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How to Plant Story Seeds that Pay Off (Tips from a Developmental Editor) 17 Aug 202500:22:06

Confused about which plot threads to tie up—and which to let dangle? You’re not alone. Today we discuss when to leave plot threads open, how to track plot threads, and planting story seeds, among other ways of fixing story problems. Listen to Rebecca share her plot structure tips and what makes a good writer great! 

Want to know what makes a good writer great? Tune into our writing podcast for authors, where we explore plot structure tips, book editing hacks, and how to self-edit with intentionality. This week’s episode focuses on plot threads, subplots, and story seeds—and how to decide what needs a payoff.

In this episode of the Story Savvy series, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and aspiring fantasy author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] dig into whether you need to resolve everything you foreshadowed—and what to do when you don’t.

In this episode you’ll learn: 

  • How to decide whether to tie up a plot thread or leave it unresolved

  • Best practices for handling open threads in standalone novels vs. series

  • The difference between seeds and subplots—and why it matters

  • How to track emotional payoff and avoid disappointing your readers

  • The editing power of creating simple lists to manage subplots, characters, and setups

If you’ve ever felt like your ending was almost satisfying—but something was missing—this episode is for you.

Recommended Resources

Need a Developmental Editor? hartboundediting.comAuthor’s Alcove Membership: authorsalcove.comFantasy Book Giveaway: AuthorsAlcove.org

Chapters[00:00] Intro[00:27] Understanding Plot Threads[01:38] When Not to Tie Up Plot Threads[03:01] Foreshadowing in Series Writing[05:03] Best Practices for Leaving Threads Open[07:36] Tying Up Loose Ends[09:51] Tracking Seeds and Subplots[13:23] Understanding Seeds vs. Subplots[15:30] Ensuring Payoff for Seeds[18:01] The Importance of Intentionality



Understanding Main Plots and Subplots: Tips from a Developmental Editor!!! 12 Aug 202500:22:29

Feeling tangled in too many storylines? Wondering if your subplot is helping—or hurting—your novel? You’re not alone.Want to know what makes a good writer great? Tune into our writing podcast for authors, where we explore plot structure tips, how to structure a story plot, and book editing hacks. This week’s focus: plot threads and subplots. In this week’s episode of the Story Savvy series, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and aspiring fantasy author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] unravel the confusion around subplots vs. plot threads. You’ll learn how to identify your main plot, what subplots are worth keeping, and how to revise your story so it most satisfies your reader. If you've ever forgotten to tie up a subplot, or tried to juggle too many plotlines and lost your readers along the way—this one's for you.This episode covers:How to figure out which plot is your novel’s backbone–main plotThe difference between plot threads and subplotsWhy less (subplots) is sometimes moreHow to check if a subplot is actually landing with your audienceWhen a subplot might need to be cut altogetherWhether you're editing your manuscript or plotting your next draft, this episode will give you tools to create tighter, more powerful fiction—without sacrificing depth.Recommended Resources:Need a Developmental Editor? Hart Bound EditingAuthor’ Alcove Membership: http://authrosalcove.comFantasy Book Giveaway: AuthorsAlcove.orgChapters[00:00] Intro[01:11] Understanding Main Plots vs. Subplots[04:32] The Importance of Knowing Your Primary Plot[06:04] Defining Plot Threads and Subplots[09:05] Balancing Subplots: Too Many or Too Few?[11:00] Evaluating Subplots During Revision[14:12] Connecting Subplots to the Main Plot[16:05] Common Mistakes in Subplot Integration[20:33] Wrapping Up Subplots, Is It a Must?

Finding POV Mistakes: First Person POV vs Third Person POV18 May 202500:39:07

Struggling with first person POV versus third person POV? Wondering what makes a good writer great or how to improve story writing skills? In this advice-packed episode of 52-Week Story Savvy, editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] teams up with aspiring author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] to help you master your narrative voice.

Together, they explore the pros and cons of different POVs, tenses, and storytelling perspectives—sharing real examples. You’ll learn how your POV choice shapes your reader’s emotional connection, how to avoid common pitfalls like head-hopping, and when it’s okay to break the rules (and how to fix things if you already have).

Rebecca doesn’t just tell you what works—she explains why, so you can make confident, intentional choices that suit your story and genre. Whether you're writing a sprawling epic or a single-POV middle grade, you’ll walk away from this episode feeling more empowered, more prepared, and more excited to edit.

In This Episode:

  • What tense and person choice really say about your story

  • Deep POV vs distant narration: how close is too close?

  • When to add a secondary POV—and when not to

  • Practical self-editing tips for spotting consistency issues

  • The head-hopping trap (and how to avoid it!)

  • Why choosing the right narrator for each scene can transform your book

Recommended Resources:

Writing a Book Blurb: Tips from a Developmental Editor14 May 202500:33:47

Looking for writer improvement and want to know what makes a good writer great? In this episode, Rebecca shares how to edit your book yourself and offers practical fantasy book blurb advice. Unlike typical writing tutorials, she explores how your blurb can actually shape and strengthen your story while you revise.

In this newest installment of 52-Week Story Savvy, editor Rebecca Hartwell (hartboundediting.com) and aspiring author Agnes Wolfe (authorsalcove.com) talk about how writing your blurb early on can bring clarity to your plot, characters, and emotional arc. Whether you're working on a rough draft or tightening up your final revision, this episode helps you align your manuscript with the promises you’re making to readers in your blurb.

You’ll hear Rebecca break down what a blurb is—and what it definitely isn’t—and walk you through how to craft one that captures the soul of your story. She shares her five-step method for writing blurbs that engage readers, expose weak spots in your narrative, and meet genre expectations. For writers who struggle with blurbs (you’re not alone!), Rebecca also recommends Brian Cohen’s How to Write a Sizzling Synopsis as a must-have tool in your writing toolkit.

In This Episode:

  • How to craft a compelling blurb that highlights your story’s conflict, stakes, and emotional drive

  • Why distinguishing a blurb from a synopsis matters and how it affects reader interest

  • A clear five-step process to help you draft, revise, and polish your book blurb

  • Ways to use your blurb as a lens for self-editing and improving story cohesion

  • Common blurb pitfalls to avoid, from overcrowded character lists to tone mismatches

Recommended Resources:

[00:00] Intro

[01:51] What is a blurb—and what isn’t it?

[04:17] When should you write your blurb?

[05:42] Why write a blurb before finishing your book?

[06:34] What resources and steps can help you write a strong blurb?

[14:18] How can your blurb help you reevaluate your story?

[22:28] Is it necessary to write your blurb early in the process?

[29:54] What should you do if your blurb and book don’t match?

How to Structure a Story Plot: Mastering Story Pacing10 May 202500:34:26

Curious about how to structure a story plot to create great pacing? Rebecca reveals what makes a good writer great as she dives into what are some good storytelling techniques, explores how to write a good plot for a story, and offers tips on how to improve story writing skills. 

Today, in this newest episode of 52-Week Story Savvy, Rebecca Hartwell (Hart Bound Editing) and aspiring author Agnes Wolfe (Authors’ Alcove) break down one of the trickiest parts of self-editing: pacing. Whether your story drags or moves too fast, Rebecca offers actionable steps to help you fine-tune your emotional rhythm and keep your readers turning pages.

This episode covers everything from identifying when your pacing is off to knowing how (and where) to fix it. You’ll learn how to map emotional highs and lows, structure your scenes for momentum, and avoid the burnout/boredom trap that so many stories fall into. Plus, Rebecca shares pro editor tips like using visual scene mapping, adjusting chapter structure, and avoiding info-dumping while still delivering rich story detail.

In This Episode:

  • How to create a visual “pacing map” of your novel using a spreadsheet

  • Learn how to ensure every scene moves the story forward

  • How to fix pacing without rewriting your entire book

  • Solving pacing problems

  • Balancing tension with calmer moments. 

Recommended Resources:

[00:00] Intro

[01:28] What Is Pacing?

[03:33]  How Can We Identify Overwriting and Underwriting?

[06:20] How to Know When to Create a Chapter Break, and When to Break Them?

[10:39] How Can We Prevent Our Reader from Getting Bored or Burning Out?

[15:45] What Patterns Should We Have in Emotional Pacing?

[21:52] How Do You Avoid Plodding Along?

