be a relief.  Anything to get out of those rubbery creepers and overhanging fronds.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 11.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 3

KENTON     [filter, normal]  Month 6, Day 12, my third day out.  Afternoon.  In less than an hour, I saw that the jungle growths were thinning out, and by five o'clock - after passing through a belt of tree-ferns with very little underbrush - I emerged on a broad plateau.  My progress now became rapid, and I saw by the wavering of my detector-needle that I was getting closer to the crystal I sought. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 12.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     BAR - MAINLY MALE VOICES

MILLER     Some brainy types insist they're intelligent. 

DWIGHT     The lizzies?  [dismissive]  Screwballs.

KENTON     Well, they build cities--

DWIGHT     Anthills.  Beehives.  And we don't try to make treaties with bugs, do we?  Hmm?

KENTON     But they talk... don't they?

MILLER     That's been debated for years.  There seems to be some pattern to the tentacle movements--

DWIGHT     Yeah, and bees dance.  I've been out there longer than just about anyone, and they're nothing but a damn nuisance.

MILLER     A religious nuisance.

DWIGHT     So they worship the crystals.  Big deal.  They can't use 'em - don't even know they do anything more'n glow.  If we wanna change things, we got about two real choices--

MILLER     [ironic]  Try and civilize them, like we did with everyone back home?

DWIGHT     Nah - they're way too primitive for that.  I say we either gotta cage 'em up like the animals they are--

MILLER     We've tried THAT one before, too.

DWIGHT     Or we can just blow em all away.  Why not?  They're not decorative, useful, or even edible.  They don't do ANYTHING worth keeping 'em around.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 13.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 4

KENTON     [filter, tired]  Note to self.  Um, day - fourth.  Fourth day.  I racked my brains with speculations regarding the material, origin, and purpose of the strange edifice.  That the hands of men might have reared it, I could not for a moment believe.  Human knowledge does not include any perfectly transparent, non-reflective solid such as the substance of this building.  Did a forgotten race of highly-evolved beings precede the man-lizards as masters of Venus?  The strange and seemingly non-practical building and its material suggests a religious purpose.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 14.     PLATEAU

SOUND     RADIO STATIC

KENTON     Contact?  You back yet?  Manners?  Damn.

SOUND     crackling static.  radio CLICKS off

KENTON     This is just... nuts! 

SOUND     two thunks - pounding on stone wall

KENTON     What the heck is this stuff?

SOUND     pounding, hand groping along wall

KENTON     Hmm.  Smooth.  Cool to the--

SOUND     RADIO STATIC

DANA     [filter]  Contact here.  Report?

KENTON     Have I got a report for you!  I found an invisible wall!

MUSIC

 

SCENE 15.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 5

KENTON     [filter, weak]  Fifth day out, and I doubt I will see a sixth.  Very weak.  Did not sleep much till daylight.  Must save chlorate cubes, so I'm nearly suffocating for lack of oxygen.  Can't walk much of the time, but ma-manage a crawl.  Those damnable green things keep staring and laughing with their tentacles, and sometimes they gesticulate in a way that makes me think they share some terrible joke, just beyond my perception.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 16.     PLATEAU

DANA     [filter]  Listen to me real careful now, Ken.  You need to close your eyes and start backing up.  Right this minute.

KENTON     What?  My recorder unit lists nothing about invisible walls--

DANA     [filter]  You backing up yet?  Ignore anything you see or hear--

KENTON     Why, for crying out loud?

DANA     [filter]  Get yourself clear first, then check your recorder's entry for mirage-plants.  Move your backside!  Them things're deadly.

KENTON     Wait.  No...  Wait a minute.  I'm in the middle of the plains of Eryx.  No plants within a half mile.  Nothing to see but mud, and-- [cuts himself off]

SOUND     BEEPING [crystal detector]

DANA     [filter]  [beat]  Yeah?  Mud and ...?

KENTON     [evasive]  Hmm?  Oh, the walls.  But you can't SEE them because they're invisible.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 17.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 3

KENTON     [filter]  Third day, supplemental.  What made my heart leap was a smaller detail, whose position could not have been far from the plain's exact centre.  It was a single point of light, blazing through the mist and seeming to draw a piercing, concentrated luminescence from the yellowish, vapor-dulled sunbeams.  This, without doubt, was the crystal I sought.  I could hardly wonder, as I glimpsed the distant glow, that those miserable man-lizards worship them.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 18.     PLATEAU

SOUND     squishy footsteps, intermittent throughout

KENTON     --maybe 20 feet tall - I managed to throw a handful of mud about that high, and it went over.

DANA     [filter]  I ain't got any maps or archives with specifics for that locale.  Not a popular spot, seeing as there's none of the streams them crystals show up in.

KENTON     No streams, but plenty of damp - the whole plateau is-- [slight shudder] --like a solid sheet of slimy mud, with a light frosting of ground mist. 

DANA     [filter]  Could this wall thing be some kinda natural phenomena?

KENTON     Too smooth.  Very regular.  Slightly curved, too, I think.  Ovoid.

DANA     [filter]  You writers and your big ole words...  Been all the way round yet?

KENTON     I don't think so, but I can't really tell--

DANA     [filter]  [condescending]  Well, did you hit your own dainty little footsteps again?

KENTON     Not a chance.  The mud is so liquid, it just doesn't take - not even for a minute.  It's like I haven't been here before.

DANA     [filter]  I need you to mark your position and come back to base, Ken.  This is way outside standard procedure.  You hear me?

KENTON     Got it.  I'll get out of here pretty soon.  I just wanted to-- 

SOUND     BEEPING [crystal detector] SPEEDS UP SLIGHTLY.  THEN IS MUFFLED.

KENTON     --to get all the way round, just once. 

DANA     [filter]  Honey, I'll be flat out of range in two shakes.  I don't want to worry you none, but if anything happens out there, it could be days before help'll arrive.

KENTON     Days?  But a lander would only‑‑

DANA     [filter]  Manpower and money, old son.  Base only has a dozen resident staff, and none of us is jungle-worthy.  We gotta wait for some of you roughnecks to wander on home, THEN the company has to pay fer their time fer a rescue.  Why d'you think they load you up with plenty of ammo?  Much cheaper. 

KENTON     It's a wonder they bother.

DANA     [filter]  [serious]  And death benefits. 

KENTON     What?

DANA     [filter]  They're cheaper, too.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 19.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 5

KENTON     [filter, weak]  Horror and despair. Baffled again!  I had been deceived once more, and was apparently back where I had been on my first futile attempt to leave the labyrinth.  Whether I screamed aloud I do not know - perhaps I was too weak to utter a sound.  I merely lay dazed in the mud for a long period, while the greenish things outside leaped and laughed and gestured.  

MUSIC

 

SCENE 20.     MINING BASE

KENTON     Isn't this a lot of ammo?  I mean, seven clips--

DWIGHT     One a day - that's pretty average.  Save 'em for the trip home.  The lizzies don't usually try much right away - that is, until you got one of their precious crystals.  The worst you can expect before you make a find is pot-shots with blow-gun darts.

KENTON     Blow-guns?  That's it?

DWIGHT     Don't scoff.  One of those darts'll slice through your suit like butter.  All it needs to do is nick you and the local germs do the rest - if the insects don't get you first.  [beat]  If you don't get back to base in time...  Well, you noticed the bartender's hand?