[30:43] Actionable Steps To Correct Pacing

Horror Writing Craft & Writing Supernatural Suspense: Beth Castrodale Interview09 May 202500:31:08

What haunts us—and why do we return to those shadows in fiction? Listen to our interview with Beth Castrodale about horror writing craft and writing supernatural suspense 

In this episode of Authors’ Alcove: For Fantasy Writers, I sit down with award-winning author Beth Castrodale to discuss her chilling and emotionally resonant gothic horror novel, The Inhabitants. We explore the art of writing haunted houses and supernatural fiction, how Beth weaves modern themes like the #MeToo movement into the gothic tradition, and the challenges (and joys) of crafting horror stories that linger with readers long after the final page.

Beth shares her writing process, publishing experiences, marketing tips for horror authors, and offers advice for writers ready to take their first step into the horror genre. Plus—a few fun twists along the way, including a haunted house icebreaker and her dream character for our Fantasy Writing Accountability Group!

🔥 Don’t miss our Spring & Summer Book Giveaways at authorsalcove.org—Spring features Sinister Love, and Summer will spotlight The Inhabitants by Beth Castrodale and Angel of Water and Shadow by Tory Gruyon.

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May your quill stay sharp and your imagination boundless.


Tarot and Fiction: Writing about Real Figures with Spark Press Author Susan Wand07 May 202500:28:45

Step into the world of Tarot and Fiction, as we discuss writing about Real Figures with Spark Press author Susand Wands. This historical fantasy author, creator of the Arcana Oracle Series. In this episode of Authors’ Alcove: For Fantasy Writers, we explore how Susan mastered the art of writing about real figures—specifically Pamela Colman Smith, the visionary artist behind the modern tarot deck.

Susan shares how her background in theatre and passion for tarot and fiction led to the creation of this richly detailed trilogy. We also chat about her journey as a Spark Press author, the process behind turning her series into audiobooks with insider audiobook publishing tips, and why visionary fiction deserves a bigger spotlight.

🎁 Her full series is part of our Summer Book Giveaway! Enter to win here:https://kingsumo.com/g/1rj8dz3/summer-giveaway-spotlight-the-arcana-oracle-series-by-susan-wands

🌐 Want to grow as a writer or fantasy reader?Join our membership community for free writing resources and upcoming author events at authorsalcove.com

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How to Do Research for Your Novel: Balancing Facts and Fiction in Genre Writing (Self-Editing)16 Apr 202500:29:36

Today, Rebecca teaches us how to write a fantasy novel for beginners, how to strengthen your plot, and how to edit your book yourself as we explore the importance of research in fiction writing in this latest episode of the 52-Week Story Savvy series.

Rebecca Hartwell, founder of Hart Bound Editing (hartboundediting.com), joins aspiring author Agnes Wolfe from Authors’ Alcove (authorsalcove.com) for a fun and insightful conversation about what makes a story really work. They dive into character development, common research traps, and how to create an immersive, believable story without overloading your reader with details.

In this episode, Rebecca shares practical advice on spotting knowledge gaps, avoiding research rabbit holes, and weaving facts into your story without losing the magic of storytelling. She also offers tips on balancing authenticity with creativity and handling sensitive cultural details with care.

  • When and how to begin researching your story

  • How to avoid research rabbit holes that stall your writing

  • Balancing accuracy with storytelling in fantasy

  • Common research mistakes (and how to fix them)

  • How much research you really need for mythical creatures and worldbuilding

  • Writing historically or culturally accurate settings without sounding like a textbook

  • The biggest pitfalls of over-researching vs. under-researching

Whether you're still brainstorming or knee-deep in revisions, these tips will help you strike the perfect balance between research and creativity — and keep your writing moving forward.

In This Episode:Recommended Resources:

[00:00] Intro

[01:36] Understanding When to Start Researching

[02:34] Why Even Experts Need to Double-Check Their Knowledge

[03:30] How to Identify and Correct Knowledge Gaps in Your Writing

[06:20] The Role of Research in Fantasy Worldbuilding

[07:38] Choosing a Historical or Technological Basis for a Fantasy World

[11:31] Researching Mythical Creatures While Maintaining Creative Freedom

[13:29] How to Portray Different Cultures and Time Periods with Respect

[15:33] Common Research Mistakes Writers Make and How to Avoid Them

[23:08] Finding the Right Balance Between Research and Writing

How to Create a Compelling Villain: Advice from a Developmental Editor! (Self-Editing Series)14 Apr 202500:33:12

Today, Rebecca teaches us how to write compelling villains, how to write character arcs, and how to make your character strong as we explore crafting compelling antagonists in this latest episode of the 52-Week Story Savvy series. Rebecca Hartwell, founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com], joins aspiring author Agnes Wolfe from Authors’ Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com] to break down how to write a good protagonist, avoid weak villains, and ensure your antagonist drives the plot effectively.

This episode explores how to craft an antagonist that truly challenges the protagonist, strengthens the story’s stakes, and prevents conflict from feeling contrived. Rebecca shares expert insights on building motivation, avoiding cliché villains, and ensuring the antagonist actively opposes the hero while maintaining depth and complexity.

  • The biggest mistakes writers make when creating antagonists—and how to fix them.

  • How to write a compelling antagonist that drives conflict and tension.

  • Avoiding one-dimensional or cartoonish villains.

  • Ensuring the antagonist pushes the protagonist toward meaningful growth.

  • Balancing villainous motivations to make them believable and engaging.

  • Why a strong antagonist makes the protagonist’s journey more satisfying.

  • How to craft an antagonist that resonates with readers while keeping them truly dangerous.

Whether you’re writing your first book or refining an existing manuscript, these strategies will help you build an antagonist that elevates your story and keeps readers engaged.

Intro 

What Makes a Great Antagonist?

Does an Antagonist Have to Be Like Sauron or Voldemort?

How Is Creating a Classic Villain Different from Other Antagonists?

Should I Have Just One Main Antagonist?

How Do I Ensure My Antagonist Effectively Pushes the Protagonist?

Should a Fantasy Villain Be Sympathetic or Purely Evil?

How Do I Handle an Antagonist’s Motivations Over a Series?

Does Genre Influence the Type of Antagonist I Should Use?

Should a Villain Believe They Are the Hero of Their Own Story?

What Are the Biggest Mistakes When Writing an Antagonist?

This Episode Covers:Recommended Resources:

Discussing Co-Writing, Fantasy World-Building, and Trad Publishing with AnnMarie Knorr Fischer!!12 Apr 202500:37:01

I had so much fun talking with AnnMarie about her fantasy story inspiration and fantasy realm building, as well as how to co write a book. Discussing fantasy world-building is always such a joy, especially as we discussed how to get traditionally published with a small press. In this episode of Authors' Alcove: For Fantasy Writers, host Agnes Wolfe sits down with AnnMarie Knorr Fischer, co-author of Arcane Assassin: Path of Annihilation, the thrilling first book in The Raven Naelo Saga. This epic fantasy adventure features rogue warriors, necromancers, soul-stealing artifacts, and an unforgettable trip into the forbidden Fey Realm.AnnMarie shares what it’s like co-writing fantasy with her wife Rachel, how their DnD campaigns sparked the story, and why collaboration makes storytelling richer. You'll get insights into character development, publishing with Sunbury Press, and building immersive worlds—plus a few behind-the-scenes moments that writers won’t want to miss.💥 Be sure to:Explore our membership site for fantasy writers & readers: https://authorsalcove.comEnter our Spring Book Giveaway: https://authorsalcove.orgSupport us on Patreon: https://patreon.com/authorsalcoveJoin the Facebook Fantasy Writers Accountability Group: https://www.facebook.com/groups/fantasywritingaccountability/member-requests📚 Grab Arcane Assassin: Path of Annihilation from Sunbury Press:https://www.sunburypress.com/collections/r-a-fischer/products/arcane-assassin-path-of-annihilation?variant=42501595725917Subscribe for more interviews, giveaways, and deep-dives into the magic behind the words.

Author Events, Indie Romance and Finding Your Readers with Chelle Cypress (My Fave Indie Author!!!)04 Apr 202500:36:23

Author Chelle Cypress returns to the podcast to talk about her romantasy series, Unmasking the Curse, her emotional journey through writing, and the upcoming sequel in the Aralian Series. We explore how writing helped her through sobriety, how she balances fantasy and romance, and what it’s really like marketing your book as an indie author.Chelle is the creator of the 50 Must-Read Indie Romantasies list on chellecypress.com, and she’s been making waves at author events like Prineville’s May Market. If you’re an aspiring or established indie author, this episode is packed with insights!Want to connect with our guests?🌿 Chelle Cypress (Romantasy Author):https://chellecypress.com📚 Authors’ Alcove – Book Community + Podcast:https://authorsalcove.comhttps://authorsalcove.org🖋️ Need a developmental editor?Check out Rebecca Maeve Hartwell at https://hartboundediting.com

Mastering Character Arcs: How to Create Meaningful Growth 13 Mar 202500:30:39

Today, we explore how to write a fantasy novel for beginners, Protagonist growth, and how to write character arcs in this episode of the 52-Week Story Savvy series. Host Rebecca Hartwell—founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com]—joins aspiring author Agnes Wolfe from Authors’ Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com] to discuss how to write good character development, what makes a good writer great, and what are some good storytelling techniques, helping writers craft stronger, more compelling stories.

Too often, protagonists either change too little, too quickly, or in ways that feel unearned. Today, we tackle how to ensure your protagonist evolves in a way that feels organic, compelling, and deeply satisfying to readers. We also discuss how to balance external action with internal growth, prevent villains or side characters from stealing the spotlight, and avoid making things too convenient for your hero.

  • The most common character arc mistakes—and how to avoid them.

  • How to ensure your protagonist grows meaningfully by the climax.

  • Tips to make your character’s transformation feel natural, not forced.

  • Why protagonists must be the driving force behind the story’s resolution.

  • How to handle prophecy without making character growth feel predetermined.

  • Avoiding “plot armor” and making sure stakes feel real.

  • How to add fresh twists to traditional character arc structures.

If you’re crafting a protagonist-driven story and want to make sure their journey is as compelling as possible, this episode is packed with practical advice to elevate your writing.

Story Grid – [https://storygrid.com]Developmental Editing Services (Expert Feedback) – [https://hartboundediting.com]Authors’ Alcove Membership Site – [http://authorsalcove.com]Book Giveaway – [http://authorsalcove.org]

Have questions about character arcs? Drop them in the comments, and we might answer them in a future episode!

[00:00] How Does This Episode Help Improve Your Story?[01:36] What Are the Most Common Blind Spots and Mistakes in Character Arcs?[03:13] How Can You Ensure Your Protagonist’s Growth is Sufficient for the Climax?[04:23] How Can You Demonstrate That the Protagonist’s Growth is Earned?[07:58] How Can You Avoid Rushed or Forced Character Growth?[14:14] How Do You Prevent Secondary Characters or Villains from Overshadowing the Protagonist?[17:49] How Can You Avoid Convenience and Plot Armor in Your Protagonist’s Journey?[24:03] How Can You Ensure a Character Growth Arc Feels Fresh Rather Than Formulaic?[27:35] How Do You Balance Prophecy and Character Growth in a Protagonist’s Arc?


Impactful Storytelling: External Consequences vs. Internal Processing 05 Aug 202500:31:36

Do you ever wonder what makes a good writer great? In this week’s writing podcast for authors, we dig into one of the most overlooked tools in self-editing: consequences and emotional processing. Whether you’re looking for book editing hacks, story pacing strategies, or help with editing fantasy novels, Episode 24 of the Story Savvy Series tackles it all. In this episode, we’re diving into one of the most powerful ways to level up your writing—making sure your big story moments actually land. If you’ve ever written a scene that felt important but somehow fell flat, this one’s for you.

Developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell (hartboundediting.com) and fantasy author Agnes Wolfe (authorsalcove.com) team up to explore emotional fallout, plot consequences, and how to make character reactions feel real—without slowing down your pacing.

From plot twists to quiet turning points, you’ll get practical, down-to-earth advice for writing emotional characters, deepening your scenes, and making your story hit harder in all the right places.


They also discuss:

  • What makes a moment “big” in the first place

  • How to tell if a scene is missing impact

  • When it’s okay to delay consequences or emotional fallout

  • Why a small tweak can save a flat scene

  • What to do if a character’s reaction feels off

  • The balance between emotional weight and story momentum

If you want to write stories where every moment matters—and every turning point leaves a mark—this episode will help you get there.

Recommended Resources:Hart Bound Editing Services – [https://hartboundediting.com]Authors’ Alcove Membership Community – [http://authorsalcove.com]Book Giveaway – [http://authorsalcove.org]

[00:00] Intro[01:12] Checking for consequences in every scene[03:50] Defining big events in a story[05:25] When big moments don’t impact the plot[07:01] Using consequences to strengthen weak scenes[10:43] The importance of consequences and processing[12:20] Making consequences appropriate in context[14:53] Adding more external consequences[16:53] Genre differences in consequences and processing[20:35] Delaying consequences and processing[28:16] External vs. internal follow-up for big events

Discussing Book Adaptation Process with His Dissonance Series 11 Mar 202500:36:05

In this fantasy writing podcast, we discuss his Dissonance series while we talk about his book adaptation process and world building tips. It was fun as we dove into post-apocalyptic storytelling, dystopian world-building, and alien invasion fiction with Aaron Ryan, bestselling author of the Dissonance series and The End: Alpha.

Aaron shares his process for crafting suspenseful survival narratives, developing terrifying yet compelling antagonists, and exploring themes of justice, faith, and resilience in dystopian worlds. We also discuss his upcoming streaming adaptation of Dissonance and how real-world fears influenced his chilling gorgon creatures.

In this episode, we explore:

✨ Creating immersive dystopian worlds with realistic survival stakes

✨ The inspiration behind the gorgons — a terrifying species that paralyzes its prey telepathically

✨ Writing complex characters like Sergeant Cameron “Jet” Shipley and Constantine Goodfellow

✨ Balancing action-packed storytelling with deep emotional stakes

✨ Navigating the adaptation process — what it’s like having your book pitched to streaming platforms

✨ Writing Christian dystopian fiction — blending faith and suspense in The End: Alpha

✨ World-building tips for writing believable post-apocalyptic societies

✨ The challenges of crafting high-stakes narratives across multiple books

✨ Fun facts about Aaron’s creative process — from plotting methods to favorite writing routines

Want to read Aaron Ryan’s books? The Dissonance series and The End: Alpha are available now — plus, don’t forget to check out the Dissonance adaptation news!

Connect with Aaron Ryan:

Explore the Dissonance series: dissonancetheseries.com

Discover The End: Alpha: thisisnottheend.com

Follow Aaron on social media: dot.cards/authoraaronryan

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Subscribe, follow, and leave a review — may your quill stay sharp, your imagination boundless, and may you always outrun the gorgons.

Fantasy World-Building & Time Travel: Writing Realistic Fantasy with Jennifer Marchman05 Mar 202500:31:45

In this fantasy writing podcast, we dive into fantasy world-building, time travel fiction, and historical fantasy writing with Jennifer Marchman, author of The Mender Trilogy. Jennifer shares her process for fantasy novel research, balancing historical accuracy with speculative elements, and crafting alternative timelines that feel both immersive and real. We also discuss how her horse archery skills have influenced her action-packed combat scenes.In this episode, we explore:✨ World-building—how Jennifer builds immersive historical and fantasy settings✨ Researching historical accuracy & cultural representation in fantasy✨ The challenge of writing alternative timelines & multiverse storytelling✨ How horse archery shaped her action scenes (yes, she’s done it in real life!)✨ The writing & revision process for a time-traveling fantasy series✨ Beta readers vs. critique groups—which is better for authors?✨ Psychology in character development—writing PTSD & deep emotional arcs✨ Marketing & indie publishing—strategies that work for fantasy authors✨ Fun horse archery stories—has she ever shot an arrow from a galloping horse? Want to read The Mender Trilogy? It’s part of the Spring Book Giveaway at AuthorsAlcove.org! Browse tons of books and win a copy today!🔗 Connect with Jennifer Marchman: Check out The Mender Trilogy and follow her for more historical and fantasy insights.Get More from Authors’ Alcove!Website: AuthorsAlcove.comJoin the Fantasy Writing Community: Facebook GroupBook Giveaways: AuthorsAlcove.orgSupport the podcast & get exclusive content: Patreon✨ Subscribe, follow, and leave a review—let’s keep the fantasy magic alive!

How to Write a Great Climax: Strengthening your Plot for a Powerful Payoff04 Mar 202500:30:54

Agnes uncovers how to write a great climax, how to strengthen your plot, and how to write good character development in this ninth episode of the 52-Week Story Savvy series. Developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell—founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com]—joins aspiring author Agnes Wolfe from Authors’ Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com] to explore how to build suspense in a story and break down the essential elements of story structure for novels. Together, they examine what makes good character development and share plot development rules that help writers craft climaxes with powerful payoffs, ensuring their protagonist earns their resolution. Whether you’re wondering how to become a better fiction writer or how to edit your book yourself, this episode is packed with expert advice to help you turn your good story into a great one.