KENTON     [gulps]  The hook?

DWIGHT     Um-hmm.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 21.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 3

KENTON     [filter, normal]  Late afternoon, third day.  I have said that even from a great distance the shining object's position seems indefinably queer - a slight mound rising from the slime and mist.  Now - at about a hundred yards - I could see plainly just what that mound was.  It was the body of a man in one of the Company's protective suits, lying on his back, with his oxygen mask half buried in the mud a few inches away.  In his right hand, crushed convulsively against his chest, was the crystal which had led me here - a spheroid of incredible size, so large that the dead fingers could scarcely close over it.  I wondered who the man was.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 22.     PLATEAU

KENTON     Holy cow! 

SOUND     THUMP ON WALL

KENTON     Dwight? 

SOUND     THUMPING ON WALL, HURRIED SPLISHING FOOTSTEPS

KENTON     Oh, jeez. [SOUND: THUMP]  But the walls-- [SOUND: THUMP]  How could he--  [gasps]  Woah!

SOUND     splash in the watery mud as he finds a gap.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 23.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 3

KENTON     [filter, normal]  There was an opening about three feet wide.  Without a moment's hesitation I stepped through and advanced two paces to the prostrate body - which lay in what seemed to be an intersecting doorless corridor.  It gave me a fresh curiosity to find that the interior of this vast enclosure was divided by partitions...

MUSIC

 

SCENE 24.     BAR

SOUND     TIN CUP SET DOWN

DWIGHT     [a bit drunk]  I hope I die out there. 

SOUND     LIQUID POURS

KENTON     You want to die?

DWIGHT     No - don't WANT to, just that when I do, I hope it's out there.  In the jungle.  The scavengers'll strip me clean in a coupla hours and no one'll ever know what happened.

MILLER     Just make sure you're dead first.  Some of them bugs don't wait.

KENTON     Will they really--?

MILLER     That's why the suits are made the way they are - like cellophane, but thicker.  No weave, no tiny holes for bugs to get in through.

KENTON     But the suit doesn't cover everything--?

DWIGHT     Ah, they don't like the breather.  Smells bad or something.  So your head is pretty safe... as long as you don't take it off.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 25.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 3

KENTON     [filter, normal]  Looking about for some possible cause of death, my eyes lit upon the oxygen mask lying close to the body's feet.  Probably carelessly buckled, so the weight of the tubes worked the straps loose - wouldn't've happened with a Dubois sponge-reservoir mask.  

MUSIC

 

SCENE 26.     PLATEAU

KENTON     Well, Dwight, old buddy, you got your wish.  At least this baby won't go to waste.  [grunts]  Let go!  [grunts again]  Aha! 

SOUND     a couple of squish-steps

KENTON     Waitaminute.  Wait...  Rigor mortis, it... it doesn't last...  Manners, you there? 

SOUND     crackle of radio

KENTON     Recorder?

RECORDER     Ready.

KENTON     Rigor mortis.

RECORDER     A condition of deceased flesh.  A spasming of muscles--

KENTON     How long does it last?

SOUND     rustling, slapping noises far in background

RECORDER     Rigor begins 3-7 hours after termination of life, and lasts approximately 12 hours.

KENTON     Off.  Holy--!  Dwight...

SOUND     rustling, slapping noises build

KENTON     What in sam hill--?  [what the heck?]

MUSIC

 

SCENE 27.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 3

KENTON     [filter, normal]  It was a group of a dozen or so of those detestable man-lizards emerging from the forest far off across the plain.  When they drew nearer they seemed less truly reptilian - only the flat head and the green, slimy, frog-like skin carrying out the idea.  They walked erect on odd, thick stumps, which made curious noises in the mud.  The motions of their tentacles - if the theories are right - indicated that the things were in animated conversation.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 28.     PLATEAU

DANA     [filter]  You asleep?

KENTON     [bummed]  Would it matter?

DANA     [filter]  You sound real down.  Tell mama Manners all about it.  You may not have a lot of time, though, there's some sunspot activity predicted for tonight, so I may have to miss a date or two-- but you can forgive a girl for that, can't you?

KENTON     I--  I'm lost.

DANA     [filter]  Nonsense.  You're nowhere near uncharted territory.  Just punch into the recorder--

KENTON     Oh, I know exactly where I am.  But I'm still lost.

DANA     [filter, half joking]  Is this where I start telling you to back away quickly? 

KENTON     The invisible wall?  Well, it's more like--

DANA     [filter]  Like what?  An invisible barn?

KENTON     --An invisible ...maze.  I can see the entire plain from here, the trees are at the edges, the sky above, but I can't... get... out.

DANA     [filter]  Have you tried taking every left fork?  That usually--

KENTON     There's something else.  I-- There's a crowd of the lizard-men just waiting at the entrance - ready to jump me if I manage to escape.

DANA     [filter]  Two things--

KENTON     I need some help--

DANA     [filter, sadly]  Ain't gonna happen.  [crackle]  Not for a couple days.  Sunspots play havoc with landing vehicles, same as communications.

KENTON     So I just--

DANA     [filter]  Listen to me Ken.  You've never tried shooting one of them things, have ya?  The flame guns are particularly nasty.  Them critters go up like oily rags.  Once you get one or two of 'em, the others'll head for the hills.  They don't really wanna fight--

DWIGHT     [filter, distant and echoey]  That is, until you got one of the precious crystals.

KENTON     Oh.  [resolved]  No.

DANA     [filter]  No?  No what?

KENTON     I'm not giving it up.

DANA     [filter]  That's the spirit, Ken.  Long as you're in a safe place, just sit tight, and we'll get a rescue party in, soon as possible.

KENTON     [considering]  You mean other prospectors, right?

DANA     [filter]  Yep. 

KENTON     Maybe I will be out of here by then...

MUSIC

 

SCENE 29.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 4

KENTON     [filter, tired]  Fourth day.  Shortly after dawn.  The alluring crystal, the body of the man who seized it before me - these have acquired a dark and threatening meaning.  Dwight was a victim, too.  He must have been trapped some time ago, and failed to find his way out.  His mask probably didn't slip accidentally.  Rather than face a lingering death he solved the issue by letting the lethal atmosphere do its work.  The horrible irony of his fate lay in his position - only a few feet from the exit he failed to find.  And now I'm as trapped as he'd been. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 30.     plateau

KENTON     [tired, but not quite exhausted - yet] Recorder.

RECORDER     [filter]  Ready.

KENTON     Location - central chamber.  Describe?

RECORDER     [filter]  Round chamber.  Six irregularly spaced egresses.

KENTON     Progress?

RECORDER     [filter]  You have 27 times attempted the exit you designated "door in line with corpse and tree".

KENTON     Yeah, well...  Then I realized three of the doors all line up that way.  There's just not enough difference in perspective.

RECORDER     [filter]  You have recorded 43 trips out of the central chamber. 

KENTON     I know.  With no way to mark anything, I can't tell which door is which.

RECORDER     [filter]  You have attempted to score the wall with your knife, and with your flame pistol.  You have tried to make a mark in ink, and smear it with mud.  You have reported no success.

KENTON     Picking a damn door at random would do me more good.

RECORDER     [filter]  Correlating the turns you have thus far recorded, a random choice would give you odds of 1 in--

KENTON     Off.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 31.     KENTON'S LOG

AMBIANCE     LOG 5

KENTON     [filter, weak]  This, then, is the end.  Three days, taking me nowhere.  My strength is gone.  It was no common series of mischances which made me lose my way in this roofless, unseen tangle of corridors.  Far from it.  Beyond doubt, the place is a genuine maze - a labyrinth - a trap set to catch humans. 

MUSIC

 

SCENE 32.     PLATEAU

KENTON     [weak, not on filter]  Hiya Dwight.  Hey, buddy.

SOUND     weak pounding on wall, splishes of vague movement in the mud.

KENTON     You got it all over me.  You almost made it, old pal.  Almost...

SOUND     RUSTLING AND SPLISHING [Kenton takes out his recorder]

KENTON     Recorder on.

RECORDER     [filter]  Ready.

SOUND     ALIEN NOISES GET LOUDER.

KENTON     [weak]  I have just taken the great crystal out of my pouch to look at in my last moments.  It shines fiercely and menacingly in the red rays of the dying day.  The leaping horde have noticed it, and their g-gestures have changed in a way I cannot understand.  I am ... growing ... numb.  

SOUND     ONE LAST LABORED EXHALE, MACHINE SLOWS, THEN A MOMENT OF SILENCE.

MUSIC

 

SCENE 33.     GENERAL QUARTERS

[NOTE:       Miller is dictating, not playing back, so he is NOT on a filter]

MILLER     Operative A-49, Kenton J. Stanfield left Terra Nova early on six-twelve, for a short-term trip.  Due back 13th or 14th.  Did not appear by evening of 15th.  Followed last reported location to Erycinian Highland.  Brought plane down nearby and corner of the wing crashed on unseen obstruction.  Approaching on foot, we came up short against a smooth, invisible barrier.  Located skeleton of Operative B-9, Frederick N. Dwight of Koenig's division, and aforementioned deceased, Stanfield.  We had great difficulty in getting to Stanfield, but finally succeeded.  We shall bury Dwight and Stanfield in the company graveyard, and ship the crystal on the next--

SOUND     beep [phone]. 

MILLER     Off.

SOUND     phone picked up.

MILLER     Miller.

DANA     [filter]  I heard--

MILLER     Yeah.

DANA     [filter]  And I'm real sorry.  Boy seemed real nice--

MILLER     He was.  Keep it under your hat, but I think this is the last straw.

DANA     [filter]  Last straw?

MILLER     [sigh]  I have been warned.  The next rocket'll be carrying marines.

DANA     [filter]  [shocked]  Oh.  Well.  I AM sorry.

MILLER     Yeah.

SOUND     HANGS up PHONE. 

MILLER      Recorder on.

SOUND     CLICK.

RECORDER     [filter] Ready.

MILLER     [sigh]  Personal note.  I am impressed not only with the irony of Dwight's fate, but with that of Stanfield as well.  We found a doorway some fifteen feet past Dwight.  Beyond this was a hall and ... oh, hell... Stanfield could have reached the outside by walking twenty-two feet if he had just found the opening directly behind him.

MUSIC

END

BINGO THE BIRTHDAY CLOWN, episode 2 (19 Nocturne reissue of the day)14 Apr 202300:08:26

"Liberate"
A new Starrette.  And an old one.  And one other... 

"Star Crunch - Star Crunch!
Eat it for breakfast, eat it for lunch!"

Written on a sort of dare from the never-to-be-forgotten Bill Hollweg, the entire 30 script arc was written in about a month, and made... well... more slowly.

Atomic Julie - Run, Little Monster! (part 1 of 2) by Chester S. Geier24 Aug 202100:28:18

In a future ravaged by atomic war, a girl growing up on a farm realizes she has something special.

TW:  tense scenes that could (but don't) turn into sexual assault.

19 Nocturne Boulevard's THE THRICE TOLLED BELL - Reissue19 Aug 202100:40:13

Reissue of one of 19 Nocturne's earliest episodes (from October 2008). Includes notes from Julie about the history and making of 19 Nocturne Boulevard.  (transcript below cast list)

THE THRICE TOLLED BELL
(TW:  Insensitive archaic references and representations of people who might be in a "sanitarium".)

An homage to classic Hammer films.

Cast List
Dracula - Bryan Hendrickson
Van Helsing - Rick Lewis
Wallace - Gene Thorkildsen
Dr. Pettigrew - Michael Faigenblum
Miranda Locksley - Rhys Torres-Miller
Dr. Trevalian - Mathias Rebne-Morgan
Mrs. Farge - Molly Tollefson
Gorvi - Joel Harvey
Britt - Julie Hoverson
Nurse - Krystal Baker

MUSIC
All works composed by Harlan Glotzer (© 2008) [BMI] {harglo@gmail.com}

  • Concertina - Harlan Glotzer
  • Violoncello - Rachael Beaver & Tracy Hagen
  • Toy Piano - Dana Wen & Roger Nelson
  • Clavichord - Dana Wen

    Toy-Box Trio (http://www.myspace.cpm/toyboxtrio)
toyboxtrio@gmail.com

Voices recorded with the assistance of Ryan Hirst of Neohoodoo Studio
Editing and Sound:   Julie Hoverson
Assistant Director:  Reynaud LeBoeuf
19 Nocturne Theme Music:  Kevin MacLeod     (Incompetech.com)
Cover Photo:   Vickie Mathews
             (courtesy of Stock Xchange.com)

"What kind of a place is it?
Why it's an Edwardian insane asylum, can't you tell?"

__________________________________________________

THE THRICE TOLLED BELL intro

 

This was one of the first ten episodes of 19 Nocturne Boulevard that I made and put out, back in late 2008.  I can't recall, specifically, what order I made them in.

I've mentioned previously that Brokensea audio hosted a new spooky episode every day in October for a big spooky month event, and several of my first batch of episodes debuted during that event.

But this episode, in particular, is literally attributable to Bill Hollweg, the master of disaster of Brokensea, he who will ever be missed.  In the couple of months leading up to the October event, he posted a challenge to all comers, to write him a script with the following parameters:

  • It must be in the style of a Hammer Studios Dracula film (the 1960s-70s classics that starred the mesmerizing Christopher Lee);
  • It may only include Dracula and Van Helsing (no other Hammer standard characters or monsters); and
  • It must include a broken bell, a wooden leg, and use the line "It's never done that before!"

...To the best of my memory, anyway.

So I sat down and wrote The Thrice Tolled Bell, but then didn't want to give the script up to anyone else!  I don't recall if he had any other entries, but Bill took it all with a roaring laugh and loved what I made.

I loved including the stock types of characters - the lunkheaded servant; the straight-laced housekeeper; and the sexy chick played by (in this case) my best Britt Eckland voice.  I even snuck in an obviously semi-nude scene, just because I could, and it fit the genre.

This was also my first attempt at commissioning music, since for once I couldn't find *quite* what I wanted among the massive catalog (even back then) of Kevin MacLeod of Incompetech.com, who I can never thank enough for what he makes available for beginning and not for profit storytellers of all kinds.  I don't recall much of the process, but I got one piece of music that I used bits of throughout and it was quite effective.