They break down how to ensure your protagonist’s choices shape the story, why stakes and consequences matter, and how to craft an arc that feels natural yet transformative. You’ll learn how to avoid passive protagonists, ensure character actions align with story themes, and create turning points that resonate emotionally.

This episode covers:

  • How to make your protagonist’s actions drive the plot.

  • Why strong character choices are key to an impactful story.

  • Common character arc pitfalls and how to fix them.

  • How different genres approach character growth.

From first drafts to final edits, these expert strategies will help you craft a story that keeps readers engaged from page one to the final scene.

Recommended Resources:Story Grid – [https://storygrid.com]Developmental Editing Services – [https://hartboundediting.com]Authors’ Alcove Membership Site - [http://authorsalcove.com]Book Giveaway - [http://authorsalcove.org]

Have a question about character arcs? Let us know in the comments, and we’ll answer it in a future episode!

[0:00] Introduction

[00:53] What defines a climax and resolution?

[01:39] Should genre affect how readers feel about conflict?

[03:15] What’s the biggest mistake writers make in climaxes?

[09:20] How do we prevent the protagonist from being overshadowed?

[12:50] How can we tell if our protagonist has grown enough?

[14:40] How do I know if my climax is big enough?

[17:52] How do we balance foreshadowing without over-explaining?

[24:28] How do we know if the global crisis resolution worked?

[27:28] How do we ensure the resolution satisfies readers?

How to Strengthen Your Plot with the Pivotal Choice: Advice from a Developmental Editor27 Feb 202500:25:40

Want to know how to strengthen your plot with a powerful pivotal choice. Agnes Wolfe asks advice from a developmental editor on how to structure a story plot, strengthen your plot, and craft good character development in fiction. 

In this eighth episode of the 52-week Story Savvy series, Rebecca—founder and host of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com]—shares in-depth insights alongside Agnes Wolfe, aspiring writer and host of Authors’ Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com].

This episode explores story structure for novels and how to make your protagonist’s most critical choice meaningful, ensuring it aligns with your story’s theme and message while driving the plot forward. Learn why the global crisis is one of the most important turning points in your book, how to structure it effectively, and what mistakes to avoid. Whether you're outlining, drafting, or revising, these expert strategies will help you become a better fiction writer and turn your good story into a great one.

  • How to craft a high-stakes global crisis that resonates with readers.

  • Why your protagonist’s biggest choice should tie into your story’s theme and message.

  • How to prevent secondary characters from overshadowing your protagonist in key scenes.

  • Common plot structure mistakes and how to fix them.

Rebecca also shares insights on avoiding passive protagonists, ensuring the global crisis is the heart of the story, and how different genres approach this major turning point. Whether you’re on your first draft or final revision, this episode is packed with actionable writing tips to help you tell a stronger, more engaging story.

Have questions about self-editing or storytelling? Drop them in the comments, and we’ll answer them in future episodes!

This episode covers:Recommended Resources:[00:00] Intro[00:00] What If My Protagonist, Can’t Make the Big Choice? [00:00] What Happens if the Secondary Character Becomes the Protagonist? [00:00] How Does My Protagonist’s Choice Affect the Theme of My Story? [00:00] Did I Choose the Right Path for My Protagonist?[00:00] Did My Story Choice Work? [00:00] Is My Pivotal Choice Satisfying?[00:00] Should the Global Crisis be Considered at the Scene Level?

How to Structure a Novel Plot: Beginning, Middle, and End Story Structure19 Feb 202500:30:29

Agnes Wolfe asks advice from a developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell on how to structure a novel plot, strengthen your plot, and edit your book yourself. In this seventh episode of the 52-week Story Savvy series, Rebecca, founder and host of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com], shares expert insights alongside Agnes Wolfe, host of Authors’ Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com].

This episode focuses on essential storytelling techniques, including plot development rules, crafting a strong beginning, middle, and end, and how to become a better fiction writer. Whether you’re outlining, drafting, or editing, these strategies will help elevate your novel.

  • What makes a good fantasy story stand out in a crowded genre?

  • How to write good character development and avoid common pitfalls.

  • Best practices for self-editing to refine pacing and clarity.

Rebecca also offers advice from a developmental editor on making your novel more engaging, avoiding structure mistakes, and fine-tuning your storytelling. Whether you’re working on your first draft or polishing a final manuscript, this episode is packed with actionable writing tips.

Rebecca’s Recommended Resources:Story Grid https://storygrid.comDevelopmental Editing Services (Expert Feedback):[https://hartboundediting.com

Have questions about self-editing or writing in your genre? Drop them in the comments, and we’ll answer them in future episodes!

Episode Timestamps:

[00:00] Intro

[01:30] What Does It Really Mean to Have a Beginning, Middle, and End?

[03:53] How Do Different Act Structures Impact Storytelling?

[05:10] When Does One Act End, and the Next Begin?

[09:51] What Makes a Powerful Beginning?

[12:33] How Can I Prevent a Boring Middle?

[16:39] How Can I Be Sure My Ending is Satisfying?

[19:38] Are Cliffhangers a Good Idea or Frustrating for the Reader?

[22:50] How Do I Know if My Story Needs a Complete Structural Change?

[27:42] How Do I Know if My Story Is Well Structured? 


A Dark Fantasy Author Interview with Spencer Hixon on ADHD and Writing19 Feb 202500:24:55

In this fantasy writing podcast, we had the opportunity to talk about mythology in fiction in this dark fantasy author interview with our incredible guest: Spencer Hixon, author of A Sinister Love, a dark fantasy novel with unique psychological twists and deeply human themes. We’ll dive into how he balances writing, fatherhood, and ADHD—and how his experiences shape his stories. Plus, he has a new book on the horizon, Fate & Fortune, coming out May 1! Stay tuned for insights into character development, indie publishing, and the psychology of fantasy storytelling.

In this episode, we explore:✨ Psychological depth in fantasy and how Spencer balances realism and magicHow ADHD influences his writing process and creativityCrafting characters with real mental health struggles, like PTSD and depressionThe significance of mythology and unique names in his booksNavigating the indie publishing world and working with a small pressThe challenges and rewards of narrating his own audiobooksHyperphantasia vs. Aphantasia: How mental imagery affects storytellingThe time travel mechanics in Fate & Fortune and how they shape the plotFun stories from being an identical twin—does he ever swap places?What’s next for Spencer, and why you should keep an eye on his work!

Plus, Spencer answers a bonus mystery question—which one of his characters would he invite to dinner and why?

🔗 Connect with Spencer Hixon: Follow him on Instagram, check out his website spencerhixon.com, and grab a copy of A Sinister Love! Blog: http://yetanotherwritersblog.blogspot.com

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The Art of Worldbuilding: Myrenne Mae on Fantasy Writing12 Feb 202500:35:28

In this episode ofThe Writing Corner with Authors' Alcove, we sit down with Myrenne Mae, the acclaimed fantasy author and guest co-host for this month'sMeet the Author Book Club. Join us as we dive into an in-depth discussion about the enchanting world of her latest work, her creative writing process, and the themes that inspire her storytelling. We'll also touch on what it's like to step into the shoes of a co-host for the first time.

This episode is packed with insightful conversation, behind-the-scenes stories, and inspiration for writers and fantasy lovers alike. Don't miss out on the lively dialogue as we explore the intersection of fantasy, magic, and the art of storytelling!

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Discussing Fantasy World Building with Realm Awards Finalist Avily Jerome11 Feb 202500:30:38

Agnes Wolfe and Avily Jerome, a Realm Awards Finalist, have a great discussion, while sharing fantasy storytelling techniques and discussing fantasy world building. As we dive into the thrilling world of urban fantasy with bestselling author Avily Jerome! Avily, the mastermind behindThe Breeding and over a dozen supernatural fantasy books, is also a freelance editor and mentor helping writers bring their stories to life.

In this episode, we explore:✨ Thepantser writing method and how Avily crafts unexpected plot twists✨Building urban fantasy worlds that feel both magical and real✨ Thebalance of writing and family life as a mom of five✨Common editing mistakes and how to avoid them✨Supernatural themes and how to keep them fresh✨ The impact ofThe Breeding being aRealm Awards finalist✨ Unique hobbies, liketrolling scammers and sword fighting as a pirateIndie marketing strategies and the best ways to reach readers✨ Engaging with readers onInstagram, Facebook, and TikTok

Plus, Avily answers abonus mystery question—which one of her characters would she invite to dinner and why?

🔗Connect with Avily Jerome: Follow her on Instagram @avilyjeromebooks, check out her TikTok, and visit her Facebook page. http://spencerhixon.com http://yetanotherwritersblog.blogspot.com

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Advice from a Developmental Editor: How to Know If Your Book Is the Right Length11 Feb 202500:33:21

Today’s episode will tell youhow to become a better fiction writer,how to edit your book yourself, andhow to strengthen your plot. Today I got expert advice from a developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell of Hart Bound Editing. We discuss how to make informed decisions about story structure, pacing, and length.

In episode six of the Story Savvy Self-Editing Series, the Hart Bound Editing Podcast partners with Authors' Alcove to break down the key factors that determine whether a book should be shortened, expanded, or divided into multiple volumes, by understanding pacing, novel structure, and much more. 

This 52-week series is designed to guide writers through the self-editing process with confidence. Agnes Wolfe, host of Authors' Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com], asks critical questions to Rebecca Hartwell, a developmental editor and founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com]. Together, they discuss:

  • How to evaluate whether your book should be split into multiple parts

  • Strategies for identifying and removing unnecessary content

  • How pacing and structure impact reader engagement

  • What to consider when expanding a story without adding fluff

Rebecca provides expert insights on preserving the integrity of your story while improving its structure, and Agnes shares her experiences as an aspiring author navigating the editing process.

How to Determine the Right Book Length – Insights from Rebecca: [https://hartboundediting.com]Writing with Purpose – Tips from Agnes Wolfe: [http://authorsalcove.com]

Have thoughts or questions on book length and structure? Leave a comment, and Rebecca and Agnes may address them in an upcoming episode.

[00:00] Intro

[01:08] Is My Story One Cohesive Narrative or Multiple Stories?

[05:05] Is My Story Too Long or Too Short?

[08:27] How Can I Find Out the Ideal Word Count for My Novel?

[10:47] How Do I Know When My Book Needs to Be Broken Down Into Two or More Parts?

[14:25] How Do I Know When My Book Needs Slimmed Down?

[18:48] Where Do I Split My Book, If I Decide to Turn My Novel Into Two?

[20:25] What If My Novels Are Too Short Once I Split My Big Novel Into Two?

[22:38] If My Story Feels Too Short, What Can I Add, Without Adding Fluff?

[24:57] If My Story Feels Too Long, What Can I Take Away?

[27:18] How Do I Know If I Have Good Pacing?


Editing with Heart: Keeping the Soul of the Story Intact (Story Savvy Self-Editing Series) 06 Feb 202500:27:57

What makes a good writer great? How can I improve my storytelling skills? These are just a couple questions I got answered when I asked foradvice from a developmental editor Rebecca Hartwel of Hart Bound Editing as we discussed how to protect our most beloved parts of our story, during the editing process. 

In episode 5 of the Story Savvy Self-Editing Series, the Hart Bound Editing Podcast joins forces with Authors' Alcove to explore the importance of protecting your story’s core elements during revisions, and making sure that you know what your non-negotiables are, so that your final piece is a story that you love. 

This 52-week series is designed to help writers navigate self-editing with confidence, providing tools and insights to turn a good story into a great one. Agnes Wolfe, host of Authors' Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com], asks key questions to Rebecca Hartwell, a developmental editor and founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com]. Together, they discuss how knowing your non-negotiables can make feedback less overwhelming and ensure your story stays true to your vision.

  • Why defining your non-negotiables helps you stay connected to your story.

  • How to accept feedback without compromising what’s most important to you.

  • Practical strategies to refine your story while maintaining its heart.

Rebecca shares expert guidance on setting creative boundaries while staying open to improvements, while Agnes provides relatable insights from an aspiring author’s perspective.

Have questions about defining your non-negotiables? Drop them in the comments, and Rebecca and Agnes may answer them in a future episode!

In this episode, they explore:Recommended Resources:[00:00] Intro[01:14] What Are Non-Negotiables?[02:32] Why Is It Important to Know Your Non-Negotiables?[04:20] How Big Should I Make My Edits?[06:22] What If My Story Strays from What Is Special to Me?[12:32] What Questions Should I Ask to Decide If a Scene Stays?[15:46] How Do I Know If I Have Scenes That Take Away from What Is Important to Me?[17:51] How Can I Refine My Story to Better Showcase the Elements I Am Most Passionate About?[19:37] How Do We Handle Negative Feedback About What We Love?

Plot Twists: Are You Making These Mistakes? (Self-Editing Tips from a Developmental Editor) 29 Jul 202500:29:55

Do you want to know what makes a good writer great? Today in our writing podcast for authors, we discuss how to write a great plot twist and how to spot plot twist mistakes

In episode 23 of the Story Savvy Series, we explore how to masterfully build and edit plot twists that hook your readers and shift your story’s path. So, let’s join together as we unravel the secrets of twisty storytelling. Developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] reveal how to transform surprising moments into satisfying turning points.

This week in the 52-Week Story Savvy self-editing series we break down how to execute genre-specific twists that align with character arcs and pacing. Whether you're planning your midpoint surprise or final reveal, this episode offers the insight you need to make it land.

They also discuss:

  • How to balance big twists with smaller story surprises

  • The dangers of deus ex machina endings

  • How to recognize a well-executed twist

  • Why a protagonist’s belief system matters

  • The role of POV in misdirecting readers

  • Crafting foreshadowing that only makes sense after the twistIf you want your twists to feel earned—not forced—this episode is your blueprint for creating "surprising but inevitable" reveals.

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Chapters: 

[00:00] Intro[01:06] What is a plot twist?[04:40] Do genres shape twist size?[07:57] When should twists happen?[10:20] What ruins a twist?[12:19] How to foreshadow well?[15:38] Was the twist effective?[19:53] Too many twists?[22:10] What do twists affect?[24:22] Great twist or not?


How to Write a Novel That Sells: Emotional Storytelling & Book Marketing Tips with Lana McAra05 Feb 202500:27:37

Are you ready to learn how to write a novel that sells and discover book marketing strategies beyond social media? 📚 In this episode of Authors' Alcove: For Fantasy Writers, host Agnes Wolfe sits down with bestselling author Lana McAra to discuss the power of emotional storytelling, marketing your book without relying on social platforms, and how to craft stories that truly resonate with readers.

Lana shares insights from her comprehensive guide, How to Write a Novel That Sells, which goes beyond the craft of fiction and dives deep into marketing tactics for authors. Whether you're a new writer or a seasoned author, you won't want to miss these actionable tips for crafting compelling stories and reaching your ideal audience.

💬 We want to hear from you! Share your thoughts in the comments below. What questions would you ask Lana McAra about writing and marketing your book?

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Unlocking the Heart of Your Story: Writing Tips 30 Jan 202500:41:21

Want to know what makes a good writer great? Stay tuned to learn how self editing your novel leads to writer improvement, while we uncover how to find the central message of a story. In the 4th episode of the Story Savvy Self-Editing Series, the Hart Bound Editing Podcast teams up with Authors' Alcove to help writers uncover the heart of their story or the story’s message.

This 52-week series is designed to guide writers through the self-editing process, offering tools and insights to turn a good story into a great one. Agnes Wolfe, host of Authors' Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com], brings questions to Rebecca Hartwell, a developmental editor and founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com]. Together, they share practical tips and strategies to help authors refine their narratives and deepen their stories’ impact.

In this episode, they explore:

Why identifying the heart of your story is key to resonating with readers.

How to pinpoint the core event, character journey, and overarching message.

How focusing on these elements during self-editing can sharpen your storytelling.

Rebecca dives into actionable advice for brainstorming and refining your story’s deeper themes, sharing her proven techniques for aligning plot, characters, and theme. Agnes adds her perspective as an aspiring author, providing relatable insights to encourage writers at every stage.

Recommended Resources:

Refining Your Story’s Core: Professional tips from Rebecca: [https://hartboundediting.com]

Fantasy Writing Inspiration: Practical advice from Agnes Wolfe: [http://authorsalcove.com]

Do you have questions about defining your story’s heart? Share them in the comments, and Rebecca and Agnes will address them in a future episode!

[0.00] Intro

[03:52] What is the Heart of the Story?

[05:24] What is the Double Factor Problem?

[07:57] Is the Heart of the Story the Same as the Message and “North Star”?

[08:36] When Should We Know the Heart of the Story?

[12:37] When Writing a Series, Should Themes be Different?

[14:35] What if the Heart of Your Story Does Not Fit the Traditional Elements?

[24:53] How Does Knowing the Heart of the Story Help Us?

[30:19] How Do Symbols and Imagery Impact the Heart of the Story?

[35:17] Do We Really Need to Know the Heart of Our Story?

[42:24] What Questions Should You Ask to Draw Out the Heart of the Story?