When I was casting this piece, I still had a limited pool to draw from, since I was trying to stay local and work mainly with people I could actually direct in the studio.  One of my actors, Beverly Poole, was still in high school, and the doctors in this piece were some of her classmates.  But I needed the right voice for Mrs. Farge, the irascible housekeeper.

I was still seeking when I went to Beverly's school play Twelfth Night (which did a lot of gender cross casting, and Beverly played Malvolio to extreme hilarity), and the voice of Fabian (pretty sure that was the role) struck me and after the play I caught up with Beverly and shouted (well, not shouted, but it was excited and urgent) "Bring me that voice!" and Molly Tollefson was recruited, accent and all.

I've never cared much for auditions.  Either doing them or holding them.  It's just me.  I'd always rather grab an actor I've heard, or recruit someone from a show I like than have to evaluate from a bunch of recorded voices.  Plus, I hate being "mean" and having to turn everyone else down.

____________________________________________________

SCRIPT

THE THRICE TOLLED BELL

(an homage to Hammer Studio horror films)

 

TW:  disrespectful references to sanitarium patients and a "halfwit" character, in keeping with the time the script is set as well as the general character types of the Hammer Films franchise. 

...also nudity.

 

Cast (All various British accents except Dracula):

  • Dracula (M), immortal vampire
  • Van Helsing (M), Vampire Hunter
  • Dr. Michael Pettigrew (20s/M), new head of the asylum
  • Miranda Locksley(20s/F), Pettigrew's nurse/fiancée
  • Mrs. Farge (30s/F), housekeeper
  • Gorvi (30s/M), trustee
  • Wallace (40s/M), cheery orderly
  • Dr. Trevalien (40s/M), rival
  • Britt Mecklin (20s/F), hapless blonde
  • Nurse (F any)

OLIVIA      What do you mean, what kind of a place is it?  Why, it's an Edwardian asylum, can't you tell? 

MUSIC

SOUND      HEAVY DOOR CRASHES SHUT

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS - ONE SET LIMPS ODDLY

WALLACE     Right through here - sir, miss.  Now this is one of the saddest cases we have, sir, truth be told.  Once he was the finest psychiatric mind in Europe - perhaps even the world. 

MICHAEL     Always tragic when a good mind snaps.  The same fire that feeds genius also devours and leaves madness in its wake.

WALLACE     Yessir.

MIRANDA     What sort of madness does he suffer from?

WALLACE     Miss?  I dunno that I should--

MICHAEL     Go ahead, Wallace.  Miss Locksley is not merely my fiancée, but a very competent and highly trained psychiatric nurse.  We will be working in tandem to try and bring my late father's asylum into the 20th century.

MIRANDA     [sadly] From what I've seen, it will take quite some doing.

WALLACE     [stiff] Sir, I dunno 'bout that, but your father was a very good and brilliant man - though the last ten years or so, since your mother died, begging your pardon, sir, he seemed to lose interest in everything.

MICHAEL     Did he - not even treat the patients?

WALLACE      He left much of that in the hands of Dr. Trevalian. 

MICHAEL     Why did he not send for me?  I could have spent my residency here instead of in Budapest.  I could certainly have learned as much from father as I did from Dr. Bulovic!

WALLACE     Sir, if you don't mind me speaking above me place, I think your father - well, he didn't want you to see him... like that.

MICHAEL     But I might have been able to help him!

WALLACE     I don't think naught could have helped him - not at the end, there. 

MICHAEL     [British agony] He should have sent for me.

MIRANDA     Dearest.  He did what he thought was best.  I'm sure your father thought very highly of you - otherwise, why should he have left this institution under your care?

MICHAEL     Of course, you're right.  [condescending] Always the practical one.

MIRANDA     One of us needs to be, and you must save your energy for the needs of the patients.

MICHAEL     Well, show us this paragon, Wallace.

WALLACE     Sir?

MICHAEL     The doctor you say was so sadly struck down.

WALLACE     Oh, yes sir - sad it is to see great men crumble. 

SOUND     KNOCK ON HUGE IRON BOUND DOOR

WALLACE     Herr Doktor?  Young Doctor Pettigrew wishes to speak with you.

VAN HELSING     [muffled, behind the door] Enter.

WALLACE     Ah.  Here we go, then. 

SOUND     OPENING LOCKS AND BARS ON DOOR

WALLACE     Dr. Pettigrew, Miss Locksley--  [ta-da!] Doctor Van Helsing.

MUSIC

GORVI     Gorvi done mopping.  Gorvi eat now?

MRS. FARGE     Tis not dinner time yet, ye pillock.  Yer s'posed to muck out the barn t'make room for that motorcar the new head brought wi' 'im.

GORVI     Mo-to-cah?  What is mo-to-cah?

MRS. FARGE     An engine of Satan.  If god had wanted us to speed about in great smoking heaps of metal, he wouldn'a made horses.

GORVI     [wail] Gorvi hungry!

MRS. FARGE     Off wi' ye!  I've no time for this today - must have everything ready for inspection by the new head.  And here's hoping he doesna choose to sack us all.  Shoo!

SOUND     GORVI LEAVES - HEAVY FOOTSTEPS, RICKETY DOOR OPENS, CLOSES

AMBIANCE     OUTSIDE

BRITT     [off, barely audible, singing]  When that I was and a little tiny boy--

GORVI     [leering chuckle]

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS ON GRASS SPEED UP

GORVI     Pretty pretty britty.  Pretty... golden...

BRITT     With a hey-ho, the wind and the rain--

SOUND     FINGERS SQUEAK ACROSS GLASS, TINY WINDOW SLIDES OPEN - SINGING IS NOW CLEAR, WITH SLOSHING OF WATER, BATHING

GORVI     Oh-ho!

BRITT     A foolish thing was but a toy, for the rain it raineth every day...

GORVI     [smothering his delighted chuckles]

SOUND     DRIPPING AS A LEG IS RAISED OUT THE WATER.  BRUSH SCRUBS

BRITT     Hey-ho, the wind and the rain, for the rain it raineth every day...

GORVI     [Bursts out with a shriek of delight]

BRITT     What?  [gasps]  Oh no!

SOUND     HEAVY FOOTSTEPS RUNNING ON GRAVEL

GORVI     [breathing heavily]  No scream, no scream.  Gorvi not bad.  No scream, pretty Britty.

SOUND     SHIFT TO INSIDE

BRITT     [screams piercingly]

SOUND     [INSIDE] DOOR OPENS, FEET RUSH IN

NURSE     What is it miss?

BRITT     Someone was looking at me!  A man!

NURSE     [condescending, fading out]  Of course.  Don't you worry.  We'll sort it all out...

SOUND     SHIFT TO OUTSIDE

SOUND     GORVI RUNNING

GORVI     [panting with exertion]

SOUND     OPENS HUGE OLD DOOR, RUNS IN

MUSIC

MICHAEL     After Wallace's admonitions, this is hardly what I expected.

VAN HELSING     I am quite aware of my condition, my dear doctor Pettigrew.  You're fortunate enough to catch me on a good day. 

MICHAEL     Perhaps you would indulge me with your own diagnosis?

VAN HELSING     Simple, really.  Bouts of severe depression, which, I am ashamed to admit, I... treat... unsuccessfully... with over-use of alcohol.

MICHAEL     Dipsomania?

VAN HELSING     I would consider it more a symptom than a core disease, but you understand how difficult it is to be objective.

MICHAEL      I appreciate your frankness.

MIRANDA     I trust you are comfortable here, doctor - this is hardly a typical cell.  More like a suite in an expensive hotel.

VAN HELSING     Dr. Pettigrew - the elder - was very kind, and understood that reading... helps me to ...moderate... my humors.

MICHAEL     If only more patients could respond to such simple, constructive therapies.  [chuckles]

VAN HELSING     [slight chuckle, indulgent]

MIRANDA     The human mind is a fabulous, complex organ. 

VAN HELSING     It is amazing.

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     ECHOEY ROOM - ABANDONED CHURCH

GORVI     [muttering] Pretty pretty.  Gorvi likes pretty golden Britt.  [heavy sigh]   Britty no like Gorvi.  Gorvi only look.

DRACULA     [creepy echoey voice]  Do you want her?

GORVI     Who... is there?  Please?

DRACULA     [creepy echoey voice]  Help me, and I shall help you in return.

GORVI     Where are you?  Gorvi is alone?

DRACULA     [creepy echoey voice]  Return later and bring a shovel.  I shall show myself.

GORVI     You - new doctor?

DRACULA     [creepy echoey voice]  Do you want this pretty Britt you long for?

GORVI     Oh, want!  [licks his lips]  Yes.

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     DINNER NOISES

SOUND     LARGE PLATTER SET DOWN

MIRANDA     [cold] Thank you, Mrs. Farge. 

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS TAP AWAY

MIRANDA     [anxious]  Are you certain you want to do this, Michael?   I realize your father--

TREVALIAN     They expect it, even look forward to it.  Besides, they should be given the chance to meet the two of you.  You needn't worry, it is only the most stable of the inmates.

SOUND     FEET RETURN

MRS. FARGE     [announcing] Miss Mecklin.

TREVALIAN     Miss Locksley, Dr. Pettigrew, may I present Miss Britt Mecklin.

BRITT     Pleased to meet you, Doctor.  Miss Locksley.

MICHAEL     Charmed.

MIRANDA     Lovely.

TREVALIAN     Will you have a seat?

SOUND     CHAIRS SHIFT AS HE SEATS HER, THEN THEY SIT

MIRANDA     It would be somewhat indelicate to discuss cases during dinner.  There will be time tomorrow to familiarize ourselves--

MICHAEL     Of course.

BRITT     I have nothing to hide.  I have come to realize that it is only in my subconscious that people watch me.  Understanding it is all in my head does not stop it from frightening me, but makes it more bearable.

MICHAEL     [reassuring] We shall work on that.

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     STORMY NIGHT OUTSIDE ECHOEY STONE ROOM

SOUND     SQUEAKY DOOR OPENS, GORVI'S FOOTSTEPS

GORVI     Gorvi brings shovel!

DRACULA     [creepy echoey voice]  Have you light?

GORVI     Gorvi have a candle.

DRACULA     Do you see the bell?

GORVI     Bell? 

DRACULA     The bell.  You must move the bell.

GORVI     No bell.  Gorvi see no bell.

DRACULA     It is metal.  It is large.  Move it, or I shall unleash the fires of hell upon you!

GORVI     Ahhhhh!

SOUND     SHOVEL CLATTERS TO FLOOR, FEET RUN, SLAM

MUSIC

SOUND     WATER INTO METAL TUB.  DISHES BEING WASHED

SOUND     DOOR SLAMS OPEN

MRS. FARGE     Don't you dare--! [surprised] Oh! Lucas!

TREVALIAN     Lena.  I simply couldn't take it any more.  Having to kow-tow to that ... boy doctor and his miserable cold fiancée.

MRS. FARGE     Lucas.  You shoulda been put in charge!

TREVALIAN     I know.  [snarl] Blood runs thick. 

MRS. FARGE     Dr. Pettigrew shouldna've looked over yuir years o'loyalty - Yuir unstinting devotion!

TREVALIAN     There's no time for that now.  We must bide and see what they decide to alter --

SOUND     BACK DOOR SLAMS OPEN, GORVI RUNS IN

MRS. FARGE     What the divvil is wrong with ye, y'idiot? Running about in the rain like a madman!

TREVALIAN     Calm yourself, Lena.

MRS. FARGE     Tis easy for ye to be charitable.  Ye dinna haveta squeeze work outta him like blood from a turnip.  Turnip!  That's what y'are!

GORVI     Gorvi not turnip.  Gorvi scared.

TREVALIAN     What frightened you?

MRS. FARGE     [over her shoulder] Perhaps a slight breeze.

TREVALIAN     Shh.  Gorvi, tell me everything.

MUSIC

SOUND     VAN HELSING'S DOOR UNLOCKS, OPENS

VAN HELSING     Right on time.

WALLACE     'Ave I ever missed? 

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS, WOODEN LEG FOOTSTEPS

WALLACE     Were it a good idea, d'yer think, to tell them you was an alcoholic? 

VAN HELSING     I needed a reason for my presence here that wouldn't require overmuch explanation.  Speaking of spirits, have you--?

WALLACE     [chuckling]  'Course.  Would I let yer down?

SOUND     SITS.  ODD, HEAVY UNSCREWING NOISE

VAN HELSING     Your thoughts on the new administrators?

WALLACE     Well, 'e'll never 'ave an 'appy life, not wit' that one.  She's cold, and no mistake.

VAN HELSING     Truer words were never said.

WALLACE     'Ee seems... well-intentioned... but I don't see 'ow you'll be able to tell 'im much.  Not wi'out proof.

SOUND     BOTTLE PULLED OUT OF WOODEN SHELL

WALLACE     And there y'are.  Better use for me wooden leg, I'll never know.  [hinting] 'Cept the one...

SOUND     BOTTLE OPENS

VAN HELSING     Care to stay for a game of chess before you strap it back on?

WALLACE     Don't mind if I do.

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     STORMY NIGHT

GORVI     There door.  Gorvi no go in again.

TREVALIAN     In the old chapel?  Dr. Pettigrew always insisted it was on the verge of falling in.  [sigh, to Gorvi]  Not safe.  No go in.

GORVI     He say Gorvi move bell.  He yell at Gorvi.

TREVALIAN     Poor halfwit. 

TREVALIAN     Run along back to the kitchen, Gorvi.  No need to wait out here in the wet.

GORVI     Doctor be careful!

TREVALIAN     Of course.  Go on.

SOUND     GORVI RUNS OFF

SOUND     SQUEAKY OLD DOOR OPENS TENTATIVELY

TREVALIAN     Hmm.  Sounder than I expected.

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS, MUFFLES SOUND OF RAIN

SOUND     TAP ON WALL

TREVALIAN     Here's the shovel--

SOUND     PICKS UP SHOVEL

TREVALIAN     And that must be the bell...

SOUND     SLOW FOOTSTEPS

TREVALIAN     That explains a lot - who's ever seen a huge bell sitting on the floor?  Hardly even recognizable under all those cobwebs.  Must have fallen...

DRACULA     [creepy distant whisper, piteous]  Help me.

TREVALIAN     Hello?

DRACULA     Help.  Please.  The bell.  It came down and trapped me.