Decoding Genre: The Story Savvy Self-Editing Series: (Meeting Reader Expectations) 22 Jan 202500:26:45

Agnes Wolfe seeks advice from a developmental editor, Rebecca Hartwell where they explore writing advice for fantasy authors, including meeting genre requirements and the difference between conventions and tropes. In this third episode of the 52-week Story Savvy series, Rebecca, developmental editor, founder, and host of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com] provides actionable tips alongside Agnes Wolfe who is an aspiring author and host of Authors' Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com]. Together, they help your good story become a great one.

This episode dives into questions like:

  • How does knowing your genre impact your storytelling?

  • Avoiding clichés while keeping readers engaged.

  • Practical self-editing ideas to improve your story.

Rebecca also shares insights into avoiding common pitfalls in fantasy writing, including overused tropes and the importance of balancing conventions with originality. Whether you're a beginner in fantasy writing or looking to fine-tune your work, this episode is packed with valuable tips.

Rebecca’s Recommended Resources:

Have questions about self-editing or writing in your genre? Drop them in the comments, and we’ll answer them in future episodes!

[00:00] Intro

[01:13] Why Does Knowing Your Genre Matter?

[02:34] Tropes and Conventions Explained

[05:0] Essentials for Your Genre and Subgenre

[07:55] Elements of Middle Grade Fantasy Dragon Book 

[10:59] Checking to See if Your Book Meets Genre Expectations

[12:16] How to Avoid Pitfalls of Genre Conventions

[14:19] How to Know if a Trope is Too Cliche

[19:56] Is it Risky to Avoid Genre Convention Rules?

[22:15] Making Sure Your Title Fits Your Genre


Knowing Your Book's Genre 14 Jan 202500:16:20

In our second episode of the Story Savvy series, we cover self-editing tips for authors, including how to know your genre, recognize different book genres, and avoid common genre mistakes. Rebecca, developmental editor, founder, and host of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com], joins forces with Agnes Wolfe, host and founder of Authors' Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com] in this second episode of the 52-week Story Savvy series, offering practical advice to help authors improve their manuscripts and meet reader expectations.

In this episode, Agnes Wolfe, an aspiring author, asks important questions about choosing the right book genre and how understanding genre affects story structure, tone, and audience engagement. The conversation covers tips on avoiding genre mistakes to avoid and ensuring your story lands with the right readers.

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Have questions about self-editing your work? Place them in the comments, and we will be sure to answer them in future episodes! 



Understanding Your Target Audience07 Jan 202500:21:55

Developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell collaborates with Authors’ Alcove in this self-editing guide for authors on how to identify your target audience when writing. Rebecca, founder of Hart Bound Editing [http://hartboundediting.com], collaborates with Agnes Wolfe, host and founder of Authors' Alcove [http://authorsalcove.com], where Rebecca breaks down how to self-edit your manuscript and make your good story great in the first episode of our 52-week Story Savvy series. 

Aspiring writer, Agnes Wolfe, asks Rebecca important questions that will help others like herself learn how to pinpoint exactly who their readers are. Knowing your audience isn't just about marketing! It’s a critical part of storytelling that impacts tone, style, and narrative choices.

In this episode, we explore one of the most overlooked aspects of writing: knowing your audience. Who are you writing for? Why does it matter? And how can understanding your target reader improve your story?

Post in the comments any questions you hope we cover in future episodes of our Story Savvy series! 

Questions Covered in This Episode

[00:00] Intro

[02:07] “How Soon Should I Define Who My Ideal Audience Is?” 

[03:46] “How Does Understanding My Audience Impact My Story?”

[04:28] "How Specific Should I Be in Describing My Ideal Audience?"

[05:48] "How Can I Tell if My Story Is Middle Grade or Young Adult?"

[09:01] "Who Else Should I Consider Beyond My Main Reader?"

[10:37] "What Impact Does My Target Audience Have on My Writing Style?"

[13:17] "Should I Pay Attention to Current Trends When Writing?"

[15:22] "What Are the Risks of Not Knowing My Target Audience?"

[18:24] "How Can I Figure Out My Ideal Reader if I’m Stuck?"

[20:19] "Does Understanding My Audience Help Me Choose a Genre?"

Meet the Author Book Club: Of Myth and Memento Mori by Victoria Clapton (Halloween Special)06 Nov 202401:01:29

In this month’s Meet the Author Book Club, host Agnes Wolfe and her panel delve into Of Myth and Memento Mori by Victoria Clapton. The story follows Elara Vynn, a tenacious mythkeeper tasked with preserving lost tales, who is drawn into a perilous alliance with the enigmatic deathbringer, Caelum. Themes of memory, mortality, and defiance pulse through this evocative tale, weaving a rich tapestry of mythic intrigue and timeless love.

The panel, featuring Dawn Marie Manning, Rebecca Maeve Hartwell, Miriam Yvette, and Myrenne Mae, unpacks the novel’s intricate mythology, its reflections on memory’s power over identity, and Elara’s race to unearth a forgotten prophecy that could upend the balance between life and death.

Victoria Clapton joins to reveal her inspiration and creative process, while Agnes offers a tantalizing glimpse into next month’s book, Spires of Ash and Bone by Rebecca Maeve Hartwell. Expect an engaging blend of deep dives, spoiler-filled twists, and an exciting preview of what lies ahead.

Join us as we journey through myth, memory, and the fragile threads that bind existence.
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Meet the Author Book Club with Myrenne Mae (Three Coins from a Dead Man's Pocket)09 Oct 202401:08:38

In this month’s Meet the Author Book Club, host Agnes Wolfe and her panel delve into Three Coins from a Dead Man’s Pocket by Myrenne Mae. The story follows Avalina Llahenór, a daring druis with a thousand-year-old secret, and her fiery connection with the cursed Thorben. Themes of love, sacrifice, and vengeance weave through this gripping fantasy, filled with intrigue and high-stakes magic. The panel, featuring Dawn Marie Manning, Rebecca Maeve Hartwell, and Victoria Clapton, explores the novel’s complex characters, its parallels with dissociative identity disorder, and the dangerous mission to stop a delusional commodore from unraveling the realms. Myrenne Mae joins to share her writing insights, while Agnes teases next month’s book, Of Myth and Memento Mori by Victoria Clapton. Expect a mix of thoughtful discussion, spoilers, and a preview of what’s to come. Join us as we explore magic, love, and the fate of the Five Realms. ------------------------------------ SHOW ME LOVE OVER AT PATREON - https://patreon.com/authorsalcovepodc... BUY THE WRITING PROGRAM SCRIVENER - $60! Scrivener won't tell you how to write—it simply provides everything you need to start writing and keep writing. It is by far my personal favorite writing app! https://www.literatureandlatte.com/sc... BECOME A PROOFREADER/EDITOR! Guaranteed work as a proofreader/editor, if you pass the exam with an 80% or higher!!: https://give.knowadays.com/6DcL9W ------------------------------------ Links discussed in show: Interview with Rebecca over at The Writing Corner with Authors Alcove • Author Interview on Writing with Fant... Book - Three Coins From a Dead Man's Pocket by Myrenne Mae - https://a.co/d/ckf4p11 Rebecca Maeve Hartwell Author Book Page - https://www.amazon.com/stores/Rebecca... If you are interested in being a guest on my episode, you may fill out the form on my website: http://authorsalcove.com/be-a-guest You can also follow me on: Facebook: / authorsalcove Instagram: / authorsalcovepodcast Linked In: / agnes-wolfe-20bb47288 Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/2EQYPBl... YouTube: / @authorsalcove (Possible Affiliate Links Above)

Meet the Author Book Club - A Heart of Flame by Rebecca Maeve Hartwell22 Sep 202400:59:26