TREVALIAN     I see.  Hmm.  [thinking]  Wait, the cracks in the flags below it are... covered in dust - that bell fell ages ago!

DRACULA     Please.  Help.

TREVALIAN     Where could that voice be coming from?

DRACULA     [closer whisper, becomes command]  Move the bell.  Anything you want - it will be yours.

TREVALIAN     I doubt you could give me what I truly want.

DRACULA     Oh, yes.  I can give you such things....  Come, close to the crack in the bell, and tell me what it is you... crave.

MUSIC

MICHAEL     Darling?

MIRANDA     Yes, Michael?

MICHAEL     Do you think you can stick it here?

MIRANDA     Of course.  You know I'm fully prepared to take on anything you need me to do.

MICHAEL     I know, but - well, you won't hate it or anything, living in the country like this?

MIRANDA     I shall immerse myself in work.  Just as you will.  Side by side.

MICHAEL     Should I--  May I-- sit next to you there on the settee, then?

MIRANDA     Michael!  We are to be wed in the spring.  I just want to make certain - living here without a proper chaperone, and all-- 

MICHAEL     Of course, darling.  I - I think I shall turn in.  Get an early start in the morning.

MIRANDA     That sounds very wise.

SOUND     TAP ON DOOR

MIRANDA     Yes?

SOUND     DOOR OPENS, MRS. FARGE ENTERS, PICKS UP TRAY

MRS. FARGE     Did ye need anything further tonight?

MIRANDA     No, we were---

SOUND     IN THE DISTANCE, A BELL TOLLS

SOUND     TRAY CLATTERS TO FLOOR

MRS. FARGE     [gasp!]

MICHAEL     Why Mrs. Farge, whatever is the matter?

MRS. FARGE     [haunted]  That be the bell up t'old kirk. 

MICHAEL     Come, now, it's never done that before?

MRS. FARGE     [ominous] Nay - I've been here nigh on 15 years, and that bell has nivver rung.

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS AWAY

MRS. FARGE     [slightly off] But I wouldna go seeking it - not even if m'very life depended on it.

MUSIC

VAN HELSING     [considering]  Mmm.  Check.

SOUND     BELL TOLLS IN THE DISTANCE

WALLACE     Wazzat?

VAN HELSING     What?

WALLACE     [worried] The bell - don't you hear it?

VAN HELSING     Nonsense.  Hmm....  Go and check it.  If it is, we might have a problem on our hands.

SOUND     BELL TOLLS IN THE DISTANCE

WALLACE     I'll get going--

SOUND     QUICKLY STRAPPING LEG BACK ON

VAN HELSING     Wait!  Just in case.

SOUND     BOTTLE SLOSHES

WALLACE     Is it--?

VAN HELSING     It should help.

WALLACE     Every bit does.  Leave the door open, shall I?

MUSIC

BRITT     [waking]  Eyes!  Someone at the window?  [muttered] I will not go look.  I will not--

SOUND     TAPPING AT THE WINDOW

DRACULA     [creepy voice]  Open the window that I may bask in your radiance.

BRITT     [breathing heavily, bosom heaving] It is not real.  I must take my solace in the lord.

SOUND     OPENS DRAWER, TAKES OUT BIBLE

BRITT     God, please give me strength!

SOUND     SOMETHING FLAPS AWAY INTO THE NIGHT, ANNOYED

MUSIC

MICHAEL     Are you certain you'll be all right?  I could bring in a cot - there's a couch in my dressing room--?

MIRANDA     No, Michael, I will be fine.  Kiss me quickly and go to bed.

SOUND     QUICK KISS

MIRANDA     Sleep well.

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS

MIRANDA     [sighs]   Men.  [chuckles] 

SOUND     RAP AT THE WINDOW, BUT SHE DOESN'T NOTICE

DRACULA     [distant, creepy, heavy breathing]  Yessss.

SOUND     LETS HER HAIR DOWN, BEGINS TO REMOVE CLOTHES

MIRANDA     [humming to herself]

SOUND     HEAVY GOWN LAID ON THE BACK OF A CHAIR

SOUND     STEPS APPROACH THE WINDOW

SOUND     TAPPING SOUNDS ON THE GLASS

DRACULA     [creepy whisper]  Open the window.

MIRANDA     Hmm? 

MIRANDA     How vexing.  Tree branch?  We'll see about that--!

SOUND     LATCH TURNS

MUSIC

MIRANDA      [Off, scream!]

MICHAEL     Good god!

SOUND     FLINGS OFF BEDCLOTHES, FOOTSTEPS

MICHAEL     [calling] Miranda!  Darling!  I'll be right there!

SOUND     DOOR FLINGS OPEN, A FEW STEPS.  DOORKNOB RATTLES, POUNDING ON THE DOOR

MICHAEL     [frantic]  Miranda!  Open the door!

SOUND     KNOCKING

MICHAEL     I'm coming in!

SOUND     HEAVY THUMP

MIRANDA     [calling from behind the door, spooky sounding]  Michael?  Whatever are you doing?

MICHAEL     Are - are you - all right?

SOUND     DOORKNOB RATTLES

MIRANDA     [close now] Of course, darling.  I woke from a... strange dream.  Nothing to fret over.

MICHAEL     [off] If... you're... quite certain.

MIRANDA     When am I not?

MICHAEL     [off] Well.  Sorry.  I--

MIRANDA     Go back to bed, dear.  We'll talk tomorrow.

SOUND     [off] MICHAEL'S FOOTSTEPS RECEDE

MIRANDA     [long sigh]  Well...?

DRACULA     [husky] Very good, my most delectable one...

SOUND     SEXY NECK NIBBLING

MIRANDA     [ecstatic gasp]

MUSIC

SOUND     WOODEN LEG STEPS

SOUND     BRISK KNOCK ON A DOOR

WALLACE     Doctor, sir?  It's morning, it is.

MICHAEL     Come on in, Wallace.  I'm up. 

SOUND     DOOR OPENS, STEPS APPROACH

MICHAEL     Is Miranda-- Miss Locksley up?

WALLACE     Feeling poorly, she says.  Wooden even 'ave the drapes open.  Travel don't suit 'er?

MICHAEL     Hmm.  I suppose I might breakfast with Dr. Trevalian, then.

WALLACE     I ain't sure where 'e can be found, sir.  Went out last night and ain't come back. 

MICHAEL     Does he do that often?

WALLACE     Can't say, sir.

MICHAEL     [sigh]  I hate to breakfast alone.

WALLACE       Ahem, sir.  Doctor Van Helsing would be glad of your company.

MUSIC

MRS. FARGE     Gorvi!  Gorvi! Where is that bloody idiot?

SOUND      DOOR OPENS

GORVI     [whimper]

MRS. FARGE     What the divvil is wrong wit' ye, ye mongrel?  Get out here!

GORVI     [whimpering]  Gorvi no like!

MRS. FARGE     Gorvi like breakfast?

GORVI     Yes.  Please.

MRS. FARGE     Gorvi will get up and work, then!

GORVI     Aye, Mrs. Farge.

MRS. FARGE     Go fetch some water from the well, ye brute - and while you're out, you might look where you last left Lucas-- Dr. Trevalien, that is - and see wha' he's been up to all night.

GORVI     No!  No go to old door!  No!