In this special live session of the Meet the Author Book Club, host Agnes Wolfe and her panel dive into the captivating world of A Heart of Flame by Rebecca Maeve Hartwell, the first book in the Unlocked Series. With Rebecca herself as the featured guest, the discussion explores the intricate plot, complex characters, and the unique setting of a modern Roman Empire. The group delves into the story's themes of trauma, freedom, and the defiant love between the protagonists, Angie and Daniel. Throughout the episode, Agnes introduces her co-hosts for the evening: Myrenne Mae, who will be the guest author next month; Amber Letters, a passionate reader and insightful contributor; and Dawn Marie Manning, an aspiring author and deep thinker. Each panelist shares their thoughts and favorite moments from the book, while Rebecca offers behind-the-scenes insights into her writing process, character development, and what inspired her to create this gritty, romantic fantasy. With a mix of thoughtful analysis, engaging conversation, and a few spoilers, this episode is a must-listen for fans of the series and anyone looking to dive deeper into A Heart of Flame. The session wraps up with a preview of next month's featured book, Three Coins From a Dead Man's Pocket by Myrenne Mae, leaving listeners eager for the next installment of the book club. ------------------------------------ SHOW ME LOVE OVER AT PATREON - https://patreon.com/authorsalcovepodcast?utm_medium=unknown&utm_source=join_link&utm_campaign=creatorshare_creator&utm_content=copyLink BUY THE WRITING PROGRAM SCRIVENER - $60! Scrivener won't tell you how to write—it simply provides everything you need to start writing and keep writing. It is by far my personal favorite writing app! https://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener-affiliate.html?fpr=angela46 BECOME A PROOFREADER/EDITOR! Guaranteed work as a proofreader/editor, if you pass the exam with an 80% or higher!!: https://give.knowadays.com/6DcL9W ------------------------------------ Links discussed in show: Interview with Rebecca over at The Writing Corner with Authors Alcove https://youtu.be/hJammNlGV_U?si=JbgxTVogiNb4D0zp Book - Three Coins From a Dead Man's Pocket by Myrenne Mae - https://a.co/d/ckf4p11 Rebecca Maeve Hartwell Author Book Page - https://www.amazon.com/stores/Rebecca-Maeve-Hartwell/author/B0BXYBQ9B1?ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1&qid=1724762078&sr=1-1&isDramIntegrated=true&shoppingPortalEnabled=true If you are interested in being a guest on my episode, you may fill out the form on my website: http://authorsalcove.com/be-a-guest You can also follow me on: Facebook: http://facebook.com/authorsalcove Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/authorsalcovepodcast/ Linked In: https://www.linkedin.com/in/agnes-wolfe-20bb47288/ Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/2EQYPBl1LtZh08qCdIRHTy?si=aa56d7a9565a49fa YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCWVCbL470bDCgeg23kziYAg (Possible Affiliate Links Above)

Authors' Alcove Bestselling Book Club: A Touch of Darkness by Scarlett St. Claire (SPOILERS)30 Jul 202401:00:40

Join us for an engaging and in-depth discussion of Scarlett St. Clair's captivating novel, "A Touch of Darkness," on the Authors' Alcove Online Bestselling Book Club. Hosted by Agnes Wolfe, this special episode features insightful conversations with aspiring author Dawn Marie Manning, prolific writer Amber Letters, and Rebecca Maeve Hartwell, the acclaimed author of the Unlocked series. In our deep dive, we unravel the intricate layers of this modern retelling of the myth of Hades and Persephone. 

Be warned—our discussion is rich with spoilers as we explore the novel's themes, character development, and the unique blend of mythology and contemporary romance that St. Clair masterfully crafts. Together, we analyze the dynamics between Hades and Persephone, the trials they face, and the growth they undergo throughout the story. 

Our panelists share their thoughts on the narrative's pacing, the depth of the secondary characters, and the overarching plot that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. Tune in to hear diverse perspectives, passionate debates, and personal reflections on what makes "A Touch of Darkness" a standout in the fantasy romance genre. Whether you've read the book or are curious about its allure, this episode promises to be an enlightening and entertaining experience for all book lovers. 

Join the conversation on Authors' Alcove and dive into the enchanting world of "A Touch of Darkness"! 

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Meet the Author Book Club with Melanie Murphy: Discussing The Extraordinary Anna Parke25 Jun 202401:10:11

In this podcast episode of Meet the Author Book Club with Authors Alcove, host Agnes Wolfe introduces Melanie Murphy, the author of "The Extraordinary Anna Park," a novel of magical realism set in the Adirondacks. Co-hosts Dawn Marie Manning, Amber Letters, and Rebecca Mae Hartwell join in discussing their admiration for Melanie’s character development and handling of trauma, with Melanie sharing her background as a high school English teacher and the inspiration behind her book. She highlights the influence of Stephen King on her writing style and reveals plans for a book series themed around different elements. The discussion also explores the depth of Melanie's characters, particularly Anna's transformation and the open-ended aspects of the story that reflect real life's complexities, emphasizing the impact of a discovered article on deliberate neglect and its possible justification of Beverly's treatment of Anna. ------------------------------------

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Getting Real about Mental Health and Writing: Tips from a Developmental Editor 22 Jul 202500:52:04

Let’s talk about mental health for writers, author support system, and writer self-care. In this week's Story Savvy Series episode, we take a thoughtful detour from structure and craft to focus on mental health in the writing journey. Developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] dive deep into the emotional realities behind the editing process—from creative burnout and perfectionism to PTSD, grief, and more.

Episode 22 of the 52-Week Story Savvy series reminds writers that healing and storytelling often go hand in hand. Together, Rebecca and Agnes share personal stories, editing insights, and tips on how to navigate your writing when life gets hard.

They also explore:

  • Recognizing when it’s time to pause your project

  • Writing with depression, ADHD, and trauma

  • Setting flexible deadlines that support your health

  • What community support looks like for creative people

  • Ways to edit painful scenes without re-traumatizing yourself

Whether you're overwhelmed by revisions or just need encouragement to take a break, this episode offers both practical guidance and emotional validation for writers of all stages.

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An In-Depth Book Club Discussion with Writer Chelle Cypress, Author of Unmasking the Curse02 Jun 202401:16:02

In the second Authors' Alcove book club and first Meet the Author session, host Agnes Wolfe introduced Chelle Cypress, author of "Unmasking the Curse," calling it her favorite read of 2024. The hosts, including Rebecca Maeve Hartwell, Dawn Marie Manning, and Amber Letters, shared their backgrounds and favorite genres before discussing their admiration for Cypress's book. They praised the novel's meditation aspects, character connections, and steamy tension. Chelle Cypress elaborated on her research for historical accuracy, the trauma-linked inspiration behind the curse, and her character development methods. The discussion also highlighted the family dynamics in the story, particularly the impact of the absent father and narcissistic mother on the protagonist, Ariana. Cypress emphasized her aim to make her characters feel real through their flawed decisions and the resulting consequences. Join Us for Our Next Session! Join us for the second session of our exciting book club, led by Agnes Wolfe, the podcast host of Authors' Alcove. This time, we dive deep into Chelle Cypress's romantasy novel, "Unmasking the Curse," with the author herself! Our diverse panel includes Rebecca Maeve Hartwell, author of "Heart of Flame" and esteemed editor, aspiring author Dawn Marie Manning, and passionate bookworm Amber Letters. Together, we explore the intricacies of Cypress's enchanting tale, sparking lively discussions and sharing profound insights. SPOILER ALERT This session contains in-depth analysis and key plot revelations! If you want to watch an episode without spoilers, check out Agnes Wolfe's previous interview with Chelle Cypress. Otherwise, join us as we delve into the questions readers have always wanted to ask. Don't miss this engaging and spoiler-filled exploration of "Unmasking the Curse." Her first interview can be found here: • Writing Romantic Fantasy with Chelle ... If you are interested in being a guest on my podcast, you may fill out the form on my website: http://authorsalcove.com/be-a-guest You can also follow me on: Facebook: / authorsalcove Instagram: / authorsalcovepodcast Linked In: / agnes-wolfe-20bb47288 Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/2EQYPBl... YouTube: / @authorsalcove (possible affiliate links above)

How to Check and Improve Your Subplots & Plot Threads (Tips from a Developmental Editor)03 Jul 202500:22:29

Feeling tangled in too many storylines? Wondering if your subplot is helping—or hurting—your novel? You’re not alone.Want to know what makes a good writer great? Tune into our writing podcast for authors, where we explore plot structure tips, how to structure a story plot, and book editing hacks. This week’s focus: plot threads and subplots. In this week’s episode of the Story Savvy series, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and aspiring fantasy author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] unravel the confusion around subplots vs. plot threads. You’ll learn how to identify your main plot, what subplots are worth keeping, and how to revise your story so it most satisfies your reader. If you've ever forgotten to tie up a subplot, or tried to juggle too many plotlines and lost your readers along the way—this one's for you.This episode covers:How to figure out which plot is your novel’s backbone–main plotThe difference between plot threads and subplotsWhy less (subplots) is sometimes moreHow to check if a subplot is actually landing with your audienceWhen a subplot might need to be cut altogetherWhether you're editing your manuscript or plotting your next draft, this episode will give you tools to create tighter, more powerful fiction—without sacrificing depth.Recommended Resources:Need a Developmental Editor? Hart Bound EditingAuthor’ Alcove Membership: http://authrosalcove.comFantasy Book Giveaway: AuthorsAlcove.orgChapters[00:00] Intro[01:11] Understanding Main Plots vs. Subplots[04:32] The Importance of Knowing Your Primary Plot[06:04] Defining Plot Threads and Subplots[09:05] Balancing Subplots: Too Many or Too Few?[11:00] Evaluating Subplots During Revision[14:12] Connecting Subplots to the Main Plot[16:05] Common Mistakes in Subplot Integration[20:33] Wrapping Up Subplots, Is It a Must?