MRS. FARGE     I'll get the whip!

GORVI     [whimper]

SOUND     SCUTTLES OUT THE DOOR

MUSIC

SOUND     VAN HELSING'S DOOR OPENS

VAN HELSING     Come in, dear fellow!  Wallace?

WALLACE     [leans in] Yessir?

VAN HELSING     [muttered] The chapel?

WALLACE     [muttered] Never made it, sir, the inmates was restless last night.

VAN HELSING     Today then?

WALLACE     Better anyway.  [significant]  Better light.

VAN HELSING     I hope so.

SOUND     MICHAEL ENTERS

MICHAEL     Sorry?  Do you mind if I sit down with you?

VAN HELSING     Never meant to exclude you, dear boy.  Simply thought I'd heard something last night that couldn't have been.

MICHAEL     The bell?

VAN HELSING     You heard it as well?

MICHAEL     Of course.  Why?

VAN HELSING     Would you do me an enormous favor?

MICHAEL     If I can - I have a busy day ahead of me, and Miranda's - a bit under the weather.

VAN HELSING     Soon as we finish here, then, go along with Wallace to the old chapel.  Take a look at the bell.  Would you?

MICHAEL     Why?

VAN HELSING     [considers]  Hmm.  That's a tale for after you've looked.  [changing tone, chatty]  Do you, by any chance, play chess?

MUSIC

SOUND     KNOCK ON THE DOOR

MIRANDA     [dead tired] Go away!

MRS. FARGE     Dinna want to start organizing everything?

MIRANDA     Oh, blast. 

SOUND     STUMBLING FEET, DOOR OPENS

MIRANDA     Can you help me?  I feel weak as a kitten.

MRS. FARGE     You do look a wee bit pale.  I'll fetch something hearty to drink.

MIRANDA     [shudder] I couldn't face anything heavy.

MUSIC

AMBIANCE     OUTSIDE

SOUND     WALLACE AND MICHAEL WALKING OUT TO CHAPEL

MICHAEL     Humoring a delusion is not the right answer - in most cases.

WALLACE     You 'eard the bell, too, sir.

MICHAEL     But why go look at a bloody bell?

SOUND     DOOR CREAKS OPEN

WALLACE     Come along, then.

SOUND     FOOTSTEPS GO IN, SLOW, THEN STOP

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS

WALLACE     [quiet but fervent] Oh, my gracious lord.

MICHAEL     What is it?  Oh!  That must have been--

SOUND     DASHING FORWARD

MICHAEL     [urgent] Help me move it!

WALLACE     I fear it's too late for Dr. Trevalian.

MICHAEL     Help me!

BOTH     [grunting and heaving]

SOUND     BELL ROLLS, BUMPS, AND THUMPS INTO A WALL

MICHAEL     Good god!

WALLACE     Sir?

MICHAEL     You're right.  He's gone.  That thing must have fallen and crushed him.

WALLACE     Shouldn't there be more blood, sir?

MICHAEL     Not necessarily.  We'll get him back to the infirmary and take a look.

WALLACE     I'll go for a stretcher, then, shall I?

MICHAEL     Just a moment!  Is this the bell we heard?

WALLACE     Yes, sir.

MICHAEL     [echoey - inside the bell] But there's not even a clapper!

WALLACE     'asn't been rung in decades, sir.

MICHAEL     What are all these markings on the inside?

WALLACE     Wouldn't know, sir.  Though I don't doubt Doctor Van Helsing could 'elp you.

MICHAEL     [coming out] Really - why would he--?

WALLACE     I think 'e was 'ere when the bell fell, sir.

MICHAEL     It must have been sitting here - the clear circle on the ground - but this is odd--

MUSIC

SOUND     DOOR BURSTS OPEN, MICHAEL STORMS IN

MICHAEL     I demand an explanation.  Who, precisely, was trapped under that bell?

VAN HELSING     [calm] What?

MICHAEL     I saw the marks of fingernails!  Trying to scratch a way out!  Wallace said you were there, along with my father.  I want to know what you did.

VAN HELSING     Sit.  [up]  Wallace?

WALLACE     Yes, Sir?

VAN HELSING     Please check on the residents, particularly any comely females.

SOUND     WALLACE GOES OUT, SHUTS DOOR CAREFULLY

VAN HELSING     Now, my boy...

MICHAEL     You're not "mad" at all, are you?  You've lived here all this time--

VAN HELSING     Shh. Shh.  You need to hear this.  15 years ago, your father called upon my services to help him with a rather difficult problem - a rash of unusual deaths and nightmares among the female inmates.  Having had a great deal of experience with such obsessions and delusions, I was able to spot the problem immediately - a vampire.

MICHAEL     [incredulous] A vampire?  One who believes he must steal life from the living? 

VAN HELSING     No delusion - a true creature of the night.

MICHAEL     Preposterous!

VAN HELSING     Humor an old man.  This was not just any vampire, but Dracula - the lord of all vampires, whom I have sworn to destroy. 

MICHAEL     But the bell?

VAN HELSING     We trapped him.  Blessings etched on the inside - some from when it called the faithful, others we added - kept him penned.  Simply putting a stake through his heart, as would do for most vampires, is not sufficient for Dracula.  Far too simple for those who follow the dark arts to summon him back across the dark divide!

MICHAEL     But there must be a way--

VAN HELSING     What do you think I have been researching all these years?  I believe I have the answer, but first we must locate him.

MICHAEL     Why should I believe any of this?

VAN HELSING     Ask your fiancée.

MUSIC

MRS. FARGE     Let me fetch the doctor.

BRITT     Yes.  You can't be too careful!

MIRANDA     [trying to be strong] Nonsense.  I'm just tired.  I'm... not used to the country.

BRITT     Someone was looking into my room last night.

MRS. FARGE     Nonsense.  You know that's all in your mind.

BRITT     No, it was real!  Eyes.  At the window.

MIRANDA     Red eyes?

BRITT     You saw them too?

MIRANDA     [evasive] Don't be silly.  How could it be?

SOUND     DOOR BURSTS OPEN, FEET DASH IN, THEN STOP

MIRANDA     [gasp]

MICHAEL     Oh, goodness.  I'm sorry, but darling, there's something I must ask--

VAN HELSING     [coming on, commanding]  Remove that scarf and show us your neck, if you please.

MIRANDA     [gasps and faints noisily]

SOUND     BODY DROP

MUSIC

VAN HELSING     --resting normally.  Despite the slight anemia, she should recover.  We must watch her very closely, though, my young friend.

MICHAEL     How could this have happened?  Miranda is the most sensible of women--

VAN HELSING     Does it take a fanciful mind to be attacked by a rabid dog?  No!  In fact, a more fanciful mind is often better prepared to ward off such evil.  Witness Miss Mecklin.

BRITT     Me?

VAN HELSING     What did he say to you, at your window?

BRITT     It was just noises - scratching.

VAN HELSING     Come now, there were words - if not in your ears, then in your mind, were there not?

BRITT     [sniffling] It's my subconscious.  Not real.

VAN HELSING     This time, I'm afraid, is much different.  You must help us.

BRITT     He just said "open the window". 

VAN HELSING     But it was definitely a "he?"

BRITT     It is always men who are watching me.

VAN HELSING     Did he say where he might hide by day?

BRITT     No.  I am so sorry!

VAN HELSING     Never mind.  You did well.  Keep your bible close tonight.

BRITT     Oh, yes!

MUSIC

GORVI     [muttering]  No more for Gorvi.  He will sleep now.  No more work.  Gorvi will--

SOUND     DOOR OPENS, QUICK STRUGGLE

DRACULA     [hissing whisper]  Silence!

GORVI     [hand over his mouth]  Mmm!

DRACULA     Shut the door.

SOUND     DOOR SHUTS

DRACULA     You did not release me, but I can overlook that, if you will serve me now.

GORVI     [muffled] Mm-hm! [yes]

DRACULA     Good.  I still know what you want.  The oh-so-lovely miss Britt.

GORVI     [muffled] Mm-hm! [eager yes]

DRACULA     Then this is what you must do...

MUSIC

SOUND     DOORS BEING LOCKED, WINDOW SHUTTERS SECURED

VAN HELSING     I appreciate your humoring me, Michael.

MICHAEL     Of course.

VAN HELSING     Bringing everyone here to my rooms.

MICHAEL     I assume you think we may be safe here?

VAN HELSING     As safe as anywhere else.

MIRANDA     How can we all sleep?

VAN HELSING     You may lie on the couch, if you need to.  Michael and I will remain awake.  On guard.

BRITT     I can help guard as well.

VAN HELSING     Did you bring your bible?

BRITT     I could not find it!

VAN HELSING     Never mind, I think we have whatever we may need.  Wallace?

WALLACE     [grim] Absolutely, sir.

MICHAEL     What if he doesn't come here?

VAN HELSING     He must.  I circled the patient rooms and staff quarters with poppy seeds and salt.  He will never get across that. 

MICHAEL     So he will have to come here, or--?

VAN HELSING     --or starve.

MUSIC     TIME PASSES

VAN HELSING     We can slow him with spells, or stake him through his heart, but to truly banish his soul to the purgatory he so richly deserves, only holy water will suffice - and not a mere sprinkling, a veritable dousing.

MUSIC     TIME PASSES

VAN HELSING     Vampires are irredeemably evil.  The only way to save miss Locksley from this hellish fate is to destroy this monster before she loses the last spark of humanity.  As long as her soul does not depart her body, she can be saved.

MUSIC     TIME PASSES

SOUND     MOST ARE SLEEPING

VAN HELSING     This will be it.  Are you ready?

WALLACE     Can't wait to see how it turns out, sir. 

VAN HELSING     Good man.

SOUND     KNOCK AT THE DOOR

VAN HELSING     Ah...  It begins.

GORVI     [muffled] Gorvi is alone?  Let Gorvi in!

WALLACE     Bloody idiot.

VAN HELSING     You may be more correct than you know.  Wait for my signal.  Michael, wake up, get the ladies into the dressing room, back there.  Whatever you do, do not open the door until you are certain it is morning - you may have to restrain miss Locksley, if Dracula has enough of a hold over her.  Can you?

MICHAEL      Yes, I think so.

VAN HELSING     Move, then.  There's a good lad.

VAN HELSING     Take this--

SOUND     RATTLE OF NECKLACE CHAIN

VAN HELSING     It offers some protection.

SOUND     CROWD GOES OUT, DOOR SHUTS

VAN HELSING     Now.

WALLACE     Right.  Gorvi?  Is there anyone with you?

GORVI     [muffled, but clearly lying] No.  Who would be with Gorvi?

VAN HELSING     [laugh] No one alive.  Throw open the gate.

WALLACE     A'right.  Just a moment.

SOUND     DOOR THUMPS

VAN HELSING     [hissed] Stay back.

SOUND     DOOR SLAMS OPEN, HITS WALLACE

WALLACE     Uhh!

SOUND      BODY DROPS AND SLIDES ACROSS FLOOR

VAN HELSING     Wallace!

WALLACE     uhh...[out cold]

SOUND     HEAVY BOOTS STRIDE CONFIDENTLY INTO ROOM

VAN HELSING     Dracula!

DRACULA     You stand between me and destiny, old man.  Step aside and I shall kill you quickly.

VAN HELSING     Never.  Back, foul fiend!

DRACULA     [hisses]  You believe you can tame me?  I have seared my flesh on your so-clever prison walls so many times, I have scars.

VAN HELSING     And yet, you do not approach.

DRACULA     Only a fool uses his hands to dig when he has a shovel... Gorvi!

GORVI     [flying leap] Master!

SOUND     BODY DROP - CROSS DROPS

VAN HELSING     Unh!

DRACULA     [evil laugh]  And now, my most precious enemy, prepare to meet your well-deserved fate!

SOUND     DOOR SLAMS OPEN

MICHAEL     No!

SOUND     MICHAEL STORMS IN

VAN HELSING     Dammit, boy!  You've ruined it!  Do what you want with me--

DRACULA     Of course, herr doktor!  You have always cared more for others than for yourself.  [commanding, hot] Come to me, my darling!

MIRANDA     [breathless] I must go--!

MICHAEL     No!  Get back!

BRITT     Miss Miranda, you can't!

GORVI     Britt!

MIRANDA     [snarling]  Let me pass, strumpet!

SOUND     SHORT CATFIGHT

MIRANDA     Ugh! [hurling Britt]

SOUND     BRITT ENDS UP IN DRAC'S ARMS

GORVI     [upset] Britt!

DRACULA     A gift?  For me?  You are too kind.

MIRANDA     My love!  You don't want her!

DRACULA     She is merely the aperitif, my dearest darling - [hot] you alone can satisfy me.

MIRANDA     [ecstatic sigh]

DRACULA     Now, my pale blonde flower..

BRITT     [struggles for a moment, then goes limp with a sigh, breathing hard]

SOUND     FANGY NOISE

GORVI     No!  Gorvi wants Britt!

VAN HELSING     Wallace!  Ready!

DRACULA     Imbecile!

SOUND     THUMP AS GORVI HITS DRACULA

SOUND     HEAVY THROW, BODY HITS WALL, NECK CRUNCH

GORVI     [dying noises]

DRACULA     Miranda, show your devotion - come and hold this delectable morsel for me.

SOUND     RUNNING FEET

WALLACE     Yaaaah!

VAN HELSING     Kick him!

DRACULA     [very slight] Oof. 

WALLACE     [struggling]

DRACULA     [chuckles nastily] And now what do you do?  I have your leg.

WALLACE     [triumphant] Yes!

SOUND     CLICK, SMALL EXPLOSION

SOUND     MUCH WATER SPLASHES, HISSING BURNING NOISE

DRACULA     What?  No!  [shrieking in agony] Ahhh!

MICHAEL     Good God!

VAN HELSING     Holy water!. 

DRACULA     But how?  I would have seen a bottle.  Ahh!

VAN HELSING     Wooden leg. 

WALLACE     And a small blasting cap.

DRACULA     Ahh! [receding]

SOUND     LIQUIDY HORRIBLE PUDDLY NOISE

WALLACE     Uh, Sir?  Can I get a hand?

VAN HELSING     Certainly.  I'll even give you a leg up.

MUSIC

END

 

Atomic Julie - Theft by Bill Venable 17 Aug 202100:21:44

Tough question - keep drinking and writing, if your muse is little green men?

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