How to Fix Plot Holes and Character Flaws: Tips from a Developmental Editor01 Jun 202500:33:41

Rebecca Hartwell, developmental editor, continues with the story savvy series as she tackles how to spot plot holes and character inconsistencies. To help you turn your good story into a great one, learn about editing fantasy novels through writing strong plots and fixing story problems in this week’s episode, Episode 19 of 52-Week Story Savvy.


In this episode, editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and guest host sla Elrick [suemillsauthor.com], author of contemporary romance of Whispers of New England,standing in for Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] work through how to identify common pitfalls that lead to plot holes, contradictions, and character inconsistencies. They also cover how to use fresh eyes and feedback effectively without compromising your creative vision.


You’ll learn techniques to:

Detect inconsistencies and contradictions like a new reader would

Repair plot holes without derailing the story

Maintain clear and consistent character goals and backstories

Seed character growth naturally to avoid sudden shifts

Use detailed character sheets to prevent errors

Whether you’re a first-time novelist or an experienced writer polishing your latest draft, this episode offers actionable strategies to keep your story coherent, believable, and engaging for your audience.


In This Episode:

Identifying and addressing plot holes

Evaluating reader feedback effectively

Fixing character inconsistencies

Balancing complexity with clarity

Planning plot repairs without creating new issues

Using fresh techniques to strengthen story logic


Recommended Resources:

Hartbound Editing Services – [https://hartboundediting.com]

Authors’ Alcove Membership Community – [http://authorsalcove.com]

Book Giveaway – [http://authorsalcove.org]

[00:00] Introduction

[01:16] Guest Spotlight: Sue Mills

[03:17] What Are Plot Holes?

[06:11] Solving Significant Plot Issues

[09:04] Handling Reader Critiques

[11:51] Weighing Plot Fixes and Story Impact

[12:30] Methods for Repairing Plot Gaps

[14:54] Spotting Character Inconsistencies

[18:49] Addressing Character Feedback

[22:10] Typical Character Continuity Mistakes

[26:52] Character Development vs. Out-of-Character Moments

[29:09] Shapeshifting Characters and Unexpected Twists

Story Intensity: Are You Doing It Wrong? Tips from a Developmental Editor27 May 202500:28:11

Want plot development tips such as how to build tension in a scene, conflict escalation in stories, and how to build character-driven conflict? Listen as Rebecca Hartwell, developmental editor of Hartbound Editing, shares exactly what you need to make your good story into a great one in episode 18 of 52-Week Story Savvy Self-Editing Series

This week, editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] teams up with Guest host Lindsey Luther [lyndseyluther.com] , author of speculative fiction fantasy book - Greencloack (filling in for aspiring author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com]) to tackle the essential craft of building character-driven plots that feel inevitable, yet surprising. Together, they unpack why well-motivated characters and escalating conflict are the keys to keeping your narrative taut and emotionally charged.

Rebecca Hartwell explains how to:

  • Craft character decisions that naturally propel the plot forward.

  • Align character goals with theme and genre expectations.

  • Introduce obstacles that reveal character growth, not just add drama.

They also explore how to layer internal and external stakes so that every scene matters, and why pacing is about more than just “action.” You’ll get practical tips for revising passive scenes, enriching your midpoint, and making sure your climax delivers both a payoff and a punch.

If you’re struggling with meandering plots or flat character arcs, this episode will give you the tools to restructure and reinvigorate your story.

In This Episode:

  • What Story Intensity Really Means

  • Finding the Right Intensity for Your Genre & Audience

  • Easy Ways to Dial Intensity Up (or Down)

  • Why Your Descriptions Can Make or Break Intensity

  • Matching Emotional Feels with Physical Action

  • How to Let Intensity Flow Naturally

  • Pacing vs. Intensity — Making Them Dance Together

  • Tips for Keeping Your Intensity Fresh and Varied

  • Boosting (or Soothing) Intensity Without Raising the Stakes

Recommended Resources:Hartbound Editing Services – [https://hartboundediting.com]Authors’ Alcove Membership Community – [http://authorsalcove.com]Book Giveaway – [http://authorsalcove.org]Story Grid – https://storygrid.comSave the Cat – https://savethecat.com

[00:00] Intro[01:00] What Story Intensity Really Means

[02:22] Finding the Right Intensity for Your Genre & Audience

[05:00] Easy Ways to Dial Intensity Up (or Down)

[08:40] Why Your Descriptions Can Make or Break Intensity

[10:40] Matching Emotional Feels with Physical Action

[12:12] How to Let Intensity Flow Naturally

[15:52] Pacing vs. Intensity — Making Them Dance Together

[17:40] Tips for Keeping Your Intensity Fresh and Varied

[21:50] Boosting (or Soothing) Intensity Without Raising the Stakes


Are Your Story Stakes Strong Enough? Tips from a Developmental Editor25 May 202500:32:08

Ever wonder what are stakes in fiction and how to build tension in a scene? Rebecca discusses things like character-driven conflict, high-stakes storytelling and much more as us writers learn how to edit our book ourselves. In this high-impact episode of 52-Week Story Savvy, editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and guest host standing in for Christine Nicholas aspiring author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] break down the crucial role of stakes in storytelling—and how to raise them without losing reader trust.

Together, they define what stakes really are (hint: it's not always life or death!) and how to weave them seamlessly into your plot using tools like Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs and stakes spectrums. You’ll discover how to analyze global and chapter-level stakes, keep scenes engaging, and avoid common missteps like artificial plot twists and inconsistent tension.

Whether you're writing a slow-burn fantasy, a fast-paced thriller, or character-driven fiction, this episode will help you pinpoint what your characters stand to lose—and why it matters.

In This Episode:

  • The difference between goals, motivations, and stakes

  • Using Maslow’s Hierarchy to layer character needs

  • Chapter-by-chapter vs. global stakes

  • Varying stakes to avoid a flat narrative

  • Literal, figurative, and internal life-or-death spectrums

  • How to escalate stakes without breaking believability

  • Why readers must understand the stakes by the midpoint

  • A self-editing checklist for testing stakes scene by scene

Recommended Resources:

[00:00] Intro

[01:07] Defining Stakes in Storytelling

[03:07] Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs and Stakes

[04:10] Chapter vs. Global Stakes

[06:05] Variety in Stakes

[07:59] Identifying and Strengthening Stakes

[09:01] Types of Stakes Beyond Life and Death

[14:14] Exploring Internal and External Stakes

[16:21] Assessing the Power of Stakes

[19:00] Establishing Stakes Without Death

[21:05] Grounding Stakes in the Narrative

[23:01] Raising Stakes Gradually

[26:37] Determining Global Success or Failure

[28:01] Timing the Revelation of Stakes


Protagonist Goals versus Plot Momentum: Tips from a Develomental Editor21 May 202500:33:40

Curious about first person point of view versus third? Wondering how to self-edit your novel or take your writing to the next level? In this full episode of 52-Week Story Savvy, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell (hartboundediting.com) and Isla Elrick guest host and award winning author steps in for aspiring fantasy author Agnes Wolfe (authorsalcove.com) dig into how narrative choices shape your story—and how to revise with purpose.This isn't just about fixing grammar; it's about refining your storytelling. Rebecca unpacks how your choice of POV, tense, and narrative depth can elevate or undercut your story, and offers strategies to revise with clarity and intention. You'll learn what works, what doesn't, and how to fix common pitfalls like head-hopping and inconsistent narration—even if you’ve already written your draft.In This Episode:First, second, or third person—what fits your story best?Deep POV vs distant: How to strike the right tonePresent vs past tense: Why it mattersMulti-POV tools (including the creative “Fibonacci method”)Choosing a POV style that strengthens plot and reader connectionHow to revise POV or tense in later drafts without feeling overwhelmedWhether you're just starting or knee-deep in edits, this episode will help you find your narrative voice and fine-tune your manuscript with confidence.Recommended Resources:Developmental Editing Services – hartboundediting.comAuthors’ Alcove Membership Site – authorsalcove.comBook Giveaway – authorsalcove.org

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